TUJHSE HI ZINDAGI (EPI 4)

hi,hello everyone ,this is me ,kittu..
now
recap…sumo n shravu were in cafe…sumo comes home back..shravu utters a shayari.. n pushu now know the love of shraman n siddarth as well….

let the story begin…
shravan now is in room..he is just thinking abt the precocious moments of his childhood with sumo…n also that he is siddarth n the words again echo in his ears ..the words sumo confessed for siddarth…
just then pushu enters….
pu:what happened… have u told her???
is she ready for yr proposal..
sh:which proposal???

pu:hey,don’t b so start… i know u r a big lawyer.. but itna to mujhe bhi pata hai…
sh:come on the point..
pu:see,u love her..she too…then…jab ladka ladki raazi to kya karegi,kaziii..
sh:u mean shaadi..
pu:exactly…
sh:kyu ni kyu ni…gaao basa ni ki bhikhari pehle aa gaye…
pu:m not a bhikhari,but bhaijaan of my mammoth bhai…
sh:now,just stop yr melodrama.. n go,u need sleep..
pu:of course… but before this…i have something for my shayar bhai…
pu:arz kiya hai…
sh:irshaad!!!
pu:to arz kiya hai…

bhaiya to hai paana…
sh:okay..!!
pu:bhaiya to hai paani
aur sumo hai unki nani..
jaane kaise badhegi unki ye kahani….
pu:wah wah wah wah
sh….now stop this …n go…
pu:okay….(innocencely)good night..
sh:he is in thought again….
early moring… he just getvan idea…

he called his manager.., n tell him about everything..
sumo is in tiwari killa…suddenly door bell rings…
he found a bouquet n a letter..
she take them n comes to her room….
in letter itvwas written……
shravu, has told me everything, but if u want to meet me. n want to b my life partner.. then i’ll have to prove thus…n if i too fall in love for u then no problem.. otherwise we’ll have a relationship of frndship ……
but before this..u ‘ll have to prove that uvr of my level…so for this complete this shayari…
hai kashmakash…
mahfil -e- zindagi me..
kuch pal to ho…
aur lamhe khushi ke…

miliye to jara..
ek baat puchenge…
kya hanari dosti aap..
qubool karenge……
now sumo have to complete this ..
dosti to aapki hame qubool..
par kya ye hai sahi…
jo kar rahe hai aap huzoor…
dosti to ek lawz ka khail hai…
kar k dekhiye…
iska maza hi kuch aur hai…
zindagi ki kasmakash me…
gum kahin aap na ho jaaye…
gaur farmaaiyega janaab…
kahin aap kho na jaaye…
sumo then call shravu…..
su:where r u???

sh:tumhara ghar se 2 km ek ghar hai…uske 2nd floor k room no.5 k ander chhat k neeche nd on the chair…!!!!
su:sidhe bolo na ..in yr room..
sh:omg….tumhe sidhe samajh aati hai???
su:do u want orange juice??
sh:no no…. i hate…..
su:okay,so come to tiwari killa…
sh:is everything okay…???,
su:nothing is okay..

sh:he comes home…n finds sumo all alone in her room…
(now this is the romantic scene… plez try to understood this)
she is in her room…
windows r open….
sweet cool breeze is blowing… her hairs r moving with the breeze…curtains too in slow speed…
sweet bg music……
sumo has that letter n she don’t know….that shravu is here…
shravu comes closer to her..n sit on the bed…
sumo smiled at him..

he is totally into sumo’s eyes…
he raise his hand to her hairs…n slowly aside it..
sumo closes her eyes….
shravu now tries to come closer to her…both r on bed….he moves closer….nd both r just close now….but suddenly sumo beaks the love scene…

su:u ??
sh:ya..u called me!!
tell me,what’s not okay…
su:m not okay .
sh:what happened to u???
su:m in live…please save me..otherwise.. yr frnd will kill me…
sh:who this hell frnd is??
su:siddarth… n don’t use such abuse words for him..
sh:okay,but what he did..??
su:see,he gave me this..n told me to complete this..then only he’ll meet me,kya tumne use ye bataya tha…??

sh:yeah .
su:she suddenly hugs him…a very tight hugggg
sh:he also tries to hug back…but just then..
sumo says sorry…
sh:its okay…
sh:so now..
su:he asked me to complete this.. n see i have done…
now i’ll have to give this to him.
sh:but..
su:i don’t k know, where he lives….otherwise mai hi chali jaati….
sh:okay okay…i’ll do this…
but mujhe kya milega???

su:kya chahiye,vakeel saahab ko??
sh:could i read this now…?
su:do u really want orange juice??
sh:okay sorry!!
su:better u r improving….
shravan then move out…
just then his phone rings…
shravu: sumo oo?????
yeah,abhi abhi to aaya hoo…
jaan nikal gayi??.
su:meri jaan tumhara liye to niki nahi hai…
aur na niklegi…
sh:toh mid chief ..kiske liye niklegi..

su:u know very well!!!
sh:he smiles..
su:see,yr frnd will ask about this as i had wrote an incomplete shayari as well…
sh:but y??
su:are, wo mujhe aajmaana chahta hai..
si its a good time for me too..
agar pyaar hone k baad samajh aaya..to
sh:okay…this time too yr self-respect… ryt???
su:of course..
sh:smiles… n hug that letter…
sh:okay i’ll surely complete this…
su:what ??
sh:i mean i’ll surely make it complete by yr n yr n yr siddarth..
su:thnnkkk uuuuuu
shravu is now in his room..
n reads the completed shayari..
then incomplete one….

door ho ya paas…
din ho ya raat..
chahe ho koi bhi yaad…
bas hoti hai aapki hi baat…
aata hai bas aapka hi khayal…
padhkar aapki shayari ko..
humara dil ho gaya behaal..
now shravan has to complete this…
ho gaya ho aapka dil behaal…
kuch hamara bhi hai aisa hi haal..
lagta hai jaise ho gaye ho kitne saal…
ki hamari jaan pehchaan hai ..aisa hai khayal….
ho chahe door..
ya rahe hum paas..
kuch ho aisi yaad…
jo rahe hamesha khaas..
aur ho kuch aapke..
aur kuch hamare saath…

shravan completes this…n went to bed…
he is still thinking abt that room scene ..n sumo’s face is just flashing before his eyes…he closes his eyes…n just in deep sleep…
in the morning… he send the letter.. to sumo..
she read n give him (siddarth) another shayari to make it complete… n she gives this to shravu ,considering him as shravan.. but don’t k ow that he is siddarth…
shravu then competes n send her back…
then shravu as siddarth send her incomplete shayari….. n she now has to complete …
this was the sequence of letters….

they just show their love,anger,sympathy, day to day stuffs,n they r now very close…shravu now see her as his ladylove…sumo is now falling for her..more….
days pass like this…now sumo wants to meet siddarth…
she calls shravu…..
epi ends on shraman’s face…

precap…shravan comes to cafe with bouquet n a shayari too…sumo is in shock..because she was expecting siddarth…

@everyone.. hey thnk u all…
yr love n support were awesome…i have no words to express myself.. only thnk u is which i can say…

28 comments

  1. Alina

    |Registered Member

    Waah wah ..!!kya shayri h yaar…its very muuuucchhh intresting..pushkar n shrvu convo was fantastic. ..n room scene ..sooo romantic…
    U r an amazing writer Kittu dear..
    Lkn ye system boht tym laga diya..
    Tmhare liye ek song
    Tu safar mera..
    Tu hi meri manzil..
    Tere ff k bina guzaara..
    Aye dil hai mushkil..

      • @Alina di..of course di..I’ll try my level best to write more ff….but don’t know how will I manage myself after EDKV because while writing all this I imagine our SHRAMAN but after show I ‘ll have only tears not because this is on end but this is on midway… We won’t b able to watch its approximate scenes…this will really hurt me when I’ll write….. Well no problem we r now registered ,so we can do chat too…thnx for all di….n may b my nxt wu pg is now final…..CN..of rajat tokas…hope it will not let me to miss EDKV n NAMIK.. I won’t miss NAMIK Niki n EDKV but miss our bonding…. M really upset di….don’t know how will I handle myself.. Such a bad Sunday this is…but thnx Di for yr love..n for yr sake l’ll try to write more ff…but not sure….love u tc..

  2. sona

    Hey..kittu…๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    Lovely…
    Amazing….
    Superb yaar…
    Loved every part of ur ff…
    Mainthng is no WHR I felt like dragging..
    It was like roll coaster๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    And I loved the incomplete shayari of sumo more than the shravu…๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’
    Thanks for shayaries yaar…it inspired me too write so..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  3. Avishi Jain

    Awesome update…and the shayaris are also fab๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ
    Update next part soon…๐Ÿ˜Š

  4. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Hey kittu…
    It was awesome.
    Love u loads..
    Sorry for short comment…
    I hve to study for my exam….
    Post soon..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    • Okay,no problem.. Plez concentrate on yr xms….n thnk u for reading this…n my romantic scene was for uuuu…n again m sorry,for that…love u tc.. N give yr best in xms..byeee

  5. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Woah!!! U were planning to kill me right? Such an awesome epi!!! That part…uk which one….was awesome!!! nd it’s so cute how they exchanged letters. As for ur shayari…it stabbed me on my heart….Eagerly waiting for the next part..the final moment

  6. Neeti

    |Registered Member

    Wow, as u promised u made it a romantic di. D precap ws amazing. Waiting fr it. Loved d shayari. Nd here is a little shayari fr u
    Kittu di ka kya kehna
    hai to akhir merihi behna
    Shraman koto he zindagi bhar sath rehna
    bt kiu hai itna kuch shena
    shavan ata hai
    ap hai jate
    shavan ata hai
    ap hai jate
    phir hum kiu
    hai khana khate
    chi chi, chi chi (I know wah wah kehte hai bt ghatiyd chijo ko chi hi to kehengena!)
    bye bye, tc, pst soon- Neeti

    • Oomggg..neeeti..not chi chi..but kya baat kya baat..u know,jab Maine start kiya that..it was m KE this…..sweet…. N yr one is awwww…thnx dear..loved this…u too take care of yrself.. N will try to post nxt soon๐Ÿ˜Š

  7. Zainab

    Loved this so much. It was just so amazing that I can’t even explain how much I loved it.. Your shayari kills me..
    Pushkar’s shayari was epic xD Loved that scene.
    I love your ff so much. Can’t wait for the next episode. Post soon. Take care ๐Ÿ˜˜

  8. Anjali

    kittu babu kya bolu…u hv left me speechless…
    awsm epi once again …
    n pushkie ki shayari was hilarious ๐Ÿ˜‰
    shravu ka describe krna 2km frm ur house 2nd floor was so funny n cute…
    n thr shayari completing seq was so lovely…
    n shraman bed scene wow so romantic …
    precap interesting…
    jldi s next part v update kr do babu …n secnd last part ๐Ÿ™

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