hola! guys. …..how r u alll…..
ummmmm….bohot jaldi aagayi na to chew ur brains
kya karu aana hi tha meri ramu ka b’day haina
waise bhi dimaags r one of fav food….???
he he he ????….just joking….
achha at my last post I got only 18 comments. ..????…at least I expected 20 comments. ….????
par koi nahi….isbar mujge 20 + comments chahiye warna ….dhamki haan….kuch aisa likh dungi ki sab ke hosh furr….ud jayenge…
this ff is dedicated to our b’day girl RAMYA
HAPPY BIRTHDAY RAMYA
MAY GOD BLESS YOU AND MAY ALL OF UR DREAMS GET FULFILLED
ENJOY UR DAY ???
shall we start? ???
then let’s start with a 1200 volt smile
twinkle is still unconcious & under critical condition
on the outside
shree & chinki r desperately waiting & praying for twinkle ( guys….do u remember Shree….??? )
shree- dekh naa twinkle ko abhi tak hosh nahi aya….na jane wo thik hogi ya nahi …???
chinki – shree don’t take tension. …our twinkle will be fit & fine
suddenly the dr. comes up
chinki – dr. is everything alright? twinkle is fine naa? ??
dr.- I’m sorry to say miss Chinki but She went into COMA. …it’s like she has no wish to live….it seems that she’s fed up with her life. …..
Chinki- kya wo thik nahi hogi….???
dr.- koshish karte hain….we’ll try our level best….par kabhi kabhi dawa o se jyada dua asar karta hain….hope some miracle happens….& upar se wo disease….we’ll try our best. ….
chinki – hmmmm….hope a miracle happen
& the dr. left
Shree- yaar twinkle ki bohot chinta ho rahi hain…..kash Kunj yaha hota…..
chinki – hmmmm
pari as usual came to awaken her chachu
but entering the room what she saw made her numb…..
kunj was lying unconcious on the floor with his wrist cut & glass pieces spreading the whole room…..
seeing the condition pari screemed…” CHACHUUUUUU…..!!!! ”
but no response came
she again screamed- Mumma , Papa jaldi yaha aao….dekho na chachu ko kya hogaya….plz jaldi aao….
hearing pari’s voice uv N mahi at once rushed to Kunj’s room
they also stood numb seeing the condition
they at once took him hospital
kunj is taken to ICU & his treatment is going on
yuhi & manusha r restless
# Uv’s pov
kunj….why u take such drastic step….mana ki without twinkle ur life is = hell but stilll……u r bearing the punishment of ur own sins….nut u haven’t done right. ….I’ll never forgive u for this blunder. …..?????
# end of his pov
manchala maan plays in bg
after the dr. came out
uv- dr. … how’s Kunj …..???? he’s fine naa….???
dr.- Listen mr. Sarna ….condition mr. Kunj Sarna is very critical. .. anything can happen to him at any moment. ..he has lost his much blood. … we have to shift him immediately to USA right now. …..plz shift him as possible to USA at xyz hospital
uv- ok dr. as u say …we’ll immediately shift him to USA
next day @ USA
kunj is shifted to xyz hospital = the same hospital where twinkle is admitted
is it a god’s indication which will led to souls meet again or its just the silence before a heavy storm….???????
# Uv’s pov
Y I’m feeling that something big is gonna happen which will change all our lives …?
ek tufaan ayega jo sab kuch sab ki zindagi tabah kar dega ya fir se sambhal dega …..
pata nahi Q ye feeling ho raha hain….!!!
# end of his pov
@ hospital in USA
co-incidentionally twinj r admitted in the same ICU but are separated by a separator
is it really a coincidence or a indication of the upcoming storm….???????
a boy is hell tensed shown running in a hospital
suddenly the dr. comes
b- dr. is twinkle fine naa….use hosh to aagaya naa…???
dr.- don’t take tension mr. kunj sarna ….ur wife is absolutely fit & fine . u can meet her
k- but dr. she’s not my wif…..
the dr. left before listening
without wasting any sec kunj rushed to meet twinkle
there twinkle was sleeping
kunj- oyee miss amritsar ….kisne kaha tha itna stunt dikhane ko….u r really a siyappa queen…if something would happen to u then I would di..
before completing the sentence twinkle interrupted her hand in between
t- kunj tumhe meri kasam…ainda aisi baat maat bolna ….
& he lovingly admires her
jehenaseeb from hasse to phasse plays in bg
Zehnaseeb, ZehanaseebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseebMere kareeb, mere habeebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseebZehanaseeb
kunj comes close to her
tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz haiTere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz haiIss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai
twinkle started breathing heavily
Huaa ameer dil ghareebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseebZehnaseeb, ZehnaseebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
& kunj pulled her in a sweet & crazy lip lock
he tucked her hairs behind her ears
he then put up her chin
& then kissed her nose N bit her nose
leaving love bite on her nose
Lena-dena nahi duniya se meraBas tujh se kaam haiTeri ankhiyon ke sheher meYaara sab intezaam haiKhushiyon ka ek tukda mileYa mile gham ki khurchaneYaara tere mere kharche meDono ka hi ek daam hai
he then drowned his head into her neck & placed wet kisses on her neck
Hona likha tha yunhi jo huaaYaa hote hote abhi anjaane mein ho gayaJo bhi hua, hua ajeebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseebZehnaseeb, zehnaseebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
he then sucked her neck & left love bites there
then he went to her earlobes. …he kissed their sucked it & again placed love bites …. ( thoda jyada hi romance ho gaya naa guys…??? )
hua ameer dil ghareebTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseebZehnaseeb, ZehnaseebTujhe chaahun betahashaTujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
he then moved his fingers all over her body touching her forehead, nose,lips,neck,cleavage, br*asts, navel,waist…..
and again they lost into a sweet lip lock
and twinkle was blushing so hard that she couldn’t control herself & kissed on his cheeks hugged him so tightly that the eternity too can’t separate them
kunj too responsded & hugged her with = passion
back to present
ward boys r moving here & there to take kunj to OT
in these process twinj touches their hands and both felt a current passed through them
tere haato me mera haat ho sari jannat e mere sath ho plays in bg
kunj fingers started moving
seeing them dr. at once took him to OT
here twinkle started breathing heavily & started responsing
it seems like wish for living grew in both’s heart again
seeing twinkle’s condition the dr. took her tok in OT but in another one ( are always kya wo saath honge )
the screen splits into two parts showing twinkle breathing heavily in one & kunj lying unconcious n moving some fingers in other
twinj gains consciousness n open eyes together & shouts eo’s names together
their meet again
twinkle to insult kunj
their painful conditions
some flash backs
p.s.- haan haan comments do warna agli epi kuch ulta seedha milega
& I know that the epi was notat all good
it was a bakwas & boring one
and I’m too a worstest writer
but kya karu RAMYA ka b’day tha na to isliye post kiya
sorry for boring u guys
Once again HAPPY B’DAY RAMYA
so guys plz plz plz do drop ur precious comments in the box to encourage me
plz tell me if u r not liking the ff then I’ll end it
ok guys have to go its 2:30 am & I’ve to wake at 5:00 am
love u all ….
keep commenting. …..
urs lil sis ,