Tu jo Mila sab Mil Gaya Mere rehnuma (prologue)

Hi guys this is Anah back with new stuff i hope u like it…
Rainy season….,
Delhi…
Night….
Rain flowing…
Saint Mary Orphanage…,
All sleep peacefully…,

Suddenly one girls shouts…
Billujiiii!!!!
Mother comes…,
Mo:alya r u ok???
Al:yes mother…i am ok…
Mo:again same nightmare..
Al:haan mother…
Mo:who is Billu?!!
Al:i don’t know mother…
Mo:this time is u saw his face…
Al:no mother..
Mo:no problem…that’s ur past maybe u should meet him..when u find ur past….now sleep my child…

Morning…!!!
Alyaaaa!!!!!
Mother shout…!!
Al:i am coming mother….
Mo:alya u got job from Oberoi industries…,Mumbai..
Ani:Mumbai!!??..
Mo:yes…
Ani:no i can’t go from here..plz mother
Mo:alya..u should move on..no one can here for always..it was great opportunity..get ready..

In Mumbai..,
Oberoi Mansion,
Dadi prays god…,
Dadi:i don’t know..what bad i did.
U giving this punishment..
Pinky:aapne anika ko jeen kar humari khushi jeen liya…

Shivaay room…,
Shivaay stands in front of anika picture with gnarled…
Shi:i just leave me all alone… just take my everything with u..
Everything!!!!
He just started breaking things..
Blood started oozing shivaay hands…
Om comes…
Om:shivaay r u out of mind…
Don’t behave like mad…
Shivaay hug him and cry uncontrollably…!!!
Rudr looks on…

Kindly ignore grammatical mistakes….

So guys how is it….shall i continue or not….this is new version of ishqbaaz….plz drop ur views…