Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (SS Part 18) Shivay will be Shivay

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Thanks a lottt for all your support guys… It really means a lot to me… Love u all…
And this update is dedicate to my cutie master chef Rufi… Love you sis????? and my super sweet sister lalli di????
Recap:-The Chai -Chai game is onnnnnnn ??

Anika’s POV
And Shivay shouted my name… Although it’s not my name.. Bt still… He shouted sooo loudly as if he saw some ghost… I’m wondering what’s wrong with this guy… Who shouts like this… And what I saw next shook me completely… (Bandi K totte udd gaye????)Ooommmmmggggg…. There he was staring at us… We are sooo gone.. He won’t leave us… Mummmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaa… Save me…. Oops.. Save us… Ooo God… Don’t move… Don’t move…. Don’t move…. ???? Don’t come near me… I’m innocent… I don’t wanna die so early and uneducated…. Plzzzzzzzzzz…..

My trance broke when I heard Shivay saying to do something… Now what can I do…. That’s a blo*dy snake… ?.He’ll eat me up…. N then.. Then I’ll become ghost and wonder in this tea garden… I don’t want to be a tea ghosttt…. Ahaaaaaaaaaaaaa…. Koi Toh bachao…. ??????
Idea!!!!!!!And that’s when my brain alarmed me… (Finally dimag ki Batti jalli…) I asked Shivay to move back.. But Shivay being Shivay… How can he leave his tower tall ego aside… How can move back…. And as usual he switched on his tadi n moved forward… N oopss…. Fail Gaya Raita…. Now all I can hear are his shouts and cries…. Acha Khasa I was helping him but no… He has to show his tadi… Now face it….

Shivay :-Anikaaaaaa help me… Iss gadhe snake ne Mujhe Kaat liya…..(I have been bitten by this foolish snake) Aaahhhhaaaa…..
Anika:-That’s the only reason why I was saying to read the sign board….

Shivay :-Whatttt sign board????
Anika:-That sign board

And the sign board read…. Snake area ?….(?????)
Shivay:-Anika Plzzz Ab jhagdna band Karo…(Anika Plzzz Stop fighting now) Aahhhh… It’s hurting a lot….. ???
Anika:-Shivay… Shivay tum thik ho na… (Shivay…. Shivay… Are u alright) Plzzz tum mujhse baat karo…( Plzz keep talking to me…) Shivay Tum sun rahe ho..?? (Shivay are you listening?)

Shivay started to feel dizzy… Not because of the snake’s venom but because of his fear for life…
He thought that all the snakes are venomous… (Jabki uss jhandu ko bataya gaya tha that these snakes aren’t venomous… But… Lol…. Usse Apni tadi m Kuch yaad thodi rehta hain… ??????????)
Anika:-Shivay Dekho…. Tum sona Matt… Plzzz… Tum sona matt…(Shivay see… You don’t sleep… Plzzz… Don’t sleep…) I’ll call someone… Waiiitttttt….
Shivay:-(In a faint voice) Anika Jldi aana… (Anika come fast)…

Third Person’s POV
By now Anika started crying badly… She thought that Shivay was bitten by any venomous snake… After a long run of about 15 minutes she reached one of the incharge and told him about the situation… The whole authority got scared that how come a poisonous snake is there… They haven’t reached deep into the garden where the possibilities were much higher to find a poisonous snake…

POV end….

Anika:-Aap log ye Sab baad mein bhi discuss kar skte h… Abhi mere sath chaliye… Pta nh Shivay kaisa hoga… ???(You all can discuss this later on too… Plzz come with me now… Don’t know if Shivay is alright???)
Incharge :-She is right sir.. I’ll go with her and bring Shivay to the nearest medical camp…
Dean:-Yeah… Go fast…

Third Person’s POV
Later Shivay was brought to a medical camp and was being checked by the doctors… And Anika was freaking out… Later she was accompanied by Naria who assured her that he would be fine as doctors.. Soon they were called inside by the doctor and informed… (Ab aage aage Dekho hota h kya??????)
Finished with this update… Let’s see you guys in the next update.. I’ll start writing it as soon as I finish updating this one…..

And thanks a lot to all those who commented or even read the update after such a huge gap…
It really means a lot to me… And I really mean it… Keep showering your love and belief on me… Love you all… ???????

Precap:-Aakhir doctor ne kya bataya… Or Kyu bulaya?????

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20 Comments
  1. AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC INTERSTING MIND BLOWING SUPERB??????

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwwiee???????
      Thank you sooooo much dear…..
      That’s really sweet of you ??

  2. Dheemahee

    Hehehe mast vala episod Tha janu…
    Shivay will be shivay only ???..
    AK dum khidkitod part Tha ye to janu..?
    Love u janu..

    1. JanviSingh

      Awww……
      Thank you soooooooooooo much didu?????????????
      Love you too ??????????

  3. TUFriendsForever

    Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee u r updates r soo funny????? its not poisonous n both Shivaay n anika forgot n freaked out????? Shivaay faint lol n anika freaking.
    NairA came suddenly n the uncharged discussion ?????? anika would have said that its snake area.There was no need to pluck leaves in that place.N Shivaay afraid of snake??????????????????? n snake ??? shows its power.Naagin bits Shivu ??????.

    N thanks for this cute one dr.Literally I didn’t expect the word masterchef.U remeber it.I didn’t expect that at all Thats really sweet of u sissy.Love u
    too infinity ??????.keep writing.

    1. JanviSingh

      Hahaha…..
      I’m soooooooo happy that you liked it…..
      And you deserve the word master chef…
      Aakhir Hum logo m Tum hi toh ho Jo Maggi K alawa Kuch Bana skte ho… ?????
      Luv u soooooooo much bestie…. ???????

  4. Soumya85

    Superb epi bff
    And sooo funny
    Shivvay ko sap ne kata jisme poison nai h fir bhi vo aisa kar raha h????
    Loved it yar
    Post soon
    Love you ??

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwww?????????
      Thank u sooooooooo much bff….
      Love u too??????????????

  5. Alekhika20

    Amazing update

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lottt sis ????

  6. Nikita_jai29

    It is nice one dear

    1. JanviSingh

      Thank u sooooooooo much dear…
      Glad to see you again ??????????

  7. Fenil

    Mein aapka pyar phir se hasil kar ke rahunga….aapne toh paraya kar diya hain mujhe.

    Stomach aching by laughing reading this chappy Shivaay toh hain hi budhhu and darpok aapke ff mein but Anika u made cut my beautiful nose how can u forgot that snakes are not poisonous.:P:P:P:P:D:D:D:D:)):)):)):)):))8)8)8)8)8)8):?:?:?:?:?:?:?:?:?:?
    Behosh ho raha tha but bolke soya jaldi aana anika:P:P:[email protected]):[email protected]):[email protected]):[email protected]):[email protected]):-.
    Doctor kahega shivaay pagal ho gaya…lol.

    1. JanviSingh

      Hahaha….. ????????
      Sorry bhai…. N Maine apko paraya nh kiya… I still love my bhai…. ????
      Shivay ki bewakoofi hi toh main dikhana chahti thi???????
      Thanks a lot for reading bhai…
      Love you ???????????

  8. Hahaha….. toooo Funny dr…. Luv it…

    1. JanviSingh

      Hihihihi?????
      Thanks a lot dear ???

  9. Ankita27

    Amazing… Superb.. Fantastic.. update.. n bich bich me wo special () wali tarife to lajawab thi… ??? loved it… waiting for the next update..

    1. JanviSingh

      Awww….???????
      Thank you sooooo much yr…..
      N I have uploaded the next part… Let’s see when it gets updated…. ?

  10. Kanfi

    Awwwwsmeee????
    Shivaay ki tadi ki omm hogyi…??
    Waiting for next

    1. JanviSingh

      Hihihi…. Sach mein ?????

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