TUJH MEIN RAB DIKHTA HAI (Episode 1)

Link to d prologue…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/tujh-mein-rab-dikhta-hai-prologue/

Thank u frnds such a good response to the prologue… so, here is the first episode… I hope u’ll like it…

********** Episode 1 ***********

The plane lands at the airport… a handsome, dashing young man with a sparky personality descends down… that’s our hero Sanskaar… he stands n takes out his glares… every girl who sees him freezes then n there… he smiles n winks at them… 😉

One girl: OMG… he’s so handsome yaar… 😀
Other girl: (excited) He is too cute for me to handle…!!

Sanskaar waves his hands to them in a stylish way n winks at them giving flying kisses…

Adarsh smiles seeing him…

Adarsh: (calls him out) Sanskaaarrrr…!!
Sanskaar: (smiles) Bhai…!!!

Sanskaar goes n hugs him…

Adarsh: How r u…??
Sanskaar: (spreads his arms) Perfectly fit-n-fine… 🙂 😀
Adarsh: Tu kab sudhrega…?? When will u grow up Sanskaar… U started flirting here also…!! :O
Sanskaar: (grins widely) I don’t start it bhai… it just comes naturally…!!! 😀
Adarsh: (leaves a long breath) Who would believe dat u are a business-man… n dat too Businessman of d Year…!!
Sanskaar: (smiles widely 😀 ) Haan toh… where it’s written dat businessmen should be rough-n-tough… always engaged in work… instead they should be cool n chilled… just like me… 😀
Adarsh: Achcha mere baap… understood… come let’s go… Maa must be waiting…

Sanskaar smiles n both of them leave for MM…

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@ d MM…

Everyone is standing at the main door welcoming Sanskaar… Ap is doing d aarti… but Sanskaar just keeps staring at the aarti plate… just in a few moments… he forwards his hand towards the plate in between the aarti… Ap hits on his hand…

Ap: I know Sanskaar… u love ladoo a lot… but at least wait till the aarti gets completed…

Sanskaar makes faces whereas everyone smiles seeing him… Aarti is done n Sanskaar comes in… he touches Dp’s n Ap’s feet and takes their blessings…

Ap: (hugs him) How’s is my son…??? Just look at u… (but she cut in between by Sanskaar)…
Sanskaar: (joins both his hands n says in a pleading tone) Maa… now please don’t say kitna kamzoorr (weak) ho gaya hai… n all dat… 😛
Ap: (hits on his head playfully) Now, u started teasing ur mother… haannn…
Sanskaar: (smiles) Waise… by-the-way Maa… where is she…??
Ap: (smiles) I was thinking only dat why didn’t u asked about her… she is up in her room… waiting for u only…!!! 🙂
Sanskaar: Okay… Okay… I’ll go n meet her… 😀

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Sanskaar enters a room…

Sanskaar: (smiles) Hiiii… s*xyyy…. 😀

A lady is sitting on the bed… on hearing his voice, she turns n smiles looking at him…

Lady: (smiles) Sanskaar… at least sometimes call me DADI… after all I’m ur grand mother… 😛
Sanskaar: (smiles n goes near her… touches her feet) Ya… ya… I know… but I love calling u s*xyyy… after all I have never seen a girl more beautiful, hot n s*xy than my dadi… (n he holds her chin playfully)…
Dadi: Heyy Bhagwan… why don’t u give some brains to him… when will stop ur naughtiness Sanskaar… (Sanskaar smiles n winks at her)… I’m afraid what will happen to ur wife… woh bechari toh pagal hi ho jayegi, iss pagal k saath…!!
Sanskaar: Dadi… dadi… u don’t worry about her… I’ll handle everything… 😛

Dadi smiles on hearing this… both of them spend some time talking with each other… after sometimes Shyam (their servant) enters…

Shyam: Sanskaar bhaiya…
Sanskaar: (in a naughty tone) Jiii Bhaiya…!!!
Shyam: Bade Sahab (Dp) is calling u… Mr. Mehrotra has come to meet u…
Sanskaar: (shocked) Whattt…??? No… no… no… I won’t go… just go n tell him, u didn’t find me…

Shyam gets confused n looks at Dadi…

Dadi: Sanskaar… why r u behaving like dat… just go at least once naa…
Sanskaar: U naa Dadi… Mr. Mehrotra means his daughter… which means Kavitaa… n I seriously can’t tolerate her… she is soo chipkuu n irritating…
Dadi: But she likes u naa Sanskaar…
Sanskaar: But I don’t like her dadi… n there r many girls who like me but all of them don’t come to hug me… n kiss me… (Dadi widens her eyes on hearing this)… Offfoooo Dadi… on cheeks, ofcourse…
Dadi: Then also at least go once…
Sanskaar: (leaves a long breath) Okay… okay… I’m going… :/

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Sanskaar goes downstairs… Kavita runs towards him on seeing him coming down… Sanskaar’s just about to run back but stops on seeing Dp…

Kavita comes running… Sanskaar already knew what’s coming up… so he holds both her hands before she could hug him…

Sanskaar: (holding Kavita’s hands) Hiii… Kavitaaa….!!
Kavita: Hiii Sanskaar… (n she leans again to hug him)…
Sanskaar: (holding her back) How r u…?? (Kavita smiles… n Sanskaar runs away from her… he goes towards Mr. Mehrotra)… Hello Mehrotra uncle…
Mr. Mehrotra: (smiles) Hello Sanskaar… such a pleasure to see u after such a long time… 🙂

Sanskaar smiles… by the time Kavita comes near him again… he runs away again… n goes near Ap who’s arranging d dinner on the dining table… Ap smiles seeing him… Adarsh goes near Sanskaar…

Adarsh: (teases him) What happened Sanskaar… why r u running here n there…???
Sanskaar: (frustrated) Bhai… plzzzz… u also know d reason… 🙁
Adarsh: But I think she likes u… 🙂
Sanskaar: I don’t know Bhai… but she is not my type…!!
Adarsh: Achcha toh what is ur type…??
Sanskaar: (plainly… n eating grapes kept on the table) I don’t know…!!
Adarsh: Seriouslyy Sanskaar…!!! :/

Sanskaar: Really Bhai… I don’t have any particular figure dat she should be like dis or she should be like dat… I just want someone who sets my heart flutter… whose presence is enough to drive me crazy… who understands me… I know I talk a lot, but she should be able to understand my silence also… I don’t know who she is or where I’ll be able to find her… but all I know is she’ll be different from others… very special… very unique… 🙂

Adarsh: (shocked :O ) OMG…OMG…OMG… I never knew dat my brother is such a great lover… u don’t even know who she is… but still I can feel ur love for her… hmmm… not bad haannn… 🙂 😛

Sanskaar smiles… n both d brothers share a cute hug… later Ap calls everyone for dinner…

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Next day…

Dp, Adarsh n Sanskaar r talking about some business deals…

Dp: Sanskaar… I want to talk to u about something…
Sanskaar: Yess papa…
Dp: Yesterday Mr. Mehrotra gave me a proposal… he wants to marry Kavita to you…
Sanskaar: (shocked :O ) Whattt… no papa… I have never felt like dat for Kavita… she is just like a frnd to me… plzz papa I don’t want to marry her…
Dp: I’m not forcing u for anything… it’s completely ur wish… 🙂

Sanskaar gives a fade smile… just then Shyam enters…

Shyam: (gives a file to Adarsh) Adarsh Bhaiya… Pari Bhabhi asked me to give u dis file…
Adarsh: Achcha haan… thank u Shyam… u can go now… (Shyam leaves)

Adarsh: (give d file to Dp) Papa… dis is d file for HOME SUNSHINE…
Sanskaar: (curious) Home Sunshine…??? What’s dat Bhai…??
Dp: It’s an orphanage plus old age home we are running in the Palampur area of Himachal Pradesh… Adarsh is taking care of dat completely…
Sanskaar: Woww… Bhai… but why didn’t u tell me before about dat…??
Adarsh: U were in USA when it started… n I thought of telling u about dat after ur returning back… Actually it’s Home Sunshine’s third anniversary after two months… so, we are planning of keeping a small function for everyone living there…
Sanskaar: Dats a great idea… (thinks about something)… I want to go there…
Dp: Haan we all will go there on the anniversary celebration…
Sanskaar: Not after two months Papa… I want to go now…!!
Adarsh: Now… but why now…??
Sanskaar: I just want a break bhai… I’m fed up of all theses studies n business talks… I just want some time for myself… (in mind)… n moreover I’ll be able to get rid of dis Kavita for at least two months… (to Dp n Adarsh) plzz bhai… plzz papa…

After talking for sometimes… Sanskaar gets the permission… just then Ap enters…

Ap: Where r u going Sanskaar…???
Sanskaar: (extremely happy) Himachal Pradesh…!! 😀
Ap: Whatttt… :O But whyyy…??
Sanskaar: Just for a vacation Maa… plzzz…
Ap: (agrees) Okay… but u’ll go after meeting guruji… he’s coming tomorrow…
Sanskaar: (joins his hands n bows down his head in a playful manner) Okay Meri Maa…!! 😛

Ap smiles n leaves…

Sanskaar: (to Dp) But papa… I want to go there as Sanskaar…
Dp: Haan toh… u r going as Sanskaar only…
Sanskaar: No… no… no… papa… I mean I want to go just as Sanskaar… not as Sanskaar Maheshwari… (Dp n Adarsh confused) Look… they have never seen me… so I want to know how they behave wid any stranger… I don’t want to go there as the owner of dat place… but just as any other normal person…
Dp: (thinks for sometimes) Okay… But only on one condition… Sudarshan n Ganga will know ur identity… there should be at least someone to help u, if u get in any trouble…
Sanskaar: Okayy… agreed… but who r they..??
Adarsh: Sudarshan Baba n Ganga Maa (note: we’ll calling them SB n GM here) are the head care-takers of Home Sunshine… n both r very reliable…
Sanskaar: (super excited) Okay… Okay… thank u… 🙂 😀

He hugs Dp n Adarsh and leaves…

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Next morning…

Sanskaar is preparing all his bags to leave for Himachal Pradesh… Ap enters his room…

Ap: Sanskaar… have u kept all the necessary things…?? Just cross check it once before leaving…
Sanskaar: Okay Maa… n don’t worry I have kept everything… 🙂
Ap: Achcha come now… Guruji has arrived n is waiting for u…

Ap n Sanskaar go downstairs… Guruji sees them coming down…

Guruji: (smiles looking at Sanskaar) Going somewhere…??
Ap: How did u know guruji…??

Sanskaar: Come on Maa… seeing me ready anybody can tell dat I’m going somewhere…
Guruji: Beta… u r going to meet ur destiny on the path u have chosen… (Sanskaar confused… Guruji smiles)… Now, u r going to meet the most important person of ur life… 🙂
Ap: Guruji… plzz tell me something about his marriage…
Guruji: (smiles) He’ll never marry d girl u all have chosen… (Sanskaar give a winning smile)…
Ap: U mean Kavita… if not her, then whom…??
Guruji: He’ll marry the girl he loves…

Ap: (shocked) :O Sanskaarrrr… u already love someone… n u haven’t told me also…
Sanskaar: Nooo Maa… it’s nothing like dat… I don’t have anyone in my life…
Guruji: When did I say dat u have someone in ur life… the girl u’ll fall in love wid, still hasn’t entered ur life… she’ll be entirely different from others… but u need to cross many hurdles to win ur love… ur love itself will not let u come close to her… she’ll try to do every possible thing to avoid u…!!

All r shocked on listening this… whereas Sanskaar gets lost in his own thoughts…

An hour later… Sanskaar leaves for Himachal Pradesh…

Episode ends…!!!

Precap: Sanskaar sees Swara for the first time…

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Frnds… I’m not very sure about dis part… it might be a bit boring as no Swasan here… but I’ll try to make it interesting from the next episode… 🙂 n plzz do tell me are u liking it or not…??

Credit to: G_S

34 comments

  1. Hope

    U know what…u r gr8..i love mileya mileya..and now dis ff..it looks delicious..main toh tumhari jabra fan nahi…AC ban gayi..yaar…

    • G_S

      Thanx a lot Hope for this complement… seriously I don’t myself how many times I have read it… but each time I read it I start laughing… Thanx a lot for such an amazing comment… 😀 😀

  2. G_S … U r an amazing writer .. I read ur ff on fb.. Do post mileya mileya also on fb.. People are going to love it .. Wishing to see ur next part soon

    • G_S

      Thanx a lot Riya for ur appreciating words… n I have already posted complete Mileya Mileya on fb… n I have received tremendous feedbacks from my readers over there… their encouragement n excitement only gave me d idea of writing a new ff n I ended up with Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai… 🙂

  3. Aashi

    Nice start….i loved the sanskaar in your story… Keep writing… I haven’t read your intro!! But a strong feeling that this story is going to be fascinating!!, good effort! Keep going on! ?

    • G_S

      Thank u so much Aashi for ur lovely complement… n u can find the link to d intro (prologue) to this ff at the beginning of this episode only… 🙂

  4. Shreya

    Main teri haye re jabra hate re jabra fan ban gyi.. LOLz.. Uh are amazing .. Uh knw what today I read all the episodes of mileya mileya at a stretch … Oh god ..!! It took me nearly 2 hours to complete them all.. ! But they are amazing.. Loved it.. ! N yeah the date at water park was toooooooooo good.. ! Keep writing.. And post ASAP… 🙂

    • G_S

      Thank u… thank u so much Shreya for such a cute complement… I’m glad dat u like both my stories… 🙂

  5. zellafarook

    Haaaa..pyaaar ki maaa…I am really honored to at least read and enjoy ur ff…really yaar no words..something really different and about the plot its awesome..here Mr the great maheshwari is a cool person…really ..! Something I had thought in my mind u gave it life…super..really awesome…sorry comment inte length koodi poyi…love u yaar..looking forward for something interesting

    • G_S

      Oh my God… Really honored to have such a great complement… Thank u so much dear…. I’ll try my best not to disappoint u…. 🙂

    • G_S

      Navi… so sorry to disappoint u dear… but my exams are going to start… so I won’t be able to give any updates at least till 6th of May… I’ll be posting ep 15 after dat… sorry once again… I hope u understand… 🙂

      • Oh its kk… i cn undrstand….. kk thnk u for info… r else i wil b checking daily for ur update….
        ALL THE BEST for ur xamz G_S..
        rock it..

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    • G_S

      Thanx a lot sameera… I’m glad u liked it… n d ep 2 has already been posted… I hope u’ll like it… 🙂

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