TUM BIN JIYA JAYE KAISE – a story of love , separation & reuniting. …#a TWINJ ff …SHOT 4 ( HAPPY B’DAY RAMYA )


hola! guys. …..how r u alll…..
ummmmm….bohot jaldi aagayi na to chew ur brains

kya karu aana hi tha meri ramu ka b’day haina

waise bhi dimaags r one of fav food….???

he he he ????….just joking….

achha at my last post I got only 18 comments. ..????…at least I expected 20 comments. ….????

par koi nahi….isbar mujge 20 + comments chahiye warna ….dhamki haan….kuch aisa likh dungi ki sab ke hosh furr….ud jayenge…

this ff is dedicated to our b’day girl RAMYA




shall we start? ???

then let’s start with a 1200 volt smile



in hospital

twinkle is still unconcious & under critical condition

on the outside

shree & chinki r desperately waiting & praying for twinkle ( guys….do u remember Shree….??? )

shree- dekh naa twinkle ko abhi tak hosh nahi aya….na jane wo thik hogi ya nahi …???

chinki – shree don’t take tension. …our twinkle will be fit & fine

suddenly the dr. comes up

chinki – dr. is everything alright? twinkle is fine naa? ??

dr.- I’m sorry to say miss Chinki but She went into COMA. …it’s like she has no wish to live….it seems that she’s fed up with her life. …..

Chinki- kya wo thik nahi hogi….???

dr.- koshish karte hain….we’ll try our level best….par kabhi kabhi dawa o se jyada dua asar karta hain….hope some miracle happens….& upar se wo disease….we’ll try our best. ….

chinki – hmmmm….hope a miracle happen

& the dr. left

Shree- yaar twinkle ki bohot chinta ho rahi hain…..kash Kunj yaha hota…..

chinki – hmmmm

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in morning

pari as usual came to awaken her chachu
but entering the room what she saw made her numb…..

kunj was lying unconcious on the floor with his wrist cut & glass pieces spreading the whole room…..

seeing the condition pari screemed…” CHACHUUUUUU…..!!!! ”

but no response came

she again screamed- Mumma , Papa jaldi yaha aao….dekho na chachu ko kya hogaya….plz jaldi aao….

hearing pari’s voice uv N mahi at once rushed to Kunj’s room

they also stood numb seeing the condition

they at once took him hospital

@ hospital

kunj is taken to ICU & his treatment is going on

yuhi & manusha r restless

# Uv’s pov

kunj….why u take such drastic step….mana ki without twinkle ur life is = hell but stilll……u r bearing the punishment of ur own sins….nut u haven’t done right. ….I’ll never forgive u for this blunder. …..?????

# end of his pov

manchala maan plays in bg

after the dr. came out

uv- dr. … how’s Kunj …..???? he’s fine naa….???

dr.- Listen mr. Sarna ….condition mr. Kunj Sarna is very critical. .. anything can happen to him at any moment. ..he has lost his much blood. … we have to shift him immediately to USA right now. …..plz shift him as possible to USA at xyz hospital

uv- ok dr. as u say …we’ll immediately shift him to USA

next day @ USA

kunj is shifted to xyz hospital = the same hospital where twinkle is admitted

is it a god’s indication which will led to souls meet again or its just the silence before a heavy storm….???????

# Uv’s pov

Y I’m feeling that something big is gonna happen which will change all our lives …?

ek tufaan ayega jo sab kuch sab ki zindagi tabah kar dega ya fir se sambhal dega …..

pata nahi Q ye feeling ho raha hain….!!!

# end of his pov

@ hospital in USA

co-incidentionally twinj r admitted in the same ICU but are separated by a separator

is it really a coincidence or a indication of the upcoming storm….???????

#fb shows

a boy is hell tensed shown running in a hospital

suddenly the dr. comes

b- dr. is twinkle fine naa….use hosh to aagaya naa…???

dr.- don’t take tension mr. kunj sarna ….ur wife is absolutely fit & fine . u can meet her

k- but dr. she’s not my wif…..

the dr. left before listening

without wasting any sec kunj rushed to meet twinkle

there twinkle was sleeping

kunj- oyee miss amritsar ….kisne kaha tha itna stunt dikhane ko….u r really a siyappa queen…if something would happen to u then I would di..

before completing the sentence twinkle interrupted her hand in between

t- kunj tumhe meri kasam…ainda aisi baat maat bolna ….
& he lovingly admires her

jehenaseeb from hasse to phasse plays in bg

Zehnaseeb, ZehanaseebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseebMere kareeb, mere habeebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseebZehanaseeb

kunj comes close to her

tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz haiTere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz haiIss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai

twinkle started breathing heavily

Huaa ameer dil ghareebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseebZehnaseeb, ZehnaseebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

& kunj pulled her in a sweet & crazy lip lock
he tucked her hairs behind her ears
he then put up her chin
& then kissed her nose N bit her nose
leaving love bite on her nose

Lena-dena nahi duniya se meraBas tujh se kaam haiTeri ankhiyon ke sheher meYaara sab intezaam haiKhushiyon ka ek tukda mileYa mile gham ki khurchaneYaara tere mere kharche meDono ka hi ek daam hai

he then drowned his head into her neck & placed wet kisses on her neck

Hona likha tha yunhi jo huaaYaa hote hote abhi anjaane mein ho gayaJo bhi hua, hua ajeebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseebZehnaseeb, zehnaseebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

he then sucked her neck & left love bites there
then he went to her earlobes. …he kissed their sucked it & again placed love bites …. ( thoda jyada hi romance ho gaya naa guys…??? )

hua ameer dil ghareebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseebZehnaseeb, ZehnaseebTujhe chaahun betahashaTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

he then moved his fingers all over her body touching her forehead, nose,lips,neck,cleavage, br*asts, navel,waist…..

and again they lost into a sweet lip lock
and twinkle was blushing so hard that she couldn’t control herself & kissed on his cheeks hugged him so tightly that the eternity too can’t separate them

kunj too responsded & hugged her with = passion

fb ends

back to present

ward boys r moving here & there to take kunj to OT

in these process twinj touches their hands and both felt a current passed through them

tere haato me mera haat ho sari jannat e mere sath ho plays in bg

kunj fingers started moving

seeing them dr. at once took him to OT

here twinkle started breathing heavily & started responsing

it seems like wish for living grew in both’s heart again

seeing twinkle’s condition the dr. took her tok in OT but in another one ( are always kya wo saath honge )

the screen splits into two parts showing twinkle breathing heavily in one & kunj lying unconcious n moving some fingers in other

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twinj gains consciousness n open eyes together & shouts eo’s names together

their meet again

twinkle to insult kunj

their painful conditions

some flash backs


p.s.- haan haan comments do warna agli epi kuch ulta seedha milega

& I know that the epi was notat all good

it was a bakwas & boring one

and I’m too a worstest writer

but kya karu RAMYA ka b’day tha na to isliye post kiya

sorry for boring u guys


so guys plz plz plz do drop ur precious comments in the box to encourage me

plz tell me if u r not liking the ff then I’ll end it

ok guys have to go its 2:30 am & I’ve to wake at 5:00 am

so guys…..
love u all ….
keep commenting. …..
take care….
keep smiling…..
Buenos Nosches….

ba byeee

urs lil sis ,

Ayesha β™‘β™‘β™‘

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  1. Presha

    Loved it

    too good
    Love u
    Post soon

  2. Ramya

    Ayesha thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhjhjjjhhhhh
    It was best
    You guys are best
    Maine kya kia jo mujhe itne ache friends Mile
    God thank you for this
    I’m soo sooo happy
    Thank you so much
    And don’t you dare to say that you are a bad writer
    Else B-Day din hi naraz ho jaungi
    Thank you so much
    Love you

  3. SidMin23


  4. Anusha


  5. Nice episode ☺️

  6. Amazing
    Loved it

  7. amazing yr
    plz post asap

  8. Awesome & amazing episode ayesha????

    Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post soon ur both ff plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzZzzz

    Aur aage se apne aap ko bad writer bola na to me tumse tumse na baat nahi karugi aur ab ye me sachi bol rahi hu OK

    Luv u

  9. Sana785

    Superb…. Outstanding…. Mind-blowing……. Fantabulous……

  10. Nishuu

    Awesome dear
    Loved it
    Sry for late comment

  11. Sameera

    Awesome Ayesha …
    Loveddddddd it sooo much …
    Will be waiting for next ..
    Post soon ..

  12. Awesome episode
    Loved it
    Post soon
    Love u
    Keep smiling
    Take care

  13. Cheena2001Cp

    Amazing Mouli ????
    Dramatic and I loved it??

  14. Shalini15

    Awesome amazing fabulous episode Aayesh.loved it. Post soon
    Love you ? ? ? ?

  15. Baby

    ayesha β™₯
    really yrr osm β™₯
    so emotional β™₯
    soo cute n dere romance god it was hot but srsly ayesha in d hospital hehhe β™₯
    inna saara romance hayee babaji β™₯
    tu bhi epic hai β™₯
    or kya bolun maza aagya bhott jyada β™₯
    it was amazing β™₯
    srsly touching n precap wowaaa m eagerly w8in β™₯
    n ayesha ab chinta mat kar now post ur nxt epi wild a small sumarry i hope new ppl will also cmnt jst try n m sure cmnts will increase bas inn 16 17 cmnts jo bhi mile hain unke baare mein khuch mat bolio nxt mein jst w8 n watch kya hota hai β™₯
    love u β™₯

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