TRUE LOVE (JNDSD) OS

Hello….i m back after so many days…..written OS on vitharv,,,
This is a short story…and it’s a simple one…..hope you all liked it…
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This is story about one of my frnd atharv. He have also done some funny things in college as others do. Has teased, troubled many girls. Has done copy of teachers acting. He often said “I will live my life with full on masti..not fall in love”. On his bike also”I HATE GIRLS”was written. He was the only one son for his parents. talks with all girls but not with bad intensions…only for frndship. Was good in studies but was interested in playing. But ..but….todays day changed his attitude and everything…..becoz…yes guyz he was fallen in love with some beautiful girl, lovely girl named Vividha. He did not think of anyone, anything..and just proposed her “Vividha will you love me”. She used to live in hostels. From six months he was waiting for her answer.
Atharv have done true love which was understood by vividha…but she has not guts to say love u to atharv….i understood that she has fallen in love with atharv…as I went to her asked abt it…first ofall she denied then she said that she love him…then I made a plan…where vividha proposed atharv…and gave the ans of his proposal which was asked six month before…..
The day came where clg finished and vividha packed her stuff to move to her house…atharv asked her to call him when she will reach her home…but six hrs passed no call…8hrs passed then also no call….then he came to me asked me to take him to vividha’s house….we both reached her house..and was totally shocked to see vividha’s death body….atharv was shattered to see her body…I made him realizethat vividha is no more now…..he cried very much …it was the first time when atharv cried this much for someone…yes bcz he has done true love…..
When we were coming back…atharv asked me to stop a bike under one tree…and asked me to go home and his mom that he will come late…I dropped him and went to home….atharv sat under that tree and cried out ….daily he came there and cried out and write his and vividha’s name on tree’s bark…every year he used to plant tree near that big tree…..after vividha went frm his life that tree became his……
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39 comments

  1. Happy fan :)

    Snehal its good….but i don’t want vividha to die….feeling sad for Atharv….
    But ur way of writing is nice…..i want u post a happy ending vitharv story…..so if u don’t mind plz post…..
    But this is super…..
    And yeah i would give ****4 stars….. 🙂

    • Snehal

      |Author

      Sorry happy fan for making vividha dead…I know you guyz must be angry with me…….but thnx for cmnting……and also thans for **** stars

  2. sachin

    even though its a Short bt vry emotional and heart touching story…😔😔😔

    snehal di u hv a very gud imagination,if m nt wrong u may be excelling in writings….

    really its need capability to complete a story with less words and u hv tht thing in u…

    hope u come with some more short stories,wn ever u get freee😊😊😊😊😄😄😄😄😃😃😃😃

  3. Admin

    Hi snehal..
    I wish u will soon write a happy ending story.I like the concept of your story but its os so I think it must be happy story…
    And I would like to give 1 suggestion to u if u want u can continue this story with rebirth of both atharv and vividha if u want…
    Well I would like to give *** to your story..

    • Snehal

      |Author

      admin i like ur concept of making it ff….but now am concentrating on my one ff…nd also i have to concentrate on my studies as its 12th std……i will think of it…to make a story…..and thnxx a lot

  4. Happy fan :)

    Not Snehal I’m not angry on u…….well its a love story….nd some love stories are beyond life nd death….
    Here u have shown how a true love should be…
    Ur imagination is really nice…
    When i was writing my os of vitharv…i too decided to have some death and all…then i changed as already we all r worried with Ravish’s entry…..so in order to chill up every one i ended it in a happy way….
    Oops i think u havn’t read it right….if u wana read it plz go for : Jana na dil se door 25th June 2016 telly updates….
    Actually it didn’t get posted so i shared in comment box…

    • Snehal

      |Author

      thank god ur not angry with me…..i thought that some love story has ending…so i written this story……and yaa…i have read ur story now…it was awesome…….and athrav’s proposal to vividha was so romantic…..i really loved it,……..

      • Happy fan :)

        Thanks dear of reading……nd I’m glad that u like it…
        Sorry for commenting about my os in ur os page…..

      • Snehal

        |Author

        u r always welcome happy fan…….n dont be sorry yaar…..btw no. of cmnt are getting increased na…lol……whats u r name

      • sachin

        OMG OMG OMG…..so sry happy fan di i told ur name wrong,its adra i just read it on 25 June update while reading ur OS….so sry☹☹☹

        and may be admin di name is ankita di!!!

  5. sachin

    Wow all r class 12 even in my house i hv a class 12 sis,she is also preparing fr medical…

    hope a happy and Merritt full future of urs and hope u get success in every situation our life….by the way wn is b’day?

  6. Admin

    No duffer ankita is my name admin.
    Happy fan name is ardra..
    Well I said to continue the story bcoz I believe that the due love each other they definitely met in any cost.
    Aur waise bhi the famous line love never ends it always completes in one or other birth…

  7. Happy fan :)

    Oohhh noo i couldn’t reply to u all….Ankitha Sachin nd snehal didi…..
    Well ma name is Ardra ( pronounce it like R-dra)
    Important from kerala and in 11th std…..
    Sachin u r our lucky young brother….nd plz don’t stop commenting…..keep in contact with us……as once u had a complaint that u r alone in jndsd family……no dear its not like that…..don’t feel like that….

  8. sachin

    ty guys fr loving me so much….my b’day is on 18 th aug…

    vikram-19 th aug and shivani -29 th aug

    tysm guys m nt feeling alone as all of u talk with me …plz dont stop commenting to me

    🙂 🙂 🙂

    • Snehal

      |Author

      sachin how luck you are……all 3 bdays in one ,month …that two within 10 days only…super duper celebration will be there ha

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