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TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE KAISE – Character Sketch and Intro

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TUM BIN JIYA JAYE KAISE

Hello friends….I’m Priyanka(u better know me as Riya(riyarocks)in this page…ok ok..I want to clear that Riya is one of my my pet names given to me by my friends..so u may refer me by any name of ur choice)…now, coming to the plot… This is somewhat…(not completely), off-track from the actual plot of SDCH….(some hint regarding the main base of the plot….Some time back, I watched the movie Saaya & was really inspired by the storyline….& so,I decided to write something regarding this for my sweet friends…..)…..hope u guys enjoy this…..plz do comment….this will really act as a Bournvita..hehe..just kidding…I mean a booster for me & a hint from u guys, whether I’ll continue this or not……….(& a very important info….this is basically a Kanchi ff, but other characters will also play equally important role..)…

Characters intro
Kabir Kapoor(Neurosurgeon)…Main Male lead
Sanchi Mishra/ Sanchi Kabir Kapoor(Pediatrician)…Main Female lead
Veer Malhotra(Cardiologist)( Isha’s love interest)
Isha Negi(Cardiologist)(Veer’s love interest)
Pragya Arora(Pediatrician)(Parth’s love interest)
Parth Samthaan(Psychiatrist)…Kaisi Yeh Yaariyaan fame….(Pragya’s love interest)
Riya Malhotra(News reporter)(another best buddy of sanishpra…not an antagonist)
Other characters are almost same as in the show….& sp.note.. there’s no Antagonist in my plot……

Intro:
A girl is standing in front of mirror, in bridal attire & thinking, thanks for coming in my life, with your presence in my life, I feel like I’m complete………..(no points for guessing…she’s none other than Sanchi)…
Baraat aa gayi….Baraat aa gayi………came a voice from the back………(groom’s wedding procession has arrived…)
(Sanchi’s pov: why am I becoming so nervous, I’ve waited for this day from so long…Gannupa, plz stay with me…(I meant Lord Ganesh…Sanchi refers Ganesh Ji as Gannupa…))
Sanchi : Am I looking nice…plz tell na…
Isha: Of course sweetie……
Pragya:Abeo Maharani….Make it fast…
Sanchi: Just a minute more….Let me check myself if everything is fine..
Riya: Sanchi, for how long u’ll keep looking urself in the mirror…aisa na ho, Mahurat ho jaaye aur Dulha apne dulhan ko liye bina hi wapas chala jaye……(if u keep looking urself,might be the auspicious time will pass & the groom will return back without the bride)(and they all started laughing & Sanchi was giving them death glares..)
Isha:U guys continue ur talks, I’m going to check out our Jiju……
Jaya: (without noticing Sanchi)Come fast beta, pandit ji has already said to call the bride….
Sanchi: I’m ready maa…. How am I looking???
(there were tears in jaya’s eyes on seeing Sanchi as a bride)
Jaya: I just didn’t realized ki meri ye nanhi si kali kab itni badi hogayi & aaj uski shaadi hai….(when my litl princess grew up & today’s her wedding)
Pragya:Oh ho Maasi ma, ab aap Ganga Jamuna bahakar yahaan baadh mat le aayiyega..(plz u don’t become emotional…)
Riya:Yes Maasi ma, lets go, its already late….
Isha came running towards Sanchi….Omg Sanchi, Jiju kya lag rahe hain…ek dum koi prince jaise(jiju’s looking really handsome)
Sanchi is coming down with Jaya accompanied with IshPraRiya….
Now lets have a look at the marriage hall, or rather a place where two different peoples are going to become one…It’s a big hall decorated with tulips,orchids,lilies & daisies with the mandap right at the centre….On the mandap, our dulha(groom) is sitting & he’s looking damn handsome…(no points for guessing…its Kabir..)
(Kabir was really mesmerized with the beauty of Sanchi…both were lost in each other, while their friends were giggling at this)
Pragya:Abeo..aise hi apne dulhe ko nihaarte rahogi tab toh ho gayi shaadi…jaldi chalo….mandap pe tumhe jaana hai, mandap tum tak chal kar nahi aane waala….(while Isha & Riya were smiling at this comment .. Sanchi glares at them)
So,on one side u came to know whose on bride’s side, now u can easily guess who’s accompanying our Kabir, apart from Kusum, of course, Veer, Parth,Dr.Anand ,Savitri,Priya & Sanket….with some other(not so important)friends & colleagues…
The wedding process’s going on smoothfully…
Pandit ji: Dulha Dulhan phere ke liye khade hojayein(both bride & groom stand up for taking the pheras)(bg music..Mangalam Bhagwaan Vishnuh, Mangalam Garunadhwajah,Mangalam Pundari Kakshah, Mangalaya Tano Harih…)
Pandit ji:Ab dulhan ki maang bhariye aur ye mangalsutra pehnaiye(now fill bride’s hairline with vermilion & tie this nupitial chain)
Kabir does as he was said…
Pandit ji:Shaadi sampann hui, aaj se aap dono vidhi vadh pati patni hai(now u both r husband & wife)apne pariwaar ke badon ka ashirwaad le(take elders blessing)
Kabir & Sanchi take blessings of Kusum, Jaya, Anand & Savitri….all bless them for a Happy married life ahead…
Hope u liked it guys…& sorry in advance if this couldn’t meet ur expectations…plz give ur suggestions whether I’ll continue this or not….
With lots of love,
Priyanka(or Riya, whatever u like)

42 Comments
  1. Anee

    Omg riya wat a story dear ager beginning itni amazing hai toh updates kaise honge I don’t believe riya why you not come before with this hmm….hey don’t mind I m Sharing my thoughts with you……
    You know na ri di but your real name is priyanka really beautiful name…and plz my love continue it my howner to read from you.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💗💗💗💗💗💗💞💞💞💞💞💞💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝this is all for you hope you like it.

    1. Riyarocks

      omg Anee dear, thats a huge compliment & that too from u………I’m really glad that u liked it……luv u dear…….

      1. Riyarocks

        & ya thnx dear, u r the first one to like this……

      2. Anee

        That’s my pleasure

  2. Abhilasha

    Welcome my sweety riya….. Umm priya…So finally u heard my pleading and came forward to write and prologue is so much good and really u rocked it and I m just counting to read further… Love uh… All the best….. Post soon!!

    1. Abhilasha

      Lots of hugs and kisses coming with speed of light to you… Accept it as my welcome and just set fire!!

      1. Riyarocks

        omg Abhilasha……..u r the reason I started writing….I remember, u were the first one who suggested me to try my hand on writing……..& I’m really glad to meet ur expectations…..& I just hope, aage bhi tumhare expectations pe khade utroon…….fingers crossed…….luv u a lot sweetie………

  3. Hmmm story was very baf just kidding it was awesome and do know even my sisters name is riya ,so can i call u sis .

    1. Riyarocks

      thnk u sooooooo much dear…of course u can call me sis………I was really glad u liked it……….luv u sweetie…..

  4. Yaar its too good at last it was kanchi so keep going..

    1. Riyarocks

      Thnx a lot Prema……..glad u liked it…….

      1. Riyarocks

        & luv u sweetie…..

  5. 💕 💕 💕 it plz continue it

    1. Riyarocks

      thnk u soooooo much……..glad u liked it………luv u sweetie…….

  6. Dhruti

    superb priyanka it was really nice sweet what i say i have no words to describe my feeling
    it was awesome continue to ur writing .keep it up

    1. Riyarocks

      I,m really glad that u liked this……..currently I’m working on the 2nd part……..hope u like that too……luv u sweetie…….

  7. Moonlight25

    I didn’t like it…infact I loved it…i am so glad you came with a story…i am so happy…you always encourage writers with your good words…now it’s time for us to encourage you…loved the intro but there will be lots of love triangles between Isha, Pragya, Parth and Veer…would love to read further….plz post soon…i am going to bring popcorn next time
    ..love you loads and loads…i will call you Ru di as you are older than me 😘😘😘hats of to you

    1. Riyarocks

      omg Tania, I was on cloud9 after reading ur comments….awww….such sweet comments, that too from an amazing writer like u, its a huge compliment for me……& dear, sorry but there isn’t any love triangle complications in my story……everyone has got his/her partner in my ff…& as far as Ria is concerned, she is a workaholic,she’s just focused in making her carrier, doesn’t have any time for luv(rather prefers to be single for her entire life)….& dear u can call me whatever u like………& & & hope u’ll like the nxt one too….luv u lot sweetie…….

  8. I loved it dear

    1. Riyarocks

      Thnk u so much for liking it Priyanshi………luv u lot………..

  9. NeonNinga

    OMG OMG OMG OMG sweetie this is outstanding marvelous fabulous lovely amazing superb awesome kidkI tod ravishing u write better than me and lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u so so so so much

    1. Riyarocks

      Ashnita dear……..u r a fab writer…..I can nowhere reach ur level………thnx for liking it dear………luv u loads……

  10. wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww outstandinggggggggggggggggg
    superb mindblowing ravishing lovely historic unlimited package khidki tod sweetie and sorry for late comment and lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u loads

    1. Riyarocks

      Hey, don’t be sorry at all……..dosti mein no sorry & no thank u….suna toh hoga tumne………hehe……..I’m glad u liked it………luv u lot sweetie………

  11. Hey prinku sorry can ia call uprinku if u dont mind actually my frnd name is priyanka and i called her prinku…. Btw sweetie epi is just outstanding mindblowing u r supeb.. Nd yaa dear saya movie ohhhh i just loved it i have seen it many years ago… But a ff on that amaz movie is like a big giift for us thank u dor ur beautiful gift…post nxt asap

    1. Riyarocks

      Hey Niyaa, of course u can call me prinku…glad to know u’ll like to read this plot……….& I too watched this movie abt one and half yrs back……the main base will be from the movie, but’ll also contain some other plots, which I hope u’ll like……….luv u lot sweetie……………

  12. So so beautiful story……..

    1. Riyarocks

      thnx a lot dear……..hope u like the nxt one…….luv u sweetie……..

  13. OMG it’s amazing fabulous fantastic mind blowing in the beginning only this much nice then in the future it’s going amazing dear hey please update as I can’t wait

    1. Riyarocks

      Divya dear…..I was on cloud9 after reading ur comments………I’ll surely try to post the nxt one asap…….hope u like the 2nd part……luv u sweetie……….

  14. Neha7873

    It was an epic !I loved it to core ,,Just superb ..update soon

    1. Riyarocks

      Neha dear, I’m so glad u liked it………..thnx for ur appreciation & I’ll try to post the nxt one asap……..luv u sweetie……..

  15. AnahitaAnnie

    Yipee!!!! One of my most fav readers started her ff. Firstly the intro was bang on… Since the intro is so stupendous I can’t just wait for the next one.. And it will be so interesting to watch all of our couples together… Priyanka is also a very beautiful name.. Plus, congrats on starting this ff on kaanchi!!! I loved it soo much. I am just speechless after reading the intro
    Pls suggest me some praising words that will be able to match ur level of writing. Its just so amazing. Try to start as soon as possible since I can’t wait any more.. Love u sooo much!!😘😘😘

    1. Riyarocks

      Annie Annie Annie, I was on cloud9 after reading ur comments…..its a huge complement from u, the person who’s the inspiration of almost everyone’s writings……….I just hope u like the 2nd one too…….luv u sweetie………

  16. Trisha139

    Omg awesome thanku for writing something due to shortage of time I couldn’t commment properly but promise will dot hay whenever get time u rockednur liklednit nailed it

    1. Riyarocks

      omg I’m really glad that u liked it………such amazing comments from writers like u, its like an honour….luv u my cutie pie….I just hope u’ll like the 2nd one(fingers crossed)….

  17. Niyati

    Hii prinku di hope u don’t mind as I call u by this name. I don’t like it infact I loved it completely . Now , I am addicted of it. Love ur different storyline . So sorry for late comment as I was busy in my IB ff . You nailed it didu & I never think in my dreams at ur level .Update soon.

    1. Riyarocks

      thanks a lot Niyati dear for ur comments..I’m glad u liked this…..of course u can call me by any name….& yaar no sorry plz, kyunki, dosti mein no sorry, no thank u……luv u sweetie……….

  18. Khamoshi

    OMG Riyarockssss or i must say PRIYANKA.. amazing… superb… fabulous…or what can be say.. i always wanted to see this..(In my imagination) haha .. but ur story stole my heart dear.. Happy Ending of Part-1.. now i can’t wait for next update..plz post soon dear

    1. Riyarocks

      Luv u loads Mitali dear…thnx for such beautiful comments…I’m really glad, u liked it…I just hope u would like the 2nd one too…..luv u a lot sweetie

  19. Jessicca

    Riyaa it was aweeeessoommeee and especially the dialogues … I mean it was seriously aaammaazziinggg loved it …. Plz plz continue and keep writing…. Can’t wait for further updates

    1. Riyarocks

      thnx a lot Jessi dear….I’m glad u liked it…….just hope u like the 2nd one…..luv u sweetie………

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