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Home»Fan Fiction»Tum se na ho payega – (Chapter 1)
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Tum se na ho payega – (Chapter 1)

ZainabBy ZainabMarch 25, 201738 Comments4 Mins Read
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Tum se Na ho payega…… (Chapter 1)
Hello people,
This is my first fan fiction. I am writing here for the first time although I have been a commenter on Telly updated Ishqbaaz written update page and a silent reader of many fan fictions Hope I’ll entertain you be my fan fiction (FINGERS CROSSED!)
{Group 1: (Aviral, Siddharth, Shivaay, Kunal, Omkara)}
{Group 2: (Vanshika, Mallika, Tanya, Shivika, Gauri)}

SCENE 1
It was a bright morning at St. Eros College. The birds were chirping around and cold breeze was hugging everyone present down there in the school campus. There were many groups around. At place, there were four five handsome and good looking boys who were shouting and discussing something. There was another group of girls in which one girl was looking at one boy and blushing.
Mallika: OMG! Shivaay is so cute and handsome!! He has beautiful colorful eyes which make me lost when I look into them. Oh god!! I am truly fallen for him. He comes in my dreams and I am really in love with him.
Tanya: Oh Mallika! Now stop staring him like this. He must be feeling awkward. Stop now! One thing you should know about him is he is very strict about his relationship status and till date he has not accepted any proposals. You should stop thinking and dreaming about him.
Mallika: Are you my friend or my enemy?? Being my Best friend you should help me to get close to him. But you are telling me to be away from him. Are you seriously my best friend??
Tanya: I am your best friend and I will not prove it. I am advising or you can say that I am ordering you that you should stop thinking about him as this will later break your heart. You were last night telling me that you are going to propose him. Please don’t do that.

At this point all the other girls: What are you seriously going to propose him…… please go fast!!!
Mallika: nope! Not today as I am not ready today. But one day I will surely do.
Just then there was an announcement to form straight lines and get ready for the prayers.
Everyone was praying but still Mallika was looking at Shivaay and smiling. Few moments later, they all dismissed to their classes and were waiting for teacher and attendance, but teacher didn’t arrived.
Few minutes later, a girl entered the class. She was being shy and was not looking up. She had long black hair plaited with her flicks teasing her and coming on her fair face which was slowly turning pink. She had big eyes with very light kajal in them and her lips which were light pink due to lip balm on them (just like our Annika).
Teacher: Good Morning students!! So today I have brought a new friend of you all. Her name is Annika. From today she will study in your class. (Facing Annika)Now dear Annika, please introduce yourself.
As Annika was introducing herself, Shivaay was continuously looking at her. The way she was speaking confidently and the way she was looking into every eye and smilingly. He was lost in her. Her big eyes made him feel just to stare them and never come back. It was the first time he was feeling this type of feeling and was blushing.
After her introduction, teacher gave her the first bench in the third row in which was adjacent to Shivaay who was sitting next to her in the second row, first bench. She was sitting alone as the whole class of 28 (excluding Annika) was full with each bench having 2 students each so had to sit alone. Mallika, who was sitting at just back of Shivaay was in the deep shade of pink due to blushing. Shivaay who was continuously looking at Annika which didn’t go unnoticed by Annika, was ignoring him.

PRECAP: ShivIka’s first interaction!

Thank you so much for reading this. Hope you all enjoyed it. Please do share your views and do tell that should I continue or not. I will wait for your comments. Thank you all. Please do share your views.
Love,
Zainab

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    38 Comments

    1. Kehkasha on March 26, 2017 12:17 am

      Hi zainab…
      Am kehkasha….
      And at present I am writing two ff…
      I hope this much intro of mine is cool for now…

      And about ur ff….then genuinely…..i liked it….
      The way u showed the triangle of relation in very first part…..os praise worthy…..
      I would love to continue the read to this ff…..and u have to pm me the link….
      As my exams r approaching…..so maybe I can’t comment regularly……but then think….that u too got a silent reader for some time…..
      Do share the links when u post the next part…..
      And do continue with ur ff….
      Waiting for the next…

      • Zainab on March 26, 2017 9:22 am

        Thank you so much Kehkasha di… Your comment really means alot. Glad that you liked my story❤

    2. vincy on March 26, 2017 12:32 am

      Wow nice start

      • Zainab on March 26, 2017 9:22 am

        Thank you so much di ❤

    3. Surbhi Sharma on March 26, 2017 1:18 am

      Zainab it’s amazing .loved it . U r an amazing writer .and plzzzz do continue . Loved it . ??

      • Zainab on March 26, 2017 9:24 am

        Thank you so much di. And will be countinuing now. Thank you for your comment❤

    4. Sofiya. S. on March 26, 2017 1:48 am

      Awesome update dear. ? ?

      • Zainab on March 26, 2017 9:29 am

        Thank you so much❤

    5. nikitajai on March 26, 2017 1:51 am

      Good one dear…

      • Zainab on March 26, 2017 9:30 am

        Thank you so much❤

    6. shivika on March 26, 2017 3:54 am

      Nyc

      • Zainab on March 26, 2017 9:28 am

        Thank you so much di❤

    7. Astha_Reddy on March 26, 2017 6:47 am

      Shivika in college that too love at first sight for Shivaay… wow!!! Just continue yaar…
      I hope you are the same Zainab I texted some days before…

      • Zainab on March 26, 2017 9:27 am

        Hello Astha di. Thank you so much for your comment. Thos really means ALOT. And yes I am the same Zainab whom you texted before.

        No actually Shivaay and Annika are in their high school. This will be cleared in the next chapter.

    8. alekhika20 on March 26, 2017 8:20 am

      AsunAsum

      • Zainab on March 26, 2017 9:31 am

        Thank you so much❤

    9. Shivika1233 on March 26, 2017 9:35 am

      It was awesome zainab the way you presented the love triangle was superbbbbbb waiting for next

      • Zainab on March 27, 2017 10:22 pm

        Thank you ❤

    10. Ria on March 26, 2017 9:50 am

      Okay, I’m looking forward to the next one. Love at first sight seems to be interesting, again. Although, I don’t belief in it, but what’s the harm in imagining?

    11. Arya on March 26, 2017 10:15 am

      Nice one

    12. Shrutika on March 26, 2017 11:04 am

      Nice start dear. Loved it.

    13. vanshika on March 26, 2017 11:30 am

      Awesome :*… I wanna read more … I am looking forward for part 2 … I love the LOVE TRIANGLE <3 …. Please hurry up and air up your part 2 … I am waiting

      • Zainab on March 27, 2017 10:23 pm

        Thank you so much❤❤❤

    14. shabnam on March 26, 2017 12:53 pm

      Superb??waiting for next update keep writing

    15. gangu on March 26, 2017 12:54 pm

      Ohh I so nice you have a good writing skills

    16. Bhavana on March 26, 2017 12:55 pm

      Awesome start… Loved it…

    17. Lilly on March 26, 2017 2:25 pm

      Awesome

    18. Nidhi on March 26, 2017 2:58 pm

      Mind blowing
      I luv college/skul ff
      Plz continue

    19. Riah on March 26, 2017 4:02 pm

      Awesome…loved it…a vry good start

    20. Jerry_36 on March 27, 2017 10:36 pm

      Zainab dear it was amazing. I always love❤college stories. You wrote so wonderfully. Shivaay fallen for anika is so cute. I really liked it and waiting desperately for more. Do update soon.

      • Zainab on March 27, 2017 10:59 pm

        I am a huge fan of your writing (huge its you or may be another Jerry) . Glad that you liked my story. Keep reading ❤

      • Jerry_36 on March 27, 2017 11:08 pm

        Zainab dear I am the same jerry.❤

    21. kanfi on March 30, 2017 10:12 am

      Hey zainab,,its nice bt i’ve to know something,,who r aviral siddhartha n kunal??n who r vanshika n tanya??omkara n shivaay r from ishqbaaz!?n annika ,gauri n mallika r also from ishqbaaz n ??
      By the way nice epi

      • Zainab on March 31, 2017 9:44 pm

        Hey Kanfi di,
        Actually all the other members are the friends. Like Mallika has a group in which she has her friends. Actually I was not getting names, so put names of my friends? . Like Shivaay has a group in which he is talking to Aviral.

        Glad that you liked my story❤❤❤
        Keep reading?

      • kanfi on March 31, 2017 11:30 pm

        Ohhh,,then its great,,thnx for clearing my doubt,,,r u muslim??i m just asking,,dont mind,,,

      • Zainab on April 2, 2017 11:11 pm

        Yes, I am muslim.

    22. Parth Gurnani on March 30, 2017 3:36 pm

      Nice??

      • Zainab on March 31, 2017 9:45 pm

        Thank you so much Parth?

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