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Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (SS Part 15) the trek that brought them closer

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Heyyyyy guysssss….. I’m sooooooooooooooo sooooooooooooooo sooooooooooooooo sooooooooooooooo sooooooooooooooo much happy that u all came forward n commented… Thanks for never loosing hope on me… Thanks a lot guys…
Love u all soo much… 😘😘😘😘😘
N plzz do read the author’s note in the end..

Recap:- Shivikaira milapπŸ™
Scene 1(same compartment in the morning)
Naira:-Uthoooooo yr… Kya kar rahe ho tum dono…. Uthoooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(wakeup guys… What the hell are u doing???? ….. Wakee uppppppppp!!!!!!!!😣😑)
Shivika:- bas kr loudspeaker….(enough loudspeaker)
Naira:-yr last warning…. Uthoooooo!!!!!!!(Wake up)
Ani:-ha meri ma… Uthti hu… Ruk….(okkk my mom… I’m awake… Waittt….)
Naira:-Thats better… Ab jab tum uth gayi ho to iss kumbh karan ko jagao…. I’m getting late…
Ani:-Tu kis khushi m late ho rahi h??
Naira:- kaisi dost h yr ??? M incharge hu… Bhool gayi… To mujhe bht kaam n tum dono… Maha velle log chupchap tayaar ho jao… We’ll reach Siliguri in 25mins….(what kind of frnds u are ?? I’m the incharge of this trek if u are forgetting.. so I have lots of work unlike u both… So u guys get fresh n up silently…)
Ani:-yrrr m iss bagad bille ko nh handle kr skti akele…
Naira:- not my problem ani… M ab kuch nh kr skti…(I can’t do anything now) I need to go… Now u have to tame your dragon…
Ani:-whatttt????? I can’t tame him yr… Plzzz….
Naira:-really!!!! U are saying this…
Ani:-(with an evil smirk) of course I can😈
Naira:- that’s like my ani… Enjoy your taming session…πŸ˜‰

Scene 2( same place… Taming Ani’s dragon)
Anika:-Shivay wake up!!!!!!!!!!!
Shivay:-ha uthta hu na…
Anika:-Shivayyyyy…. Uthoooooooooo!!!!!!!!!πŸ“’πŸ“’πŸ“’πŸ“’πŸ“’πŸ“’πŸ“’πŸ“’πŸ“’πŸ“’πŸ“’πŸ“’πŸ“’πŸ“’
Shivay:-hmm…. Chillao matt….
Ani:-rum uth rahe ho ya nh…. (U are waking up or not)
Shivay:-no panikaaaaa…..
Ani:-(thinking) Ohhh!!!!!! Panikaaaaa ha…. Ruko Mr. Kanji Ankhon Wale in Bagad Bille…. M tumhe Panika ban k dikhati hu…( Ohhhhh… Panika ha .. wait mr. Blue eyed cat…. I’ll show u real Panika )
To tum nh uthane wale right??(so u aren’t going to wake up??)
Shivay:-hmm….
Ani:-thik h phirr…

A sound is heard….(Chhhhhaaaaapaaaaakkkkkkkkkkkk)(Ssssspppplllllllaaaasssssshhhhhh)
Shivay:- What the hell Anika….?? Is this the way to wake someone up….
Ani:- chup ho jaye appp….!!!!
Shivay:-but…..(cutts of in the middle)
Anika:-ekdum chup… !!!! Kya mtlb h apka tarike se… Ha?? Ek to aap bar-bar jagane par aap jagte nh h upar se puch rahe h ye kya tarika h…
Apko pta h hum 15 min m Siliguri pahuchne wale h…
Shivay:-ha toh!!!
Anika:- ha tohhhh!!!! Apka dimag thikane p h.. ye train h… Apka private jet nh… Jo apke hisaab se chalega….( So whattttttt!!! Have lost it…. This is a train not your private jet that I’ll follow your orders..)
Kuch samay pehle(lol…. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜)
Anika grabs the nearby water bottle n empties the whole bottle on Shivay…
(Background score is the epic pani baazi score played in ib)
End of flashback….
Shivay:-whattt????15 mins… Tumne pehle kyu nh bataya….???
Ani:-tumne pehle pucha… Pucha choda tum uthe bhi the…. Huh….
Bade aye….
Shivay:- -Ohkkk…. Fine…

Scene 3(Siliguri station)
Dean:-Volunteers n In charges please make sure that everyone is present on the platform…
In charges:-ok sir…. You don’t worry abt it… we’ll handle it..
Dean:- good…
Naira:- so volunteers,divide yourself in pair of 2-2 each… N go on entrance of each compartment… N as soon as u locate our college student strike his name off from the list…. I hope it’s clear…
N the 2nd in charge will be present here to help u… N I’ll go to the lat compartment…
Volunteers:- doneπŸ‘
(Note:- I won’t exaggerate these scenes as I have already convert this ss into ff I guess…πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚)
Scene 4( College ki puri pantar nikli dosre station ki oar…πŸ˜‚πŸ™πŸ˜‚)
Dean:-Students kindly stand in a row n collect your tickets from your respective volunteer or in charges…
Students:-Ok sir…
(After the whole pantar party has boarded the train…. Waiiiitttt a minute… Train or Shivay dono sath-sath… Bht nainsaafi h BrewerπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚)

A/N:- so guys from this part the story will slowly start concentrating on Shivika… So if u think that u can see a little more inclination towards them n plzz do tell me.. cuz I’m not able to know if I’m able to do it or not… I know even this update is short but actually I’m stuck in between some work… N that’s the sole reason for short updates… But I promise I’ll update regularly…
N as u all might have noticed I have added a theme to the tittle of our ss.. that’s because this part is marking a beginning to our shivika journey waise it’s already started but this will lead to confessions… So if u liked the theme.. plzz do let me know .. even if u didn’t…)

Precio:-1-Kahi Shivay pagal ma ho jaye… πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚2-Rab Ne Bana Di JodiπŸ™πŸ™

23 Comments
  1. JanviSingh

    Heyyyyy bhagwan … Mera ss ho gaya h typos ki khan😒😒 koi nh.. waise wo precio h or 1- Shivay pagal na ho jayeπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

  2. Wow!!Amazing epi…loved it!!
    Eagerly waiting for the nxt…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot dear….
      I’m glad that u loved it….
      N I’ll try to update the next part asap….☺😊

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot for reading dear😘😊

  3. Vanika

    nice epi start shivika journey waiting 4 next one

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot Vanika….
      I’m working on the next part only….
      Thanks for reading dear😘

  4. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dear…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot nikki😘

  5. Neha-17

    Great..nice dear..Next time give me links,…I discovered it accidently..Janu u came with a bang…Yeah focus on Shivika ..love ya !

    1. JanviSingh

      Ohhh …. Sorry di…
      I’ll send the links next time… Pakka….
      N luv u too😘😘😘

  6. Great one dear….. Starting of shivika journy….. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt……

    1. JanviSingh

      Thank u sooooooooooooooooooo much for reading dear…
      I won’t disappoint u for sure…😘

    1. JanviSingh

      Thank u so much for reading bhaiya…😘

  7. Samm

    hahaha! loved both. about the typos, please try to proofread once while or before posting, if you have time πŸ™‚ just a suggestion. waiting for next, interesting precap πŸ™‚

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot for your feedback di…
      N I’ll definitely try to proofread it before updating….
      Luv u di😘

  8. Orchid

    Awesome,kidkitodh ep. But wah wah wah! I am astonished di. Aap mere sath aisa kaise kar sakte hain? Do. Do part post kar diya mujhe bataya tak nehi. Aap ko pata tha na main aap ki ff ka kitna bada fan hu phir bhi aap ne nehi bataya. Todh diya aap ne mujhe.πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜” Exams ne toh mera sab chin liya tha ek aap bache the aj dila vo gayi.😭😭😭😭Aap dhaniya padaya ho gaye ho.😒😒😒😒😒 Btw ep was superb. Shivika fight was super cute love it. Post asap and do tell me.

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwwwww…. My little dramebaaz sissy …
      U know what I posted the links the activity area….
      Bt you all didn’t noticed….
      Pr koi nh…. From next time I’ll pm u the links… Pakka….
      N thanks for reading my cutie…
      Luv u Oreo..😘😘😘😘

      1. Orchid

        That’s like my di. Loveeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuuu soooooooo muchhhhhhhhh.😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍

  9. Superb…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thank u sooo much for your constant support ankita….
      Luv u dear😘

  10. JanviSingh

    @Orchid aka my Oreo
    Love u too my Oreo…😘😘😘😍😘😘😘😘😍😘😍😍😍😘

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