TU MERI MANNAT by bhanu-part5


thankyou so my for ur overwhelmed response here we go with part-5
********episode starts*****
scence 1; afternoon 4pm m&m hospital swaragini in one room
ragini;u know swara today evg 6 we are going out
swara;we where we are going?
ragini:i dont know. lucky & sanky told mee get ready by 6pm
swara;(confused)i was not interested i had work
ragini; plz come na its an important day for mee so plz come na plz plz plz
swara;(she thinks wt sanskar is doing )ok i will
scence2 lakshya room
sanskar;are u sure ur going to propose ragini bhai
laksya;ha i was sure she loves mee alottttt

sanskar;(excitingly)how u know that she loves u ,she had never told na
lakshya;she never told but her eyes speaks everything,the care she gives,her tears went i got hurted says as everything
sanskar;(he thinks of swara nd in mind)i think swara had feelings for mee y cant i express my feeling too
laksya;bhai wt are u think did u fallen in love na?(winking at him)
sanskar;(confusedly)no bhai but y u got that doubt
laksya:i know u are in love but dont do late to express her if u do late she my go away from u forever
sanskar;(in mind)i should express swara wt i feel today any how }
bhai cu evg (he leaves)
evg 6pm mumbai beach
both swasan nd raglak are happy to see such a pleasant environment

lakshya;ragini can u join mee for some time(he takes her nd swasan left alone)
sanskar;swara did u had a boy frnd
swara;(shocked)wt .no i was not interested in such things
sanskar;acha if a handsome boy like me comes nd falls on knees nd proposes u will u accept
swara:(shocked nd confused)i will see when he do so but it never happens
sanskar;(takes a rose from his blazer nd sits on his knee )swara i wanted to say this 2yrs back but u had not given a chance,now I was expressing
I wanna spend my entire life with u ,
i wanna fight withyou
i wanna be reason for ur smile
i cant live without u .the 2yrs showed mee wt u mean for mee
ur my life swara,

will u be mine forever nd ever swara ans mee
swara:(damm shocked tears roll from her eyes about to accept but she remembers the sanskar words spoken with kavitha nd turns a side)no mr. sanskar i dont have such feelings towards u
sanskar:(shocked)look at mee swara i really love you from my childhood only u
swara;i am sry i dont have any such feeling u nd mee frnds 2yrs back but now ur just my client nd i was ur company auditor thats it (she runs from there towards her car nd cries)
sanskar;(completely shocked nd broken down fallen on sand nd cried by shouting) i love u plz trust me swara

background song
Agar Tum Saath Ho Lyrics
Pal bhar thahar jaao
Dil ye sambhal jaaye
Kaise tumhe roka karun
Meri taraf aata har gham phisal jaaye
Aankhon mein tum ko bharun
Bin bole baatein tumse karun
‘gar tum saath ho..
Agar tum saath ho
Behti rehti..
Nahar nadiya si teri duniya mein
Meri duniya hai teri chaahaton mein
Main dhal jaati hoon teri aadaton mein
‘gar tum saath ho
Teri nazron mein hai tere sapne
Tere sapno mein hai naraazi
Mujhe lagta hai ke baatein dil ki
Hoti lafzon ki dhokebaazi
Tum saath ho ya na ho kya fark hai
Bedard thi zindagi bedard hai
Agar tum saath ho
Agar tum saath ho
raglak on other side
lakshya;(on his knees with a ring in his hand) ragini , from my childhood i only dreamed about u
ur my life
ur my soul

ur my everything,without u i was incomplete
ragini;(excited nd happy)ha laksya I LOVE YOU TOO
lakshya;(he puts the ring nd hugs her tight)ilove you rags today is the beautiful day of my life
ragini;(hugs him back)i love you to ur my life lucky
background song
Paaya Maine, Paaya Tumhe, Rab Ne Milaya Tumhe,
Honthon Pe Sajaya Tumhe, Nag Mein Sagaya Tumhe
Paaya Maine, Paaya Tumhe, Sab Se Chupaya Tumhe,
Sapna Banaya Tumhe, Neendhon Mein Bulaya Tumhe.
Tum Jo Aaye Zindagi Mein Baat Ban Gayi
Ishq Mazhab, Ishq Meri Zaat Ban Gayi
swara ;(in car crying bitterly )sanskar i love you sanskar but i cant accept as i cant forget wt had seen

swara nd kavitha are classmates nd they both used to have combine studies ,kavitha is not a rich kid as swara so she used to study on scholarship her parents are so poor they used to work hard
in swaras mansion nd kavitha used to have crush on sanskar so she is always interested in sanskar more then studies nd sanskar know that but he dont have any feelings towards kavitha but he used to flirt with her to irritate swara nd oneday sanskar called kavitha nd asked her to come to his mansion as there are no one in his mm so he cant speak to her
kavitha;(called swara)hi swara u know today sanskar had asked me to come to mansion by ngt 7 ,he told me he wants to speak to mee personally i was very excited
swara;(angrily she know sanskar is alone in mansion)wt are u serious? kavitha
kavitha;ha i was going i need to get ready(cuts the call)
its 8pm
swara;(restless thinking in mind) wts happing wt he want to say to her let me go nd see (her ph ring it dp)
dp;hello beta i want to speak to sanskar i was calling him from hour but he is not answering is he with u
swara;woh woh no uncle he is in his room only
dp;u plz go nd give a video call fast
swara;ha uncle(she take her mobile nd leaves to sanskars room )
she dos video call dp without seeing sanskar

swara;(hell shocked to see sanskar in such close to kavitha stood as a statue near the door
sanskar;(holds kavitha romantically on her shoulders)kavitha u know ur really hot ,i dont know, y i had not relised it before
kavitha;(nervours)sanskarr its not been late u can love mee now also
sanskar;(winks at her)achaa i dont belive on this love, relationships must be short nd sweet u know
kavitha;wt does it mean sanskar u love me or not
sanskar;(comes close to her) ha i love ur beauty alot see there is no one in my mm just u nd mee we can have lot of fun her
kavitha;(shocked)sanskar wt are u speaking do u know wt u mean
sanskar;(starts unbuttoning his shirt )ha kavitha i like ur beauty nd u like me then y all this time waste we can have great time in this night (he pulls her towards him)
kavitha:(shocked nd pushed him)i was not that kind sanskar i know ur also not such cheap swara told mee u dont have a girlfrnd too from ur childhood
sanskar:(smiles evily)swara she is a kid nd who will say such things openly if my family knows wt they think haa,nd i have lot of affair if u want i will give there numbers too
He shows some selfies
kavitha;(hell shocked tears roll from her eyes)no sanskar i thought ur a royal person but i am wrong
sanskar(teasingly moves close to her )acha am i told u i am a good boy i am a bad boy u know dont worry i will not leave u for once only we can continue our relation in same way i will never say this to anyone u too keep quite (nd leans to kiss her by holding her waist)
kavitha:(cries pushes him ) u such a cheap person ,i am wrong

sanskar i hate u sanskar nd never show ur face to mee(nd she runs nd sees swara near the door nd hugs her)ur correct swara he is not a correct person to mee(kavitha leaves from there)
swara;(damm shocked tears roll from her eyes )
sanskar:(shocked to see swara bottons his shirt)swara woh wt u had seen is not true swara its a prank
swara;(swara slaps him hard nd holded his collar )sanskar how dare u to speak such cheap with a girl i had thought u r not serious in ur life its just for fun but ur life is such a fun ,how can u sanskar ,i thought u do all things just to irritate me but i never thought that ur such a cheap person its disgusting sanskar i hate u,u such a liar,such a flirt (she runs from there)
dp had seen everything in video call nd ends the call nd rushed to mm

precap;fb continues nd raglak nd swasan in party ,sanskar jelous nd swara gets this sideeffect

i am so sry if u feel bad for adding kavitha in my track but its so short nd she is positive person i dont wanna make anyone negative so trying hard to build it sorry for inconvenience.please share ur views about this ff as it my 1st ff i was very excited to know

Credit to: bhanu chowadry

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  1. Awesome …

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  3. awesome dear……..

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  4. nice yarrr…

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  5. nice but i want someobe else for swara..

    1. I did not get u angel

  6. Awsm part

  7. Really its awesome plss upload next one soon

  8. its really nice…

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