TRUE LOVE (KRIYYAM) TS PART 1

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HELLO EVERYONE!!!! I HOPE YOU ALL MISSED ME!!! YES YES I AM MIRA!! THE WRITER OF THE SS ON KRIYYAM ON MOHABBAT KI DASTAN… RIGHT NOW I THOUGHT TO DO A TS ON KRIYYAM ON THE CURRENT TRACK…I HOPE YOU WILL ENJOY IT I WILL NAME THIS AS “MY TRUE LOVE”
THE SCENE STARTS WHEN YUVAAN FINDS OUT BABY PLANNED THE WHOLE DRUG THING….

Yuvaan drags baby to their room and pushes her on the ground…baby is shocked…she yells yuvaan! He says don’t yell at me! He shuts their room door and locks it and picks baby up and slaps her on her face…she holds her cheek and glares at yuvaan…he says how dare you give me drugs? Baby is shocked…she thinks how did he find out? Yuvaan says exactly…you must be wondering how I know…well, when you were giving me medicines I always thought why you would give me the one from the cupboard because my medicines were always near my bed table…
I slowly starting thinking and then my mom and everyone were getting attacked and you know what the funny thing is? When my whole family was being attacked then where was i? Where were you? Slowly I figured does this medicine have anything to do with my absence….and I figured out that it was you who drugged me every day….why baby? Why did you do this? She says because I love you yuvaan…he shouts no baby! If you loved me then you wouldn’t harm my family…you don’t love me baby…

SCREEN SHIFTS TO KRIYYAM’S ROOM
Krishna walks in with her and saiyyam’s clothes…she thinks why did I tell dadu that saiyyam also loves me? I don’t even know for sure if he loves me….do I love him? She recalls all her moments with saiyyam and smiles…she sees saiyyam coming out the washroom in just a towel around his waist…her eyes pop open seeing his 6 packs….she thinks oh my gosh….saiyyam looks up and sees krishna staring at him and smirks….he walks near her….she suddenly realizes he is moving towards her…she gulps in nervousness and moves back…saiyyam’s wet hair is dripping water as he walks…she thinks why is he coming near me?

She moves back until she hits the wall…saiyyam puts both his hands on each side of her and looks at her while krishna looks right into his eyes….she nervously gulps and says sai..saiy…saiyyam wha…what..tt..tt.a…are y…ou….doin…doing….g.g..g..he says what were you doing? He sees her from bottom to top and says checking me out in the most sensuous way…she blushes and her heartbeat rises…she coughs and says uh no…he says really? She says hmmm….he comes closer…she opens her eyes wide and says look I’m not scared of you okay…coming closer to me will not scare me…I don’t feel anything if you come closer to me understand…he raises one eyebrow up and moves closer connecting their chests together…he says really? She nervously nods…he slowly moves back when Krishna thinks what!! No no come back I don’t want you leaving…then she says wait krishna shut up what are you thinking…
Saiyyam says if you don’t care if I come close to you then why were your heartbeat rising? When I came closer your heartbeat got faster…why? She thinks…he leaves leaving her thinking…
SCREEN SHIFTS TO YUVAY’S ROOM

Yuvaan shouts I want you to leave right now…she says but yuvaan where will I go? He says I don’t care baby go and find a place…I cannot live under the same roof as my family’s murderer…baby gets angry and takes her stuff and leaves…yuvaan sits on his bed and thinks about his and krishna’s friendship, how much she loved him, and he rejected her for baby…yuvaan says I wish I hadn’t chosen baby…krishna is far better than her..
SCREEN SHIFTS TO KRIYYAM’S
Its night and kriyyam are set to go to bed…saiyyam heads to his bed and lays down…krishna thinks I love saiyyam and I need to tell him…she walks to the bed and sits on the other side…saiyyam feels the bed balanced and opens his eyes to see what is on the other side…he sees krishna staring at him…his eyes pop open and he jumps out of bed…he says you? Krishna feels embarrassed and says yeah…why? Saiyyam says uh nothing but tell me why you’re sitting on the bed?
She says why? Can I not? Saiyyam says no I mean yeah sure you can but why are you sitting on the bed I’m sleeping on? Krishna gets mad and says why? Why can’t I sit on the same bed as you huh? This is OUR room, OUR house, OUR BED, and YOU ARE MY HUSBAND!! Saiyyam’s mouth opens in shock while Krishna realizes what she said and thinks krishna! What did you say….she looks up from one eye to see saiyyam seeing her and she thinks what did I do…

krishna says uh actually sorry…I didn’t mean to yell….saiyyam recalls all she said…krishna says uh actually I just said that…saiyyam comes out his thoughts and says it’s cool…krishna nods and he says goodnight…she smiles and also says goodnight…he goes and sleeps on the bed while krishna stands there thinking huh? He didn’t even ask for me to sleep? Saiyyam opens his eyes and says uh krishna…she thinks yes he will now ask me to sleep with him…she says yes saiyyam? He says can you close the lights before you sleep…her smile fades and thinks huh that’s it…that’s all he wanted to say? She smiles and says sure saiyyam…she makes funny faces and goes to close the lights….
Saiyyam closes his eyes and krishna thinks hmm now I’ll have to do something…I mean I’m his wife…I have the right to sleep with him…she sits on the bed and goes under the blanket…she moves closer to saiyyam and sees his right hand open…she cuddles in with him resting her head on his chest…she takes his hand and puts it around her and she holds him from his waist…saiyyam feels something heavy and opens his eyes…his eyes pop open seeing krishna resting on his chest…he says krishna…she wakes up and says hmm…he says what are you doing here? She makes faces and says saiyyam sleeping what else? He says but why here? She thinks duffer I am your wife…she looks at him and says because I have the right..
He says but you hate me…she says when did I say I hate you? She moves closer to him holding him tighter leaving saiyyam in thoughts…he thinks and smiles at krishna…he slightly moves her closer to himself not wanting to let her go and both cuddle and sleep…
The next morning all are eating breakfast…krishna is working in the kitchen when she recalls last night…she thinks I should tell saiyyam what I feel about him…all had their breakfast and go to their rooms…krishna sees saiyyam fixing his shirt…she moves to the cupboard and thinking saiyyam is there says “saiyyam I was talking with dadu and he was saying how suhani aunty and his love story had some hate and some love like us….but slowly he fell in love with her…saiyyam I really like you and I think we should give our marriage a chance…she takes a deep breath and continues….saiyyam I don’t know when but I started liking you…I started enjoying all the moments we spent together…I started to enjoy your company…she says please saiyyam give it a thought and let’s give a chance to our marriage”

The camera moves and it reveals that all this time it was yuvaan who heard her…he thinks when did krish started liking saiyyam? And how? Knowing how he married her? he turns to go and that’s when krishna turns and sees his back…thinking its saiyyam she stops him and says saiyyam…please give it a thought…yuvaan hears her and thinks I’ve decided what I will do krish…he smiles and leaves….
Krishna takes a relief thinking saiyyam heard her…she gets some stuff and leaves the room…she spots saiyyam talking on the phone and thinks when did he change? He was wearing a black jacket just now? She walks to him and saiyyam hangs up…he says Krishna? Need something? She says actually saiyyam weren’t you in the room a few second ago> saiyyam puzzled says no krishna I was here for the past 5 minutes…krishna thinks then who was that? She nods and is leaving when she doesn’t spot the water on the floor and slips….she closes her eyes in fear but two hands saved her…it was saiyyam….both had a intense eye lock…
Tere samne aa jaane se…yeh dil mera dhadka hai…yeh galti nahi hai teri…kasoor nazar ka hai…x2….jis baat ka tujhko darr hai…woh karke dikha doonga….aise na mujhe tum dekho…seene se laga loonga…tumko main chura loonga tumse…dil mein chhupa loongax2
He makes her stand and she says sorry…he says it’s okay and leaves…krishna’s heart beat was rising and she was blushing…yuvaan saw this and thought I was stupid to choose baby over krish…now I’ll do something….he calls someone asking them to come right away…
SCREEN FREEZES ON KRIYYAM ON OPPOSITE SIDE AND YUVAAN STARING AT KRISHNA

PRECAP: WHO IS THE PERSON YUVAAN CALLED? WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO KRIYYAM? WHAT IS YUVAAN GONNA DO?

SO GUYS 1ST PART IS DONE….I’LL BE BACK WITH THE 2ND PART….PLEASE LEAVE YOUR FEEDBACKS

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27 Comments
  1. i wish mira this scene really happens in serial….nd ur good writer

    1. Mira99

      Thanks!!

  2. i wish mira this scene really happens in serial….nd ur good writer

    1. Mira99

      Thanks!!

  3. Superb superb superb waiting for next

    1. Mira99

      Thanks!!

  4. I like how Krishna found out that Sayyam was not in the room when she confessed…this should happen in the serial too…awesome writing…keep it up!!

    1. Mira99

      Thanks!!!

  5. Shaani

    Superb… Waiting for the next episode…

    1. Mira99

      Thanks!!

  6. Amazing story track plzzz update daily
    I love itttttttt…..

    1. Mira99

      Thanks!!

  7. Krishna is so intelligent in this episode. And in the serial huh…
    You are an awesome writer. Please continue soon. I loved the way you described sayyam’s facial expressions and all other kriyyam emotions.
    Keep up the good work and please update soon. Please….
    Kriyyam rocks

    1. Mira99

      LOL true fact about krishna?Thank you!!!

  8. Hope this becomes reality

    1. Mira99

      Thanks!!

  9. Aarti32

    Krishna is crazy yaar..But luvd d episode..Plzz post part 2 soon

    1. Mira99

      Thanks!!

  10. So good. So happy ur back ???

    1. Mira99

      Thanks dear!!?

  11. it was awesome Mira.loved it.happy propose day.

    1. Mira99

      Thanks!! Same to you dear!!?

  12. Really awesome love it.. u made it so good… waiting for ur next update.. keep going dear love u????

    1. Mira99

      Thanks!!!

  13. superb….. Keep writing and plz don’t separate Kriyam . It’s a request. Anyways I am really happy that u r back again.

    1. Mira99

      Thanks!!

  14. Welcome back mira..I really liked early mohabhat ki daastan…I was a big fan of ur ff…happy that ur back with a new ff…amazing episode…Update ASAP.. 🙂

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