My True Love…Twinkle……Os

hellooooo guys… ritzi here… as i told u all be4 tht my mom is not well nd ri8 now she is in the operation theatre nd the doctors told tht the operation will last for 3 hrs so jst to keep away frm stress i m writing an os… i hope u will like it.

Let my 1st os begin…..

A big mansion is shown… fully decorated frm outside… seems like it was a high class wedding… chalo lets peep into the house

oh my god! the mansion is not less then heaven…. its soooo beautifully decorated.. wowwww….

the pheras r going on.. nd everyone is looking so happy..
no no wait wait not everyone…. a boy standing at the back of the crowd is in tears… the tears doesnt look like the tears of happiness… it seems he is sufferimg through a big pain…
lets go a bit far….. oh its our lead…. kunj sarna!!! what must have happened to him… lets ask!

….. KUNJ’S POV……
why did u do this to me…… u knew that i loved u like mad…. actually we loved eo madly…. then why… why did u broke my trust…. why did u broke my heart… why did u broke me….. whatever it is i will always love u…………………………………….. Sanaya
…. POV ENDS….

(hehe guys…. be honest…. kitno a popat hua…. kitnone socha tht the bride must be twinkle ?)

pandit ji: vivah sampann hua (marriage is over)

hearing this kunj was not able to tolerate the pain…. he was not able to stop his tears… so he quickly drove to his house….. went in his room nd started crying

K: why sanaya…. why!!

hey guys sorry but we hv to leave kunj alone for smtym as he is feeling a bit awkward abt crying in frnt of us… so lets go out…. now lets see wht happened to tht bride……

oh we r late…. all guests r gone… no no not all… one boy is still left… he seemed to be a bit worried… he is calling sm1 continously but seems tht the person is not answering his calls

jst then a little boy came nd gave a chocolate to tht worried person

little boy: its for u… uv bhaiya!

oh so its uv.. ahaann

uv bends down nd takes the chocolate

Uv: thanks beta!

the boy goes

……. UV’S POV……

oh god…. ye kunj call kyu nhi utha rha hai…. i knw its difficult for him to digest the fact tht his gf is no more his…. she is married now… but i m afraid he doesnt do anything wrong to himself…. oh god… pls take care of my bestie cum bro…. i think he must have went home… but his family is in london ri8 now… i should rush now… be4 he does smthing… no no… everything will be gud
….. POV ENDS…..

uv rushes to sarna mansion….. to his surprise the door of the house was open.

Uv:(shouting…. in hall) kunj! kunj! where r u… kunj! r u there

but no response….. he quickly ran upstairs to his room… it was locked

Uv:(knocking) kunj…. kunj.. open the door yaar… kunj!…. ru alright… hey r u in the washroom… kunj….. kunj reply god damn it!

aftr abt five mins

…… UV’S POV…….

its past 5 mins nd i m knocking the door… but still he is not replying… my heart beat was increasing….. there was a rush of adrenaline frm my spinal cord to toes… oh god… i had no other option but to break the door…. aftr abt bashing with the door 6-7 times the door broke nd i went in with a force due to door break……… when i say kunj…. oh shit! o shit! my bad thoughts came true…. he was lying on his bed with rushing blood on his left wrist nd a knife on his ri8 hand…. i was srsly blank…. not knowing wht to do….. aftr calming myself down i rush to the hospital with kunj…. he was on the stratcher… he was breathing heavily nd was continuously chanting sanay’s name… i hate tht bi*ch man!

….. POV ENDS….

its past an hour nd uv is waiting outside the operation theatre

jst then doctor cms out… uv quickly stands up

uv: do… doctor… how is kunj… is he fine

doctor kept hand on his shoulder

Doc: mr. yuvraj i want to talk smthing imp…. see u at my cabin

doctor goes… uv quickly runs to his cabin

Uv: doctor… how is kunj is he fine?

D: pls sit down

uv sits

Uv: doctor pls tell whts the matter

D: its nothing to worry mr.yuvraj…. paitient is all fine… actually… i would say luckily tht his nerve did not got damaged…. as the cut was jst an cm away frm the nerve

uv gets relieved

D: but mr. yuvraj u will hv to say wht made him do suicide… bcus its the part of our treatment

Uv: yaa sure…. actually he was in love with a girl named sanaya…. they both were in relationship since 3 yrs but as soon as sanaya found a more wealthier guy… she got married to him… leaving kunj in depression as he did true love to her

D: in that case… mr yuvraj…take this

he gives him a card

Uv: wht… wht is this doctor

D: its the visiting card of amritsar’s or should i say punjab’s best psychaitrist……. look u will have to convience mr. kunj to take sessions frm her… bcus he has gone into a severe depression nd if he will not be able to overcm tht depression then it can damage his brain badly….. nd wht to say abt this psychaitrist…. she is the best doctor… she will not treat him like a patient or will make him feel as she was his doctor…. she will treat him as a frnd

Uv: she!

Doctor: ya… she!

they both laugh a bit

Uv: ok doctor… i will convience kunj…. can i meet him

D: oh ya ya… y nt… he is all fine… nd ya should i fix his appointment for tomorrow?

Uv: ya doctor… i will convience him for sure… dont worry u fix tomorrow’s appointment

uv leaves nd goes to kunj’s room…. he was lying there all lifeless… tears were not stopping only

Uv thinks: he really needs a psychaitrist

Uv: hey bro!…….. ouch!

hehe… u all must be thinking why this ‘ouch’ its bcus kunj jst threw a pillow on him

K: saale… kyu bachaya mujhe… marne deta na!

nd he started crying again….

uv sat down on the tool…. nd placed his palm on kunj’s palm

Uv:(softly) hey kunj! look i understand hr pain dear…

hearing this kunj hugged

K: (crying) why… why dis always happens wid me….

they break their hug

Uv: shh….. kunj look umm..

K: tu itna soch kya rha hai… bol na

Uv: actually the doctor has advised u to meet a psychaitrist

K: wht….. so ab tum log mujhe pagal samjhne lage

Uv: stop this nonesense okay… u very well knw tht psychaitrist ke paas jane wale log pagal nhi kehlate

K: but i dont want to go

Uv: oh so u will not go……. np…. do u care fr me?

K: ofcourse i do

Uv: gud…

saying this he picked up a knife frm fruit basket

K: ayee ayee ayee wht r u doing

uv: look if u will not go then i m gonna cut ny wrist

K: no nooo nooooo…. its not a joke….. okay i will go

uv smiles nd keeps the knife down… jst then doc. arrives

D: so mr. kunj sarna… ready to visit the pshchaitrist tmro at 5 pm

K:(showing no interest) ya.. ah

NEXT DAY..

uv and kunj goes to the adress given in the card… they reach a big clinic…. they went near to the receptionist….. she told kunj nd uv to go in…..

The cabin was a huge one with the walls coloured witb chocolate brown nd cream colour…. a girl was sitting on the chair…. facing the other side….. there was a name plate TWINKLE TANEJA

heheee guys now tell me how many of u guessed it was twinkle…. gud job guys…

Uv: exuse me mam

the chair turns nd the face of the girl is shown…. she stands up seeing them…. she was looking hell beautiful….. she was wearing a pink coloured very short top nd below it a white coloured long t-shirt with a tight jeggings her hairs were straight

T:(forwarding her hand to uv) hello… i m Twinkle… Twinkle Taneja

Uv: hi… yuvraj luthra…. accha ur a doctor only na

kunj looks at him with a ‘phirse chalu jo gaya wala look’

T: sorry!

Uv: i mean ur looking like a actress

T: oh… stop that!

now she forwards her hand to kunj

T: hi

kunj was not showing any interst

K: (without forwarding his hand……. rolling his eyes) kunj

Twinkle’s smile fades away fr a while…. but she smiles again nd takes off her hand

Uv:(whispering) that was rude

kunj ignores him….

T: okay….. so mr. yuvraj…. u can go home… actually i dont know hw much it will take to make this new guys as my frnd… hehe

K: wht! no…. uv ur not even going outside ok… stay with me

Uv:(ignoring him) ya np mam

T: oh come on… its twinkle okay!

Uv: okay np mis

T: ya ya its miss

U: hehe… np miss twinkle

uv goes

K thinks: chalo now she will make me lie on the conforting chair… then wilk check me… then will force me to say my past…. nd will fakely assure me tht she is my frnd nd all… arghh

T: so mr. kunj….. wait mr. kunj…. no…. kunj…. chale!

K:(widening his eyes) where!

T: will u drive ir should i?

kunj was still boggled

T: forget it… i will drive… u jst cm with me

kunj…. without knwing anything went out with her nd sat in her mercedes…

In the car

K: where r we going

T: here…

kunj sees outside….. it was a beach

K: ur my doctor… ri8?

T: no… i m ur frnd….. ok lets hv sm fun

K: not interested….. okay… i m gng home

T: dare u go home…. get out chalooooo

Twinkle was srsly not behaving like a doctor

K thinks: is she a psychaitrist or a psycho…. ye doc. hi hai na

Twinkle takes him near the sea shore

The wind was blowing….. the cold water waves were kissing their feet…. it was a perfect mood….. but kunj doesnt seemed interested

they jst kept walking as it was twinkle’s demand….

T: accha kunj…. pyaar kya hai

(guys twinkle already knew tht frm wht problem he was suffering frm as the doctor who had adviced her name had told abt his problem already only…. bur she was hiding the thing tht she knew his problem)

K:(smirks) pyaar…. pyaar dhokha hai…. dard hai…. actually its the most horrible…. painful… heart breaking problem i hv known in the world

T: no kunj… ur wrong…. pyaar dhokha ya dard ya horrible ya painful ya heart breaking feeling nhi hai…. its the most wonderful… heavenly feeling in the whole world

K: i dont agree

T: but why

K: bcus i hv passed through it… nd this so called pyaar ended up giving me all those words i said be4

T: no for u tht so called pyaar has not given u pain but the person with whom u were in love with hv given u pain

kunj stopped walking as he was surprised by her answer… he smwhere knew she was correct

T: arre… why did u stopped… keep walking

kunj starts walking…. there was an acute silence for a while but this tym surprisingly kunj broke the silence

K: have u loved anyone?

Twinkle nodes in yes

aftr again 5 min

K: i know its a personal questions but….whom do u love

Twinkle looks at him

K: sorry… i shouldnt hv asked it

T: kunj…. i love that (pointing towards the beautiful sunset)…. i love that (pointing towards the waves)…. i love the cold breeze…. see i love these nd they never give me pain…. they always give me a soothing pleasure (breathing in nd out)

K: whwao!

T: this is love kunj…. this is called as love…. loving a person only bcus of his or her beautiful face…. isnt loving… its jst liking nd ur stabbing urself.. replacing the word liking with loving….. i m ri8?

Kunj didnt answered anything

T: ya np kunj…. accha sorry now i hv to go home…. my mom… who loves me…. must be waiting for me… hope to meet u tomorrow… cm let me drop u

K: no…. i will manage

Twinkle turned back nd started moving

K:u.. um… Miss Twinkle

twinkle turned

T: jst twinkle

K: okay… twinkle… can we have 2nd love

T: ya if ur 1st was not true…. look true love can only happen once…

K: how will i be able to find my 2nd love?

T: u dont have a need to find it….. u dont need to find true love…. true love will find u…… nd look thts why i m single.. hehe

saying this she ran….. kunj too smiled back

At tht ni8…. kunj didnt spoke anything… he jst slept… recalling twinkle’s words

days past like this…. everyday they used to visit the same beach nd chit-chat…. twinkle never made him realise tht she was his doctor…. kunj also started thinking twinkle as a frnd…..

#A week passed….. kunj was veey much better then be4…. he stopped crying…. he realised tht sanaya was not his true love

1 day….

twinj were waking on the beach….there was a pin drop silence btwn them….. kunj again broke the silence

K:(tears in his eyes)I was in my college when i first saw sanaya… she was looking beautiful….. aftr few days i proposed her…. unexpecredly she told yes… i was the happiest person at tht tym… bt now i realised she didnt loved me but my money…. she always used to demand for expensive gifts…. now my eyes got opened… thanks to u twinkle

Twinkle jst smiled

K: then 1 day she came to me nd told me tht she is getting married with sahil…. she didnt forgot to mention ‘a billionare’….. i was all broken at tht tym

he started crying vigorously….. he was not in the condition to stand… he sat down on the sand…. twinkle placed her hand on his

kunj was trying continuously to stop his tears

Twinkle noticed it…

T: (cupping his face) hey…. never control ur tears okay…. jst cry jr heart out

kunj hugged her…. nd cried for an hour… twinkle… without complaing.. sat there… hugging nd calming him

aftr an hour….. kunj stopped to cry

T: feeling better

K: nope….. best!

twinkle smiles

T: ur much better than be4…. i think now u dont need me…. so mr. kunj…. this is our last session….. now pls move on in ur lyf nd forget her

kunj was all numb… twinkle stood up…. kunj too….

K: session??

T: ya this was the part of ur session na….. okay… bye…. jts srsly a pleasure to meet a frnd like u…. bye

she goes….kunj again had tears while he saw twinkle going… perhaps forever

K thinks: i didnt even came to know tht this was all a session… i didnt came to knw when DID I STSRTED LOVING U…. i almost forgot tht i was ur patient….. no… not this tym… i will not let my love… my TRUE LOVE to go far away frm me

#at ni8…. Twinkle’s house

she was in her room…. reading a book…. jst then she heard a knock at her window… ys ys window

she looked at window nd was completely surprised to see kunj there

T: kunj!

she ran towards the window nd made him cm inside

(now dont ask me how kunj came to know abt her address… cm on guys… apne frnd ka pata kisse nhi pata? )

T: oh my god…. wht r u doing here

kunj didnt listened to her…. nd he jst kneeled down

he took out a rose
K: twinkle…. i dont know when i felt for u…. but the only thing i know is I Love You….. ya i know it is weard to think tht a patient felt for a doctor

twinkle was all numb

K: look i wll not at all force u…… but dis tym if i will loose my love… my true love… i will die….

T thinks: o babaji….. i dont love him…. but if i will say him no then he will again go to suicide…..
jst then

K: marry me twinkle

T thinks: omg… ok twinkle ur a doctor u hv to do ur duty till u die… u cannot let ur patient die

T: ok!
nd she takes the rose
kunj was all shocked he stood up nd hugged her

K: oh my god…. i m so happy…. thank u so much

twinkle breaks the hug

aftr 1 month

they are getting married…. as none of their family memebers had problem frm their relations…. while taking pheras

……. TWINKLE’S POV…….
oh babaji…. thank u so much for bringginf kunj in my life… i would have regretted if i would hv said no to him tht day… he is such a nice person…. in past 1 month i came to know him more deeply nd i understood tht kunj nd only kunj is my true love

Credit to: Ritzi

22 comments

  1. Shamz

    Amazing Ritzi….after a long time I read any ff…..it was a cute one…..And yah one more thing I just want to say that firstly I read pali’s ff and then yours…both of you are amazing… but don’t know where is Pali….and yah I read you ff today I was unable to comment over there…I just can’t believe it that all that happens as I never knew sumthing like that happen…

  2. sonal

    Oh my god your mom is going through operation what happened to your mom. Plzzzzz tell me what happened to your mom??????????

  3. Riya

    wow ritzi I just loved it yaar n yah whenever ur free or u want to keep away from stress write os I would say dat every Sunday u should write n os I m very impressed with u ur writing skills r I’m not able to believe dat ur dat ritzi who gave us funny updates . ur fine na I just asked as dis os gave me vibes be happy don’t worry ur mom will be fit n fine BTW I’m a psychology student n dat is why I loved dis os more waiting for more os from u luv u dear …..

  4. Cutie pie

    Awwwwwwwwwwsme yaaaar seriously amzing suuuprb kash tum tei ki writer hoti i feel lyking hugging u now kash ye hopata bt y is ur mom is hospital wish her frm my side gt well soon

  5. Shatakshi

    wow ritzi it was damn cute…n plzzz take care of aunty…i will surely pray for her
    Get well soon Aunty

  6. Krystal

    nyc n plsss take care of ur mum n plssss yaar dont stop writing plssss m really srry for that plsss dont stop writing plssss

  7. tara

    awwww…its was so amzing…loved it…ritzi..
    i read ur ff too bt i didnt cmmnt…coz i didnt have words…u knw u r a good writer right?? then plzz dont stop writing…please….
    nd yeah take care of ur mom..nd let us know if she is all right..

  8. panchi

    Awesome one ……. a heart touching one ……. and take care of ur mom ………and hope ur mom recover soon …….

  9. Mitali

    Awesome one. Very good ?. Superb. N plss care care of your mom. Hope your mom recovers

  10. Anushka

    I’ll pray for ur mother dear. Hope she recovers. But y is she in operation theater, u told that she fainted 3-4 times.
    This story was marvelous. Loved it from the bottom of my heart.

  11. twinjfan-(tamanna)

    it was amazing ritzi….ur an amazing writer…tc of ur mom…will surely pray for u aunty..

  12. Aliza

    amazingg… awesomee… marvellouss… brilliant… cute.. sweet… amusing… n wat not.. i feel u to be a born writer.. n yess do tc of ur mom.. hope she gets fine soon…

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