TUJH MEIN RAB DIKHTA HAI (Episode 2)

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episode 1
Thanks a lot all of u for such inspiring n lovely complements for my ff… I’m really happy to see dat u all r liking it… So, without delaying much here is d next episode for TMRDH…

Recap: Sanskaar returns from USA n leaves for Himachal Pradesh…

(Note: Frnds I think if I give the characters, a proper figure of any person… then it would be easy for all of u to connect wid dat character… So, here we have Anupam Kher as Sudarshan Baba n Himani Shivpuri as Ganga Maa)…

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Sanskaar preferred to travel by the train instead of the flight as he wants to explore the beautiful scenery of the place… So, finally he reaches there… Palampur… a beautiful town in the foothills of Dhauladhar mountain range in Himachal Pradesh… the town is a spectacular confluence of plains and hills… it has glorious plains on one side and majestic snow covered hills on other side… the breathtaking combination of water and greenery gives the entire place splendid look… Sanskaar gets awestruck on seeing such a beautiful place…

Sanskaar: (gets off the train… removes his shades) Wow… beautiful…!! uuffff Sanskaar… get ready this trip is going to be damn interesting… 😉

Sudarshan Baba (SB) reaches at the station to receive Sanskaar… he is a very simple village man of middle age wearing a white shirt wid blue checks and black trousers… his spects depicts how much understanding n experienced he is…

SB: (recognizes Sanskaar) Chhote Sahab…!!
Sanskaar: (turns) Sudarshan Baba..??
SB: Ji… It’s a pleasure to have u here… 🙂 (Sanskaar smiles) Come let’s go…

Both leave… In the car… SB is driving n Sanskaar is sitting next to him…

SB: By the way, Adarsh sir told me dat u want to hide ur identity… If u don’t mind can I ask u something…??
Sanskaar: Please, uncle … u are elder to me… u don’t need to ask for my permission…
SB: (smiles) I just wanted to ask… is there any special reason for hiding ur true self…??
Sanskaar: (smiles) Actually nothing specific… I just wanted to come out of the Maheshwari empire… I just want sometime for me being myself… 🙂
SB: So, I’m going to introduce u to all as the assistant care taker n for the time being you live here u have to act as the same… Is dat okay wid u…!!
Sanskaar: Perfect… I have no issues except for one thing…
SB: (confused) What’s d problem Chhote Sahab…??
Sanskaar: Exactly… this is my problem… why r u calling me Chhote Sahab n all… Please call me Sanskaar n nothing else…

SB smiles n nods his head… n both of them reach Home Sunshine…

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The Home is a beautiful house divided into two sections… one for old age people n other for orphan children… the entire place is beautifully decorated with different paintings on all the walls… the paintings varied from Mickey Mouse to scenery depicting the beauty of the nature… In the backdrop of the home there is the grand mountain range fully cladded with snow… on one side it has a beautiful river flowing, whereas on the other side it has a plain area which is used as the playground for the children of the orphanage… In one corner there is a small area for the domestic livestock of the home including a dog, some chicken, a parrot n few pigeons…

SB n Sanskaar reach the place… Its almost evening… Ganga Maa (GM) welcomes them…

SB: Chhote Sahab…
Sanskaar: (keeps hands on his ears) What happened Baba… are u saying something…?? I can’t hear anything…
SB: (smiles) Okay… Okay… sorry… Sanskaar… is dat fyn…??
Sanskaar: Awesome… ab kahiye… 😀
SB: Meet her… she is my wife Ganga…
Sanskaar: Namaste Ganga Maa…!!
GM: Namaste beta… Its really nice to have u here… feel urself at home n just ask me if u need anything… 🙂

All smile… SB n GM take Sanskaar to his room… SB n Sanskaar are talking whereas GM brings some snacks… All three spend some talking… Just then a small boy from the orphanage comes running…

Boy: Baba… Baba…
SB: Areyy golu… what happened… why r u running like this…??
Golu: (gets exhausted after running fast) He came again… Satya came again Baba…!!
SB n GM: (together) Whattt….??? :O
SB: N where is she…??
Golu: She is there only… he caught her again…!!
GM: (worried) We should go there fast…!!
SB: Come let’s go… (turns to Sanskaar) Beta… u stay here… we’ll come back soon…

Sanskaar nods but is hell confused as he’s not getting anything what’s happening… but before he could ask anything everyone runs in the direction Golu came from… Sanskaar also decides to go there n runs after them…

Sanskaar sees all of them running to the main hall… he follows them…

He reaches there n finds everything in a great chaos… a rowdy looking like man in his early 30’s is standing in the center of the hall n shouting at Sudarshan Baba…

SB: (angry) Look Satya… I already warned u not to come here…
Satya: And I also told u… just give me what I want… I’ll never come here…!!
SB: (shouts) She is not a thing u are asking for… she’s also a human being… u can’t take her without her consent… n she doesn’t want to go wid u…
Satya: Come on old man… No one dares to says a no to Satya… I always get what I want… n she belongs to me… (he points towards someone)…

Sanskaar moves his gaze towards the direction Satya is pointing n sees Ganga Maa hugging a girl… Sanskaar tries but he could not see her face…

Satya: (shouts) look at me…!!

The girl lifts her head… Now also the only thing Sanskaar could see are her eyes… n he gets awestruck n mesmerized seeing them… those are the most beautiful eyes he has ever seen… her big, beautiful black eyes filled wid tears clearly reflected how much pain she’s going through… Sanskaar stands numb… all he wanted is to go n wipe off all the tears n her pain…

Satya: See… get one thing very clear in ur head… U r mine… okay… What do u want haan…?? After whatever happened wid u, I’m still ready to marry u… I came here also… just for u… And u… U r showing me attitude…

He moves towards her but Sudarshan Baba comes n stands in between them…

Satya: Okay… I’m going right now… but I’ll be back soon… n next time I’ll take u wid me…

He leaves…

SB: (to GM) Take her inside…

Ganga Maa leaves wid the girl… Sudarshan baba comes to Sanskaar…

SB: Beta… u also go n take rest… we’ll talk in the morning… I’ll send ur dinner in your room only…

Sanskaar nods n leaves for his room…

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@ d night…

Sanskaar tries to sleep… but he is very restless remembering her eyes… He keeps on tossing from one side of the bed to the other… finally he gets up n stands near the window…

Sanskaar: (to himself) Why am I so disturbed…?? I have seen so many girls but why am I getting affected so much by her… in fact I haven’t even seen her but still I feel connected wid her pain… n her eyes… those eyes are driving me crazy… OH GOD… what’s happening to me…!!

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Next morning… Sanskaar gets up early as he could hardly sleep last night… he walks out in the balcony of his room… he starts exploring the place… the cool breeze just brushes off his face… a smile spreads on his lips… suddenly, he notices someone… a girl, spreading washed clothes on the ropes for drying… Sanskaar smiles naughtily n goes down…

Sanskaar stands on the one side of the rope whereas the girl stands on the other side wid her back facing towards Sanskaar…

Sanskaar: (calls her) Excuse me…!!

The girl turns… Sanskaar gets shocked on seeing those eyes again… none of them could see each others face because of the clothes in between…

Sanskaar: (chuckles) Areyyy Naina ji…
Girl: (confused) I’m sorry… I think u r mistaking me for some one else…
Sanskaar: No… no… no… I’m talking to u only… actually I don’t know u… but seeing ur beautiful eyes… I concluded that ur name must be Naina… (he starts flirting wid her also)…
Girl: Well in dat case… ur conclusion is wrong… Just tell me if u want something or I’m leaving as I have many other works also…
Sanskaar: No… I don’t want anything but…
Girl: (cuts in between) then I should leave…

She turns to leave… but Sanskaar stops her…

Sanskaar: But at least tell me ur name… or should I continue calling u Naina…
Girl: Do as u wish… :/

N she leaves… Sanskaar stands there n smiles… A little girl from the orphanage named Aarvi notices this…

Aarvi: So, he is also teasing Didi… We must do something… (n she runs to her Bachcha party gang)…

Episode ends…!!

Precap: SB introduces Sanskaar to everyone…

Will Sanskaar get to know the girl…?? Or the Bachcha Party Gang will plan something…??

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Credit to: G_S

35 comments

  1. Shreya

    This was ultimate..! Loved it to the core.. Keep writing
    . God bless uh.. N yeah I too have started with a ff named let’s fall in love.. Do read it n comment .. Really need your support guys..

    • G_S

      Thank u so much Shreya for ur compliment… n I read ur story… its really interesting… waiting for ep 1… 🙂

  2. aditi syam

    Awesome yaar update everyday yaar its a awesome story if possible plzzzzzz update next chapter too plzzzzzzzzzszzzzzZzszsz

  3. superb mindblowing amazing its less i suppose. but you can add good remarks yourself i cant wait for next updload soon.

    • G_S

      Its not at all less ariya… even a single word from my readers means a lot… Thank u so much… 🙂

  4. Hope

    Hai..G_S..chillar party toh sanskar ka kaam bada dega…lol…Ms.Naina is our swara ryt.. What hpd in her past? Don’t reveal soon.coz i love secrets..and waiting to see Sanskar going mad bz of d bacha gang.. C U soon..tc..

    • G_S

      Thank u so much Hope… the mystery girl will be revealed in d next episode… when… how… where… dat u have to wait… n there is still some time left for her past revelation… I hope u’ll like it… 🙂

  5. Hi frnds…
    if ur dat much eager plz visit S&S fanfiction/OS page in fb.. she has uploaded til 14th epi..
    and her examz are nearing so wish hr d bst..

  6. Likhitha

    Arey it is ultimate!!! Superb!!!! I can’t describe what I’m feeling now!!! But ur ff is awsome!! I liked it more than ur other one…that one is also nice…but this is soooooo nice.!!! Though I don’t get much time due to my work and meetings…I somehow take some time out of my schedule to read ur ffs….This episode is ultimate and ur description of that place just made me to love ur ff even more… And finally I want to ask three questions for now!! If u wish to answer please answer them for me… 1) What is ur actual name? 2) Are you connected to the place palampur(that u mentioned) in any way or u visited it before? 3) Where r u from? I mean ur place…

    • Likhitha

      I asked so because I feel u r a South Indian…I’m sorry..U answer them only if u would like to…

      • G_S

        No need to be sorry Likhitha… N I’m really honoured to have readers like u… Thank u so much for such a wonderful complement… n now d answers to ur three questions…

        1) My actual name is Garuna Singh
        2) No I’m not connected to Palampur or Himachal Pradesh in any way… n neither I have visited there or any hill station… whatever I have written is completely out of my imagination… I took d help of net for d location of dat place…
        3) n I’m from Varanasi, Uttar Pradesh (not from South India)… but right now I’m in Lucknow for my studies…

        I hope I have answered all ur questions… n again… no need to be sorry… 🙂

  7. Bhargavi

    I couldn’t stop myself from commenting. It’s just awesome and I loved sanskar characterisation in this ff. Please post the next one soon

  8. zellafarook

    I addicted to ur ff..I wish u could post next episodes in minute no second intervals..just kidding…U..R.AWESOME?

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