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Tumhe dekha kar- RagLak TS Part 3

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Hi frndzz…back with the last part of tumhe dekh kar…plz do read it and tell me how is it…sorry haven’t proof read…
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“gonna spend two days with Mr.Rude…please god save me… these 2 days will be like in lions cage…”Ragini whispers and pouts…
“behenji…have you said anything…”driver Saab asked her…
“Kuch nahi bhaiyya..”ragini nods negatively…
They reached airport…laksh comes before itself and he waits for ragini…
Ragini sees laksh waiting and she carries her luggage and ran fast towards him…but stopped and turned back…”thank you bhaiyya”ragini shouts smilingly…
Laksh sees his watch…she ran towards him but loses her grip…she is about to fell but he holds her wrist…both lost in each others eyes…
Laksh comes to his senses and pulled her towards him…they were very close…he felt embarrassed…
“What’s the time now?you’re already late…but creating drama over here…chalo…”laksh shouts…
“okay..s..si..sir…”ragini stammers…
They goes for security check…Ragini struggles in lifting her luggage and sees him…”What now…don’t even think about it…”laksh said angrily…
“Sir…Wo…it happened co-incidentally…while I was running I got slipped over…am sorry…”ragini makes puppy face…
“how cute…ha ha…”laksh smiles seeing her
“kya…”ragini asked in an confused tone…
“Wo…am talking about that kid…look at that kid …so cute na…”laksh made a lie…Ragini nods and they get into their flight…
Ragini’s first flight experience…she shivers..”oh god…my first flight experience that too with him…oh no..”Ragini whispers…
Airhostess asked everyone to wear seat belt…Ragini struggles in wearing it…laksh sees her struggling and says”wait…i will help you…”
“No..sir…i will do myself..”Ragini pushed his hands away…but still Ragini couldn’t make it…
“am saying na…i will do it…”laksh pulled her hands away from the belt…she closes her eyes and shivers…
“see that’s it…but you were struggling from the past 5 minutes…”laksh said and watches her face…still she is closing her eyes…
She slowly opened her eyes…he turned away…”why am feeling like this when I see her…it seems like she is very close to me…am doing injustice to my ranchu…no she is the only girl in my life…i love ranchu only…”laksh says to himself…
They reached Mumbai…Ragini struggles in lifting her luggage…laksh takes it from her hands and walk faster…she runs behind him…
Mr.Rajeev comes and welcomes them…he takes them to their cottage…laksh asks Ragini to get freshen up and come downstairs within half an hour…Ragini nods…
“What’s happening here…i just can’t understand about him…sometimes like Mr.Benevolent and sometimes Mr.Rude and other times Mr.Gentleman…Arghh…”ragini whispers and got tensed…
She then texts lucky that she reached safely…laksh sees her message and texts”take care ranchu…will talk to you later…held up with some important works…sorry dear…”
Ragini’s phone beeped…but she kept it in her room itself and leaves to downstairs…she is waiting for laksh…he came and asks about the reports…
Ragini presents her project before the clients and everyone likes it…Mr.Vaghela says”Mr.Lakshya Maheshwari we are overwhelmed with your works and it’s time for signing the deal…”
Laksh nods and sighs Ragini about the papers…she gives it to him…the deal has been done…
“as a celebration for our deal let’s party Mr.Maheshwari”Mr.Vaghela said and grabbed everyone attention…
“Attention everyone…ladies and gentlemen…today is our hotel’s 15th anniversary and we have signed a deal with the one of the leading companies of India…so to celebrate this let’s party…music please”Mr.Vaghela announced and requests laksh and Ragini to dance…
Both nodded negatively but Mr.Vaghela dragged them both to the centre…
Music plays…
tainu itna main pyaar karaan
ik pal vich sau baar karaan
tu jaave je mainu chhad ke
maut da intezaar karaan
(I love you so much,love you a hundred times in a moment,if you leave me and go,I’ll wait for death..)
Laksh forwards his hand and Ragini hold it…and he holds her…they just make a side move…

ke tere liye duniya chhod di hai
tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
main tujhko kitna chaahata hoon
ye tu kabhi soch na sake
(I’ve left the world for you,my breath stops at you only.How much I love you,you can’t even think..)
Laksh feels the lyrics and thinks about ranchu and he feels ranchu in Ragini…he twirls her and again back to same position…

kuchh bhi nahi hai ye jahaan
tu hai to hai is mein zindagi
ab mujhko jaana hai kahaan
ke tu hi safar hai aakhiri
(this world is nothing,if you are there, there is life in it.now where else do I have to go..You are my last journey..)
Laksh thinks Ragini as ranchu and he pulled her close and they shared a eyelock…Ragini felt embarrassed and she freed her from his grip and ran towards her room…
Laksh feels guilty with his act and he searches Ragini all where…but couldn’t find her…
Ragini goes to her room and locked the door…she sees her phone and opened it…she sees SanChak message…she texts him that something bad is happening around her and she felt awkward here…
Laksh’s phone beeped…he read it”where are you right now…is everything ok na…”laksh replied her…
“Yaa…but am out of town for the first time na without anyone else…so am feeling bad…nothing else…ok tell me how was your day..”Ragini texts him
“it went really well…infact the work for which I came here was done and am so happy today…the only thing which is unfilled is you…ranchu wanna see you soon…”laksh replied…
“ok ok…after am back to Kolkata…i will reveal everything slowly…till then take care my dear SanChak…”Ragini texts him back…
“if it really happens…lucky is the luckiest guy in the world…Take care too dear…”laksh replied…
“ha ha…really…ok good night…will text you later…bye..”Ragini texts him and blushes…
It’s morning…Ragini packed her clothes and she comes out from her room…she sees Laksh in the reception area…he comes to her to ask for an apology…she changed the topic by saying”sir…it’s getting late…shall we move…”
“yes…sure”laksh stammers…

They get into the car…pin drop silence persists over there…they haven’t uttered even a single word… finally Laksh is about to talk but before that they reaches the airport…
Again Ragini struggles in lifting her luggage but this time Laksh goes to her and helps her…”sir thank you…but I will manage…”said Ragini like avoiding him…
Laksh goes from there all of a sudden…he gets irked with her behaviour…
Ragini gets into the flight…airhostess shows her towards the seat nearby laksh…she sits near him but she is uncomfortable…
“dekho…am sorry for what happened yesterday…don’t think about that and be comfortable here…once again I apologize…”laksh said in one breath…
“it’s not your fault sir…so no need for apology and all…”Ragini said inorder to free him from his guilt…laksh gets relaxed…
They reached Kolkata…Ragini waits for taxi…laksh comes near her and drags her luggage and says”Chalo…”
“but sir…where…”Ragini asked him in a confused tone…
“I will drop you at your place…”said laksh and kept her luggage in his car…
Ragini opens the back seat door…”I just said I will drop you…it doesn’t mean am your driver”said laksh…
She gave a weird look and sits in the front seat besides him…he asked her about the directions…she said it and finally they reached her home…she asked him to come inside but he refused and sighs her bye…

She goes inside and unpacked her things…she heard her phone’s sound…she rushed and opened it…yes it was her SanChak…she reads it…
“Haan…reached safely and you…”she texts back…
“s dear…me too reached…are you ok now…”laksh replied…
“s am perfectly alright”said Ragini and tells him about the company she works for but not her designation…
He is shocked to hear it…”ranchu…that too in my company…am such an idiot I haven’t know about this…she is so near but I couldn’t found her..”
Story shifts to the second scene…A man is shown getting ready for the party which is organised as a celebration for his young achiever of the year award…
The theme of the party is black colour…laksh intentionally did it because he remembers once ranchu said that black colour is treated as abashagun according to their tradition and she haven’t wore black colour dress till date…
“Ranchu today I will find you…”laksh smirks…
He texts ranchu…she sees it…”am not going SanChak…”Ragini texts him back…
“but why dear…”laksh grinned…
“You know na SanChak the theme is black…but I don’t have one…moreover I won’t wear black…”Ragini replied back…
Laksh smirks and gave an idea of wearing dark blue long skirt…”no…am not going”as a reply laksh got from her…
“oh no…my plan is flopping…I have to do something…”laksh whispers…
“ranchu…you have to go dear…if your boss notices then you are finished”laksh budged her…
“that’s why am saying am not going…if Mr.Rude sees me in other coloured costume…am finished…”Ragini gritted…
“what the hell Mr.Rude…me oh no…sorry sweetheart I don’t know how I behaved with you…lucky tumare dimaakh karaab hogaya…how could you behave so bad with your dream girl”laksh whispers and texts her to go with the suggestion he gave and also added that Mr.Maheshwari is such a nice person and he will accept the reason of yours…
“it seems like you’re so close to him uh..but anyway whatever you say I will go with it…take care…bye…”Ragini replied…
“am dying to see you ranchu…i love you…”laksh lost in ranchu’s love…
He came back to senses when manya shooks him from behind…
“Manya…you haven’t ready yet…”laksh raised his eyebrows..
“Wo…laksh…am just coming from the parlour…ok tell me how do I look…”manya dragged him…
“as usual…pretty doll…but this thing you gonna wear uh…”laksh asked her in a confused tone…
“What the hell…this thing that too me..arggh..i have finalised my dress already…”manya chuckles…
“ok…see you in the party mannu…bye”laksh left from there…
“today is something special for me…just wait and watch…i love you laksh….”manya whispers…

Everyone reaches the spot…laksh texts ranchu to come to the area near swimming pool…he didn’t get a reply…
Laksh goes near the swimming pool…she sees a girl facing the opposite direction in a blue colour long skirt…
He huffs…”I know…it will be a shock for you…but I just want to say I love you…i love you so much…”said laksh and hugged her from behind…
“I love you too laksh…”she turns…
He is so shocked and surprised too…and hugged her again…”Manya…i didn’t expect…t..that..you..”laksh stammers…
“Shshh…this is our moment…i love you so much Laksh…i can do anything for you…”manya pressed his mouth with her hands…
But laksh feels awkward…Ragini flashes comes in his mind…”what’s going on in my mind…why am going mad…ranchu is my bachpan waala dost manya…i got my love…but still my heart is not accepting it…now Ragini flashes in my mind…shit…”laksh thought in his mind…
The party ends joyfully but laksh couldn’t find Ragini in the party…manya takes laksh to his house…she opened the door and laksh is so surprised to see both of their family members…
Manya announces them about their relationship and they agreed…they congratulate manya and laksh…
“What’s the need to announce this much faster…”laksh said in manya’s ears…
“how unromantic…i love you that much and I can’t live without you…so I make everything fast…”manya pulled his cheeks…
“ouch…”laksh screams…manya shuts his mouth”Shshh…people may think wrong…”manya grinned and sighs him bye…
Laksh nods…

Next day morning… laksh searches Ragini everywhere in office…but to his surprise he couldn’t find her anywhere and she doesn’t inform about leave though…he got tensed…
Laksh then remembers her house and goes there…her house is locked…”where did this girl gone…taking leave without informing…she doesn’t respect me..arggh…”laksh makes puppy face…
He again reached his office and surprised to see manya in his cabin…
“Where were you…am waiting for you…come laksh..let’s go out for wedding shopping…”manya dragged him…
They gone for purchase…”how was this…”manya shows him the orange colour saree…
He sighs beautiful”kya Hua laksh…you don’t like orange colour…but…oh ok I understand…you are tensed about our marriage na…don’t worry am there na…nothing bad will happen…”manya hugged him to make him comfort..
He nods…
All were busy with their engagement preparations…time passes…
The scene shifts to present day…
Laksh is driving his car fastly…few minutes before…
Manya and laksh were busy getting ready for their engagement…manya comes to meet him secretly…
“laksh…how do I look…is it ok…”manya turns over and asks him about her costume…
“beautiful like a queen…”he replied and takes his mobile…
Manya phone rings…laksh turns and grinned…”So madam…you still remembers this song…not bad ranchu…”
“what you’re saying laksh…oh the ringtone uh…i got it from Ragini…you also know about this song uh…by the way you don’t know na Ragini is also in love…but she haven’t met that guy…they are talking through phone…how great na…”manya smiles…
“What ragini…where is she…is she here now?”laksh shooks her…
“oh.oh..you don’t know na…she met with an accident on that day you proposed me…i forgot to tell you because of this functions…but she is better now..”manya tells him about her health issues…
“kya…”laksh shouts…but on that day you wore dark blue colour dress na…”oh that one uh…actually I finalised a black colour knee length skirt but coffee gets splitted over…so I wore that blue coloured one in last minute..”manya tells him in one breath…
“and about that place you were standing near pool”laksh stammers…
“When I came to the party hall…i saw that place decorated…i go near the area and I thought to propose you over there…but to my surprise you did everything…”manya winked…
Laksh gets lost in his thoughts but their friends comes in between and takes them to the engagement hall…
Manya thinks something weird in laksh…but i it inorder to enjoy her engagement ceremony..
Laksh linked everything about the time she says about the interview…at that same day only Ragini joined his concern and their visit to Mumbai…and Ragini missing in his party…he reminisces his happy moments…
Laksh comes to senses when he hears Dp voice…he gave him the ring…
Manya forwards her hand towards him…he again lost in his thoughts…dp shooks him…laksh realises that Ragini is his ranchu,his secret friend and his dream girl…he dropped the ring on the floor and ran outside…
Manya sees the direction where he vanishes and the ring which is on the floor…she cries badly and ran towards her room…
Laksh gets into his car and drives fastly…he remembers the hospital name that manya tells him…
He reached over there and enquires about Ragini in reception…”Room No 125 sir..”receptionist tells him…”thank you”said laksh and ran upstairs…
He opened the door and sees Ragini hearing music…she sees him…”Sir tum…what you are doing here?today is your engagement right…congrats sir…manya and you are made for each other…”said ragini with a cute smile…
Laksh run towards her and hugged her tight and kissed her forehead…she pushed him away…
“how dare you Mr.Lakshya…”Ragini shouts…
Laksh sings”tere liye duniya chhod di hai
tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
ye tu kabhi soch na sake”
“SanChak…”Ragini said and about to get down but slips…he holds her…
“yes ranchu darling…”laksh winked…he opened his hands…she hugged him…but pushed him away
“hey baby…what now…”laksh makes sad pout…
“don’t do this with…how mean…you’re about to engage with someone…but now you came here…”said Ragini and turned away…
“sorry…i thought you as manya…but it’s your fault too…you haven’t come that day…”said laksh and explained her everything…
“it’s not my fault SanChak…it’s my fate…that day while coming to party I met with an accident and get severely injured…”Ragini cries…
“but my fate is good…but at least I came to know about you before my engagement”said laksh grinning…
Ragini cries…”hey you…don’t be like this…i will keep you happy forever…will you be my better half…”laksh bents his knees and gives his hand…
She sits in his knees and nods…”I love you SanChak…i mean Mr.Rude…”Ragini winks…
“I love you too ranchu darling “laksh said by cupping her face…
Their foreheads met…
A week later…
Laksh asks for an apology to manya and explained everything to the family…
First they didn’t accept..laksh makes them understand and later gave a green signal for their marriage…there is no problem with Ragini’s side because her decision is final in her house…
They got married twice in both Brahmin and Marwari style…the story ends with the family picture of RagLak…
Happy ending •••

So tell me guyz…how was the TS??do you like it??
please drop your views in comment box…
Thank you everyone for your support…
~Darshu

47 Comments
    1. Darshini

      Tq Sindhu 😊

  1. A.xx

    Amazing but why did u end so soon xx

    1. Darshini

      Thnks dear…it’s ts na…wat to do dear…

  2. Really cute story
    Please start new raglak ff or ss

    1. Darshini

      Tq lovely 😊 am glad you liked it…

  3. Nice😊

    1. Darshini

      Tq jaan…am glad u liked it

  4. Devihaa

    Super cute….

    1. Darshini

      Tq devihaa…am glad u liked it…

  5. IQRA222

    it was amazing

    1. Darshini

      Tq IQRA…am glad u liked it

  6. Amazing 😍

    1. Darshini

      Tq Sharanya dear😊

  7. Jazzy

    awesome yaar

    1. Darshini

      Tq jazzy 😊 am hpy that u liked it…

  8. nice yaar its awesome loved it next part soon

    1. Darshini

      Thnks Nikki…am glad u liked it..

  9. nice awesome mind blowing outstanding plzz all raglak ff writer. give raglak ff and os ss ts but plzz write there raglak ff is decreasing day by day and yaa all who are writing is not updating left in middle plzz don’t do this and some are ending so soon plzz see Na swasan have many ff who reach above 50 and still writing but raglak is very less plzz did Temish fandom is weak plzz who raglak fan write more and new one and complete update regularly plzz guys and all those who were writing big wala thanks u keep raglak or Temish alive and plzz guys pay their hrdwork by comments

    1. Darshini

      Tq Nikki….

  10. Excellent

    1. Darshini

      Tq tani dear 😊

  11. Sangeetha

    Super da..nice story…interesting one too…keep writing

    1. Darshini

      Tq sannu…do u lyk that nick nme😉

  12. Raglakholic

    Outstanding update Akka
    Totally mind blowing one
    Ragini had accident
    Nd Laksh understands ragini is d one
    Whom he is searching
    D proposal in hospital is amazing
    Please come back with new story on raglak akka
    I’m really gonna miss this story
    Eagerly waiting to read ur next work
    Love u Akka

    1. Darshini

      Thnks da…
      Am glad that u liked it…
      Love u too sissy 😊

  13. Asra

    awesome darshu dear…na first Manya blue color skirt podudu varavum engagement vara ragini pathina yeandha news aiyum nenga solama irukavum na Manya than ragini ya eadhavathu panirpala nenachen…but nenga accident nu twist’a vachu villan ney illatha story ya kondu vandhudenga….loved it dear…Mr. rude and Mr. sangeetha chakravarthi love ragini and rachana….superbbb dear….plz write another one….tkcr dear….

    1. Darshini

      Ha ha….thnks da…actually I hate villainism ..so I brought up like this…
      Am hpy that u liked that name…😉 thnks a tonne dear…
      Tke cre too..

  14. Astra

    it was really superb..thanks for this cute ts..

    1. Darshini

      Tq Astra..am glad that u liked it…

  15. It is rocking ……..awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq Haripriya…am glad that you liked it…

  16. awe loved it

    1. Darshini

      Tq lisa dear 😊

  17. Awesome ending and loved it. Please come back with more Raglak stories

    1. Darshini

      Tq ammu…will b bck soon…am glad u lied it..

      1. Darshini

        Sry for the mistakes..typo error..am glad that u liked it…autocorrect mistake..

  18. Aasthu

    Sorry Darshini for the late comment……I liked it…very cute…..Ragini’s smiles are really cute and childish……raglak moments were all good……….

    1. Darshini

      That’s ok aasthu…tq for ur encouraging cmnts…am glad u liked it…

    1. Darshini

      Tq malu😊…am glad u liked it…

  19. Superb.. Amazing dear.. Comeback with raglak stories dear

    1. Darshini

      Thnks dear…am glad you liked it…will b bck soon..

  20. Ragz_teju

    awesome loved it

    1. Darshini

      Tq teju…glad u lovd it…

    1. Darshini

      Tq latha dear…am glad that you liked it…

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