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Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (SS Part 2)

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Hey guys… Well thank u so much for such a warm welcome… I never thought that I would ever write or if it will get such a nice response… Thanks a lot guys… Love u all….
Now let’s get started as the 1st part so super small….
Naira’s POV
I came out of my dreamland when Mr. Angry Bird snapped his fingers in front of me… Well I just luv to call him Angry Bird as he gets hyper easily…..
POV ends …..

Shivay- hey Alice kindly come out of Ur dreamland….(he spoke grinning idiotically)πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€
Naira-very funny …. Kabhi to dhang k jokes Mar Liya karo… Tumhare khud ke sense of humour k khet ko Chidiyan chug gayi h or tum Rudy ko PJs marne k liye blame lete ho.. lol☺☺☺☺
Shivay-ho gaya tumhara… N what’s with the language ha… Tum Na Uss Panika k sath rehte rehte aise ageb si language use krne kafi ho….
Naira– look Ho’s talking jab dekho tab Anika ye krti h Anika wo krti h… Tum uski language use krti ho… tum uski tarah logo ke ajeeb Nick name rakhne kafi ho… Blah blah blah…😣😣😣😣😣
What’s wrong wid u Shivay..?? Mujhe to lagta h tum Na Anika se obsessed ho… Tumne kabhi realise kiya h tum hamesha using ke bare m bat krte rehte ho…..
Shivay- Plzz don’t start again… Anyways tumhare wajah se bht tym waste ho gaya.. let’s go….
Naira-O hello.. Mr. Kaha chale… Merit bat abhi kharab nh huyi h…. Tumne ye topic start kiya tha or mujhe late hone k liye blame kr re ho…
U know what…. Mujhe bhi bht kam h… Velli nh hu m tumhari tarah…. Chalo ab hato samne se…😏😏😏
Shivay- what the wuck ….. What’s wrong wid her…
Corridor…. (Of course it’s college ka corridor)

A girl is seen walking hurriedly in the corridor n then…………… THASssssssssHHHHHHHHHH
(U fussed it right guys… She fell down)
Girl-(a bit annoyed as she was in a hurry already) are dekh k nh chal site kya… M already itni late ho chuki hu.. par phirr bhi ye siyyappe h ki khtm hone ka nam hi nh le re….. (Or ek or sahi guess k sath mere sare readers ko miles h Chantomai of the Year award.. of course yr… Jahan problems was Anika… Kya massst connection h)
Boy- o madam khud to asman me parinde(birds) ginte hue chal rahi ho or dusro ko free ki advice bat rahi ho….. Pta nh tum jaiso ko tumhare ma -baap kaise jhelte h??
Anika- o Bhai ….. Mai tumhare family gayi ki tum direct mere ma – -baap or pahuche gaye??
Boy-Lo Bhai…. Sorry bolne ki jagah mujhe tane subs rahi ho… Waise tum jaisi Roadchap ladki se hum expect bhi kya kr skte h?????
Phewwwww…. I hope this part was better then the last one…. Do give Ur feedbacks guys… I really need to know my weak points….

Precap:- koi to zaroor pitega… Itni guarantee hai…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

12 Comments
  1. very poor not getting the concept

    1. JanviSingh

      I’m very sorry for that… I’LL try my best to clear it… N thanks for reading…☺

  2. Vincy

    I hate whn anyone call Anika roadchap…
    Bt I like ur ff

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks u so much dear…. Even I hate it….

  3. You know janvi I really love your ff but Shivaay and Naira are engaged in this college age!!!??? It’s a bit strange don’t you think? 😰😰😰😰😰 I love the precape it was just awesome but plz longer ep. In your starting if you not give longer ep then you will not get much response so thought about it. It’s just a suggestion. Tum Dil Pe Mat Lelena.😘😘😘😘😘😦😦

    1. JanviSingh

      Hey dear …. Thanks yr batane k liye…. N abt being engaged… As I said earlier tht is just a part of the deal…. N don’t worry yr… M dil pr nh lungi… I’m glad tht u helped me… Thanks a lot….☺☺☺

  4. Yaashi

    Amm the entire story was good…. But plz can you use subtitles for Hindi dialogue…. I mean its difficult to grab some words…. Hope you didn’t feel bad… I was just giving suggestion…. Anyways post the nxt part soon…..

    1. JanviSingh

      Hey dear… It’s completely fine… I’LL try to add Hindi subtitles… N thanks for reading sis☺😊😊

  5. Sorry 4 late cmmnt……its good… πŸ™‚

    1. JanviSingh

      It’s okay dear☺☺ n thanks for reading…😊

  6. Mrunal

    amazing…
    annika is total siyyapa queen..
    shivaay is obsessed with annika..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

    1. JanviSingh

      Lol…. I totally agree wid u… N thanks for reading dear…..😊😊

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