TUJH MEIN RAB DIKHTA HAI (Episode 23)

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Hii frnds… so, two episodes in a day…!! 🙂 Actually I’m posting this one on the special request of one of my sweetest readers out there… Sanskriti… This one is especially for u my dear sis… I hope u will like it…!! And a bigggg wala luv u to all my dear readers for appreciating me and my work…!! 🙂 🙂

Plzz note… in case if u feel that I’m dragging the story or I’m very fast with it… plzz feel free to say it as this ff is just for u all… Ur suggestions, appreciations n even criticisms are always welcome…!! 🙂

Now, enough of my blabbering… 😀 Here, I present to u the next episode of TMRDH…

Recap: Swasan get separated… Their conversation with their elders…

*********** Episode 23 ***********

Swara is in a state of shock… She sits on the bed with a thud…

Swara: (tears of happiness roll down her cheeks) He LOVES me even after knowing my past… I… I… How could u be so foolish Swara…?? How could u not see his love…?? So true… so pure… completely selfless… all he ever cared was for ur smile… n you hurt him so much…!! 🙁 But don’t worry Sanskaar… I won’t let my love fail in front of this society… If you are with me, I can fight with anyone…!! Anyone…!! You wanted to know naa what you mean to me…!! You are everything for me Sanskaar… my one n only… I Love you Sanskaar…!! I love u so much…!!

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Next morning at MM…

Sanskaar is sleeping in his room when he suddenly gets a dream n gets up completely startled…

Sanskaar: (shouts) Swaraaaa….!! (n he gets up)

Ap n Dadi hear Sanskaar shouting n they run to his room… Someone comes behind them…

Ap: (runs to him) Sanskaar…!! What happened beta…??
Dadi: (hugs Sanskaar) Mera bachcha…!! Shhh… calm down… nothing happened…!!
Sanskaar: (fumbles) Maa… Dadi… wo… wo… Swara… I dreamt that she is crying… she is calling me Maa…!! She is calling me…!!

Just then they hear someone calling from behind… “Bhai”…

Sanskaar: (looks at the person standing) Luckyyy…!!

He runs n hugs him… Laksh holds the back of Sanskaar’s head with one hand n pats his back with the other…

Sanskaar: Sab khatam ho gaya Luckyy…!! I lost her yaar…!!
Laksh: Hey… don’t u dare say that… How dare u doubt the master plan of your love guru…?? I’m there naa… When SanLak are together no one can defeat them… not even fate or destiny…!! Bhai… You are such a master planner… toh Swara ke saamne kya ho jata hai…?? 😉 😛
Sanskaar: Kya yaar Luckyy…!! My life has turned into a disaster n instead of doing anything u are just making fun of me…!! And it’s not my fault that my mind stops working when it comes to her…!! (he makes a pout face n sits on his bed with his arms crossed across his chest)…
Laksh: Everyone calls me Nautanki… but I find you a bigger dramebaaz…!! N I’m not doing anything…!! Then Mr. Sanskaar Maheshwari… run the horses of your not so intelligent brain n recall last night… How come Badi Maa made u hear Swara’s voice… (Sanskaar looks at him completely shocked) Yes… that was my plan…!! Now no need to thank me…!!
Sanskaar: (hugs him) Thank u… thank u… thank u so much…!!
Laksh: Areyy… areyy… bas meri thank u ki dukaan… Now… are u ready for the season 2… MISSION BHABHI MANAO…!!
Sanskaar: (cutely) But it was Mission Bhabhi Patao earlier…
Laksh: Areyy season to season name changes naa… N Bhabhi ko tum pehle hi pata chuke ho… Now it’s time for Mission Bhabhi Manao… Also this time we have a special member in this mission…
Sanskaar: Special Member…??
Laksh: (smiles thinking about something) Yes bhai… Special member…!!
Dadi: But before that I must talk to Durga…!!

Everyone looks at her tensed…!!

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DP’s ROOM… Dadi n Ap are talking with Dp… whereas SanLak are standing in a corner…

Dadi: Durga… I don’t understand why are u so adamant…!!
Durga: But Maa… that girl… she is a threat to our honor n reputation…!!
Ap: But she is a very sweet girl… very understanding… n she loves Sanskaar so much…!!
Dp: And why should I believe u…??
Dadi: Because I’m also saying the same thing…!! I wouldn’t have agreed for her if I wouldn’t have heard her yesterday… But now I also want to meet her…!!
Ap: Plzz… try to understand… Sanskaar loves her a lot… At least for our son… plzz… everyone else in the house also wants the same… Let’s give them a chance… I can’t see my son like that…!! (she starts crying)…
Dp: Now u don’t start crying…!! (takes a deep breath) Okay… fine… do whatever u all want… (everyone gets happy) But this doesn’t mean that I’m agreeing for this alliance… I’m just giving them a chance…!!

Sanskaar gets very happy n hugs Dp…

Sanskaar: Thank u Papa… Thank u so much… (Dp smiles too on seeing him smiling after a long time… he pats Sanskaar’s head) Okay… okay… Bas ab ho gaya… (to Laksh) Laksh… have u finalized everything for your wedding…??
Laksh: Yes Bade papa… everything is finalized… As we already planned it to be a destination wedding we have booked a palace in Jaipur… It’s entirely for 10 days… Guests from either of the sides will be staying together… And we all can move there in two days…!!
Dp: And what about the invitations…??
Laksh: We will get them in an hour or two…!!
Dp: Okay… Then send the invitations to Home Sunshine also… n make sure everyone comes…!! By everyone I mean… EVERY… ONE…!! (he lays a special emphasis on his last words while looking at Sanskaar)…

Sanskaar smiles seeing Dp…

Laksh: No… Bade papa… I won’t be sending the invitations… I’ll take them to Home Sunshine personally…!!
Ap: Are u sure Laksh… I mean we need u here also…!!
Laksh: Badi Maa… mujhe paidal nahin jaana hai…!! We have a very useful technology n I’ll be availing that… I’ll use the flight… I’ll go there… Give the invitations… Complete my work… n come back here by tomorrow morning…!! After that I’ll do all the important works…!!
Dadi: Hey Bhagwan… yeh ladka…!! No use of arguing Annu Bahu… Let him go…!!

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Evening @ Home Sunshine…

Aarvi: (comes running to Swara’s room) Swara didi… that… from… Kolkata…!!
Swara: (happy) What happened Aarvi…?? Has Sanskaar come back…??
Aarvi: (nods her head in a No) No… Laksh Bhaiya has come…!!
Swara: Laksh…?? But why…??
Aarvi: I don’t know…!!
Swara: Is Sanskaar alright…?? Maybe… he has brought some news about him…

Swara runs downstairs n finds Laksh talking with SB n GM…

Laksh: Maa… Baba… this is the invitation for my marriage… And u all have to come…!!
SB: Yes sure beta… We’ll come…!!

Laksh sees Swara standing… He goes to her…

Laksh: (hands her a card) N this special invitation is for u…!! N before u say anything or deny the invitation… let me tell u well in advance that my marriage completely depends on u…!!
Swara: (confused) What…!! Me…??
Laksh: Haan… my cutiepie has sent this special invitation for u…!!
Swara: Cutiepie…??
Laksh: Haan… My Ragini… my cutiepie…!!

Laksh smiles n takes out his mobile… he dials a number n keeps the speaker on…

A sweet voice comes from the other side… “Hello”
Laksh: Hiii…!!
Ragini: What Hii… have u done my work or not…??
Laksh: This is not fair cutiepie… We are going to be married… n instead of asking me whether I’m fine or not… u are asking me whether have I done ur work or not…!!
Ragini: Haan… bcoz our marriage completely depends on whether u have done my work or not…!!
Laksh: I know… I know… but…
Ragini: But… what but… Laksh… Don’t tell me u failed in convincing her…!!
Laksh: Areyy first listen to me…!!
Ragini: Kya Laksh… I just asked u to convince Swara for coming… But u couldn’t do that much also… Jayiye… hme nahin karni aapse shaadi…!!

She cuts the call…

Laksh: Areyy… first listen to me… hello… hello…!! Oh God… what is these girls’ problem… why is it so difficult to make them understand anything…??
Swara: But… how come she know me…?? :O
Laksh: Of course… I told her…!!
Swara: (shocked) What…?? But why…??
Laksh: (rolls his eyes) Is that necessary right now…?? Here my marriage is on stake… n she is playing KBC with me that too without any lifelines…!! Hey Bhagwan… Bhai… kahan fansa diya tune mujhe…!!
Swara: Okay fine give me ur mobile…!!

Laksh gives his mobile to Swara… she redials the last call n talks for sometimes…

Swara: Lo… ur work is done…!! Now if everything is fine… Can I ask u something…?? (Laksh looks at her) San… Sanskaar…!! Is he fine…??
Laksh: Do u still expect him to be fine…?? (Swara lowers her head trying hard to stop her tears) Ohoo… meri Meenakumari… (Swara looks at him) Okay… sorry… sorry… Bhai ki Meenakumari…!!
Swara: (gets irritated) Lakshhh…!!
Laksh: Areyy… everyone is shouting on me only…!! Poor me…!!
Swara: Ughhh…!! If u are done with ur drama sequence… then are u going to answer my question…!!
Laksh: (dials another number n hands over the mobile to Swara) Why don’t u ask him yourself…??
Swara: (shocked n looks at the mobile) What…!! :O No…!!

Just at that moment… the calls get received… the speaker is on… n they hear Ap’s voice…

Ap: Hello…!!
Laksh: Hello… Badi Maa…!! (Swara signals n asks Laksh about the person on the call) Oh her… She is Sanskaar Bhai’s Mom…!!
Swara: Whattt…!! :O (The mobile falls from her hands but Laksh catches it before it hits the ground)…
Ap: Hello… Laksh… beta… what happened…?? And who shouted…?? (Swara pleads Laksh not to say anything)…
Laksh: Haan… wo… Badi Maa… actually… (but Ap cuts in between)…
Ap: Laksh… Is that Swara…?? (Swara gets shocked on hearing her name from Ap’s mouth)…
Swara: (to herself) Wahh… Swara… she also knows you… Very good…!! You are definitely gone… THE END to ur love story…!! Greattt…!!
Laksh: (taps Swara’s shoulder) If ur sooo important self talk is over… then Badi Maa wants to talk to u…!!
Swara: (shocked :O ) Whatt…!! Mee…!!
Ap: Hello…!!
Swara: (extremely nervous) H… h… hello…!!
Ap: Swara beta…!! 🙂
Swara: (feels happy on hearing beta) Ji… ji… Namaste…!!
Ap: Beta I just wanted to ask u… You are coming naa…??
Swara: Ji… yes… I mean… I’m coming…!!
Ap: Okay beta… then see u in Jaipur… I’ll be waiting for u…!! Bye… God Bless u…!!
Swara: Ji Namaste…!!

Swara cuts the call n takes a huge sigh of relief…

Laksh: (teases her) So… how was ur experience talking to ur future mather-in-law for the first time…!!
Swara: (again shocked) Huhhh…??
Laksh: Waise Bhai took so much pain for convincing everyone in the family for YOU…!!
Swara: He is fine naa…?? 🙁
Laksh: He is… NOW… but let me give u advice… Don’t let this chance slip from your hands…!! Else you will only have regrets left with you…!!
Swara: (gives an assuring smile) Don’t worry… this time I won’t…!!
Laksh: (to GM) So… Maa… u all are coming to Jaipur after two days… We will send the car at the railway station to receive u all… So, u don’t have to worry about anything…!! I have arranged for the tickets also…!! And u all have to leave in the morning tomorrow…!!

Everyone smiles… n then all leave for having dinner… Later Laksh leaves for Kolkata…

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Next morning…

Swara: Maa… Baba… Bachcha Party… Where are u all…?? Areyy come on… we’ll miss the train naa…!!
GM: Ofooo Swara… there are still two n a half hours left for the train to arrive…!!
Swara: But what if it arrives earlier…??
SB: Swara beta… this is India… here trains never arrive on time… before time… ha ha… it’s just a long lost dream…!! But why are u so worried…??
GM: Areyy… Kyun naa ho…!! She is going to meet the Someone Special…!! 😀 Marriage is just an excuse… actually the main reason is something else…!!
Swara: (gets shy) Kya Maa…!! (n she hugs GM)…

Later everyone leaves for Jaipur….!!

Episode ends…!!

JAIPUR… the Pink City…!! PINK… the color of unconditional love and understanding… the color representing care and compassion… the universal color of love…!! <3

Does this mean… the Love Story which was left incomplete in Himachal Pradesh… will reach it’s destination in Jaipur…!! Is this the place where these two love birds will get united…??

Well… let’s see… till then keep loving n stay tuned to Tujhh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai…!! 🙂 :*

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Credit to: G_S

52 comments

  1. sanskriti ? die hard fan of swasan ?

    Omg omg omg di a big wala thank you to you for posting it awwwwwww such cutie pie ? epi it was I cant control my laugh after seeing lucky’s antics ?? such heart touching epi ? di ur just incredible fabulous write
    Once again thank you so much for posting it di one suggestion make swasan meet in the store room when their is no light and when the light comes they should be happy to see them and have a emotional talk di if u like it then surely add in ur story
    Luv u loads di ?

    • G_S

      Thanx a lot Sanskriti for such a sweet complement… I’m glad that u liked it… 🙂 🙂

      Luv u too dear… 😀

      n thanx for ur idea… But I have already written the next episode… I’ll surely add this in further episode… 🙂 🙂

  2. Shreya

    Dual treat..! Thankya sis..!
    Amazing episode.. Lucky is oh my my..! Loved it so much.. And yeah would you please unite Swasan in a typical Bollywood style..
    Plz plz plz.. Its a request..! Please…
    Love❤

    • G_S

      Luv u too dear… I’m glad that u liked it… 🙂

      I can’t say about there meeting at Jaipur… But their union for ever will be in a typical Bollywood style… 😀 😀

  3. aditi syam

    I am a big fan of ur ff I can’t stop myself from cmnting grt job nd dii where r u from and what r u studying and thank u for updating twice one day without reading ur ff it is like something had missing from my life post soon will be waiting

    • G_S

      Thanx a lot Aditi for such a sweet complement…!! I’m glad u like my work…!!

      I’m from Varanasi, Uttar Pradesh… n right now I’m in the final year of my engineering… 🙂 🙂

  4. ❤?Natasha?❤

    Back 2 back updates………ty soooo much buddy……in luv wit ur ff……keep rocking dearie❤❤❤?????

  5. chris

    Thank you for the dual treat…? n big thank u to Sanskrit…bcz of her v got the dual treat..
    ???

  6. Dev

    Love u gs4 d dual treat….truely a lovely epi…..n luckys reentry n ragluk nok jok was truelly funny…
    Lots of love buddy…..hugs….tc

  7. Dharsha

    Ya….it’s really a special one……
    Thanq sanskriti dear….coZ of u we got special treat…………
    No words to express my happiness after reading this chappy…..
    Finally swara realised that she should fight for her love…her sanskar……
    And Mission Bhabhi Manao…..wahhh from Mileya Mileya to this….the mission u start are just amazing….lol?
    In love with this chappy…..?
    Waiting for the next part very eagerly

  8. Likhitha

    Hey Garuna!! After the yesterday’s incident I made a mental note that I shouldn’t read anything in the canteen from now on…coz I get so much involved when I read anything..be it a story or anything.. 😛 😀 I came home and thought of reading this before sleep…I just opened this site and opened fan fictions tab *mistake mistake mistake* I regretted it later..I was moving on and on to the next pages but couldn’t find this..ufff..Too many updates in a single day that too I found many of them were intros and epi 1 Ohh god!!! :O But in middle I found duggu’s new fiction I immediately started reading it..I love all her stories..No I think I should say her mysteries…Yes!! With every story of hers she puts me in suspense which is bad for a person like me because of the curiosity levels I possess.. 🙁
    Just the sight of the pic u used for epi 22 told me it is going to be emotional..Too emotional yaar…But happy at the end that they are going to reunite…When I was about close I found another update of urs..Thanks for sanskriti 🙂 And this epi…lol yaar…I was continuously laughing seeing that lucky’s comedy… 😀 KBC without lifelines 😀 :’-) super!! I was very sleepy before reading but now sleep is far away…Very nice episode yaar….And when they all meet in Jaipur then it is going to be so much fun in next episodes…Bye good night…I’m sorry for long comment…I didn’t feel sleepy so I thought of telling what happened now!!

    • G_S

      Hii Likhitha… Oh My… never expected that bcoz of my ff… u will take such a decision… 😀 😀

      N no doubt Duggu is a great writer… I love the way she writes… 🙂

      No need to be sorry for long comments as ur comment always makes my day… Luv u dear… 🙂 🙂

  9. W_W

    Hey G_S,
    I’m new reader of your FF.. Your story line is awesome and I liked the way you portray every emotion..
    I like Sanskar here who is really naughty, who breathes life to every thing which he comes in contact with, and lively all the time..
    Episode was really great and thanks Sanskriti, only because of you we have got this double update.. 🙂
    Thank you G_S for this wonderful storyline.. 🙂
    Hopefully I’ll meet you in next chappy as I cannot comment on every episode.. So sorry for that 🙁

    Bye,
    W_W.

    • G_S

      Hii W_W…

      Thank u so much dear… I’m glad that u liked my story n the way I have portrayed Sanskaar in a different avatar… 🙂

      N no need to be sorry… Its completely alright if u are not able to comment…!! I would love to have ur comments occasionally…!! 🙂 🙂

      • Thank you so much for understanding dear.. 🙂

        From now on you’ll see my username to be “Sweetie”..

        Stay blessed and be happy.. 🙂

  10. Shree

    I need to say ur story is just amzing.. I started reading ur ff today from the very first episode and the thing is that i completed the whole ff in a single stretch.. Was very much involved and loved each and every swasan scenes.. Plsss try to make longer updates and if u can 2 episodes a day will make me superrrr happy… Keep rocking.. Im simply loving it

    • G_S

      Thank u so much Shree… I’m really honoured to have readers like u…!! Glad that u like my story so much… 🙂 🙂

  11. Crystal

    Your story is Just going amazing….. Loved it…. Not too slow not too fast … Just the best….. I have read it from the start and I think I am commenting for the first time…. I think I was too caught up in the ff I was writing that I forgot to comment ….. But whatever it is …. You are way too good….. Keep writing….. I just love laksh’s character… Amazing …. Obviously Swasan my favourite…. But all the characters are just so perfect….

    • G_S

      Smile… smile… smile… this is all I had while reading ur comment… thank u so much crystal for such lovely complements… I’m really glad that u liked it… 🙂 😀

  12. Aastha

    Sorry sorrrrrryy G_S
    I was busy …. I didn’t switch to TU so didn’t read TMRDH….. and it was a super duper surprise getting back to back episodes…. it is awesome…. very excited what would happen next… and now DP also agreed… loved swara and laksh convo….. I am sure the pink city would spread its colour on our love birds…..!!!!
    Plz update soon …eagerly waiting

    • G_S

      Aastha… again sorry…!! Not accepted…!! (frown… frown)

      n I’m glad to see u back again..!!
      luv u dear… tc.. !! 🙂 🙂

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