TUM SE MILKE (Chapter 5)

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CHAPTER 5
VIVIDHA KAILASH KASHAP

“Ramu kaka kya pura kaam hogaya…?” a girl in her mid 20’s questioned a man in his mid fifties.
“Haan bête…par abhi tak sweet shop se sweets aye nahi” the old man replied.
“Ankit ko mene bola tha…” with that she went off to her mother who was busy making laddos for the success party.
“Ma… Ankit kahan hai…uss ne abhi tak sweet shop se peda nahi laya…” she told her mother impatiently.
“Pata nahi kahan gaya” Uma answered a usual reply.
“Aur kahan…! Hoga Kisi ladki ke peeche ya phir uske badmash doston ke pass…” replied guddi with her usual quirky intelligence.

“Aree guddi…! Kahan chali gayi… e le iss face cream KO mere muh pe laga de… party me mujhe beautiful dikh na hai…!” came out the loudest voice of the house.
“Dadi… vo mera cream hai… dedo na” guddi replied in her bossy tone.
She couldn’t tolerate dadi using her products and coming in between her issues.

“Abhi papa ke party ke liye sirf aur sirf panch gante hai…aur abhi tak papa ke favourite peda nahi hai…!” vividha wailed bringing back the original topic of discussion to the group of ladies which included her.
“Di hum dono chale aur shop se lekar aaye. Bas aadha ghanta ka time lagega aur kaam bhi hojayega…Ankit ko hum trust nahi kar sakte. Chale….” asked wide eyed guddi with her beaming smile.

“Chalo..!” replied vividha.
This party is her father’s prestige and happiness and her father’s happiness is her happiness and fulfilment.
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Near the sweet shop, there was a group of ladies talking about the almost complete constructed house.
“Suna hai ki sujata aur uski parivaar yahan aa ahi hai…” a lady told the other busy sweet buying ladies.
“Holiday ke liye…” a lady asked
“Nahi…permanent ke liye. Yahan settle hone ka plan he.ve se bhi bahut saare paise kamaya hai unlog…” the older lady replied.
“Savitha bhabhi apko kese pata??” questioned vividha.
“Kal uss ne mujhe call kiya beti…” Savitha replied.
“Di…sujata kaun hai…?” inquired guddi.
“Yo yahan pehle rehte the…ma ki dost thi…aur phir vo delhi chale gaye…” replied vividha checking the sweets kept for display.

“Mujhe kese patha nahi chala…?” guddi asked
“Um tab paidha nahi Hui… aur me choti thi” replied vividha slightly hitting on guddi’s head.
“Oh….achha….! Jaldi karo…” retorted guddi quite frustrated at vividha now.
“Arre…Wait na almost over…!” vividha replied almost done with the packing.
Just as she left out of the shop she just got to hear this name “Aarthava” from that lady in the shop.

Vividha took all the bags and started to move and a last glance at the house which will be occupied by the next week according to the ladies and slowly and softly she repeated the name which she heard…”AARTHAVA”…

SORRY FOR THE DELAY…I’M BUSY AND COULDN’T UPDATE ON TIME. PLEASE SUPPORT AND COMMENT IF YOU CAN

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9 Comments
  1. Nice episode..Gud flow ..don’t worry .u can upload whenever u r free ?

  2. o wow.I really liked the part of both the sisters talking with davmch other and when vividha heard atharva name keep writing dear

  3. Nice episode……but if u dont mind can u pls type the conversations too using english translation coz i find it a little difficult to understand hindi well……

  4. Sunanda12345

    Nyc dear….keep gng on….

  5. RAOne

    great story……….. nicely done really i enjoyed your work..

  6. Wonder3112 pls write in English I know Hindi some not that much pls

  7. Superb…Keep writing dear…Loved it soo much…??

  8. thanks and i will upload the next updates in english for your convience.

  9. Nice…Yaar…Really enjoyed..

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