Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (SS Part 9)

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Hey guys… Really sorry for late update…. actually I posted it bt it didn’t got updated….
I hope iss bar update ho jaye…..
So, without any further ado….. Let’s start with the update…… N do read the note in the end of
the update….
Scene 5(continuation….)
I don’t remember that from how long I was standing there….. All these bottled up emotions lead to such outbursts…. N this tym it came in the form of tears…..
I felt a sudden suffocation in the room… I thought to have some water bt found the jar empty…..
I started walking towards the kitchen… This light walk decreased the suffocation that I was feeling some time back……
I guess I was very tired or it was quite late cuz I started feeling dizzy n after drinking a glass of water… I went back to my room… N within no time I drifted into deep slumber ….

Scene 1(8:00 am in OM…)
Rudra:-Gd mrng everyone☺☺☺
Naira:-Gd mrng Rudy….☺☺
Shivay:-Gd mrng Rudra…..
Om:-Gd mrng Dumbbell Oberoi….. Waise janab itne jaldi kaise uth gaye????
Pinky:-Ha Rudra….. Aaj toh Sunday h…..
Toh tu itne jaldi kaise uth gaya…..
Rudra:-Wo Choti Ma…… Aj kuch kam h Na is liye jldi uth gaya…..??
Om:-Toh tujhe bhi kuch kam hota h……… Wah….
Not bad haaaaa……
Rudy:-Rehne do O….. Ap nh samjhoge…. Kuch kuch hota h…..
(A/N-ahhhhh I luv this dialogue…???)
Naira:-Toh wo finally Mann gayi Na…..
Rudra:-Arre wah di….. Sahi guess kiya h…??
Naira:-Thank u… Thank u….☺☺
Toh batao date ka kya plan h??
Rudra:-Beach p sare arrangements ho gaye h…
Bas sunset se pehle raha pahuchna h….
Naira:-Not bad Rudy………….. Proud of u???
(Rudra does his famous logic wala sign after hearing the compliment…)
ShivOm:-Kya khichdi Pak rahi h tum dono k beech mein????
Naira:-,(in an excited tone..??) -Arre… Tum dono ko Nahi pata….
They both nodded in negative….

Naira:-Rudy jis ladki ko 2 weeks se stalk kar raha tha ….. Wo finally date p Jane k liye ready ho gayi h……
Isn’t it great….☺☺
ShivOm:-Kahe ka great……… Faltu mein apna tym waste kiya humne ye puch kar….??
Rudra:-Ha…. Ha….. Aise toh aap dono bade hi productive kam karte ho Na……?
Naira:-Arre wah Rudy….. Productive n all ha….. Not bad….. Tumhari vocab toh kafi improve ho gayi h…???
Rudy:-While lifting his color….. Hai Na di…..
Waise issi bat par ek Sher arzzz hai……
-Arre kis bat wait kar re ho… Irshaad to bolo…☺☺
ShivOmAira:-Irshaad☺
Rudra:-toh arzzz kiya h….
“Pyar Hua………..
Ikrar hua………”
Taking a pause…….
(In an annoyed tone)
Kaise jhalle audience ho aap log yar……???
Vaah….. Vaah… Toh bolo…..
ShivOmAira:-Ha…. Vaah…Vaah…
Vaah…..Vaah…..
Rudra:-“Pyar hua………
Ikrar hua………
Or humari teacher ka dimag……
Humari harkato se kharab hua…..”
Naira:-(in an extra excited way…) Wooow Rudy….. Yeh wala toh bilkul dhinchak type tha….???
Rudra:-Wooow di… Aap phirse ek cool word Sikh ke aye ho…
Naira:-Ha Rudy…… Brand new h….?
Rudy:-mujhe bhi sikhna hai…..
Naira:-Ha chalo ……. I’LL teach u all the cool words…..
Naira n Rudy went away chit-chatting….. While ShivOm gave them a “Inka kuch nh ho skta ” look…..

Scene 2 (at breakfast table)
Shivay:-Naira chalo jaldi…. We are getting late….
Tumhe pata h Na college se phn aya tha…
Kuch important announcement h…..
Naira:-Mujhe nh Jana Shivay…. Tum kuch bahana bana Dena……
Shivay:-Naira tum activity captain ho Na…. U need to be there…..
Naira:- side hugging Dadi….
Dadi isse bolo Na mujhe nh Jana …..
Shivay:-Stop behaving lyk a small kid Laddu….
Naira:+thik h…. Chalo hu….. Chilla kyu rahe ho…
Aa rahi hu Na….
Turning towards everyone….
Bye guys….??????
N all the best Rudy??????
Rudy:-Thanks di….. Bye??
Naira:-(to Shivay) Chalo ab late nh ho ra h tumhe…… Phone band karo apna…..???

Scene 3(college hall)
Dean:-Hello n A very Gd mrng to all the students n staff members….. Kaisa ki aap sab jante h…… Our Annual Fest is coming up…… So, iss saal fest ko kuch different or exciting bannane k liye…… We are planning a trek for all the students n Staff members…..
N as u all know…. The trek will be followed by a Prom Night which is an old custom of our college………
So guys n gals….. Time to pull up your socks n put your best foot forward……
Students:-Yaaaaay…….??????
So guys …. There r some questions for u all….
N I’ll request the silent readers… If there are any…. To plzz answer them…
1- suggest any place for tht trek…..
2-n any game or event that u would like to add in the fest…..
I guess that’s all…. N a special note for all the readers is that this fest will be a turning point in the life of the leads…..??
So…. See u in the comment section…..

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17 Comments
  1. Superbbbbbb dear… Waiting for the next update..

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks dear….
      I’LL definitely try to post soon…..???

  2. Superbbbb… Waiting for the nxt…. ,?

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks for reading sis….
      N I’ll try to post soon…??

  3. Nithu

    Wbt…Treasure hunt.. and for treck……manali…

    1. JanviSingh

      Yup it’s a great idea sis….
      Even I was thinking of some hill station….
      N thanks for commenting sis??

  4. Hey! Good going.. loved the storyline!!
    1. Sosogad, goa or vagheri, goa. (Spellings mithila be wrong. Just typed as pronounced. I love these two places and have a spcl connection to em as I not only am I a goan but a nature lovers too. I love these places. Sosogad means mountain of rabbits and vagheri means mountain of Tiger. Whenever I have gone.. I never found a tiger… found a few rabbits. But there r lots of peacocks and foxes. It’s an epic and tranquille place. Amazing place for trekking.
    2. Uh. Well in the places mentioned above there are a few waterfalls. U cud divide the people in groups. Team which reaches the place wins. The others have to cook for the next few days or something while the winning team relaxes.
    Hope the suggestions are good 🙂

    1. JanviSingh

      Hey dear….
      Thanks for helping me yr…
      I was literally confused……
      N Ur suggestions are very unique…. N very helpful too….
      N I’m glad that you are liking the storyline….??

      1. Ur welcome. (It was might and not mithila. Autocorrect ?). I just suggested em cuz people don’t no much about em. It wud be nice if people came to no about em. People just tend to think goa is a place for partying at beaches and drinking. I hate that notion. I want to change that. Hence suggested. ?.

  5. Samm

    i am ok with any place you feel like adding. and i too think that treasure hunt will be cool.
    the update was nice as usual 🙂 i love naira and rudy, they’re so cute and crazy! 🙂
    waiting for the next 🙂

    1. JanviSingh

      Ha haha…. Even I luv them…..☺☺☺
      N thanks for suggestions sis…..
      I’LL try to post ASAP…..

  6. JanviSingh

    That’s great dear…
    Even I had the same thinking abt Goa…. The stereotype one…
    Bt I guess I need to visit it soon…. Cuz I love waterfalls…..??

  7. Kehkasha

    hey janvi………..amazing dear…………..but now i guess that girl is anika…….and this idea of fest is superb…..i’ll suggest u to add a bonfire scene………coz fest or trek….or outing without that is really unjust……..at least for me……….and great bond between RuAira……..and now i guess……..that u wanna potray Naira’s character full of +vity……….that’s why u r focusing on her……….and the main story goes around naira………instead of shivika’s love story………coz this is not a love triangle………..its a bond of trust and emotions…………am i right……..

    well then i loved ur idea……and the way u r proceeding too……..luv u dear…..keep it up..

    1. JanviSingh

      Hey dear…..
      Wlcm back…..
      N of course I’ll add the bonfire scene….
      It’s really romantic too….??
      N I’m glad that you r liking the story sis…
      Luv u too….????

  8. JanviSingh

    N thanks a lot dear….
    Itne sare compliment….
    Im on cloud 9 now….???

  9. Aana

    Heeeee Janvi!!!!!…..
    Extremely sorry yr. Itne late comment ke liye….sorry …..
    Story is going amazing dude….shayari ne toh dhamal macha Diya….nd u kn….slowly slowly I am liking naira….she is grt…
    Dude suggestion….wait let me think…may be ooty ….or dehradun…with some snowfall nd bonfire….make this treck…memorable for everyone… Games make it 2 as in morning u can go for treasure hunt nd something lyk that ….nd in nyt with bonfire ..u can put truth nd dare in which with some masti….some hints of past nd all…u get in na???
    Chalo bye ….amazing writing sweetheart …love u loads bye

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot swara……
      N Ur suggestions are very helpful…
      N I’m planning of disclosing the past after or during the prom night…..
      N even I luv the shayari …..
      Akhir mere dil se direct nikli h…????

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