Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (SS Part 8)

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Hey guys……. Thank u so much guys for making my birthday so special….I think this will be one of the most beautiful memories that I will recall on my deathbed…. I think about emotional ho gaya aj ke liye…. Bt it’s true….
So,without wasting anymore time…. Let’s start wid the update…..
Shivay’s POV
As soon as I parked my car… I heard Naira banging the car door loudly…… She ran inside as fast as she can…. Hopping n shouting lyk a little kid who has just returned from school….She is always this excited when she comes to meet Badi Ma or Rudy or anyone in Oberoi mansion….. She shares a great bond with everyone here….. Bt her bond with Badi Ma is very unique…. It’s something I can never understand… Bt it’s something that not only me bt everyone cherishes…… N she shares a very cute bonding with Rudy…. Actually they got connected with their lame poetry…. Or as Om says “Bachkani shayari”……???
Keeping my thoughts aside, I followed this over excited bunny…..

Scene 1…..(inside O.M….)
Naira:-Badi Ma…….Rudy……… Dadi………….Look who’s here……?????
Shivay:-(to Naira)That was supposed to be my dialogue… I guess….
Naira:-Awwwwww…..Maine tumhara limelight cheen Liya….. tch…..tch…..
Well guess what…. Deal with it….. Mr.Angry Bird…..??

Naira’s POV….
As soon as I saw Badi Ma coming downstairs…..
I ran to her like a kid runs towards her mom…. I hugged her tightly….. It felt so peaceful to be around her….. She was the best lady i have ever met…… She was the only one who knew everything about me… Actually she knew me in and out…..

Scene 2(on the stairs)
Naira:-Badi Ma I missed u soooooooooooo much…….(while hugging her)
Shivay:-Hey drama queen…. Tum last week hi sab se mili thi…..?
Naira:-Hawwww….. Shivay……. That’s luk 7-8 days back…. Stop being jealous Mr . Birdy……
B.M.:-Awwwwww… Mera bacha… I missed u too…. Bt look at u….. Tum kitni patli ho gayi…..
Bilkul dhyan nh rahkti ho tum khud ka…..
Naira:-Typical mom…. Hai Na????
Pinky:-Ooo my mata Shivay…… Tu meri diamonds bahus ko dramas quuuunsss bulati raha hai..
.( Guys u know Na…. Pinky’s English…. N her obsession with her Nahi… Be it Tia or Naira…)
Naira(while hugging her)….. I missed u aunty…
Pinky:-toh tum ab mujhe aunties bulaogi….(faking anger??)
Naira:-Oopss…. Sorry… Mom….☺☺
Voice:-Ha….Ha…. Sab ek dusre ko miss kar rahe hai….. Bt no one missed me…. No one loves me here….(in a -Typical crybaby tone…. )
Naira:-aww…. Mera baby brother kaisa hai???
Rudy:-koi zarurat nh hai mujhese bat karne ki….??
Naira:-bt I missed u kiddo…..??
Rudy:-(hugging) even I missed u laddu di…??
Toh iss bat par ek Sher arzzz hai….
-Arre kya kr re ho…. Irsheyad toh bolo….
Naira:-Kiddo… That’s irshaad….☺
Rudy:-ha wahi…. Wahi…..
Now listen…..
Na Usse mere pyar ki kadar…..
Na mujhe Uske pyar ki kadar….
2 parallel lines can never intersect
each other……
Naira:-its awsm kiddo….. Chalo isse Apne Wall or post karte hai….?
Everyone gave them u both r impossible look…
Pinky:-acha chalo tum log… Baithiye kar bat Krna…
Naira:-Actually Mom… Badi Ma… Aaj office mein kuch kam hai…. To I’LL catch u guys at the dinner table….
(Turning towards Shivay…)
Chale Shivay…
Shivay:-yaaa…. Let’s go….
(Guys actually both of them have started working after 18.. so they attend the college this half tym then join the office… Even Anika does a part time job to support Sahil….)

Scene 3…(back to home….)
Shivaira entered in a completely messy look… It was 10:00 at night ….. They were hell tired n walked rather dragged their bodies to the dinning table….( I hope u guys can imagine)
Naira:-Yawning….aaaaahhhhhh…. Aj khane mein kya hai badi ma…??(she kept her head on Janvi’s shoulder…)
B.M.:- well khane mein sab Rudy or Tumhara favorite hai….
Rudy:-(in his usual cool boy tone??)
Mom wait… Let me guess…. Aj Dal makhhani or stuffed naan hai Na khane mein….
Janvi nodded in approval…
Rudy:-or dessert mein boondi ke laddu right….
Pinky:-arre wah Rudra….. Tu toh bada intelligetns ho gaya hai…..
Dadi:-ye to tune sahi kaha Pinky…☺
Rudy:-(while giving his famous cool boy look ??)-thanks choti ma…. Thanks Dadi….. Bt plzz yr no autographs….
Naira:-wooow….. Thanks badi ma… Mom…. U both r d best….???
Rudy what r u waiting for…. Chalo khane hai…
After finishing with their dinner every one retired to their beds….
N Naira went with Janvi to her room….

Scene 4…..(Janvi’s room)
Janvi:-so laddu…. How’s everything going??
Naira:-ahhh…. Everything is fine…. Work is just great….. College life is going smoothly with little speed breakers…. Everything is just perfect….
Janvi:- n Ur mom dad…..??
Naira:-Unka kya hai??? Honge kahin…. Koi or deal plan kar rahe honge….(in a sarcastic tone)
Janvi:-beta…. It’s been 4 yrs since u r living with them… Why don’t u forget everything.??
Naira:-Exactly badi ma…. It’s been 4 yrs….. Bt nothing has changed… Every time I meet u …. You say the same thing….. Aap thakti nh… Mera ek hi jawab sunte sunte…..
Mujhe in logo ke bare mein bat bhi nh karni….
Maaf karne ya Na karne ka toh sawal hi nh uthta……
Or badi ma kisi ko maaf toh main tab karungi Na jab koi mujhse kafi mangega…. Maafi manga toh door ki bat h… In logo ko toh Apne galti ka ehsaas bhi nh h….
Aap hi btao… Kya aap us insan ko maaf kar skte ho jisne apko sirf use kiya ho???????
Janvi just kept mum… Cuz she had nothing to say…. She knew Naira was right… N more than anything she was hurt… Deeply hurt….. A wound that can never be cured….
Naira’s eyes were blood red n filled with tears…
She smiled to Janvi n said…
I got my answer badi ma…..

Scene 5(near the window)
A girl is standing near window… She is gazing at the moon while tears tool down from her eyes…???????
Some flashes are shown… It seems luk she is recalling something…..
A stormy night is shown….. It’s raining heavily with thunderstorms……..
A voice is heard….. It seems like a child is crying…… Bt no one can hear the child on the stormy night….
N the flashes end…….
The girl covers her ears with both her hands….. To avoid those sounds….. Bt the crying never stopped… She could hear it even now…
She shuts her eyes tightly… N tears flow down….??
(A/N:- I guess that’s it guys…. I m not totally happy with the emotional part…. Bt do tell me your views….)
Precap:- main bas sahi time ka wait kar rahi hu….

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14 Comments
  1. Samm

    2 parallel lines can never intersect each other! 😀 😀
    i loved the rudy naira part most of all. waiting for more bachkani shayaris and the story to unveil. 🙂

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks sis…..
      I’m go u liked it…??
      I’LL try to add more Bachkani shayari for sure….☺☺

  2. Excited and waiting for the next update dear..

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks dear….
      N I’ll try to post soon??

  3. Aana

    No need for thanks.. .ciz special ppll needs special birthday…. Nd abt this epi….its amazing. It was having everything fun, drama emotions…. Just perfect dear….eagerly waiting for the next…nd tell me last mei vo grl naira thi…right??…
    Bye bye

    1. JanviSingh

      -Ooo…. That’s so sweet of u sis……
      I’m glad that u enjoyed reading it…
      N abt the girl… I’LL reveal it in next part….???

  4. Its great…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks dear for ur constant support….??

  5. it was nice
    but can u clear me whose chemistry u want to show shivaira or shivika?????????????
    plz reply

    1. JanviSingh

      Hey dear…..
      As I mentioned in the theme that ultimately it will be Shivika…. Bt Shivaira will be friends… As of now…. Naira is Shivay’s fiancé…..
      I hope I cleared Ur queries….
      N thanks for reading dear….??

  6. Superb…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks dear…..??

  7. Kehkasha

    hey janvi….superb update…..but whose this girl in the end……..i think for that i have to read the next part………loved RuAira part……and the convo between jhanvi and naira was heart stealing……..luved it a lot…….
    keep it up….
    tc dear…….

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwwwwww…. Thank u so much sissy….????
      U literally made my day….
      N I’m glad tht u liked it….??

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