True love (epi-1)

Hi Iam new writer I am writing about thapki I hape u love my articles.

Thapki got in the house as a maid ..
Suman says sorry to thapki for her wrong behaviour and ask her to forgive her.Thapki says her that u are elder then me don’t be sorry. Suman and Thapki hug each other.
Thapki completes her work and ask Shardha that can she go then Shardha says her to go to store room and find her mobile as its lost .
Thapki goes in store room ..
Shardha smiles and says “wait and watch that what I will do with you”
Scene shifts to Bihaan
Bihaan is with his friends .
His one friend says :Bhihaan you hav forgotten us this means you are in true love with your wife .
He says :No
His all friends start to tease him so in anger he says I am going
And in reply his friend says :yeh you must go as some one very important is waiting at your home .
In his way he thinks from Thapki and says why I was so effected from the words which my friends said to me .
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  1. Nice start but please make it longer

    1. Thanks be in touch and yeh I will surely make it long

  2. very good starting
    and I hope it will be longer next episode

    1. Thank be in touch and yeh I will surely make it long

  3. Superb…at least his friends made him think about it…thank u as he had friends… continue and pl..make it slightly lengthier…..

    1. Thanks your comments are valuable and InshAllah I will make longer just me but n touch

  4. Good start but it is short…

  5. Super..

    1. Thanks, for ur support and beautiful words

  6. Very nice but was too short..N update soon

    1. Yeh I will update again please give me same response so after getting trained I can right a novel ..just need ur love and support

  7. Very nice.

  8. Too good

    1. Thanks for comment

  9. Well starting….hope you to update next part soon.

  10. Awesome..pls update nxt part as soos as possible..

  11. well , i hope the next part will be longer and please try to avoid the evilness of these vamps ,its already too much in the serial
    it will be better to see the nok- jhoks of thahaan
    best of luck , eagerly waiting for the next episode

    1. Thanks and for seeing nok-Jokh you have to read my articles next part is updated

  12. Nice..

  13. Nice plz make as longer

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