Tujhme khoya rahun main Mujhme khoyi rahe tu- (Ishqbaaz) Ishkara Five Shots part 1 of 5



Hi all Fatarajo here. And i m the writer of Ishqbaaz- We Three Brothers Are Like Three Sides in a Triangle, so are Our Story. I know you all are waiting for my story for long, I thought you all forgot my story but I am surprised and happy with the fact that you all still do remember about it. Actually I have two reasons why I am not able to publish the next episode. One is I was busy due to my trip and I also fall sick while I was on the trip and my laptop is not with me due to which I couldn’t write the episodes. And another reason, is that I am going to bring some changes to the storyline so I am working in it. I may take time in publishing the next episode I will try my best to publish it before my root canal surgery which is on 1st week of October. I know it’s Long but please do wait. And I am sad that I can’t write as my laptop is not with me, but my phone is with me. I thought that if I cannot write my fan fiction i can at least write a 5 shots. So i am writing a 5 shots on my Favourite ishqbaaz pair and that is Ishkara. And if you are worried with the fact that I will get late in publishing the next part don’t worry because i have already finished writing the 5 shots all 5 parts. By then read part 1.

Here is the part 1 of the five shots

Four corners. The room has four corners as we all know. But there was silence. Shhh! There was a window at one corner, a bed in the other and some paintbrushes and paints at another. And in another was the owner of these items. He sat in a corner and was painting. It was his passion . Anyone would have said that if they entered that room. He seemed to have express and transfer all his emotion in the painting he was doing. His eyes expressed nothing just curiosity over the painting he was currently doing. And yes he was none other than the great artist, Omkara Singh Oberoi. Finally he finished that painting and he just walked towards the corner where his bed was kept. He looked up and invisible tears dropped from his eyes.
“Why did you leave me forever?” Omkara cried in his heart as he looked at that thing.
And that thing was a painting of a girl. A happy girl. It seems that Omkara was emotionally connected to the painting he was looking at. But question is who was ‘the’ girl?

Outside his room was two ladies standing.
One of them eyeing at him sadly. She was none other Anika Singh Oberoi, the Sister-in-law of Omkara and the Wife of Shivaye Singh Oberoi. And the other lady, elder than Anika. She was Janvi Singh Oberoi, the Mother of Omkara Singh Oberoi. She stood beside her.

“It has been five years, since Riddhima died.” Janvi said sadly.
Yes, from what Janvi said it conveyed that the painting was that of none other than Riddhima who died. Looks like Omkara was very closely connected with Riddhima.

Janvi and Anika looked and Omkara came out of the room.
“I am leaving.” Omkara just said that and went past Janvi and Anika. Finally Omkara started speaking, even though it was just three words.

At another place,
The sunshine started to irritate her eyes. She opened the window and breeze of wind made her hair lock start to move. But one thing was not moving. That was her smile. She looked through the window and smiled. Along with the sound of the wind Breeze, a voice chased her ears.
“Ishana!” That’s what the voice said.
Yes, the girl at the window was none other than Ishana. Ishana flunked her hair with the movement of her neck and she looked and smiled and went.
But where was Ishana? Was she at her house? No. Then? Ishana was at a cake shop. And that was Ishana’s cake shop and she was the owner of that. Ishana was very happy with her cake shop and she loved baking cake and pastries. It seems she gave all to this cake shop so that it can be a successful shop. After baking her cake. She took out a piece of plate and placed two pieces of pastries and handed it to someone and told her to hurry. And she did so.
Ishana looked out and She became relieved as she saw the girl placing that plate of pastries beside a guy. A guy with long hairs is shown and he is painting. But his face is not shown. He ate the pastries and left the plate. Ishana tries to see his face but she failed. And she went in.
Ishana continued with her job of baking and selling them to run her dear cake shop.

Times passed by and then it seems that something triggered Ishana and she quickly rushed back to the window. It was time to say goodbye to the wind Breeze. Ishana while closing the window looked down. It was the same guy. He called the girl and gave her the plate and she left. And after that he walked back and left the place. Ishana stared him from the window and only one thing went in her mind.
“Who is he?” Ishana questioned herself.

End of part 1.

Precap for part 2: Ishana comes to a place with big cake and Omkara is walking there at the same time and they collide with each other. Due to this the cake gets smeared on Omkara’s face who is shocked. Ishana is stunned.

I hope you all liked the first part of the 5 shots. The next part I will publish tomorrow. Till then feel free to express your opinions 🙂

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  1. Aiswarya

    It’s simply awesome ??
    Post the next part whenever u get time

    U gave a promo in ikrs 3 months before na during kaviya di was writing destiny of love
    Do u forgot about it ???

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey aishwarya thanks for commenting
      and for this one i will post the next part tomorrow
      and for the ff i may take some time
      and wow u still remember the ikrs one
      i thought u all forgot about it?
      and also i m not writing that one as i felt its a copy
      and kaviya’s ff is amazing i miss her ffs

      1. Aiswarya

        How can we forget that was a superb intro ?? Ooo that’s so sad ??
        Yes Akka’s ff all are awesome
        Now missing her as well as her ff’s

    2. RANdomfANCreationz

      Ya i miss her ffs too and well when i m totally free will try to write an os as the story is still in my mind

  2. Amazing…my favourite ishkara..Just continue..eagerly waiting for next part…

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey tharu thanks for commenting and my fav is ishkara too
      and yes will continue as i already wrote this 5 shots
      and next part i will publish tomorrow

  3. Arshi

    Nice… i mean.. superb…. i mean fantastic?????

    So cute epi… looking forward for next chappy

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey arshi omg ur comment
      I am so happy to see ur comment here
      i used to read ur ishra and arshi ff and i loved it
      and happy u liked the epi
      and will publish next part tomorrow

      1. Arshi

        Hipe u r fine dear …. i posted two comments… but ine didnt get uploaded… leave tat.. i just asked .. to take care of ur health…. and wat happened?? Why u fll sick???

      2. Arshi

        Hipe u r fine dear …. i posted two comments… but ine didnt get uploaded… leave tat.. i just asked .. to take care of ur health…….. and root canal… u know?? I m so much scared of anything related to tooth? take care yaar

    2. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey don’t worry it’s nothing serious it’s just a minor surgery 🙂

  4. Akshaya

    Ishkara omg . It was amazing fatu . Lovely purely lovely dear.

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      hey akshaya thanks for commenting
      ishkara is my fav 🙂
      and happy u liked it 🙂

  5. Fatarajo prayers for u Dr missing you a lot plz be fine soon apart from this the ishkara idea of posting was just awesome

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey shama happy to see ur comment here 🙂
      and well dont worry its a minor surgery its related to my tooth so no worries
      and happy u liked the idea
      actually i was missing ishkara a lot thats why i wrote this

  6. Priya15

    It’s amazing dear…. . Ya I m worried… But not for the ff.. But for u dear.. Wt hpnd to u??? Ur going to do surgery… Pls do take care of ur health… Pls…. U didn’t update also no prb.. But pls take care dear…

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      hey priya thanks for commenting
      and dont worry its nothing serious
      its just a minor root canal surgery
      its related to my tooth
      and dont worry i will take care of myself
      and the next part of the 5 shots i will upload tomorrow

  7. renima ishqie

    Fatarajo, This is renima from ishqbazz tu, hope u are doing well ishqie. Am so glad to see your ff and i just go through it now. Am very much impressed with the way you described omkara as an artist and the particular word “passion” really deserves to omkara’s character.The way you described omkara emotionally connected with ridhima was really touching. You just portrayed her character in different level….gud job. And to see ishana running a cake shop was really very interesting and fatarajo i loved the way you portrayed each and every character with certain traits like anika staring sadly, ishana opens the window and breeze of wind falling on her hair etc…..were like you just framed them before viewers. Really creative and nice ff.
    And thanks for ishkara ff as ishkara is my favourite ….please continue your ff when you really feel well and ishqie take care off your health also

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey renime ishqie happy u liked my ff and ya when i got this story i knew ishkara will compliment the characters and i was missing ishkara a lot so that’s why i wrote this few shots and happy u liked it well i write few shots in this writing style and ishkara is my fav too and thanks 🙂

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  9. Aaru

    It’s awesome..N I luv ishkara..??

    1. RANdomfANCreationz

      Hey aaru Glad to see u here
      And ishkara is my fav ?

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