TUJHSE HI ZINDAGI (EPI 5)….LAST EPISODE

hey everyone… myself kittu,back with last epi…..
recap…..shraman’s letter exchange…
now,let’s start…..
see,
landline rings…
su attend the call…
su:yes…
caller,please come to xyz cafe… siddarth is waiting for u .
su:what??
caller: yes,do come at 4 pm..

su:okay…
sumo adore herself… n is ready to meet her love for the very first time,she prepares a shayari for him.
here,shravu too adore himself n pushu gives him a bottle of perfume to gift sumo..
sh:iski koi jarurat nahi..
pu:jarurat hai..
sh:wo mujhe jyada meri shayari se aur siddarth se pyaar karti hai…..aaj mai uska dost shravan nahi balki uska pyaar siddarth hoo…if she accepts me as shravan then okay…otherwise i “ll always try to b siddarth for her..

pu wishes him good luck…
sumo is in cafe…just then shravu enters with a bouquet… nd come n sit along with sumo on the nxt chair..
sumo recognise that this bouquet is same as of siddarth one….
su:what r u doing here..??
sg:tumse milne aaya hoo..
su:listen,aaj mai sid se milne wali hoo…n i don’t want third one bw us..
sh:first take this…
su:see,m confused…
sh:let me make u understand…

su:tum jaaooo…i don’t need u…
sh:wait,tumhe ek call aaya tha…
su:yes…but..
sh:wo pushkar ne kiya tha…
su:what…
sh:yes,maine hi use kaha tha…
su:please make it clear..
sh:in short,m yr siddarth…. yr shayar yr love..n wo bouquet n incomplete shayari were mine…
su:u played with my feelings… i hate uuu..
sh:but i love uuu….more than anything..
su:tum itne dino se jhooth bol rahe the,u r a liar….i don’t believe u,what u know abt sid …he is my love not uuuu..
sh:if i say m sid ,tab bhi nahi…
su:give me proof,give me,mai kaise maamloo..u r the only one for which m crazy…
sh:ohhh,udhar pus n idhar tum ..kya mai shayar nahi ho sakta???har kisi ko is baat ka proof chahiye…god..
su:agar ho to do na…
sh:i have no proof…except one thing that i love u..n my heart beats 4u..
su:stay here with yr heart,lie n with yr fake story…m going..aaj tumne apni dosti aur bharosa bhi kho diaa…u r a cheater…
su is abt to go..
just then…shravu comes on his knees…
n says..

tumhari ek jhalak k liye…
zindagi bita di..
tumhe paane k liye…
saari raat bita di..
tumhari khushi k liye..
jhooth se bhi joda rishta…
par phir bhi tumhara..
ho na saka..
sirf ek baat dil me rah gayi..
ki “”tumse hi hai meri zindagi””..
bas ek baat sun lena…
mujhe mera dil..
vaapas jaroor de dena..
varna kahin aisa na ho..
ki jud jaaye hamare phir se raaste…
jo bane the aur bane hai..
ek duje k vaaste…

sumo stops herself…
shravan stands up..n says sorry to her ….n is abt to go…
just then sumo holds his hands…n hugs him from back..tughtlyyyyyy….
su:m sorry,i should believe u….but m sorry,m guilty.. please forgive me shravu……. i said all this because i love sid blindly…
sh:but i live only n only my sumo….not suman tiwari…
su:i love u shravan..
sh corrects her n says …siddarth not shravan..

shravu smiles n they both have a hug…sh proposes her…n she too replies in positive…
just then pushu n manager comes with engagement rings…
now they r engaged n the ppl in cafe clapsss for new couple…..
pushu is happy n hugs shravu,…. n all went to their home..happily..

hey,everyone thnx for yr support n love….n yr cmmts were awesome…. thnk u allll…
i tried my best to complete this n give it a happy ending.. hope u’ll like this…..bye….
so guys..one shayari for u all..
es pg pe aake aisa laga…
jaise ban gaya ho ek chota jahan..
par aapka pyar jo mila…
ho gayi puri adhuri duaa..
yu hi aapka pyaar sab ko mile..
aur aise hi hum phir milte rahe..
abhi jaane ki ijaazat dijiye..
taki phir dobaara aane ka mauka mile..
aankho me aansu na aaye…
isliye hasna kabhi na chodiye..

@everyone.. hey i had replied to each n every cmmt with only thnx because i really have no words.. n till now m overwhelmed ,guys u all r awesome n yr love is beyond my expectation…
will miss u all..bye, tc ..nd love u alllllllll.

21 comments

  1. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Kkiittuu!
    Do come back soon pls…
    Awwh… This short story was soo amazinggg
    umhari ek jhalak k liye…
    zindagi bita di..
    tumhe paane k liye…
    saari raat bita di..
    tumhari khushi k liye..
    jhooth se bhi joda rishta…
    par phir bhi tumhara..
    ho na saka..
    sirf ek baat dil me rah gayi..
    ki “”tumse hi hai meri zindagi””..
    bas ek baat sun lena…
    mujhe mera dil..
    vaapas jaroor de dena..
    varna kahin aisa na ho..
    ki jud jaaye hamare phir se raaste…
    jo bane the aur bane hai..
    ek duje k vaaste…
    This shayari was so beautiful, EkDujeKeVaaste.. Hayye!
    I loved it so much!
    And I love you!
    Do come back soon..
    And iss baar 3 mahine baad nahi!
    Love you!
    -Nikita 🙂

  2. Neeti

    |Registered Member

    Wowww, di d shayari was so epic, especially d last 2 lines
    jo bane the, aur bane hai
    ek duje ke vaaste!
    Woah woah it ws too amazing. Nd d
    tumse hi hai meri zindagi
    it was more amazing. Hw do u write such beautiful shayaris. D lst 1 which was fr us it was just mind blowing. Luved it. I am so lucky to hve a sis like u.
    Pls cme back soon with a big ff. I am waiting.
    Nd u asked a ques in edkv daily written updates here is d ans:
    fav act: Srk:-*, Varun, Sid
    fav song: Janan by Armaan Malik, kuch kuch hota hai
    fav movie: kuch kuch hota hai, kabhi khushi kabhi gum, Dilwale, Ek Villain
    sry I forgot d 2 ques
    Luv u, tc, kabhi alvida na kehna, phir milenge chalte chalte- Neeti

  3. Alina

    |Registered Member

    Hii ..today’s shaiyri is so awesome yaar..wat a line “jo bane the bane hai..ek duje ke vaaste” ..wow girl u nailed it..nd come back wid another ff soon..

  4. Dhira

    |Registered Member

    Spellbound
    Shayari was 💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘
    No words for me also
    I am poor in expressing
    Ur ff will be in my heart dear
    Lots of love
    Do return

  5. Smile

    Loved it di
    Especially love confession
    Oh god
    Mind blowind
    U r fab
    A good writer
    I will miss as
    EDKV IS ENDING

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  6. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Hey kittu..,
    Why did u end it in just five epis…😢😢😢😢
    I guess u wanted me to hve my heart back?😉😉
    Anyway loved it..
    Loved d proposal part a lot…
    Will miss u…
    Come back soon..
    Love u loads sweety…
    Stay blessed…
    Take care..
    😊😊😊😊😊

  7. sona

    Love u too…
    Kittu….
    😍😍😍😍😍😍
    So…u ended this ff with this part…
    Some how..I knew it..that
    It might b short one..but didn’t expect end this..early..😊😊😊😊
    Any way…
    Thanks for ur wonderful shayaries..and love u carried to ur friends and family if tu..
    Hope only thus ff ended..not our journey..as friends😂😊😉😉
    Lots of love
    Sona😊

  8. Avishi Jain

    Sry guys but a bad news EDKV IS ENDING.Pls sign a petition twitter it might help or email pls guys…..those who want an extension can do this and email also…..anjali mukhi(Kamini Chachi) also signed…..pls

  9. aishana

    fabulous……ur shayari were breathtaking….love it…
    but bahut jaldi khatam kar diya
    eagerly wait for ur next..
    bye……tc…

  10. Sonai

    |Registered Member

    Awesome ending !!! Superb story di !!! Write another FF plz !! And this confession wala shayri……. no word to express !!….
    😍😍😍😍😍😍

  11. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    End??? Kyu Kittu??? Yaar y is everyone up to making me sad today? All these jhatkas at once. Pari leaving, EDKV ending, Sad ending on Devil-Angle Five Shot nd now this wonderful ff also ending!!! But ur shayari girl!!! It took away my heart away. Pls pls pls come back with another great ff. I’ll miss u. Btw the ending was all dhamaka!! Awesome!!! Beautiful…now I can’t type more or I’ll start crying after all these emotional drama.
    Take care honey
    pls come back nd do take care of my heart
    love u sooooooooooo much

  12. Anjali

    kittu babu it was amazing…
    edkv shayari was I can’t say …m speechless… bestest one n last one muskurate rahiye was lovely one…
    thanks for such a beautiful ff 🙂
    n write new ff soon n let me know okay…post links on edkv pg 🙂
    love u loadddss…gonna miss u badly…try to cm soon dear…

    @all guys .
    .I’ve a request to all …guys if u write Any ff on shraman pls let us know on edkv wu page..

    @smile…dear we’ll stick to the last wu pg of edkv forever as no one wanna leave such lovely friends 🙂

  13. Zainab

    This was way too much cute. Specially the shayari 😍👌
    Loved this ff so much.
    Please come back with another ff soon.
    Take care 😘

  14. #SpreadLove

    Hi! I am not a negative vibe or something.. But i think the episode ended a bit low.. The ending should be mindblowing and the like.. Well, about your shayri.. I loved it! But tbh i dont like these types of ff.. See i am just suggesting u. So any1 b4 replying to comment, read my comment twice and because i am not saying that its bad.. Its just my opinion that i didnt like it.. But i respect the author’s efforts put into this ff!

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