Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (SS Part 16) (A) Kahi Shivay Pagal Na Ho Jaye

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Thanks a lot for commenting guys…. Luv u soooo much…
Its really heart warming to read your comments…
Well really sorry for late update guys .. actually i wrote the whole update n it got deleted n I have
To write it all over again..

So without wasting much time.. let’s get started…
Recap:-Taming the dragon?
Scene1(on the station)
Dean:-Those who have collected their tickets from their respective
In charges n volunteers kindly board the train n locate your seats…
(Almost all the students were in the train except Shivika because Shivay
was busy fighting for a window seat..)
Shivay:-Guys what’s wrong wid u… Dekho na koi toh hoga…
Volunteer:-Arre it’s not there yr Shivay… Plzz manage kr lo na ..
Kya problem h…

Anika:-Bht ho gya… Pichle 15mins se tumhari bakwas sun-sun kar mere
kan pakk gaye h.. tumhe chalna h toh chalo wrna bhad m jao…
Shivay:-(making a whiny kid like face)Ok… I’m coming…
Anika:-Thats better… Ab chalo…
Scene 2(Inside the train)
Shivay:-Ohhhh God..!!!! Koi middle seat p kaise baithta h… It’s soo
suffocating??
Anika:-Tum kitne jhikk-jhikk krte ho choti -choti
baat p… Shanti se nh baith skte..

Shivay:-Maine tumse baat ki??? Nh na… Then stop replying…
Anika:-Mujhe bhi koi shaukh nh h tumse baat krne ka par tum mere bagal
m baith kr itna bologe toh reply krna padega n?
Shivay:-(gave her a whatever look)?
(Or abb hui asli toofan ki entry.. n by toofan.. I literally mean toofan??????
Just kidding… )
(Entry of a lady with toofan… Oopssss… A kid ??)
Lady:-Excuse me… Wo seat meri h… Aap thoda side ho skte h mujhe
andar jana h…
Anika:-Ji zarror…

Shivay:- (Giving a terrified expression after seeing the kid… N even the kid wasn’t looking
really happy after seeing Shivay..)yeah… Plzz have a seat…
(Akhir itne zada tadi m rehne wale insan ko dekh kr koi khush
kaise ho skta h .. Fact h yr…)
Lady:-(to Shivay)Aap ek min Kunnu(kid) ko pakadange..???
Shivay:-(with a terrified expression)Konnnnnn maiiiii???????
Lady:-Ha aap… Sirf ek min k liye pakadiye na.. plz…

Shivay:-Par kyu????????
Lady:-Mujhe is bag se baby food nikalna hai…
Plzzz meri help kar dijiye…Sirf 1 min lagega..
Anika:-(with an evil smirk??) ha shivay…. 1 min ki hi toh baat…
Le lo Kunnu ko goad mein…
Shivay:-Nh nh.. mai kaise…??Anika tum le lo usse goad mein…
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz??..
Anika:-Sorry Shivay… M tumhari help zaroor krti..
Par mujhe Naira se baat krni h…
So continue with your babysitting…??
Shivay:-Anikaaaaaaaaaaaaa… Waittt… Listennnn…
Arre meri help krdo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz yr..
Anikkaaaa….

Anika:-Bye bye Shivay!!!!!
(Turning towards the lady with a goofy smile?)
Shivay:-Would u mind… If I search for the baby food in your bag???
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz(with Shivay’s signature puppy face?….. Ye to meri den hai??)
Lady:-Sorry… But bag mere personal cheze hai…I hope u understand…
Shivay:-Of course… I can understand …(with a super made up smile?)
Lady:-Jao kunnu… Go to bhaiya…
Shivay:-(in mind) Kunnu baby plzzz.. apne mumma k paas hi raho…
Bhaiya k paas matt aao… Plzzz..

Yeah… Come to me champ…
Baby:-Uwaaaaiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!????????
Shivay:-Arre bache stop crying…. Plzzz… Chup ho jao…..
Baby:-?? Uwaaaaiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!…
Shivay:-acha tum gana sunoge..?? I can sing for u??
Baby:-aaaaaaiiiiiiiiiii…..!!!!!!!!???
Lady:-Arre aap gaa k try kijiye na.. Kunnu ko ladki beautiful wala song bht pasand h…
Shivay:-(with a sheepish smile??)ohh!!! Wo to mujhe bhi bht pasand…
(Main lutt gaya.. barbaad ho gaya… Hayeee… Ab gaana bhi gaana padega… Ye
bacha meri jaan leke manega… Whattt the wuck… What am I saying??)
Shivay:-hmm…. Ahhhh….!!!!!aaaa!!!!!
Lady:-ha gaiye… Gaiye….!!
Shivay:-Ladki… Beautifullllll….. Karrrrrrrr….
Gayiiiiiiiiiiiiii…. Chulllll………..(Lol … Imagine Shivay singing it??????)

A/N:- remaining in part b

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18 Comments
  1. karlipsilita

    Tum hi kya mere plz iss ka next part post karo

    1. JanviSingh

      Hey sweetie it’s already posted actually isss part ka ek chotu sub part wasn’t able to get posted in the same article so I posted it separately…
      Do read it..m

  2. Ohh anika leaving n kunnu baachi all was too good n shivaay sings very bad???????? buy awesome update.janu good work keep writing

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwww… Thank u sooo much rufi…
      I’m soo happy that u liked it…..
      Luv u yr????

  3. Neha_Pheonix

    Ohh…mast update..ekadam great…totally loved it..reading next part…..now……wow…love ya…????

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot di….
      N sorry for not sending the links… Actually phone bht hang kr raha h …

  4. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dear..

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot nikki….?☺

  5. Alekhika20

    Superb updt

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot for reading dear….
      Luv u ????

  6. HarSHaN

    Nycc Epi Janvi!!!Make the next Epi Soon!!!

    1. JanviSingh

      Sure dear…… I’m working on the next partt……
      N thanks a lot for reading dear…?☺

  7. OMG!!!!! It was Awsome & funny one dear…..

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot dear….?

  8. Superb update…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot dear…. ????

  9. Mrunal

    finally i got this comment box..
    in Past two updates i was unable to comment…
    anyway this was amazing epi janu…
    and last two epi were Also mind blowing…
    just loved it…
    specially toofan ki entry…???

    1. JanviSingh

      Ohhhh….. Thanks a lot di….
      Wlcm to the comment section??

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