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Home»Fan Fiction»Tum se na ho payega – (Chapter 2)
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Tum se na ho payega – (Chapter 2)

ZainabBy ZainabMarch 30, 201726 Comments8 Mins Read
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Tum se Na ho payega…… (Chapter 2)
Hello people!
I am back with my second chapter of TUM SE NA HO PAYEGA. Hope you’ll enjoy it.
LINK FOR PREVIOUS CHAPTER

Chapter 1

SCENE 1
At Oberoi Mansion, Study room
Shivaay: (thinking) what is this feeling? Why am I not able to forget Annika? What was there in her eyes that made me so attached to her? I never felt this type of feeling ever before. What is happening to me? Why am I not able to stop smiling? Why is happening to me? OH MY GOD!!! Why can’t focus on my work and only Annika is revolving in my head? What the hell!!
(Just then Omkara enters)
(He sees Shivaay on his study table and thinks why is he smiling)
Omkara: (calls him) Shivaay. Shivaay! (No response) SHIVAAY!!!!!
Shivaay: Aaaa!! What happened?? Why are you screaming? Gone CRAZY in Gauri’s love?? (Laughs)

Omkara: Don’t tease me. By the way, where were you lost? Badi Maa was calling you. She needs your help in some work.
Shivaay: Oh I forgot to tell maa, I have done her work (calls a servant) “Can you tell Maa that I have done her work?” (Servant nods and leaves)
Shivaay: (to Om) No, nothing like that. I was just thinking about my day today in the class.
Om: About class or Annika? (Giggles)
Shivaay: (Shocked and confused!) How do you know??
Om: Don’t you remember I was sitting with you today. And you were only staring Annika, this is the reason I know it. Hehe! What happened to you? Are you hiding something? You can share with me. I am always with you.
(Just then Rudra enters)
Rudra: Haww!! Obro moment without me!! (Starts his drama) Hey BHAGWAAN!! Yeh sab hone se pehle hi mujhe kyu nahi utha liya. Hey bhagwaan!! tera yeh kaisa tareeka hai paap dene ka. (Starts singing) “Bhai- bhai na raha, Obro moment na raha. Hey bhagwan! Yeh kya hogaya hai mere bhai ko, koi toh inhe thik karo”
ShivOm: SHUT UP Rudra!!
(Rudra makes a puppy face)

Rudra: What were you both talking?
Om: Rudra, you are young now. When you will be older then you will understand.
Rudra: You keep quit O, I have heard everything. Shivaay Bhaiya was talking about some Annika (teases Shivaay) what happened? Who is she?
Shivaay blushes!
OmRu: SHIVAAY! OMG you are BLUSHING!!
Rudra: Bhaiya, now you have to tell. (Insists) please tell na.

Shivaay speaks and his POV:

“I was talking to Aviral. Suddenly the teacher entered and following her, a girl entered. She was so beautiful that I couldn’t take my eyes off her. When I saw the teacher, I came back to my seat with Om and the girl started her introduction. Her name is Annika. I only heard her name then I was lost. I was lost in her eyes which were talking to everyone and were struggling not to see me as I was continuously staring her. She had big eyes which were black. She had long hair, which were plaited and I felt like to just hide somewhere in them. When she was speaking, I wished like her words would never end and she keeps on speaking as they were so soothing me. The way she made her eyes towards me, I felt like someone has fixed an electric wire which was connected to the switch and was on. She had such glory on her face which lit up my face and that current is still flowing in my and this is the reason I am not able to stop the smile on my face. She is just revolving in my head and I am not able to do any work.

Shivaay stood numb on speaking this. Rudra was waiting for more but Shivaay dint spoke a word more. Om was smiling as he always wanted his SIX MONTH ELDER BROTHER and in 15 years of birth, to feel these feeling. He always knew that one day a girl will enter in Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi’s life and he will change. Here Rudra was waiting for Shivaay to speak more as he was shocked to hear such beautiful words for a girl from his Shivaay Bhaiya. He suddenly spoke
Rudra: Oh my MAATA!! Shivaay Bhaiya, you toh became MAJNU after Annika didi’s entry. It means I have to meet the girl after whose entry, Shivaay Bhaiya became Majnu.
Shivaay (irritated): who is MAJNA here?
Rudra (shocked): WHAT!!!! You don’t know who is MAJNU? He is the love hero of many past centuries like you are of todays (giggles)
Shivaay: Oh, you mean Romeo.
Rudra: Yes.
Shivaay: Oh shut up Rudra! Don’t talk nonsense. I am no majna. I am Shivaay Singh Oberoi and Shivaay Singh Oberoi can never fall in love (smiles)
Rudra (irritated): First of all, it’s Majnu not Majna. And the way you were flowing in your feelings and speaking, it is proved that you are Majnu. (Teases)
Shivaay: Stop it Rudra!
Om: SHUT UP RUDRA and Shivaay, stop ignoring your feelings. You are becoming Ranjha. (Giggles)
Shivaay: now who is Ranjha?
Om is about to answer but Just then a servant calls them and they leave for dinner.

SCENE 2
It’s morning. A cottage is seen and in kitchen, a girl is seen cooking and making omelet. She is in deep thoughts but suddenly she smells something and gets shocked to see her omelet burning. She switches of the flame and thinks something, smiles and goes to get ready.

Scene 3
Outside school premise.
Annika comes on her scooter (Activa) and parks it outside the school. Shivaay, Om and Rudra come in a huge car, and get down. Shivaay sees Annika and his heart starts beating fast. His face becomes red and fastly moves inside the school. Om and Rudra start laughing. Annika sees them and smiles and leaves.
In 5th period, which was library lesson of class 9th, Annika took permission of the librarian, and went outside. Shivaay also made an excuse and secretly followed Annika. While Annika was returning, she forgot the way to the library as it was her 2nd day, and in that huge school, it was tough for her to learn different ways. Shivaay saw her going in wrong direction and shouted
Shivaay: Annika! That’s the wrong way; you have to take left from there.
Annika: (confused) can you please take me to library, please?

Shivaay was waiting for this. He ran to her, and stood beside her.
Shivaay: Don’t say please. I know you are lost and this is why, I…….
Annika: And this is why………you followed me, right Mr. Oberoi?

Shivaay: How do you know my name? (Realizing that it was stupid question)…. Well, what is your full name; I mean what do you put after Annika?
Annika: (She stood silent for some seconds and then said) It’s only Annika. No surname.
Shivaay: okay, no problem, next question, where do you belong to, I mean where is your hometown?
Annika: why are interested in my basic profile?
Shivaay: It’s okay, no problem. I will not ask any question related to your……… okay, so next question
(As Shivaay was going to ask the question, Annika spoke in between and said)
Annika: have you made whole list about question that you will ask me (Laughs)
Shivaay: (Hesitated)… no actually (and stood silent and smiled on his foolishness)
Annika: Shivaay, we are near the library, thank you for helping.
Shivaay smiled and entered the library.

Librarian: where were you both?
Shivaay: Actually ma’am, I was returning but then I saw Annika being confused so I helped her and we came together.
(Librarian nodded and gave then seats as Annika was sitting facing Shivaay. Shivaay was able to see Annika and so was she. )
Shivaay who was just finding was to talk to Annika, he got scolding from librarian as he was writing in chits and giving to Shivika who just after Annika. Om was dying as now he was not able to control his laugh and his situation was like he can burst any second.

Precap: Shivika and Annika’s friendship; Shivaay lies to teacher.

Alright! I have written a long chapter and not willing to write further. So in the next episode, Shivika will become friend of Annika and Shivaay will save Annika. Now guess, from whom Shivaay will save Annika.
I am sorry that I am writing so late.
Thank you,
Love,
Zainab

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    26 Comments

    1. shabnam on March 30, 2017 10:06 am

      Awesome?????? next post soon

      • Zainab on March 31, 2017 9:46 pm

        Thank you so much di. Ill post the next part soon❤

    2. Lilly on March 30, 2017 10:14 am

      Superb…

    3. kanfi on March 30, 2017 10:16 am

      Awesmmme epi

    4. Arya on March 30, 2017 10:22 am

      superb….awesome.

    5. Shivika1233 on March 30, 2017 10:28 am

      Awesome????????fantastic please post next part soon

    6. Sahasra on March 30, 2017 10:53 am

      Superb next part update soon

    7. lisaaa on March 30, 2017 10:57 am

      awesome

    8. Shrutika on March 30, 2017 11:00 am

      Wow! Outstanding! Shivaay became majnu!

    9. Shraddha on March 30, 2017 11:37 am

      Hey zaina, it’s just awwww, superb idea.
      Pls do involve omri story and add some superb romantic scenes of omri too.

      Coz I am a shivikian and omrian?

    10. shivika on March 30, 2017 11:50 am

      Wowwwwww

    11. ch on March 30, 2017 12:11 pm

      superb plz update next plz plz plz……………………..

    12. Shivika on March 30, 2017 12:26 pm

      Awesome….

    13. Ayissha on March 30, 2017 12:31 pm

      So sweet….Lovely??……Really awesome ? Update soon

    14. alekhika20 on March 30, 2017 12:36 pm

      Nyc

    15. nikitajai on March 30, 2017 1:34 pm

      Sweet one dear…

    16. Surbhi Sharma on March 30, 2017 2:03 pm

      Awesome. Loved it . So they are in class 9 . Okay .post soon plz .

    17. Bhavana on March 30, 2017 5:40 pm

      Awesome…was waiting 4 ur update….plz update nxt part soon…

    18. Nidhi on March 30, 2017 6:59 pm

      Awrsome
      Post soon

    19. Haridhra on March 30, 2017 8:47 pm

      Wow it’s awsm..

    20. Jerry_36 on March 30, 2017 11:06 pm

      Hey you don’t need to be nervous Zainab. I read ur comment in one of the ff. You write fantastic. Every bit was wonderful. Waiting eagerly for next one?

      • Zainab on April 2, 2017 11:16 pm

        Thank you so much for your motivation di. I shall post the next soon.

    21. banita on March 31, 2017 12:01 am

      Wowww…. Superbb.. post nxt part soon

    22. Zainab on March 31, 2017 9:47 pm

      Thank you so much everyone❤❤❤. I’ll post the next part soon. Keep reading?

    23. Archisha on April 1, 2017 4:05 pm

      Wow ! That was just too good. Waiting for the next one

    24. vanshika on April 3, 2017 12:41 am

      Outstanding… Lovely … Awesome … I have no more words to say … It was epic … Please air up your another one … I am looking forward for your next story … :*

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