TUJH MEIN RAB DIKHTA HAI (Episode 28)

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TUJH MEIN RAB DIKHTA HAI (Episode 27)

Recap: Swara sings the hymn… Swasan outing…

********* Episode 28 ********

Swasan break the hug…

Swara: Sanskaar… I think we should leave… its very late…
Sanskaar: (nods his head but is tensed) Hmm…

Swara turns to leave… Sanskaar holds her hand…

Sanskaar: (cups Swara’s face) Swara… will u promise one thing…??
Swara: Huhhh..??
Sanskaar: Promise me Swara… U will never let ur past affect ur present or future… Promise me that whatever comes in the future… u will stay strong n will always trust me…!!
Swara: (a bit worried) What happened Sanskaar…?? Is there anything I should know…?? What is it that’s bothering you…??
Sanskaar: Aaa… nothing… it’s nothing…!! Come let’s go…!!

Both of them leave…

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@the palace… Swasan reach there n Raglak takes them to Swaragini’s room…

Ragini: So, how was ur date…?? 😛
Sanskaar: Oh God…!! Plzz Ragini… that was not a date…!! Who goes on a date with a cry baby…!!
Swara: What…!! Cry baby…!! Do I look like a cry baby to u…?? How mean Sanskaar..!!
Sanskaar: Aur nahin toh kya…!! Lucky… Ragini… u tell me… who in this world starts crying on feeling hungry…!!

Raglak look at Swara with an amused face trying hard to suppress their laugh…

Swara: Dhokebaazon… Don’t laugh…!!
Laksh: What is this Swara… We arranged ur first date n u are calling us traitors…!! Not fair…
Swara: Oh really… Is this fair that u all are pulling my leg…!! Leave it… I don’t wanna talk to any of u…!!

Saying this she leaves… and as soon as she steps out of the room everyone becomes serious…

Sanskaar: Lucky… what happened…??
Laksh: (takes a deep breath) Bhai… he came…!!
Ragini: But it’s impossible… we can’t prevent them from coming face to face…!! The party will start in two hours… n not many people are invited…!! Anyhow they will get to meet each other…
Laksh: And we can’t do anything against Aditya right now… We have no proof against him…!!
Sanskaar: (angrily) We are not going to accuse him directly for whatever he did… That will hurt Swara even more… But I’ll make sure he pays heavily for what he did to Shona…!! The day my plan gets accomplished; he’ll be over… forever…!!
Laksh: What are u planning to do bhai…??
Sanskaar: Ragini… since u are a news reporter, I’ll need ur help… (sorry I forgot to mention before that Ragini is a reporter)…

Then Sanskaar explains everything to Raglak…

Laksh: But bhai… this will take a lot of time…almost two or three months!! What are we going to do until then…??
Sanskaar: Until then I’ll protect my love… At least I can do this much for her…!!

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After half an hour… Swaragini’s room… Ragini is sitting on the bed n Swara is helping her in getting ready…

Ragini: Stop it naa Swara… u also get ready…
Swara: Offoo Ragini… first u get ready… You are the bride not me… So everyone is going to see u only… Mera kya hai… I’ll get ready after u..!!
Ragini: No ways… Even though I’m the one who is getting married but u must also get ready… not for anyone else but at least for Sankaar… 😛
Swara: Raginii… Again u started…!! By-the-way… I’m angry on him…!!
Ragini: Angry…?? Why…?? :O
Swara: Areyy, he called me cry baby…!! Do, I look like a baby..??
Ragini: (in a teasing tone) Then what do u want to become…?? Mother of the babies…??
Swara: (shocked) Whatt..!! :O
Ragini: Oyee hoyee… But for that you must consult Sanskaar bhai…!! He is the only one who can help u in this matter…!!
Swara: (embarrassed n shows fake anger) Stop it Ragini..!!
Ragini: Achcha, tell me what do u want…?? Baby boy… or baby girl…??
Swara: Ragini… one more word n I’ll surely kill u…!!
Ragini: (gets up from the bed) I suggest at first u must have five boys… then five girls… then the last one as per ur wish…!! 😛
Swara: U are done…!! (gets angry n picks up the pillow)…
Ragini: (starts running in the room with Swara running after her) Areyy… areyy… meri Jhansi ki Rani… I’m giving u very good offer… a cricket team free of cost…!!
Swara: Raginiiii…!!

N she throws the pillow… n guess what… Ragini dodges n Sanlak enter the room at that very moment n the pillow hits right on Laksh’s face…!!

Laksh: Ughhh… Wow what a welcome to the groom…!!
Sanskaar: May I know… why both are trying to become P T Usha…??
Ragini: (winks at Swara) Actually we were planning… Hain naa Swara… (Swara looks at her angrily)
Laksh: Planning… for what…??
Ragini: For starting a special cricket team…
Sanskaar: Cricket team…?? (he looks at Swara… who face palms herself in embarrassment)…
Ragini: But we have some confusion… n only Sanskaar bhai can solve this problem…!!
Sanskaar: Meee..?? How can I help u…??
Ragini: Achcha… tell me… If we have five girls in our team… n five boys… then what about the eleventh member… whether the member should be a boy or a girl… Sanskaar… what would u like…
Sanskaar: If that’s the case… then a girl…!!
Swara: Whattt… :O
Ragini: See Swara… problem solved…!!

Swara again throws the pillow at Ragini… but this time Sanskaar catches it… Just then Ap n GM come to Swaragini’s room…

Ap: Hey Bhagwan…!! What have u done to this room..?? (looks at Swara) n why aren’t u ready till now Swara beta… The guests have started to arrive…!!
GM: Sanskaar beta… I suggest u and Laksh should go to welcome the guest…!!
Sanskaar: Ji… Ganga Maa…!!

Sanlak leave…

Ap: (to Swara) Beta… what are u going to wear for the party..??
Swara: I haven’t decided yet aunty… I’ll wear anything… Don’t worry…!!
GM: (to Ap) Dekha… I told u..!!
Ap: I knew it… That’s why I brought this dress for u… (she gives a packet to Swara) Since, this is a cocktail party n all the youngsters will be in western attire… So, I suggest u should wear this…!!

Ragini smiles n Swara nods her head… Ap n GM leave… n Ragini starts helping Swara in getting ready…!!

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After 20 minutes both of them reach the party hall…!! Sanlak get mesmerized seeing both of them… Ragini is wearing a beautiful knee length red dress… n her black heels complemented her dress very well… Her hairs left tied up in a loose side bun…!! Laksh couldn’t get his eyes off his future wife…!! N on the other side Sanskaar’s heart skips a beat seeing Swara in a western attire for the first time… she is wearing a beautiful black off shoulder gown which hugged her well curved body perfectly… To complete her look she is wearing a pair of black heels n simple earings… her hairs are left loose with a cute puff…!!

Swaragini go upto Sanlak n smile seeing them completely lost…!!

The host announces n the party starts… After half an hour… Sanskaar is meeting some of his business partners but his eyes are completely following each n every movement of Swara’s… whereas Swara is completely busy talking to Ragini…

Just while talking… Ragini starts coughing all of a sudden…

Swara: Ragini… Hold on… let me get u some water…!!

Swara goes to bring water but by that time Laksh reaches there n gives a glass of water to Ragini… Swara sees this from a distance n smiles… She keeps the glass back on the counter n moves towards Ragini…

But on the way she bumps with someone n the drink from that person’s hand falls on Swara’s dress…

Swara: (without looking at the person) Sorry…!!

N she goes to Ragini… whereas the person looks at her with a devilish smirk on his face…

Ragini: What happened Swara…??
Swara: Nothing… Just something fell on my dress…!! U wait here… I’m going to clean it…!!
Ragini: Wait… I’m also coming with u…!!
Swara: Umm hmm… no need… U must stay here… U are the bride n this party is in ur honor…!! Main bas yun gayi aur yun aayi…!! (n she leaves)

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Swara comes cleans her dress n is on her way back to the party hall when she hears someone’s voice…

“I never expected that u will forget me so soon… Not fair…!!”, comes a voice from behind…

Swara’s heart beat freezes on hearing the voice… She turns only to find her biggest nightmare standing right in front of her…

Swara: Y… Y… You…!!
Person: Ohoo… so u do remember me..!! Well what to do… No one in this world can resist Aditya Kashyap’s charm…

Swara tries to move away but Aditya stands in her way… She tries to shout but her voice denies to leave her throat… She didn’t wanted to create a scene over there n spoil the festive mood of the marriage…

Aditya: Well, I must say… U have become even more beautiful than the last time I saw u…!! Is there something else or is it the effect of my… touch…

N he touches Swara’s hand from top to bottom with the back of this hand… Swara feels disgusted with his touch… tears start flowing down from her eyes…!!

Aditya: Ohoo Baby… don’t cry…

He forwards his hand to touch Swara’s shoulder… She closes her eyes in fear… when all of a sudden someone holds Aditya’s hand right before he could touch Swara…

Aditya: Oh hello… Mr. Maheshwari…!!

Swara opens her eyes on hearing this n a smile of relief comes to her face…

Swara: (slowly) Sanskaar…!!
Sanskaar: (comes n stands in between Swara n Aditya)… (angrily) Mr. Kashyap… I think u should leave… (tilts his head a bit to Swara) Swara… go to Ragini n Laksh…
Swara: But Sanskaar…!!
Sanskaar: (a bit angrily) Swara… I said… Go Inside…!!

Swara goes inside without saying a word… Aditya sees her leaving with a smirk on his face…!!

Sanskaar: Stay away from her…!!
Aditya: Huhhh…??
Sanskaar: I said door raho Swara se…!! Don’t u dare come near her again…!!
Aditya: Woah man… looks like someone has fallen in love…!!

Sanskaar finds no point in talking to him so he turns to leave…

Aditya: (from behind) Well Mr. Maheshwari… enjoy urself… let me assure u she is a great item to spend ur time with…!! Surely u are going to enjoyyyy…

But before he could complete he receives a hard blow on his face… n within seconds he falls on the ground wincing in pain…

Sanskaar: (angrily) One more word against her n I’ll make sure myself that those are ur last words…!! (Aditya looks at him angrily)

Just at that moment Sanskaar receives a call… he gets up n goes to attend the call…

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Sanskaar returns to the party hall after 10 minutes… but gets shocked on seeing the scenario inside… Aditya along with his mother has instigated the people over there against Swara…

A lady: Sharmishtha Ji… how could u invite such a girl to ur daughter’s marriage…??
Lady 2: Such a girl is inauspicious for ur daughter…!!

Swara’s eyes well up on hearing this… Sanskaar is hearing all this n his anger is reaching its peak…

Ragini: (defends Swara) Excuse Me… who are u to decide who must attend my marriage n who should not… Swara is my best friend n she has full rights of attending my marriage…

Someone speaks from behind, “But who knows… whatever happened with her might be her fault… I mean how can a girl behave so normally after losing her dignity…” (Swara starts crying)

“Enoughhhh…!! “, shouts Sanskaar from behind… Everyone looks at him…

Sanskaar: Do u all have a parameter to measure how much dignified as a person she is…?? Does any one of u standing… right here in this hall… know her..?? What did u say… Whatever happened was her fault…!! Ya… right… absolutely right…!! It was her fault…!! It was her fault that she loved her family so much… a family which never cared about her…!! It was her fault that she thought to bring medicines for her aunt when her uncle was not at home…!! It was her fault that she tried to save her sister from getting harassed…!! Yaa… everything was her fault…!! She shouldn’t have cared about anyone… when no one cared about her…!! But No… (points at Swara) This girl standing here… is not like that…!! She loves others more than she loves herself… All she always cares about is other’s happiness…!!

A lady: But what’s the use of her goodness when she is imppp…
Sanskaar: (angrily cuts in between n shouts) Don’t u dare say the word impure…!! (goes to Swara n stands in front of her) She is as pure as the river Ganga… worth worshipping…!! She is as pure as a child’s heart… free of any hatred or bad feeling…!! She is as pure as true love… to be felt with heart n soul…!!

Another person: These all are bookish things Mr. Sanskaar Maheshwari… They don’t work out in real life…!! A girl with such a past has no place in our society…!!
Sanskaar: Society… great… Society….!! Will u please explain what is this society…?? (looks at everyone) Okay… let me tell u… a society is a place where we enjoy a movie… no matter how vulgar it is… with cold drinks n pop corn… but a rape victim is treated as if she is the biggest mistake made by God…!! A society is a place where men however wrong they are… never considered wrong but the women… they always suffer… they always pay for other’s mistake… Why…?? Will u plzz tell me…?? Why a lady is always considered wrong…?? Here everyone is seeing what happened with her… but anyone bothered to ask her what actually happened…!! Who did it…?? How much she suffered…?? No… But all are continuously blaming her for a mistake she hasn’t even done…!!

“It seems u are supporting her bcoz u have fallen in love with her Mr. Maheshwari”, says aome random person from behind…

Sanskaar: (looks at the crowd) YES… I DO…!! (Swara looks at him shocked with teary eyes)… (Sanskaar smiles n looks at Swara) I LOVE HER…!! N I’m proud that I have fallen in love with her…!! She is the best thing that has ever happened in my life…!!

Saying this he goes towards Swara… He cups her face n wipes off her tears with his thumbs… and…. He kisses her forehead in front of everyone… Everyone gets shocked… except for the Maheshwari n Gaddodia family… as right now they are proud of Sanskaar for the way he is fighting for the pride of his love…!!

Sanskaar: Swara… I didn’t wanted it to happen this way… but I think this is most perfect time… This is the right moment for this…!!

Swara looks at him confused… Sanskaar smiles n looks towards Ap n Dp… Both of them smile n nod their head… Sanskaar slides his hand inside his pocket n takes out something…

Swara gets startled on seeing a beautiful Rajasthani ring in Sanskaar’s hand… The ring has a beautiful diamond in its center with several smaller diamonds n pearls embedded perfectly all around… Sanskaar sits on one of his knees in front of Swara…

Sanskaar: I won’t be saying any cheesy lines right now…!! As I’m not in the mood… so I’m postponing all those lines till further notice… (Sanskaar chuckles n Swara smiles on hearing this)… But on a serious note… Ms. Swara… to be honest I don’t know why I fell in love with u…!! Not only ur qualities n innocence took my heart away… but also ur pain… I feel connected with it…!! All I know is I can’t see tears in ur eyes…!! I want to give u all the happiness u deserve…!! I want u to smile forever n ever…!! So, will u please fulfill my wish… n become Mrs. Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari…!! (forwards the ring towards her) Will u marry me Swara..??

Swara: (gets overwhelmed on his proposal) But Sanskaar…!!
Sanskaar: No ifs n buts Swara… Just say… YES or NO…!! I promise I can fight this whole society for us… but all I need is ur support…!! (Swara could see his love for her in his eyes)…
Swara: (nods her head with a bright smile) YES…!!
Sanskaar: What I didn’t hear u…!!
Swara: YES…!!
Sanskaar: A bit louder plzz…!!
Swara: (loudly) YESSS…!!

Sanskaar smiles widely n slides the ring in Swara’s finger… He gets up n hugs her… By this time Aditya n his family silently sneaks away… Everyone claps for them… MF n GF have tears in their eyes seeing their unconditional love for each other…!!

Dp: (announces) Seems like we are going to have two marriages then…!! (Swasan look at each other shocked) So, ladies n gentlemen… I cordially invite all of u to the marriage of both my sons Sanskaar n Laksh… which is going to take place on the same day… at the same venue… So plzz kindly grace us with ur presence n bless both the couples…!! (Ap gets extremely happy n teary eyes on hearing this)

Everyone applauds… whereas both Raglak n Swasan look at each other with eyes full of hope for a beautiful future ahead…!!

Episode ends…!!

Precap: Marriage preparations n rituals…

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Credit to: G_S

50 comments

  1. Crystal

    Best episodes by far… Loved it…. I liked the way MF GF ands RAGLAK and SANSKAR supported her… It sends a strong message also to those ppl who always consider the rape victims as impure Nd never stand by them… Proud of u…. Keep spreading social messages thru FFs at least some day ppl will understand ??❤️??

  2. It is the most beautiful episode ever I read.. It was so real.. The way ppl taunt swara… The way sanskar protect her… It was exceptional..

    His selfless luv for swara can’t be described in words.. If we got more sanskar then that so called society will be a support system… For all rather than a taunting machine

    Hatts off to you yr… Keep writing

    • G_S

      Thank u so much Meher for such a beautiful complement… I’m glad that u liked it… 🙂 🙂

  3. Sanskriti ?die hard fan of swasan ?

    Omg omg omg di
    What a chappy it was I was just speechless ?
    Sanskar said very true why do only girls need to suffer ?
    Why they r bearing those punishments which they have not done ?
    People don’t have any right to judge any girl’s dignity
    How much ever these men do such cheap and Bl***y things
    they r never considered wrong but why only girls r considered wrong
    Sorry became a little senti ?
    Coming back to chappy it was just incredible
    Hehe ? ragini is such a dramebaaz
    Cricket team of of 5 girls and boys
    Sanskar is such a buddhu
    Di ur ur story is just a fab….awsm
    Can’t wait to see next part
    Upload soon di
    Luv u loads ?

  4. Harani

    Sanskar no matter what happens love him to the core ..this message should reach our poor society who still blame a girl for the things that happen to her ..call her with names but never mind to take action against the criminals ..irony ..G_S awesome Dr ..the best epi we can say ..waiting for rituals 🙂

  5. Maryam

    Awesome yar……no words to describe……??
    U are a very talented writer…………????
    Keep writing with the same spirit……?
    God bless u..??
    Plz update soon…??

  6. Sueño

    Wow!!!!! Such a wonderful epi……… Blowing epi yaar…… I jus lovd it……. sanky superb…
    Aweeeeee……. adorable??????????

  7. Sweetie

    OMG.. This is by far most beautiful update dear.. This one is too good.. I don’t have any words to explain my happiness.. 🙂

    If you have time please read “You loved me” series by Evie Harper.. Series consists of three books “You loved me at my darkest”,”You loved me at my weakest”, “You loved me at my ugliest”.. And also read them only if you’ve read any romantic novels before.. I’m suggesting this series because the series is also dealt with the same theme which you are writing right now.. Caution: Don’t read them if you’ve exams in the near future because the impact of the novels last for days, trust me on that.. 🙂

    Coming to episode the proposal was super duper awesome.. Yayy!! Now we get to see two marriages.. Sanskar’s answers to every question was bang on.. And the punch which Aditya got is too good..*claps* 😀 Aditya should get a slap from Swara as well but that b******d sneaked out of party..

    All the best for the competition dear.. 🙂
    Stay blessed and be happy 🙂

    • G_S

      Thank u so much Sweetie for ur suggestions… I have even started reading the first one…!!

      Luv u dear n thank u so much for ur best wishes… 🙂 🙂

  8. Neha

    Garuna a wonderful epi dear girls like swara they always need a push a hand to hold from trembling they are not afraid of seeing their future they are tortured so much by this so called society that their inner conscience to fight for themselves die… I’ve already told you that the main reason I like actually love ur ff is the concept…. Sanskar has proved himself as that hand and support for swara his love has pushed her and now she is seeing her future…. Loved it a great work by you…. Swasan marriage so… ??

  9. aditi syam

    Awesome yaar and plzzzzzz invite her stupid chachi also I want to see her face after seeing swara got a beautiful life plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

    • G_S

      Thank u so much aditi… n dear don’t worry about chachi… Even though she will not be coming to the marriage as the marriage is a sudden decision but I have something in my mind for her after the marriage… I hope u will like it… 🙂 🙂

  10. Aastha

    Hey Garuna…… This is the best episode ever.. U have very beautifully expressed Sanskar’s feelings, his pure love,.. Actually I couldn’t express how much happy was I when Sanskar was fighting for his Swara…Sanskar s each and every word expressed his love…. His feelings.. n the way u brought out today s episode us awesome…
    While reading my eyes were filled with happy tears..really proud of Sanskar..
    Your thoughts about society are all true….don’t know why there is so much discrimination
    And the pink city played its part to bring love birds together ..I am really excited for swasan marriage…u gave marvelous episode…. A tight bear hug ..love u take care

    Now I will be back after my exams …after 6 june

    • G_S

      Thank u so much Aastha for ur beautiful words… It really means a lot…!

      Luv u too dear…!!

      All the best for ur exams… tc…!! 🙂 🙂

  11. Ashu

    Wow!!! That’s an awesome epi…

    I loved the way sanskaar supported swara, and of course the proposal was too cool…
    Its beyond words… its really awesome…

    Both the marriages at once!! I’m so excited…
    I love the way u write…seriously its too good..

  12. Dharsha

    First I wanna apologise to u for not commenting in previous chappy…
    Whether u expect my comment or not.I always love to comment in ur ff…..

    And this is the most beautiful chappy I have ever read in any ff…..
    Sanskar’s love for swara cannot be simply explained by words….infact am out of words to describe it…..
    Just totally in love with ur ff…..
    The last chappy confession about love took my heart away and this chappy where sanskar protected swara is too good….
    Infact the best feeling is the feeling of being protected safely by our loved ones….
    And swasan marriage also gonna happen…..awhhh so sweet and am waiting eagerly for that…..

    PS.how was ur viva??and also competition??……..
    And I have given a request for u in fb from my id…..Kala Dharshini

    • G_S

      First of all. no sorry n no thank u…!! Secondly.. I always wait for ur comments…!!

      Luv u loads dear… such a wonderful complement…!!

      n my viva was awesome but the competition got postponed for 23rd May…!!

      I have accepted ur frnd request on fb.. 😀 😀

  13. Aami

    ya allah what an episode…… ????? sooooo swwweet epi n lve u sanksar……… lvd thw he express his loe….. he stand for his lady live… protech from tht bl**dy r*scal…….. n evry thng….. lvd DP toooooo thnkx for bein n undrstng fthr….. AP ur alwys a lng ma……n swaragini ka convo itz tiiii funny….
    nyz one keep going…. ??

  14. tani

    It is the most beautiful
    episode ever I read… Keep spreading social messages
    thru FFs….out of dis world… m spell bound

  15. Dev

    2des epi was d just osm epi of dis grand ff….lovd d way sanky stood 4 swara…n dp ap supporting him….n d way swara accepted….lovd d epi 2 d core…
    Love u lots….gm???
    Hugs…..tc????

    • G_S

      Thank u so much buddy… Woww a grand ff… that was pretty much flattering…!! seriously I fall short of words to return the praises from all of u… Not fair…!! 😛 😀

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