Tum ho….mera sukoon aur dard (intro and episode 1)

TUM HO…
mera sukoon aur dard

Hii frnds!!! Im Aksharaa frm chennai. Im new to this page. I have written few stories and now only i got some confidence to upload this. Mesa story mein mera frnd bhi hai patner she is Baavana she is my bff she also helps me with this story. I want alk of ur true and lovely comments im carefree type so u can comment anything as it is ur basic right. If my dan fiction is not good tell me and i dont mind it as u all r my frnds im sorry lovable frnds. I pray to god that let u have the best day everyday. Please to read and comment .
-Baavana and Aksharaa with lots of love

INTRODUCTION

(Pairs r varun as aarav kapoor and helly as sruthi mehra)

It was a police station.The inspector is enquiring someone there and he keeps on asking him to wait for few mins as one imp person has to come. Suddenly a young pretty girl wearing mordern dress(business women usually wears)steps inside everybody there stood up and greeted her. She didnt react walked towards Inspecyor and asked him to leave that man. Inslector refuses saying that he beated one man to his death and he have filled FIR. The girl tells him,”do u think im asking u??my GOD !! Im odering u come on release him now!” He again refuses and she replied with an awesome attitude,”Im SRUTHI MEHRA odering u to release him now otherwise u will face the consequences haan not just consequences young wire,Sruthi’s consequences remember it!” Then the constable near him murmur into his ears asking him to release that man as this madam is greatly powerful and dangerous to compete with . The Inspectors agrees and releases him . The man thanks and praises her influence she proudly replies her,”this is Mumbai mera dynasity this is my kingdom and im the queen there is no one dare to disobey the queen. And this queen dont need a king for ever”she asked him to go and she walks away styly putting her coolers on.

An open field concert

Half of the north india was present there. Everybody was screaming like anything. Its not clear but it is clear that everybody is very eagerly waiting for some one.then one person came into mike and anounced,”now let me invite the handsome hunk whom u r waiting for ur cutie is now here before u clap well to welcome the one and only cutie now!!”then he goes and the noise was deaferring it was ten times more than yhe whole noise pollution of India.

Now a stylish young man wearing jackets anc jeans with a electric guitar in his hands came before the crowd its was an wow moment everybody left silent.he smiled a little pridly seeing yhe crowd and started in a blooming voice his voice just melted everyone’s heart,she started in a steady pitch “mein rooh ka parinda padpadaye….meri dua ho …….he looked up the crowd with a light smile in his lips and sung the very line mein ki kara mein ki kara …..he started highly raah chadh si yaar bulleya …..”bulleya was the song. Everybody just screamed and now its clear the were screaming AK AK AK …he finishes the song and req them to keep silent.then he told “hi boys and girls thank u fr lotx of love and support i love u all guys and a special thanks to all girl fans as they r theback bone for my success”he finishes and rushed fr another concert everybody there is not ready to stop yelling his name.he came out and steped up in his car there his frnd ask him “u have such alot of girl fans y dont u love somebody ” and he replied “i want a girl who is humble sweet funny and light hearted and i didnt meet her till now” his frnd jokes that he would find such girl only in amazon forest and aarav again jokes him that amazon means they might be his family so he asked his frnd to introduce her they laugh and goes.

Guys is my update is too big …..if it is so then tell me yaar

Do u loved intro comment ur thoughts eagerly waiting for ur suggestions …..
Lots of love frm akshu and baavu

PRECAP

While driving for Aarav’s car bumps into Sruthi’s car and Aarav yells at Sruthi and asks her to come out of the car.Sruthi ws taken away by his looks and came out of the car looking into his eyes.

20 comments

  1. Maha016

    |Registered Member

    Akka….oops first nan ungala akkanu kopidalama….and first nan maha….and akka i m frm salem and coming to ur stry it was awesome do continue it…..and akka idhu longa ellam illa…apparam akka nenga namesa swara & sanskar ne vaikalam bcz inga yellarukum newva oru name trend panradhu kashtam so thats y…and dont take me wrong akka….and loved this intro….

    • Aksharaa

      |Author

      My dear thangai u can wholly call me akka i loved it. Im frm chennai dear.i wont take it wrong but actually swara and saanskar do not fit to this story as both r kind of family names and i want a stylish and attracting names for this story u can see swara doesnt suit for some brave bussiness women and sanskar absolutely not for rockstar so dont take me wrong han …..can i keep the real names of them is it ok fr u????anyways do support me with ur comments dear

      • Maha016

        |Registered Member

        oh dear…..ne 2000 na appo now u r 16 ritr…!!! then nan una akkanu kopidamaten…neyum 11std dhane…..me too…!!! and its ok unaku endha name apt-a irrukumnu thonudho u can keep it and i can understand that the name swara & sanskar is not apt for this….love u dear….tc

  2. Vidhi

    Wow dear loved it… N I read ur status do u really share ur birthday with varun😱😱😱😱😱….plz continue dear😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘❤❤❤❤

  3. Aksharaa

    |Author

    Tq all dears fr ur supportive and heart throbbing comments and also fr ur sugestions i always welcome all ur suggess…..tq once again beauties….lots of love

  4. Sri

    |Registered Member

    vryyyy nice if u don’t have a problem can u plzzzzzz tell me in which year u born sorryyyyy if I ask u and take care

  5. Mica

    |Registered Member

    uhhuuu.. i love that Shruti statement “the queen don’t need a king”

    Oh, I don’t know what you’ve been told
    But this gal right here’s gonna rule the world
    Yeah, that’s where I’m gonna be
    because I wanna be
    No, I don’t wanna sit still, look pretty
    (daya-sit still, look pretty)

  6. Manasvi

    |Registered Member

    Dii sorry for the late comment..
    Btw loved this episode..
    Story is really interesting..
    And i loved Shruti’s attitude..
    It is kinda wow..
    And for Aarav kapoor.. What can i say dii..
    Cutie..

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