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TUM JO MILE ~ BABY ~ A TWINJ OS…..♥

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TUM JO MILE ~ BABY ~ A TWINJ OS…..

Twinkle’s pov
I was crying……….why because my friend was hurt just because of saving me……..
Ughhhhhhh why god why?
What was the need for him to save me you could have hurt me what was the need to hurt him…….
I didn’t wanted him to get hurt. Never. I know he is my friend and even I have realised I love him but still god ….
He is there lying on the hospital bed…..i wasn’t doing anything just was walking crying in the rain and suddenly…….
Flashback…..
I was walking down the road it was raining I was crying I was hurt……I didn’t saw the car coming and it would have hit me but kunj came and pushed me tried to move but wasn’t able to………
Back to present……
Am standing here…waiting for kunj to come back to conciousness………I am not able to stop these tears……my sadu sarna……
I went inside the room and sat beside kunj teras not stopping and making their way down my cheeks which kunj always kisses cause he loves to do so since childhood……..
I was lost in my thoughts when I saw kunj moving his fingers and wiping my tears I felt his hand and called for a doctor as soon as I realised he was back to conciousness………..
I smiled between tears and thanked babaji……..
Then I made my way after doctor came out to his room and sat beside me he smiled at me but I looked away being angry with him..but idhar toh merko kuch bolne naa dene ke vajahaye kunj started to scold me……..i looked at him with my mouth wide open……..
How could he………
But I just smiled at him and he still scolded me…..
I told him sorry and then he started coughing suddenly and I panicked and made him drink water……he lovingly looked at me……
Jaise tum ho, aisa koi na mila

(we were looking into each other eyes )
Koi hai dhaaga jo hai humko jodta
(I made him lay down on the bed care fully and caressed his hair)
Tumhe kaise main bataun
Kin lafzon mein samjhaun
Tum ho to main hun jee raha
(I bend down and pecked his fore head and soon sleep took over him…..)
I went into flashback how we met…..

Flasback…..
Little twinkle is seen in a beautiful fairy gown in royal blue color……and there comes our kunj in cute little blue tuxedo…..it was twinkle’s birthday kunj wished her hapy birthday and kissed her cheek….. and she smiled……..they both started to talk and then became bestest of friends…….they use to have fights but whenever any boy teased twinkle kunj was always there for her…….)

Tum jo mile
To mil gayi hai har khushi….
( twinkle smiled thinking about her first meet with kunj and blushed thinking about the kisses and hugs and support they had always TOGETHER….)

Wooohohooo
Tum jo mile
To mil gayi hai zindagi…
(they grew younger and the twinkle went to the flashback of her being in the club dancing and enjoying.she thought about the night when they were toghether at twinkle’s home in twinkle’s room……
Flashback….
Twinkle was sleeping on bed when kunj came and hugged her from her back and lied down cuddling her…….twinkle felt it and turned around and saw kunj smiling at her looking at her with his big brown doe eyes……she smiled and smirked and took a pillow from behing her and staright fuurrrrr………..into kunj’s face…….kunj smiled against the pillow and smiled…..and then he took another pillow and hit twinkle…….they both started fighting with the pillows and later when kunj got tired he held twinkle and they both were looking at each other lovingly….and they were coming closer….and closer when kunj realised what he was going to do..he bend away from her lips and kissed her cheek twinkle had closed eyes and she smiled……..
Back to present…….
Twinkle was thinking and smiling……and she slept beside him….)

Pehli baar jo dekha tujhe baby
You were looking so amazing
(next day…..
They woke up and smiled…….
Twinkle is seen giving a scrub bath to kunj…..and kunj is in pain and twinkle’s tears come dopwn kunj nods no.and twinkle nlow air and scrub him again slowly slowly with full love……)

Big eyes, cute smile
Tumsa kabhi koi dekha na tha maine
Tumhi tum khayalon mein
( twinkle is seen making kunj have soup and kunj making yucckkk wala faces having the soup and twinkle laughing at his cute antics……)

The mere sab sawaalon mein
Kabhi socha na tha ek din hoge
(twinkle is now seen hugging kunj and kunj hgging her back)
Tum meri hi in bahon mein
(twinj reached kunj’s house and twinkle stayed there to take care of him……they both spend time with each other and kunj is getting better day by day…..)
Jitna dekhun tujhe
Utna hi kam lage
( twinj are seen watching a romantic emotional movie togethter and twinkle’s head is on kunj’s chest while she is crying…..and kunj is smiling at her and just looking at her……..)

Jitna tere sang jiyun
Dil mera na bhare
Tu hansde to, tham jaaye mera jahaan
(twinkle is seen walking into kunj’s room and when she entered she slipped annd lost her balance kunj was in his towel and just came out of his bath……..she looks at him and is just staring at his abbs wih he big eyes wide open and when she came back to senses she turned around as she realised kunj had come close to her…and was smirking……)
(note kunj is now fine and twinkle is back to her house…)

Tere aankhon mein aaj doob jaane de…jaane de…
Mujhe doob jaane de teri aankhon mien zara
(days were paasing and they both were falling more and more in love with each other……)
Tum jo mile…
Chal aaj puri raat mere saath
(twinj are seen in the car….kunj has tied a cloth on twinkle’s eyes…..he takes her to the beach and opens the tie not from her eyes……twinkle was wearing a white floor length maxi dress looking pretty and gorgeous……and kunj was wearing normal formal white tee’s and blue denims jeans…..looking hot and handsome…..)

Kehni mujhe tujhe dil ki baat
Beach side,moon light
Bas you and me aur koi nahi baby
(kunj untie twinkle’s eyes white saturn cloth……and twinkle is stunned to see the beautiful scenario…….
There was a table in between on which it was decorated with white saturn cloth and candles and roses……it was covered from four corners with white cloth and red and white flowers and cool wind was blowing and everything was cool…..from above the setup there was moon and beach…..seen…there were pictures of twinj hanging since childhood till now…..there was one pick of twinjs first meet when kunj kissed he cheek on her birthday then there selfies and picnic pics were there.all there pics were there…..on one corner there were gifts for twinkle……..and twinkle could not believe her eyes……everywhere it was decorated with cented candles…….srriiieee guys hope am able to describe…. )
Kas ke haath thaamle,
Teri aankhon mein kho jaane de
(kunj looked in twinkles eyes and sat down on his knees and took out a beautiful diamond ring…..
KYA KAHE KUCH KAHA NHI JATA, DARD MILTA HAI PAR SAHA NHI JATA, PYAR HO GAYA HAI IS KADAR AAPSE KI, BINA DISTURB KIYE MUJHSE RAHA NHI JATA….
TWINKLE TUM JAB MILI THI TOH JEENA AAGYA THA TUMNE JAB HAATH THAMA THA TOH HASNA AAGYA THA….TUMNE JAB HASSA TOH MERE DIL NE KHUSH HONA SIKHA…TUM JAB ROYI TOH MUJHE DUKH HUA….OR USKE BAAD FINALLY I DISCOVERED I REALISED KI MEIN SADU SARNA APNI SIYAPPA QUEEN SE BEINTEHAAN MOHBAAT KARTAAN HUN…..
Twinkle will you marry me in the hills….have honeymoon in paris and settle in our sweet home with our football team twinkle blushed listening to kunj and all the way she had tears in her eyes….
Twinkle smiled and replied with tears….
SOCHA NA THA KI PYAAR HO JAYEGA, LEKIN YEH DIL BHEEG GAYA IS PYAAR KI BAARISH MEIN, HOGAYA ISS KADAR AAPSE PYAAR KI NA DHUNDNI PADENGE SAPNE IN JANNAT KI GALIYON MEIN, KUNKI AB JANNAT TOH SIRF TUM HO KUNJ…..
I LOVE YOU TOO KUNJ I LOVE YO SINCE WHEN I CANT EVEN TELL…BUT I LOVE YOU MORE THAN ANYTHING KUNJ AAJ SE I WILL LIVE FOR YOU AND I WILL DIE FOR YOU SAANSEIN BHI TUMHARE LIYE CHALEGI KUNJ OR RUKENGI BHI TUMHARI BAAHON MEIN…..KABHII SAATH NAHI CHODUNGI HUMESHA TUMHARA SAATH DOONGI KUNJ JAISEE DETI AAYI HUN FIR CHAHE KHUSHI HO YA GAM HO…..
BAS TUM JO MILE HO TOH MIL GAYI HAI HAR KHUSHI…..I LOVE YOU KUNJ….
kunj too had tears he made twinkle wear the ring and hugged her tight telling her that he would never leave her and she is always safe with him….with full love passion and care and support…..they stayed in eachothers embrace till ten minutes….)

Iss chandani raat mein,
Tere aanchal mein so jaane de
Tera ehsaas ye
Jo mere pass ho
Aur kuch na mangu main
Bas tera sath ho
Andhero mein, tu roshani meri
( twinj departed from each other and looked at eachother now…..kunj looks down at her pink soft pulpy lips and twinkle blushes and closes her eyes and parts her lips giving kunj permission to take her….kunj leans forward and they both make love with their lips and tongue….kunj sucks twinkle’s upper lips while twinkle sucks his lower then kunj bites it and twinkle moans his name when kunj gets his tongue with twinkle and they both make love with their tongue and sucking and kissing n licking each part of their mouth…..)

Teri saanso me aaj doob jaane de….jaane de…
Mujhe doob jaane de…teri saanso me zara…
(they both have dinner and click pictures and then sit twinkle keeping her head on kunjs shoulder and kunj pecking her cheeks near the beach on the matress facing the moon and the cool breeze touching them and giving them immense pleasure of them being together and telling them how happy nature is to see them together…..and celebrating the new found love sould and bond……)(AND CLICK)

Here this story ends………
People do comment quiet disaapointing like seriously only fifteen comments…..
I know you people don’t like my writings and all are busy but ohk well am fine with it I wont complain more……what will happen by complaining you people will think am selfish and greedy hahahhaahahaaaaa…..just kidding but seriously I was sad ……
Love you all……..

43 Comments
  1. Sameera

    Wow yaar baby shoooooo Cuteee and sweet wala os yaar loveddddddd it shooo much yaar and don’t u dare say that i we don’t like your writings …
    Each n every thing was just perfectly Amazing yaar soooo cute ..
    Sorry yaar bzy Hu due to exams …
    Love u 😘😘😘😘😘

    1. Baby

      awwwww……….sam m like over whelmed and literally blushing after reading ur cmnt….
      srriee yr merko nahi likhna chaiye tha cmnts ke liye bt kya Karun pagal ho gyi thi u all make me smile a bit wid ur love……n ur exams r on still u cmntd for me………
      thanks a lot………☺
      love u sooooo mch………♥♥♥♥♥

      1. Baby

        correction not a bit a lot…**

  2. SidMin23

    Baby it was just superb cute and twinj was beyond cute the care they have for each other. Don’t u dare said we don’t like your writing. your fabulous writer expecting more like this from you. 🙊🙈🙉🤗

    1. Baby

      aww…..thanks a lot dear…….glad u liked it n it seemed cute….I didn’t even read it again jst posted coz was getting scolded by dad for sitting late on pc…..hahhahaaa

    2. Baby

      thanks sooo mch dear glad u liked it….well I forgot to do proof reading coz my daddy was scolding me…..hehee……♥ love u…..♥

  3. SidMin

    😍😍😍😍 aww Just loved the is it was so cute. … and sweet …. each scene was so cute. ….
    Love you keep writing ❤

    1. Baby

      thanku soooo mch mili……♥
      love u too……♥

  4. Hiiiiiiiiiiiii………………🤗. By the way am a silent reader but couldn’t control myself​ from commenting today . Am in love with each and every line of the OS . So beautifully written . U made my day . Thank you………………..😘😚😙. Plzzzzzz keep writing because apke writing see bohot sare logonki din ban jathi hai. Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz post an OS as soon as possible plzzzzzzzzz. Am gonna eagerly waiting for it plzzzzzz. I know your hurt due to low comments but BABY plz cheer up and post something as soon as possible. And am gonna read it again and again kunki TUM JO MILE itna amazing OS Jo padne ko Mila.😍😄😘. I know am blabbering a lot but can’t help it out . I literally simling like mad remembering lines of the OS . Mera dil churaliya hai apne OS se💕💘💃. Sorry for commenting soooooo long… Byeeeeeeeee………. Hope I can say Hi to you soon.👏💓💞

    1. Baby

      ohhhh god spy june……..
      well cute n different name……
      m even now after reading ur cmnt like watt….m shocked itni tareef ♥
      ohhh god didn’t even thought in my dreams……….♥
      m literally like mouth open n jst blushing n smiling n blushing n smiling………☺
      thanks sooooo mch dear…….I I ll surely write something new asap as I get any idea…….♥
      thanks a lot a tons………for sooooooo sweet cmnt n sch love………♥
      lods of love….dude…….♥
      n pls pls do cmnt on my nxt post as well specially gonna b dedicated to u………☺
      n u made my day by ur cmnt……♥♥♥♥♥

  5. Presha

    Hey bab6..
    Hw r u….
    Dare u say we dont like ur writing but we love it ….
    This one was so sweet….
    Just loved it…
    Love u..😘😍😘

    1. Baby

      thanks preshu…….♥
      srriieeee…….♥
      love u………………♥

  6. Am a silent reader but today I couldn’t control myself​ from commenting. It was an amazing OS🤗. Fallen in love with it🎉🎇🎆🎊💕💋. Plzz post an OS soon plz🙇 . Plz it’s a request. Am gonna eagerly wait for it . I literally had a very big smile on my face when I was reading your OS. It is so brilliantly written. Your OS has stolen my💘 . I have already read it twice. And am gonna take a screenshot and read it again and again. Each and every line was mesmerizing. I know you are dejected because of low comments 🙁but BABY cheer up 😬💃and post an OS as soon as possible kunki TUM JO MILE itna accha OS Jo padne ko Mila..💞💖😘😍👏 Sorry writing so long.😅😂😌😁😉😊😍😘

    1. Sry I have commented twice thinking it wasn’t posted😅

  7. so cute n nice os
    keep writing

    1. Baby

      thanks angel……..♥

  8. Aamna_2690

    Finally u posted something yaar😃😃
    So happy to se u back😊😊
    And dare u say that no one likes ur writing😡😡
    We all don’t like ur writing infact love them😘😘
    This OS was a cute one😊😊
    TWINJ were lovely😍😍
    Just loved them Yaar❤❤
    No words to say😂😂
    Truly it was superb👌👌👌
    Post ur MD soon n other writings too… waiting for them eagerly😊😊
    Love u dear😘😘😘Take care😊😊keep Smiling☺☺

    1. Baby

      thanku soooooo mch aamna dii…….♥
      sriiiiieeee srriiiieeeeeeee………..♥
      glad u loved it………………..♥
      d gr8 writer aamna di…wwowooohhoooo….☺
      love u diiii………♥♥♥♥♥

  9. Twinjfan.tamanna

    Awesome baby! yaar just loved it! how cute!!!😍😍😍😍😍 beautifully written! who said ur writing is not good! its beautiful! aur sabhi ka yahi haal hai! mujhe bhi parso bohot gussa aayatha aur baadme sab nikaal diya! 😂😂waise this was so cute😍 ! keep writing
    see you😘

    With Love,
    Urs Tamanna

    1. Baby

      hhahahaaaaaaa………..☺
      awwwww………..tammy……..♥ thanks a lot dear……♥
      love u………♥

  10. Awesome os

    1. Baby

      thanks nishu di……..♥
      love u……..♥
      post ur ff soon……….♥

  11. Baby jii 😍😍👌💕💕Ammzing and beautifulll os💕…….Ahhhh eennhhh😭😭😭😞😞😩….Apna Sidmin Os post kab karoogeee,?????😣Kar dooo naa……Main mar rahi hoon padhne me liye….Agar yeh padh rahi ho toh post kar dena😈😈…….😀😊Post soon 💕💕💕💕

    1. Baby

      awww…….♥
      comment princess……….♥
      thanks dear…….♥
      glad u liked it…………..♥
      ohkkk…….I will soon post it…….♥
      love u……….♥

  12. Awesome os …..
    It was soooooo amazing…. It was cute…..beautifull…..
    I read it twice…. And plzzzz post nxt asap…..luv u….and u write awesome….all the ff writer on TU r the world best writer…. And it is bliss for us to read all these FF,TS,SS,OS u guys r doing great job….so now no one will say that she is bad writer ok ….. Luv u all the writers of TU specially tei writers…..

    1. Baby

      ♥♥
      thanks anyaali……….♥ 🙂 ♥
      glad u love every writing of tu……♥
      same here………all r best specially tei writers..dey are amazing frnds amazing sis always support eo……..♥
      love u…♥
      glad u liked it………..♥

  13. Damiiiiiiiiiiiii I just loved it yr i m so happy to finally saw ur post and tumhe had hai na tumhe much or bhi post krna hai till then love ya and I don’t know that this cmnt will be published or not

    1. Baby

      awwwwww………ohk ohk bulbul meri jaan…….♥
      m working on dat os………☺
      chill….will post it asap………………♥
      lods of love………♥
      thanks for dis lovely cmnt……♥
      thanku love…….♥

  14. Fatimaa.

    Baby…..
    I just loved it yaar….kya likha hai tune…muuuaaahhhh😙😙😙😙😙😙
    Woww so sweet and cute os just like u….
    Lovedd it soo much…

    And dare u say dat we dont like ur writing…infact just love it…
    M waiting fr ur pending ff realization….
    Post karna….
    Love u….❤❤❤❤

    1. Baby

      well Fatima dii realization is nt my ff…….?
      or is it…….. ;P
      I don’t even remember wat I started hehe
      well realization is by chiku…….♥
      u need to ask her for it even m waititng……♥
      love u lods……♥
      glad u loved it……..☺
      love u……♥

      1. Fatimaa.

        Arre voh wala….The beautiful attacked realisation…..vo tumhara hi tha na…
        Me uski baat kar rai hu

    2. Baby

      ohhhh yeah I remember I ll post soon…….☺

  15. Anshikajainn

    Heyyyy you babbyyy tu sachme pagal h yrrr tu aise kaise bol Rahi h kii kisiko tere OS achha nhi lagte yrrrrr I just loved it it was sooo sweet
    Keep smiling 😃
    Love you..❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍❤❤

    1. Baby

      thanku soooooo mch anshika………♥
      lods of love dear……♥
      glad u luved it……♥
      love u dear………♥
      srrieee……….♥

  16. Mia12

    Hallo my wifey pls do attention to ur Hubby’s lecture,,😂😂😂 Tu janti hai 3 din se mai bhtttt bz thi or tired also den mera net bhi muje dhoka de rai thi,,😞😞 Ab insab mai Teri hubby ka kya kasur tu hi bol,,😳😳
    Now this os was Omgg mai kya bolu,,😱😱😱
    Just beyond of Awesomely portrayed everything,,👌👌👌👌👌
    Just loved it to the core,,❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ but meri wifey se jeyada nai,,😜😜😜😜
    And kisne bola ki meri wifey ki writing ko sab like nai karte,,😒😒 Uska mun na tordu mai,,😠😠 But jo bhi ho Infect mai to proud karke bol sakti hun ki meri wifey 1 no ki best writer hai,,😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 or uski writing to super se bhi upar wala MARVELOUS hai,,😚😚😚😚👌👌👌 Toh ab khyali pulao paka na band kar or real wala pakake wait kar apni hubby ke liye,,😋😋😋😋 mai arai hun tere pas,,😂😂😂😂
    Now listen my wifey ab jab bhi ap free honge tab ap plss apni next update post kar dena ok apki hubby iska wait karegi,,😛😛😛

    1. Mia12

      Hehe itna pyar karti hun meri wifey ko ki pyar ka izhar karna hi bhul gayi mai,,😂😂😂😂
      LOAD’S OF LOVE MERI WIFEY,,❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤💝❤..

    2. Baby

      ohhhhh my goodness hubby………..hehee………..
      ohkk…baba ohkk….sunliya tera so called lecture……kunki mere liye lecture nahi hoti mere pyaare hubby ki baatein……….♥♥♥♥♥
      ohhhhhh god ohhhh god ohhhhhhh god……. 🙂
      itna pyaara wala cmnt………
      or mere hubby mein nahi bhulungi aapko apna pyaar ka ehzhaar krna apne hubby ko………♥
      loveeeee uuuu soooooooo mch hubby……….♥♥♥♥♥♥

  17. Ramya

    Hjey babes
    I’m in love pata hai kisse tumhari iss story se dill khush kar di tune
    Kitni cute pyari unique lovely
    I just loved it n still
    Aur ek ek scene kitni cute thi hayee
    N confession tho mai fidaa ho gayi hu
    Itni zyada dil aa gayya hai iss per
    Amazing awesome amazing Superb
    Lovely cute
    Love u keep smiling

    1. Baby

      ohhhhhhh god rammiieee……♥
      m jst smiling ♥
      oohhhhh goodness lagta hai pheli stry jo thik thak si likhi mene…….☺
      hehehee……….love u sooooooo mch tried to give my best to dis stry n ll ryt odr wid all goods n love u all hv given me………♥♥
      love u soooooooo mch dear………….♥♥
      thanks glad u loved it disss muucchh…………♥♥♥♥♥

  18. Amaya_bhardwaj

    Awwwwww mera baby Tu wapis AYA gyi APNI AmazzzZZng writing k Saath…..
    I missed them sooo much…..
    Finally Tere likha hua Kuch padhne ko mil RHA h…..
    I m sooo glad…
    This epi was soooooo cuteeeeee AmazZzzing wonderful fantastic superb yrr….
    I loved it dear….
    Well tera PC finally thik ho gaya…..
    Or FF KB post kregi Tu apne…..
    LOVE U 2 INFINITY
    😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    1. Baby

      ohhhhhhh god Amaya dii………♥
      aapke cmnts humeshaa mujhee itna jyada smile karate hain mein bas kya bataun………..☺
      u r amazin dii……♥
      love u………♥
      thanks for soooooo many complements…….♥
      will post soon jst busy wid unt tests……….☺
      love u………..♥

  19. Sohi

    Beautiful os very sorry for commenting this late

    1. Baby

      tahnks love….♥ for commenting…..glad u liked it….♥

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