Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (SS Part 13 & An apology note)

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Hey guys…. I’m really very very sorry for the super duper extra late update….
I don’t want to waste more time.. so let’s start with the update… N do read the note at the end..
It’s a request guys…

Scene 1(O.M. )
Shivay:-Naira hurry up… Jldi jao or bade papa se note sign karwa lo… In the mean time main Sahil ko OmRu se milwa details hu…
Naira:-ok…
(A/N:- l won’t exaggerate this scene as it’s already late… so let’s move to the next part.. )
Shivay:-(to Naira) u got it signed??
Naira:-yup… N what abt Sahil..??is he comfortable here??
Shivay:-yup.. OmRu are with him… Even Prinku would join them after some…
Naira:-thats great…??
Shivay:-hmm….??…so let’s leave …
Naira:-ha… Let’s go…

Scene 2(in the car)
Naira:-Shivay Agar hum aise hi ruk-ruk ke chalte rahe to mil gayi humein train…??
Shivay:-tum mujhe ye sab kyu bol rahi ho…??
(Making a cry baby face???)
Meri kya galti h Ur… Maine thodi na ye traffic jam karwaya h…
Naira:-mr. Angry Bird … Tum itna Badal kyu rahe ho… ?? I was just saying that it’s already 12:10… Ab humara kya hoga???????
Shivay:-dont know yr….???
Naira:-(excitedly)wait a second…. I have an idea…
Shivay:-ha.. toh.. what are you waiting for…
Jldi bol…
Naira:-do one thing.. car side m park kr do…
N ask Ur driver to come n take the car back..
Shivay:-ha toh hum kya udd k jayenge…??
Naira:-tum Puri baat sunoge…?
Shivay:-ha.. continue…
Naira:-toh hum apna luggage car se lenge or paidal (by walking) station jayenge.. yaha se zyada dur nh… It will take hardly 10-15 mins..
Simple ..
Shivay:-tum iss idea ko simple kehti ho…
Have u lost it…. M itna Nahi chal skta…
Naira:-plzz Shivay… We are already very late…plzz man jao.. plzz plzz plzz plzz plzz…????
Shivay:-okk fine….
Naira:-Awwwwww… Luv u…???
(N she literally meant it…)

Scene 3(Railway station)
Anika is seen walking here n there with a tensed face…
Anika:-(talking to herself) kuch nh ho skta in dono ka… Pata nh kaha ye dono….
Sahil ko ghar chodane gaye h ya Uske sath film dekhne gaye…
Train k departure ka bhi time ho gaya h…
Ooo god…. Kaha rah gaye ye dono….
(While calling them)
Or ye phone…. Ye dono phone kyu nh uthta rahe h… Ab main kya karungi….
On the other side… Shivaira are seen rushing towards the station in a hurry ….

(Back to Station)
Or hamesha ki tarah train ki seeti baj gayi..??
Anika:-ab toh kuch nh ho skta….

N here Shivaira are seen running on the same platform as soon as the heard the whistle of the train…..

Anika:-ek bar dekh leti hu… Kya pata wo dono pahuch gaye ho…
N she goes towards the gate of the train compartment…N starts looking for them… N soon she spots Shivay running n struggling through the crowd…
She waves to him n shouts loudly…
Anika:-???? Shivay… Idhar dekhiye… Yaha par…. Ha.. ha… Idhar…
Shivay:-(arre ye Anika ki awaz kaha se aa rahi h…
N then he spots Anika n waves to her…???)
Ooo… Anika…. Wait I’m coming…
(As if Anika is the train driver?????)
By d time train starts to speed up… N even Shivay starts running in full speed…( Lyk skating rabbit… I hope u all remember??)
Anika leans outside the train n gives her hand to Shivay for holding it….
Oooo Jana plays in the background…
Shivay looks at her hand n then looks at her…
She gives him a reassuring look… N Shivay grabs her hand n with a lot of struggle Anika pulls him inside….
They share a short n cute romantic eye lock….
(So the first twist was Raj k jagah Simran ne Raj ki help ki… I mean Shivay k jagah Anika ne Raj wala role kiya…??)

(I know u all are wondering ki Naira kaha reh gayi… Then wait for it…??)
Simultaneously Naira is seen running but she dashes into someone n that’s the reason she is left behind…

After balancing herself she again starts running towards the train… N she spots a boy leaning outside the train’s door…
She forwards her hand to him… Bt the boy gives her a confused look as if she is an alien…
Naira:-arre o jhingoor… Abe apna hath de… Wrna meri train chut jayegi…
Boy:-ji madam…
N he gives his hand to Naira n she quickly holds his hand n gets into the train…
Boy:-aap thik Naira ji…
Naira:-hmm…(she qickly scans the boy from head to toe… He was a lean boy with spectacles not to forget a huge one… With super oily hair n braises… In short a typical champu scholar boy…??)
I’m fine.. by d way how do u know me…??
Boy:-i think apko yad nh h.. hum dono same class m h… M Karan…
Naira:-ooo ha… Sorry wo I don’t notice…
Karan :-no worries…
Naira:- by d way… Thank u.. for helping me..
Karan:-your welcome ji…
Naira:-Bye…
Karan:-Bye ji….???
(Lol… I know u want to kill me after reading such nonsense recreation scene…. Really sorry for that ….)

A/N:- So guys I’m done with today’s ultra late update… N I’m really sorry for that…
N the important thing is that I won’t be able to update the next part before 20th April as my board exams are nearing n I can’t give equal attention to both my studies n my story… N I can’t end it Midway as it’s my first ever ff n it’s very special to me…
I hope you all will understand….. To all the ff writers…. Guys you all are rocking like always…
Just follow your instinct n your writing will come out brilliantly … N a special request guys…
Plzz pm your links to me as I’ll visit the page often n read Ur ff’s… I might get late but I’ll surely read… U all are very important to me so I just want to say that plzz mera wait Krna… I won’t disappoint u all…
Luv u Guys…
Plzz pray for me….
See u soon…
Bye… Bye…..???????????☺☺???????

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28 Comments
  1. It is awesome dear….. Best of luck for your exam…. With lots of love…. Come soon.

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwwwwww…. Thank u so much sissy….
      N I’ll come soon…
      Luv u dear….???

  2. Nice epi…all the best for ur exams…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thank u so much dear….
      Thanks a lot… Will miss u so much….????

  3. All the best for your exams….And when you resume story try to make it long if possible:):):)

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot Mona…
      N I’ll definitely make the updates longer after I return…
      See u soon dear…???

  4. Awesome…loved the train sequence….

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot dear…
      I’m so glad that u liked it…
      See u soon…??

  5. Ahaana

    nice one. sweety …………..

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks sweety….???

  6. Orchid

    Hi janvi how are you yaar. I think you remember me. You’re rocking with your update yaar. I really love you’re ff. I am unable to read your previous eps(11a nd12). Really sorry for that. Actually my phone was troubling me that I couldn’t even check the ff section. Anyway awesome part waiting for the next. Good luck for your exam. Concentrate on it now and write the ff in your free time don’t take any pressure. Btw i am now moving to your previous eps and i am also writing a ff here is the link??
    http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/8817/?profiletab=posts.
    Do visit in your free time. Bye for now but not forever. Will meet soon.

    1. JanviSingh

      Hi dear….
      Of course I remember you sweety…
      N thanks a lot for the compliment dear…
      It really means a lot to me …
      N yup … I’LL write whenever I’m free…
      N I’ll definitely check Ur ff…
      See u soon sissy…
      I’LL miss you…??
      Luv u…???

      1. Orchid

        Love you too sissy.??

  7. Aana

    Amazing epi… Nd our fav hero scene of awsm film…in shivika style not bad Darling ….super duper kamal…nd naira too very funny lol….
    U r not writing now wise decision…. Coz I too decided the same.. We both will come back with blast then we r going to Rock sweetheart… But honestly I will miss u.. Nd I this ff + naira too….
    But now we shud focus on exam …wish u all the best darling….love u …bye bye

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwwwwww thanks a lot sissy…
      I’m glad that I didn’t spoilt the famous scene….
      N yup well return with a blast…..
      N I’ll miss Ur updates sweety…..
      All the best for Ur exams…
      N guess what even my ff would miss you…???
      Take care sis…
      Luv u??

  8. Shrutika

    Nice one.

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks dear…?

  9. Samm

    nice one janvi 🙂 and all the best for your exams, don’t worry, no one is running away anywhere 😀 you can finish your studies and then get back to this 🙂

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot sis…
      N I’ll really miss u…..
      Take care…
      Luv u…???
      See u soon….??

  10. Mrunal

    hey dear….
    just mind blowing epi…
    recreation was fab….

    all the best for ur board exams…
    i know u r gonna rock them….

    1. JanviSingh

      Thank u so much for the wishes dear…
      N I’m so happy that u liked it…
      I’m going to miss u sooo much…???
      See u soon sis…
      Luv u????

      1. Mrunal

        Same here dear….
        Gonna miss u a lot…
        Just perform well in ur boards and come back soon…
        I’m waiting for u….

  11. Lalitha

    Wow dear this was amazing… Loved it…
    & all the best for you exams dear prepare well & write well.

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot sissy….
      N thanks for the wishes too dear..
      Will miss u…??

  12. Kehkasha

    Hello janvi….
    Firstly sorry for late comment…..as whenever I opened TU……I just checked that who had posted the article…….and I saw ur approx 5-6 times……and thought that I’ll read at night……but I forgot……and now when I am free without delay I checked it…..

    Let me tell u…..this was an amazing update and literally then Naira and that champu boy scene was so funny……..

    And ALL THE BEST……for ur exams…..do ur best……..
    I have posted next part……and will send u the links during weekends so that u didn’t get disturbed……..

    Till then study…..and concentrate there…….. I am waiting for u……we all r waiting for u to return with a bang…..

    As hamari trip bhi baaki hai ……
    So….see u….
    Bye tc…..

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwwwwww… No need of saying sorry sis….??????
      N I’m so happy that u enjoyed the champu boy scene….☺☺☺
      N I was going to read Ur ff only…
      Can’t wait u see…????
      N of course we will go on the much awaited trip as soon as I return…
      N not to forget I’ll miss u a lot sissy…????
      Luv u??

  13. Awesome update.. All the best for ur exam…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thank u so much dear….
      N thanks for the wishes….
      Will miss u soo much????

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