TU MERI MANNAT BY BHANU PART-75

*****#TU_MERI_MANNAT PART-75*********

~~~~~~~~~#BHANU

(thanks alot for response nd nextly ur feeling that in this whole world this girl got jail only ah for romance πŸ˜‰ sry ah but i had no time so added such thrilling part now start the ff )

recap; sathvik reentry nd swasan break down

**********episode starts ***********
maheswari mansion

Swara came to mansion she left directly to there room she left to washroom nd locked the door nd stood under shower she is crying badly by rembering all the incidents happened in one dayy all her dreams got faded out

she had fallen down on knees nd crying under shower by hugging her knees

suddenly her ph rings swara shivered by the ring she is sure its sathvik

she grabbed the ph from her pocket nd answered the call

sathvik; hi swara wt ur doing darling

swara; (gulped in fear she did not answer anything just crying

sathvik; (heard the sound of shower ) oh ur under shower shall i come for company

swara ; (felt disgusting ) hold ur tongue don’t you dare to think of such things i belong to sanskar only sanskar (she pressed the name twice )

sathvik; (ragged in angry ) shuu dont you dare to raise ur voice ok its my time swara

i can do anything or say anything nd you cant stop mee you remembered my condition naa or else shall i remain by killing ur love

swara; (scared out )noo sathvik plz noo

sathvik; be a gud girl swara you know two months back an accident happened in ur site na its not accident its my our plan to kill sanskar but he missed this time i wont miss

swara ; (crying badly ) no sathvik plz dont do anything plz

sathvik; shuuu dont cry baby save some tears for tomorrow nd dont act smart ok i had my men around ur sanskar nd ur lovely family too

swara; (pleasing him in tears ) plz stop all this plz i will do wat ever you want but dont harm my sanskar or family plz

wt ever angry revenge u have u show on me not on my family

sathvik ;(evil smirk) thats like gud girl tomorrow evg 6 hotel key come fast ok i will be waiting (ended the call )

swara ; crying badly by crushing her faith

” how can you swara how can you do this

You have ntg left now you need to save ur love

I should be only for sanskar ND you need to give his right first

Swara took a shower

ND dressed her self in blue jeans ND pink formal shirt ND she wrapped a beautiful pink scarf around her neck ND she took 2laks from her locker came out of room

Ap: Swara where ur going now

Swara: Woh maa I had some office important work so I will be with Kavitha whole ngt

Ap: Really you had work

Swara:( nodded fadely)

Ap: Ok swara you don’t need to answer mme but remember this here we all will be waiting for you

Swara gulped her tears ND pain ND left out by grabbing her key

ND left to police station

POLICE STATION

swara got in there us only two constables ND the inspector

Swara: Sir I need to speak something personal so plz can you come out

Inspector seen asides ND left out to swara

Swara: I need ur help

Inspector: Wt can I do my whole family is in danger

Swara: Dont worry they will be save ND can you sent sanskar out

Inspector: Nooo its impossible if he knows he will kill my family

Swara: Ok I had a other option

Inspector: Wt

Swara: Arrest mee too

Inspector is shocked ” wttt

Swara: Yes arrest me for thus one ngt I wanna be with my husband plz

Inspector: Ok but

Swara: But wt kuch nahi do it I say ( she gave one lakh rupees)
Inspector: No I dont need money

Swara: Oh really but ppl beside you need it so have it ND help nee now

Inspector : Ok I will manage come inside after 10mins

Meanwhile inspector left in nd managed everything ND swara entered inspector took swara to the Vip cell where sanskar been opened the lock ND sended swara in

Swara: Thank you so much

Inspector: Its ok sister I will come in mrg 7 still then noone will come this side all cameras in entire are off to

Swara: Thanks alot bhai

inside the cell

(guys its a V IP CELL its full luxurious its covered up room only the bars are visible its only way to look inside perfect bed an water cooler nd attached bathroom too its all avaliable really if ur excited to nd see i seen once for thrill as my uncle is police officer money can buy anything but not life,happiness nd relation )

Inspector left sanskar is shocked to see swara in jail

Sanskar: Swara ur inside the jail y u got arrested oh no inspector ( he shouted out )
Sir plz listen she is innocent y u arrested her

No one are there to listen him on swasan are alone in a VIP cell

Swara trying to stop ” arey sanskar wait ”

Sanskar is freaked out he didn’t wanna listen” y u arrested swaraaaa ”

Swara pulled him ND gave a peck on his lips by shock sanskar lost his words

Swara: Omg patidev u got melted finally

Sanskar: Swara wt ur doing here y ur in jail

Swara: Where ever ur are its my place too hubby do I followed

Sanskar ; really but its not gud go out

Swara: No still tomorrow morning I wont go

( she moved close to sanskar )

Sanskar moved back ” swara we are in jail someone may see as ”

Swara: Oh really wait ( she removed her scarf ND tied it to bars of cell by covering it completely )

Now its ok na no one can see

Sanskar: Wt are you got crazy how your behaving so happy like this ntg happened

Swara: Wt happened now ah ntg every thing will be fine by tomorrow evening

Sanskar sat of floor in tears ” no ntg will change

Swara : No my love I will change everything

Sanskar: But how

Swara: ( in mind) I cant say you sanskar really I dont know wt is gonna happen may I leave or not also so I wanna live a life in this one ngt only

Sanskar: See even you don’t have a answer

Swara: Ha may I not have but I will

Sanskar silently nodded

Swara anyway its amazing plz more thrilling too

Nice bed air cooler an celling fan gud mattress comfortable
Water filter ND its like a royal suit my love

Sanskar was shocked by her causal talk how could she react so normal in such hard times

Swara: Answer na hubby

Sanskar: How can you be so normal swara

swara you now wt its more costly then a presidential suit i paid on lakh for one ngt

sanskar is hell shocked wt you pay money to get arrested also are you crazy

swara; ha where ever ur are i will follow ur my hubby na i am scared to live alone in our room

sanskar; oh noo ur really mad

Swara: Hmm hoo its really hot ( by saying this she removed her shirt she had t- shirt inside οΏ½ πŸ˜‰

Sanskar was hell shocked he is strucked to see swara

Sanskar:( he got up with a jerk ) Wt ur doing

Swara: Ntg patidev casually ( she walked towards him where as sanskar took few steps back he hitted the bars of cell

Swara: ( she came close to sanskar) y ur moving back I am ur wife sanskar

Sanskar: Ha ur my wife but plz not now ur provoking me I cant control nor I am in mood of romance too

Swara: Who said you too control

Sanskar: ( shocked) swara its not a place for romance

Swara: Oh really Pati dev but you know once my love said that ” there is no specific place for romance its just chance ”

Sanskar : Is shocked by her answer) swara are you serious

Swara : Removed her belt ND threw it on floor ND moved towards sanskar
Sanskar just gulped he is unable to control he just gripped the bars of cell

Swara moved close to him ND placed her hand on sanskar jeans its still wet ” Ho u had not even changed the dress also na I got it change ”

Sanskar : Wt now ah noo

Swara: I am ur wife only na sanskar ( she just unpinned his belt)

Sanskar pushed her back ” hoo hello wt ur doing yar I am dying here stay away Plz

Swara:( laughed out aloud ) sanskar y ur dying to control do whatever you want

Sanskar: (pleasigly ) Swara Its not right place or time to decide that Plz go ND sleep

Swara : Sanskar I had decided this we will take our relationship to next level right now

Sanskar double shocked he opened his mouth ‘o’

Swara moved close she removed his hand on the bars ND placed it on her waist

Sanskar is just staring her in confusion

Swara pulled him down ND stood up on her toe’s ND moved close to kiss him

Swara captured his rough lips where as sanskar is shocked by shocked by her sudden act
He did not react for kiss

Swara pulled him close towards her and again gave a peck on his lips ND swara landed on foot

She about to move back but stopped bcoz this time sanskar tightened his grip on her waist he lifted her in by pulling towards him ND kissed her back swara is a strong ND wild kiss swara to reciprocate it

Sanskar hitted ND sucked her lips but swara did not react any thing she is quite. Which made sanskar shock he broken the kiss when he felt he need oxygen πŸ˜‰

They both stared each other while breathing heavily

Sanskar could clearly witness in her eyes that she is been crying from mrg her eyes are red due to tears he could see the love she had for him
She is feeling his pain

Sanskar took swara on his arms ND placed her on bed romantically ND kissed her on forhead nd covered her with bed sheet ND about to leave

But swara held his hand ” sanskar Plz don’t goo I need you ”

She whispered in tears

Sanskar : Swara I am here only I won’t go anywhere

Swara: No not today sanskar I don’t wanna postpone this again

Sanskar πŸ™ confused y she is feeling so ) really u think so swara

Swara: Ha

Sanskar lied beside her on the bed ND moved towards swara ” swara you know wt we will do it but after our relies from jail

Swara: Noo y not today

Sanskar: Its so painful so I am saying you cant handle

Swara: I am ready to bear any pain for you sanskar

Sanskar is shocked confused οΏ½ he us getting mixed feelings he don’t know wt to doo now

Sanskar (monologue) let me start this kiddo will fall in starting only then she will sleep

Sanskar: You can bear let mee see how far you will

he went near her And cups her face and pecks her forehead romantically while caressing her back

Sanskar removed his shirt ND came on top off her ND kissed her lips its so hard he bitted her lips

Swara :(moaned) sanskarrr

which had even started bleeding too but she did not stopped him

Swara smiles in the kiss and reciprocate equal to his passion.

Sanskar after a while he broken the kiss ND stared at her by expecting that she could take step back

But swara is so stubborn now

Swara kissed him again

Sanskar understood wt she is upto so he carried on further

Sanskar removed her shirt ( she had another sleeveless tshirt

sanskar started giving wet kiss on her bare shoulder.swara shivers bcoz of his touch

Sanskar is caressing her back both lot in kiss

Swara pulled back when she is out of breath

Sanskar is un controllable now he kissed her neck sensuously.while his hands are exploring her bare back inside her shirt

Swara digged her nails on his bare shoulders out of pleasure

Sanskar about to move her shirt but sanskar wannted to ask her again

Swara: Sanskar i wanna live a life in this one ngt make me urs sanskar

Sanskar is speechless by her confession he covered themselves with a thin bed sheet completely he removed her shirt ND throwed it aside

Sanskar could clearly see her without any barriers

Swara could feel his gaze on her she hugged him by feeling shy

Sanskar made her lie
Then he slowly caresses her waist while giving open mouth kisses on her nape
back ND kissed her neck sensuously by caressing her body

Swara slides her hand around his neck

sanskar kissed her every inch ND inch

Swara rolled over on him and started romancing him While giving love bits in his body and passes wet kiss sanskar is shocked to see her this shade he is enjoying

He travelled to down towards her navel ND kissed her while placing wet kisses on her swara clushed his hair

Sanskar unhooked her jeans ND caressed her bare legs ND kissed her

Swara pulled him top nd kissed him on his chest she bitted his collar bone

Sanskar couldn’t resist anymore he again came on her top ND he removed his wet jeans ND trowed it a side

Both are naked sanskar in nick of tum enired her

Swara cried out in pain tears just rolled out

Sanskar looked at her for a while

Sanskar: Shall I stop swaranodded noo in tears ” noo I want you to be first ND last person to tounch me sanskar

Sanskar he kissed her continuously to suppress her pain ND shout too

ND finally sanskar landed beside her he is so happy

They even forgot that they are in jail its like heaven for them

Sanskar: I love you swara

Swara: I( semi-conscious) I love you more sanskar

You know Ho much I love even If i die I will again born to get u ❀

Sanskar: Noo I cant live without you we will die together swara if soo

Swara : Noo sanskar some ppl cant live long

Sanskar : Ur all mine only mine I wont let anyone harm you nor touch you

Swara did not answer him

Sanskar bitted her nape ” say me that ur mine

Swara still did not answer him

Sanskar angry is building up he is very possessive of her he bitted her lips wildly he came on top of her ND again he started teasing her with his rough kisses

Swara is accepting everything she is speechless

Sanskar kissed her again nd again again this time its hard he is rough swara even could not breath by his force

Sanskar whispered ” ur mine swara

Swara whispered ha everything is urs my love my hubby my soul mate my life

Sanskar : Happy he is fully satisfied he just fallen on her ND slept by hugging her tight like a child that he don’t wanna lose her even for second

Swara smiled at him

Swara( monologue) I am sorry sanskar i don’t know wt tomorrow is nd it will be worst nd last day of my life i am leaving you forever sanskar forever
but one think lasts that is my love i love you sanskar ur my life

tu meri mannat ho ,hai hamasha rahegi

After marking their love to each other by crossing lot of barriers swara too fallen asleep after crying a lot

*************to be continued *******

Precap:sathvik cruelty nd finally swara commit’s suicide :'( :'(

Its last but one part so plz break ur silence ND if so if I get perfect response I will come back with new ff orelse I will quite writing

Keep reading ND keep supporting πŸ™‚

#BHANU

44 comments

  1. Ridhima

    |Registered Member

    Wait what…??😱😱😱…. swara suicide…😱😱… i didnt expect this…. waiting for nxt chapter…. but yes loved the romance in jailπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚…..
    awesome chappy… waiting for the last one

  2. ani

    Awesome dear bt what 😱😱😱😨😨😨swara commit’s suicide noooooooo plz dear don’t separate them plzzzz its request

  3. Simin

    What last part are u kidding
    if this is a joke then let me tell u its not funny at all ok
    Regarding precap i am horrified plz dont do this plz save swara sanskar will die without her plz save her from that devil plz plz plzzzzzz

  4. chanu

    wt????
    nxt epi ws last epi???
    and wt ws in da precap?
    oh no…
    plz dnt do dat. plz plz i beg u.
    dnt do dis 2 swasan.
    they need 2 live hply ever after.
    and dnt do anytng 2 swara plz. kill dat sathvik b4 he do anytng 2 swara. plz yaar.

    whill reading swaras dialogs i felt like u gonna do like dis. hey dude plz no no.
    ;(
    sad endings r prohibitated dr banu.
    πŸ˜‰
    and dnt make swara as a victam.

    nice epi dr.
    i rly lv their lv 2wrd each other.

    keep writing
    be happy always
    lv ya

  5. Vaikha

    |Registered Member

    Ooh noo.. This was one of my favourite ff.. But now i just hate it.. Dont feel bad but sorry to say by reading ur precap i just felt that i wasted my time reading all ur episodes till now.. Sathvik was such a crap from beginning and atlast u are making him win by all means.. It’s just disgusting.. Evil win over good.. Dont convey such damn msgs.. Why don’t a woman fight for her justice and make her love win.. Is it that impossible.. Always men need to win and women need to be mentally or s*xually abused.. Just cut all such craps and think something positive.. Im sorry if i hurted u but still need to say if what u mentioned in ur precap is whats gonna happen then this would be just a piece of shit in my mind.. From my most favourite to trash.. Simple as that

    • bhanu

      Ohh I am sry if you feel so plz have patience dear read next completely nd then say me wt is it

      ND coming to point of bad nd evilness it exists in our world lot of girls are suffering lets see may swara kill sathvik before she do so who knows wt next

      ND thanks for comment

  6. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    “Bhanuu !!! plzzz don’t doo that … plzzz !!! “*i”ll never say all this…

    Coz i know u will never let anything happen to Swara … no suicide.. no separation …
    only blessfull ending…

    TU MERI MANNAT without each other where is tu ,, mai n hamari mannat…
    *Talking about only sad moments–
    u gave us lots of painful moments,, separation ,, emotional moments ,, but what u wrote in precap is beyond all this…
    if this happens who will trust in love,,unnka pyar haar jayega,, unki mannat tut jayegi… no one will believe in love .. specially i won’t…
    Sooo plzzzz think once more time dear … rest is in ur hand… thnk u…

    If i heart u sorry … :-‘

  7. Ashok

    Hi bhanu. This the 1sr time i’m commenting. Really awesome chapter. But swara’s suicide isn’t a perfect end for this story nd I believe even u won’t give such a end. I’m saying so because the way u built swara character doesn’t say she will accept defeat so soon.
    So waiting for ur next chapter eagerly nd to see how u end this story.

  8. xavia

    Heyyy it wz superb….bt wait wait wt uh said swara z gonna suicide nooooo plz don’t do ds……..punish dat rascal nt dez love birds…plz na uh r writer na uh cn chng d plot…pijjjjjjj (puppy eyes)…

  9. akshu

    No need of sucide yaar since its gng to be ur last episode plzz yar give a hapiee ending……u change the story and continue…..make police to help her better u kill sathvik and make swasan life hapieee plzzzz its my request…….and plz dnt end tis yaar….continue

  10. s

    nice one..bt dont do dis..swara is a smart girl..she will find a way out of it..punish sathvik..its one of d best ffs..plz dont do dis..

  11. Dhara

    |Registered Member

    Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz no. Don’t separate swasan. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    Plz save Swara and unite SWASAN

  12. Aish

    Bhanu please don’t do that don’t separate them . I am saying this because I don’t want sathvik to win .It will be bad over gud . Please show Swara strong.

  13. Vyshu10

    |Registered Member

    awesome…..swasan became one in all senses…..bt precap is so scary yaar…..suicide???No plz don’t this to us. U r ending dis ff…..this is one of my fav ffs……i ll miss it so much. And don’t quit writing plz

  14. Rain_Lightwood

    |Registered Member

    WTF! SUICIDE! OK FINE LEMME JUST SAY SOMETHING I AM FULLY AGAINST THAT CONCEPT. SUICIDE IS SERIOUSLY NOT A JOKE. WHY R U KILLING SWARA? KILL SATHVIK! KILL SATHVIK! KILL SATHVIK! KILL SATHVIK! KILLLLLL SATHVIKKKKKKK! PLS DO NOT KILL SWARA OR SANSKAR! PLSSSSS BHANUUUUUUUU!

    EPISODE WAS AMAZING BUT PWEASE DONT KILL SWARA. KILL SATHVIK!!!!!!!!

  15. Rock Leon

    The chappy was totally amazing!
    But the precapwas not at all good
    Plzzz ddon’t do this plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz don’t separate swasan !

  16. nehasuhana

    Bhanu dear don’t do that dear pls I think swara kill satwik but this precap I can’t bear it pleads u don’t allow anyone to touch swara other than sanky pls yaar

  17. Romaisa

    Wow loved it but plz don’t kill swara and seperate swasan plz kill that bl**dy sathvik plz don’t kill swara and I’m gonna miss this ff a lot because it’s one of my fav ff❀️❀️

  18. Asmaara

    |Registered Member

    Nice yai mera first ff tha jis sy mai ny ff reading start ke is k first part sy mai ny read kea latterly I am crying sitf soch k yai second last part hai yai ff mery dil k boht kareeb hai waja nahe bata sakti buy cheez ek na ek din khatam honi hai

  19. Jay

    Hey bhanu i know u bring this suicide atmept but pls unite the love birds

    I want say some think pls make inspector to help this

    As earlier friend said dont make female have weak wat i want to say make swara fight her problem kill that bastards like sathvik and amar both should get punished

  20. Prakriti19

    |Registered Member

    Hi Bhanu Di…
    Commenting after a long time…What to do..I was stuck in Exams…Oh God, Swara is going to sucide…I am not angry with you for that…I know you will do something and you will give us a happy ending…This is what I hope…
    Bye di and Love u

  21. Swara Kapoor

    Can someone plzzz explain me that has this ff ended?????? If yess then how can it end in such a situation???? If no then why its not updated??? It has been so many days. Or has Bhanu started a new ff with the continuation of this current track??

    By the way this episode was Fab Fab Fab Fab Fabulous. Tooooooo romantic my god. Too s*xy and hot. Mazaa aa gaya bhanu. Superb. I wish that ye same track swaragini serial mein bhi hota…..Loads of love to youβ™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯

    • BHANU

      |Author

      thanks alot dear last part left i will post now just an hr u will found it nd
      dont worry i will be back soon with other story

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