Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (SS Part 11)

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Hey guys….. Main pehle hi warning de de to hu ki ye episode kafi chota h… So very very sorry in advance…..
Actually aj story mein Naira ke mom-dad ki entry karwa hi dete h….
Or entry bina Character Sketch k ….
Aisa toh ho hi nh skta Na…..??

Character Sketch
Mrs.Sakshi Malhotra:- played by Simone Singh
… Naira’s mom…..
Mr.Rajnath Malhotra:-played by Ayub Khan….
Naira’s papa…
Now without any further delay….. Let’s start wid the update….

Scene 1(Naira’s house)
Naira’s POV
This part of my daily routine sucks…. It literally sucked… When I returned back to my home…. My home…. It sounds so funny to me….. Wo ghar …. Ghar nh…. Or mera ghar toh bilkul hi nh tha….. Main itni negative kyu hu Apne ghar ko lekar…. Ye to mere ghar mein Jane k bad hi pata chal jayegi… At least ye unhe pata chal jata h Jo fake family or real family mein difference pata h….

Sakshi:-are beta tum ghar itne late kyu ayi ho??
Raj:-ha…. Exactly… Tum kl se gayab ho… Where were u??
Naira:-Itni acting kyu kr re h ap log??? Let me tell u yaha koi media ya phirr apki so called society k rakhwale nh h….
Toh ye fake concern dikhana band kijiye aap log?? Or rahi bat mere ghar Na ane ki toh aap dono ab tk ye pata chal Jana chahiye ki m hr Saturday OM mein hi rehti hu….
Or Agar ab aap logo ka questioning session khtm ho gaya ho to kya main ja skti hu…
I’m very tired…. Gd night both of u…
Kaka mera khana mere room m hi bhijwa dejiyega….
Kaka:-thk h bitiya….

Naira’s POV…
Ahhhhh….. Koi itna double standard kaise ho skta h??? Itna sab kuch karne k bad bhi ye have din aise behave krte h kaise kuch hua hi nh….
I hope kl inki shakal Na dekhni pade….
Oooo shit….. Is drame k beech mein m toh Anika ko call Krna bhul hi gayi….

Scene 2…
On call
Naira:-hello!!
Anika:- tu itne late ghar kaise pahuchi?? Zyada traffic thi kya?? Kahi tera accident to nh ho gaya Na…??? Tu kuch bolegi bhi?? Muh mein dahi Jama k kyu baithti h?????
Naira:-arre chill yr….. Kitni stress leti h yr tu….
Aisa kuch nh hua…. Kuch aisa hua hota to tu or Shivay mujhe hospital mein Milne ate Na…
Anika:- ho gaya tera…. Ab batayegi ??
Naira:- nothing yr…. M phone Krna bhul gayi thi…
Anika:- acha thik h… Tune packing kr li??
Naira:-nh bas khana kha k packing hi karungi….
Anika:-okkk…. Acha tujhe to ab pata chal hi gaya hoga Na ki hum trek par kaha ja rahe h…
Naira:-ha…. Batao hu …. Par pehle Shivay ko conference pr leti hu… Dono ko ek bar mein explain kr dungi…
Anika:-okkk…. Connect kr use…
Shivay:-hlo laddu…. To Teri important meeting khtm ho gayi… ???
Anika n Naira( together):-shut up Billu….
Shivay:-ahhhhhh….. Thk h… Kya hua??
Naira:- actually mujhe tum dono ko trek k bare mein sab explain Krna tha…
Shivika:-thik h… Shuru ho ja…
Naira:- ha toh hum log trek par Darjeeling ja re h…. Or isse pehle tum dono gadhoo ki tarah mujhse pucho ki ye kaha h… To let me tell u…

Ye West Bengal m h… Hum kl 12:30 ko yaha se train lenge… N wo train humein yaha se Silliguri tk leke jayegi…
Shivay:-dont tell me hum yaha se paidal jayenge….
Naira:-billu chup kar… Hum waha se dusro train lenge… Which is known as the Darjeeling Himalayan Railway…. Also known as toy train…
Shivika:- wooow yr…it’s going to be fun….☺☺☺☺
Naira:-yup guys…. Or pta h kya… It’s the highest railway station in India… Can u believe it yr… Waha bht Maza ayega…
N let me inform u all… Please Apne woollen clothes leke ana…. Waha p kafi thand h….
Shivika:-okkk captain….
Naira:-ok then bye… See u guys tomorrow in the college sharp at 9:00… N ha… Plzz late mat Hona….
Shivika:-kuch or bolna h ya ho gaya…
Naira:-nh yr …. Ho gaya….
Shivika:-bye… Gd night…
Naira:-bye..bye…. Gd night…..???

Scene 3 ( screen is divided into 3 frames…)
All the leads are lying on their bed with a
cute smile on their face….
Shivikaira:- I can’t wait for tomorrow…..??

Precap:-the famous DDLJ scene is going to be recreated but with a twist….??

(A/N:- that’s it for today guys…. Aj thodi free thi to socha that at least ek chota update toh banta hi h…. Do give Ur feedbacks guys… N do guess what is the twist in the precap….)

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19 Comments
  1. Waiting for the twist dear… It is awesome

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks Nikita….
      N I’ll try to update ASAP….
      N abt the twist… Most probably I’ll reveal it in my next update….
      Thanks for reading ….???

  2. Superbbbb….waiting 4 the nxt…..plzz update nxt part asap…cant wait 4 the twist…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot for the compliment dear….
      N I’ll try to post soon….??

  3. Lovely

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks Lily…..??

  4. Maria

    Waiting for next episode it was superbb

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks Maria….
      N I’ll try to post next part soon…??

  5. Vincy

    Nice

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks Vincy…?

  6. R u from Bengal….?

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks Vincy…..??

      1. JanviSingh

        Ooops… Sorry dear…
        Nope Rane…
        I’m not from Bengal…
        Bt I’m quite familiar to Darjeeling….
        Actually my father was posted near Bengal border….??

  7. Samm

    nice precap. also, it was fun to see shivaay excited by this trek thing rather than complaining about the train. i know his character is a little different in your ff, but such instances never fails to surprise and awe me. excited for the trek. 🙂

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot Samm….
      N yup… I thought to make him a little less complaining in the fiction….
      Bt he is definitely going to freak out during the trek….
      N that’s for sure…????

  8. Aana

    Oooo…my sweetheart… Hw r u dear??
    Abt this epi. Its short but lovely ….nd Darjeeling waiting dear…really exited for the upcoming twist ne turns…. Nd hope nairas past will be revealed csoon…
    Till then bye bye….love u

    1. JanviSingh

      Hey swara….
      I’m fine now sissy….
      N Naira’s past…. Uske revelations k liye thoda wait Krna hoga….
      Luv u to sweetheart….??

  9. Superb episode…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks dear…….??

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