Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (Part 1)

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Let’s get started with the 1st part guys… Cuz I am a bit late….

Naira’s POV
As me n Shivay walked in through the college gate,hand in hand, I heard others gossiping about something… (Obviously it was about us..) After our grand engagement party we both were the hot gossiping topic of our University… I wonder why can’t they mind there own business…😑😑😑
Being his fiancé had its own pros n cons.. mostly everything was OK OK type… Bt at times it turned out to be extremely and annoying… People lingering around just for there own benefit… Bt at our backs everything was completely different… Like completely…

I have always heard them saying that I was with Shivay just for getting that oberoi tag n power..or it was just one of clause in all the clauses of the famous Malhotra’s n Oberois merger…. To hell with that merger…well they were not completely wrong in this case.. Bt that’s a completely different story…

They use to think that I’M no less than a princess who got her perfect prince charming… Bt they didn’t know that WHAT GLITTERS IS NOT GOLD…. always…. I wasn’t that I was not happy being with him bt on the contrary wo mere sath Hoke Bhi mere sath bhi tha…. It felt like he was trapped in this relationship… I could easily make that out from his face…

U see if Ur partner can’t express himself then u should the charge of understanding him… It’s not always about u being happy n satisfied… I can so damn connect with that famous dialogue… Pyar me hum khud se zyada Uss special person k Khushi ke bare me sochte hai… I know I know I was being ridiculously cheesy bt u should try cheese sometimes.. it’s quite fun… N the most important thing… Being a one sided lover sucked.. mind it guys I’m not joking… It literally sucked…..

A/N- I hope it wasn’t irritating guys… I have a tuff time writing the opening scenes… So please manage kr Lena…

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30 Comments
  1. Parsha

    Really Awesome

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks dear…. Keep reading😊😊👍

  2. Anika plzz

    1. JanviSingh

      Don’t worry dear….. I’LL introduce her in the next part… N thanks for reading sis..😊☺

  3. Yaashi

    Its awesome but too short…. Waiting for the next part…

    1. JanviSingh

      I’LL try to make the next one longer…. N thank u so much reading dear…😊😊

  4. Cool opening yaar keep it up.

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks Nafisa…. That’s such a sweet complement… Never thought that I’ll get such a warm response…. ☺☺☺☺☺

  5. Hopeless story

    1. JanviSingh

      So sorry dear…. I’LL try to make it interesting… N thanks for reading..☺

  6. Nice…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks Lily….. Keep reading dear…☺☺😊

  7. Make it longer. And yes I loved it

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks princess.. I’ll definitely make the next one longer… Even I realized tht it was too short after it got updated…Sooooo sorry for that…☺

  8. Priyadas

    i loved it but its too short dear… post the next part soon.

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks di…. I’LL try make the next one longer..☺☺👍👍

  9. very boring.
    try to make it interesting

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks for commenting safaq..
      I’LL try to make it interesting☺☺

  10. Vincy

    Nice… Waiting for my Anika entry

    1. JanviSingh

      She’ll be there in the next part dear… N thanks for reading☺😊😊😊

  11. Dreams97

    It is good.

    1. JanviSingh

      Thank u so much dear☺☺☺

  12. Its superbbb……make it a bit more lenghthy….. 🙂

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks dear… I’LL surely make the next one lengthier…😊😊😊

  13. Pooja26

    amazing……

    1. JanviSingh

      Thank u so much dear😘😘😘

  14. Kehkasha

    It was amazing….and u know what since I read theme first so I exactly got ur…..pov….which is fantastic…..so keep going dear…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thank u so much dear…. Ur compliment really means a lot to me….☺☺

  15. Mrunal

    awesome start…
    loved it…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thank u so much dear😊😊

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