Asr goes towards cabin….

Kushi arranges everything in asr’s cabin with flowers
Kushi in mind: i should leave before he arrive… or else… morning itself i will be scolded.//

She notices asr and hides behind the table…asr enters the cabin and gets more angry as it was fully decorated with yellow flowers….

Asr: kushi.. come outside i have seen u
Kushi came
Asr: what the hell kushi… i don’t like yellow flowers
Kkg: omg… thank god.. i thought u will be angry on me for decorating… but its abt yellow flowers na.. no prob…..
Asr: stop it kushi… what r u dng here?
Kkg: thought of disturbing you here….
Asr: what?
Kkg: haha… joke joke…
Asr stares
Kkg: ok .. injust came to tell u that uncle have arranged for our honey moon trip….
She blushes while asr looks at her in irritation
Kkg: what?.. not excited….
Asr: not at all … now leave.. i have many works…
Kkg: fine i m gng….
Asr: aman… drop kushi to home…
Kkg: i came here by rickshaw.. will go by myself…
Asr: AMAN… (lil louder) i said drop her to home
Kkg: aman bhaiya… u go… i will handle him
Aman laughs and leaves…
Kkg: i don’t need ur help.. i can manage myself… so pls.. don’t interfere…
Kushi leaves….asr also goes behind her ….kushi notices that and gets happy;…
In road
Kushi notices asr coming in car… but she acts as if she didn’t notice… then she starts doing some acts to make asr come outsid…
She acts as if she slipped…. asr being aware of her acting laughs at her act….
Kkg in mind: kadoos … whatever may happen his ego nah…. huh….
Some men watches kushi talking to herself…
Man: oh madam,… if u don’t have anyone to talk… i m here nah.. talk with me
Kkg smiles thinking… now this kadoos should come outside……
Kkg : bachaao…. bachaao…
Man: oh ho… what a drama baaz…. we haven’t done anything.. she starts screaming..
Man2: oh madam stop screaming.. all may think wrong…
Man: oh no… she s shouting even louder… close her mouth…
He closed her mouth…. just then a tight slap made him fell over ground…
Asr makes an entry and beats them…
Kushi claps and cheers up Arnav…
Asr: stop it kushi its not video game… its real fight.. stop clapping.. and call police…
Kushi: police…. no… i m scared of police….
Asr looks at her in anger….
Kkg: ok leave them nah.. we shall go,…
By saying this she enters the car… asr fumes in anger….

Pihu mom: pihu.. its enough of this… today u will propose him thats it…
Pihu: but maa
Pihu mom: no beta.. i like him very much… i have invited him now.. he may be coming anytime… and i m going outside… u should tell him thats it….
Pihu denies… pihu’s mom did some sentimetal blackmail
Pihu agrees…pihu tries to cal nk… but goes in vain. Nk reaches….
He finds pihu in hall and goes near her.. pihu’s mom signs her and leaves…
Pihu in mnd: oh no… mom will surely spy on us… i cant even sign nk… but its ok.. i will tell him.. after al he knows this drama nah.. he will understand
Nk: hey pihu whats up
Pihu: actually nk… i just wanted to tell u one thing..
Nk: wow pihu… theres something which pihu wants to tell nk
Pihu: oh come on nk its serious
Nk: ok ok… no jokes… come on
Pihu: vo… actually…. i think…
Nk: u think
Pihu: i mean…. my mom think
Nk: whatever… just go ahead
Pihu: i mean…
Nk: just shoot the MEAN yaar… whats the matter…
Pihu closes her eyes and says: nk… i m in love with u

Suddenly the whole world goes muted for nk.. some men starts playing music around him… wind blows over him;.. he feels extreme happiness…..he was just paused for a moment…

Pehla pehla pyar hai
Pehli pehli baar hai
I love u love u love u sonnale….
Illathai alli alli thanthalle…
Pihu claps…: nk.. r u fine
Nk: pihu…. did u say something which i heard… just now
Pihu: oh shit yaar.. u didn’t hear anything… i have wasted my full effort… now i cant tell again
Nk: no no.. pihu.. i heard that u love me right…
Pihu smiles,… nk suddenly hugs pihu which made pihu uncomfortable… and says i love you too…suddenly pihu’s mom come inside
Mom: beta i m so happy for u guyz..
After blessing them she leaves…
Nk understood everything that bcz of mom pihu said that
Pihu: thank god… u understood this acting and co operates… or else
Nk: pihu… i have to leave now(with sad face)
Pihu: what hap yaar..
Nk doesn’t reply and heads to leave… before going … nk turns…

Nk: pihu… i was not acting….
By saying this he leaves…which made pihu hurt,,.. she sits in shock… tears came out f her eyes.. its bcz she couldn’t read nk’s mind.. she just made fun of him whenever he treis express his feelings… she can understand his feelings well as the same thing happened with her by raman… she feels hurt as she unknowingly hurts nk….

Rr mansion”
Ishu notices a chit therby…
Chit: want to talk.. come to room…
Ishu smiles shyingly… she feels someone playing on her hair….
Ishu: raman… leave it.. someone may see…
She turns and finds nobody.. then she noticed the flower which was hanging there was playing on her hair… she laughs and hits her head,,…

Shagun: ishu morning.. chiii… (same way ishu teased)
Ishu : oh hello.. we r not like u
Shagun: then?.. tell na ishu
Ishu blushes….
Ishu: but sweetie… i was happy that …u have sorted our ur differences with suraj.. and he also has changes… i think… he was worried for his father thats y he was rude in beginning.. now… he s normal
Shagun: i hope so….
Ishu leaves to meet raman…
Shagun i mind: ishu was right.. he s changing.. thats what i wanted…. i should not react harsh… i should support him…
Shagun smiles and leaves….
Ishu enters room…
Raman: thank god u came
Ishu smiles shyly
Raman: i wanted tp talk imp
Ishu: yeah tell me neh (with constant smile)
Raman: y r u behaving weirdly with kushi… i know ishu…. its difficult for u.. but… u should understand..
Ishu becomes sad and nods yes…
Raman further explains ishu
At last
Shu: u called me just to say this
Raman: yeah.. what else u think?
Ishu: nthing…
She leaves sadly
Raman smiles: oh meri drama queen … how can i forget this day…. when u proposed me.. i have a cute plan for u…. just wait for that my sweetheart.
Ishu in mind: ravan kumar.. i will nevr forgive u… go to hell…. how can u just forget … i wont talk to u..
In car
Kkg: u had imp meeting right?.. y r u here?
Asr: can u just stop ur nonsense… let me drive peacefully….
Kushi makes puppy face …
After a while
Kkg: wow.. tmr holi.. i love holi
Asr: kushi…. get out
Kkg: what?
Asr: we came … now go…. i have imp work…
Kkg: u will remain alwas kadoos… lord governor…
Asr looks at her with anger kkg leaves suddenly without looking at him…. she runs inside the home ….
Asr smiles….


raman cute surprise …

guyz its small a=update i know…. i just wanted to give u a real treat as said ny snehal… thnx snehal for remembering…. its been four months i have started this ff… my first epi have been upload on 20th November……
i wanted to give u a long update … but having some works guyz… also i cant be able to update tmr…. so pls forgive me…. wjll update a suer long epi on Tuesday…. pls pls pls forgive me…

Credit to: arshi


  1. Khushi

    Ohhh!!!! Arshi!!!! Will u not post the next episode tomorrow???
    It’s a very sad news… But it’s ok… I will be waiting for Tuesday loooooonnnngggg episode.. Then please make the Tuesday episode loooongggg with romantic Arshi scenes… Pleeeeaaassseee…..
    I’m very exited for Holi episode…
    And Congratulations for ur completing 4 months…
    I wish u can go with many months with this cute lovely ff…??

  2. akshaya

    Wow shi cute surprise yaar. I loved it. Waiting eagerly for ur next episode. And congratulations for ur 4 months journey.

    • Arshi

      Actually mortal in cochin nah.. Thats y no scenes for them.. They will join soon in honeymoon epi

  3. snehal

    thank u thnx thnx thnx thnx thnx thnx thnx thnx arshi for this super duper wala epi…….
    i m really happy that u posted it today…i was egerly waiting for ur ff from morning bt now its been posted…thnxxxxx……..lots of love to uuu…..love u arshi n ur ff…..
    BTW from tuesday i wont be able to cmnt bcoz of my exms…soo sorrry dear…

  4. kajal

    It was really a treat dont know how will i wait till tuesday
    Khushi antics are just awesome cheering up asr ehild he is fighting with goons

  5. Varsha

    Sorry auto correct *I am eagerly waiting for ur long tue epi. And yah…congratzz…4 months anniversary.

  6. shree

    Wowwww very nice episode… And a very pleasant surprise….. Congratulations for completion of 4 month…

  7. Oooo no update tormw 🙁 but its ok no need to be sry as ur surpb episode melt our heart so there is no chance of getting angery on u just waiting 4 ishra’s upcoming romantic scene

  8. sharwani

    Ting tong….the comment u r waiting to see is not able to specify clearly about the fantastic writing skills so u can expect this comment holder’s name commenting by 100 episode….

  9. ritu arora

    Wow arshi i really surprised today but i was dipressed while seeing tommorow u would nt post ur ff yaar try to post at eve yaar becoz we r eagerly waiting for ur s

    • Arshi

      Wil try yaar… But mostly I can’t as m gng for one function… Will come home by nite only..

  10. Anaya

    oh my god arshi, that was a huge surprise…….. congrats on completing 4 months, you will soon be celebrating 6 months hopefully. thanks yaar… it’s a very cute episode……. when are you planning to bring miryal back? hope khushi doesn’t get shattered after knowing the truth…. eagerly waiting for the next episode…….

  11. Its Awesome……… Its OK ……We can understand………….We will wait till Tuesday…………… For a longggggggggg update…………..????☺???

  12. Priyaa17

    Wow great work arshi… Nice epi…Don’t feel sry yaar we understand that all humans have to get some time for themselves……But we r so attached to ur fan fic that we overlook the fact…Anyways have awesome break day and be back yaar….????

  13. Nice one dhidhi and ishra scenes were cute!! I loved it waiting for raman’s cute surprise and holi celebration and congrats for the 4th month anniversary and many more to come!!!

    – ur pyaari behna meeru!!

  14. arshi

    Guyz thabk u soo much for ur sypport live and everything…. and i m s sorry…..

    Actually i wished to upadte today… but unfortubately my laptop got repaired… … its new laptop also…. i m so upset guyz… i dont when it will recover… the first thibg came to my mind was this ff. .. i cant upload my epi for atleadt 1 week.. hope u guyz understand me… i will try ti get my lap soon and will give a super duper treat to u guyz… i m sooo sorry guyz

  15. arshi

    please guyz.. dont be sad… i will be back soon…. even i m very disappointed…. i hope u guyz will suport me…. i will soon give super epi…. till that… enjoy the days with shanaya’s new look with raman….

  16. Meghs(megha)

    Wow … Amazing congrats for ur 4th month successful ff no doubt if u crossed 100 epi also it will be super duper ur ff.
    U really rocking everyday…
    Thanks for cute surprise … Sry for late comment .

  17. Meghs(megha)

    What ur not updating for 1week… Sad yaar but i understand ur problem …. I have exams in this week n nxt week…. U pls try to update when ur laptop repair k.

    • arshi

      pls yaar …. read my last comment…. my lap got hanged… i can update next epi once its fine…. sorry yaar

  18. kajal

    I will miss u but not so much as i am returninv home for 3 days for holi celebration
    Hope u update ur one soon

  19. alice

    what’s ur problem arshi? what the hell.Now I have known that u r making excuses ur laptop is hanged its just an excuse u just don’t want to write ur ff anymore now I will never read ur ff any more bye enjoy:(

    • Maaneet

      Thank you. She doesn’t need u as wel . As I know she is d only one who tries and updates everyday and thinks hard to make every episode entertaining and special. I never saw her giving excuses. If she is saying she has a problem it must be genuine. After all she gets nothing out of this ff. She still puts so much effort and finally has to bear all this shit. She said she is posting after a week. If u can wait do so else u r free with ur decision.

      • Maaneet

        She is putting this much effort everyday jus to entertain us guys. She has her own personal space as well. Actually there is no need for her to explain things also. But out of courtesy she is doing that . Let’s respect her nature and give her own comfortable time. Saying so Arshi will be waiting for ur ff badly…

      • arshi

        thnk u soo much maneet… for really understanding my efforts…. i m feeling so happy to have such friends whom i hav nevr met… still stands for me… thnx buddy

    • arshi

      thnx for this overwhelming comment…. and alice… dont u dare to give any comment further… always i tried to say politely to those who are giving negative comments… but being a part f my ff… i didnt expect this from u.. and lastly.. i m not begging u to read my story… its my story and my wish whether to post it not… i usually dont give any excuses for anyone…. so u better stay away from my ff and me….

      and i gave my reason for not uploading … only to my friends who still waits for my epi….

      guyz….i m really sorry to give harsh comment… but i cant take it… i have self respect.. i cant compromise in that….
      i really respect himanshu’s comment…. after reading alice’s comment.. himanshu is much better than this girl

      my lap is hanged.. still i just seek time to get into this page only to see ur comments … and reply u guyz.. to let u know that i m still working on it….

      alice.. goodbye…dont comment again in my page…..

      again sorry guyz for this harsh comment… i dont want to hurt anyone… but when it comes to my self respect.. i wont spare….

    • sharwani

      Arey Alice wats ur problem?? Do u want any treatment?? I’m a psychiatrist do u need any help y r u interrupting our arshi without any reason?? Do mind ur work and if u dont want to read y do u make such useless comment …
      And ya maneet is right now don’t look for my comment coz I cant type watever he typed just read as many times as possible did u get that and ha once get ur reports before coming to me I’m very particular in all these…

  20. snehal

    Arshi m happy that u r not posting for 1week……becoZ i m also busy in exms

    Now i will nor miss ur epi……….lol

    • arshi

      haha…. atleast someone is happy…. thats really great snehal….do well in ur exams…. after that… u can get a real treat from me

  21. U know what Alice i have only one word to say that if u don’t know how to praise a person than u also don’t have right to insult her but Seariously arshi and Maneet gave u super duper answer as an insult and itx my promise dear that u will definetly visit this site after one week for Arshi ff and Seariously u will and then u will regret what have u said and if I was there Na so I will never let you read her ff cuz u don’t deserve it well back to ff Ywr will miss it?will really miss u?hope u come back soon❤️cuz we r ur daily readers and can’t wait till lng?

    • arshi

      thnakx yaar amani… i m also getting so bored.. without this… will see…. what happens…..

  22. alice

    ur ff is just bullshit u people just waste ur time and arshi u r the biggest b*t*h I have ever known I am not dying to read ur ff just stay in ur limits or else b*t*h.

    • arshi

      if that so.. why the hell r u coming here again and again .. to get u insulted……. i know my limits.. i m not using any abuse words unlike u.. as i really respect myself and my image… by this msg.. i m sure u fell so low in everyone’s eyes…. in my view.. u r not even in low…..

    • Khushi

      Hey, Alice.. Thank u for saying that u won’t read this ff anymore… Cause this ff is so great that u people r not suitable for reading or commenting here….. And no need to tell that we r wasting our time or not…. Because we all know what is better for us…
      And who the hell r u to talk to Arshi like that!!! If u have any self respect then never ever will come to this page…. Do ur own work… Go to hell

    • Maaneet

      Lol!!! Irony is she is coming here again and again jus to say she doesn’t want to come here. Great!!! Leave her yaar!! Poor one she jus realized she has wasted her time here and she realized it only when arshi couldn’t update for a week. LOL!!!May be she is the one most upset with this. She is mentally very disturbed. Let’s not make her situation worse.

  23. heena

    hey alice , if dnt like the ff y do u come n read it dnt u have any thing to do or u jst have work of jst cmnting shit over here . If u dnt like dnt visit it n who the hell u r to say anything abt di or ff. Jst go to hell u disgusting creature

  24. arshi

    thnx heena kushi… for ur support….

    but guyz.. relax… i was also angry and said much to her…. if we keep on commenting like this… she will be hurt…. and i dont want to hurt anyone…

    alice…. if u dont like this ff… thats your decision…. and u dont have any rights to comment on me… thats what i have tried to tell u…. thats. it….

    and frndzz.. leave this matter here…. and i m soo sorry for this delay… i really dont know.. when i will be able to post my next epi…. i m aiting for that.. probably next gonna fine.. letweek.. its hope for the best……

    • sharwani

      Arshi kis mitti Ki bani Ho..u r so sweet and Alice be careful and at least respect her thoughts now….and ya before commenting again dont forget to show ur reports is that ok?? Remember I’m a psychiatrist

    • Neha

      Hiii di sorry I am commenting very late…but trust me I am reading your episodes regularly….di I don’t know to write creative comments like sharwani as I am not that much creative in writing but I must say that you are great your way of handling good or bad person is amazing life mein agr chance mila toh apni iss di se zarur milna chahungi and dhi I hope app jldi nay episode ke saath aaoge and I trust you completely….love you from the core…

  25. arshi dhi pls don’t pay attention to Alice. we all are there for u. Its ok if u can’t upload the ff for this week. I am a great fan of your ff. Next week upload a holi spl epi then its fine for me. love u arshi dhi.

  26. Neha

    Please alice show some pity on yourself and please don’t come again on this page and I am very calm person but when I get angry then pray to god for yourself…

  27. ayesha

    hey alice u know that u r a very bad person u just don’t care about any one’s feelings u have hurt my sister arshi a lot and I am not gonna leave u for that and if she is saying that her laptop is hanged she is saying absolutely right I trust u arshi.

  28. Jo

    Hey arshi, just now I view this page… Waiting for ur episode. Get your laptop soon n update is soooooooon……… arshi, Don’t pay so much attention to Alice, that type of person are just showing their attitude creating scenes, don’t know the manners how to talk to people.. Alice it’s ur rights to share ur thoughts, it does not mean you criticise others. So don’t do this again…

  29. kajal

    Who is this alice to say like this is she dont have common sense obviously which is not so common.
    Arshi is so regular in her updates if she has asked for time due to some proble “which was not needed”.
    Then who is this aluce to say anything like this for which she is not bound.

  30. aalia

    Happy holi arshi god bless n just give an amzaing update when or laptop is repaired n I’m waiting for the holi episode really so excited n happy also most people’s exams r going on even me too so this week they r going to get over …….have a blessed day♥

  31. alice

    I am sorry arshi actually I was very angry that time and said soo many bad things to you I am really sorry plz accept my apology I really love ur update and when I wrote that ur lap is hanged I became angry and said u sooo many bad things to you I am sorry to the fans of this ff also and ayesha u had make me realize the fact that arshi is a great writer and yeah she is my sister also today a girl named ayesha realized me my mistake I am really sorry arshi and I love u from the core of my heart plz forgive me arshi and ayesha and also the fans of arshi thank you everyone and arshi sis u can update anytime,any day I will be eagerly waiting for ur update.I LOVE U ARSHI AND WILL MISS UR UPDATE.

    • Maaneet

      Stop taking someone for granted Alice. U r angry u say shit and now u r coll and come up with apology. U have no right on arshi that u talked the way u did. U r not paying her or something for all d effort she puts in. She can write when ever she feels like and she has all d rights to stop posting ff here and now. No one has right to question that. I am sure she is kind enough to forgive u.

      • sharwani

        Yes maneet arshi has already forgiven yesterday itself saying if everyone scolds her she gets hurt…so that’s the clear picture of arshi…and ya lets leave her from here onwards

    • arshi

      No problem yaar…. i just got angry the way u said…. but i know u were missing my updates badly thats y u said that… so no worries… lets be happy…. i will give super update once my lap will get fine….

  32. kajal

    Missing u arshi
    Please be back soon.
    Love u and wish u and ur family a very hsppy and prosperous holi.

  33. alice

    Thank you soooooo much arshi.You are the best may you be happy always and love you,will miss ur updates badly and for those who had forgive me I am just gonna say thank you to them.

    • Khushi

      Cause Arshi’s laptop was hanged.. And it needs 1 week to repair.. That’s why she couldn’t post…

  34. Khushi

    Hey, Arshi,, we all r badly missing ur ff… Ab intezar aur nehi hota……..
    But nobody could do anything without waiting….?
    Hope ur laptop will repair soon…
    Nothing to say..???

  35. Priyaa17

    Hello everyone……Really having a tough tym without this fan fic….. Anyhow arshi don’t take any stress of anything and hope to see u bang with a awesum epi yar. ??

  36. sara sally

    Hi arshi di I coudnt comment coz of ma exams..n really u hv a big heart lyk ur brain n skills,u r a kind heartd person..miss ur ff very much n love u..waiting for ur ff eagerly..

  37. Humble request ….
    Di please post it soon n ………
    I m very very very very very ….eagerly waiting for this ………
    it is my cup of tea ..
    please plz plz …..

    • Khushi

      Oh!! That means it haven’t repaired yet ??? That’s so sad.. But nothing to do now..
      Jaha itna intezar kiya waha thora aur sahi…

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