TPK (new love story) epi 1

thanks for all ur support & ur comments i m happy that u like my idea; i m student of BSC so i m not able to upsates daily but i try my best.
may be 3 to 4 epi in month or in a week.
here the epi start with
@ thapki house
aditi & shubh is watching tv and jumping on the sofa and shouting YO BIHAAN SIR WELL DONE NOW BEAT HIM HARD & THAN U WILL WIN.
shubh:”aditi di see bihaan sir again win the boxing competition Such a superstar he is. tommorow his racing comp. will start i want to watch that match live plz request papa to lets us go there.”
aditi:” bhai i too want the same but u know na papa is out of town & Ma will not allowed us only thapki is person who can help us.”
shubh:” so lets talk to her where is di? Didi where r u? i wanna talk to u.”
thapki enters wearing a beatiful dress and looking very pretty.No explanation at all
thapki;’ what happen naughty boy why u call me? Did u want chocolates or icecream.”
shubh;” no didi nothing only two tickets of the racing comp. which will held tommorow plz na for us can u buy it ”
aditi:’yes di I & shubh want to watch the racing sitting at the first seat.we want to cheer bihaan sir.”
thapki;” how can u both like that person who has such profession Defeating others & gain money irritating yar!.”
shubh:”plz di if u don’t want to buy say no but plz don’t say single word about my star.”
thapki pulling his ears
thapki:”u naughty boy i will say about ur star what will u do ha? shubh about to cry.
thapki:” ok dont cry i will agree mamma and than i’ll go to buy the tickets but promise u both will behave nicely & don’t react like a fool.”
aditi & shubh:” promise sweetu di love u.”
thapki;” love u both.”

@bihaan’s house
balwinder pandey is feeding Ram pyari the grass and shout:” bihaan beta where r u?.”
dadi ma:”oh ballu he had went with paan for practicing the racing. U know na your child is so hardworking.”
Vasu:” yes Ma g i know he haven’t done his lunch & went on this child always trouble me & dhruv also haven’t finish seeing his bro act.”
balwinder:” oh vasundhara g don’t worry u know na whenever bihaan feels hungry he always come to u & eat with ur hand.”
vasu:”yes u r right.”
preeti:” chutki why u take my Eye liner its very bad ha i m awesome & a beautiful lady.U gaon woman.”
suman:”oh badki i m not Gaon woman ok take ur eye liner don’t want it.”
vasu irritates & say:” go from here u both & if u start ur drama i’ll give u punishment.”
suman:”no badi sasu ma don’t we r going come badki.”
they goes
vasu dadi ma & balwinder laughs.

a handsome smart dashing good looking boy is riding a bike with a full speed and shouting:” yup paan now tomorrow i’ll surely win and after that i’ll participate at national level.”
paan:” yes bhai u will win as all ur fans support is with u.”
that boy:” not only their support but MA & bauji ASHIRVAD is with me & u see
B 4 bihaan pandey will win it surely.”
bihaan increase the speed and shout:”yo now i’ll win.”
paan:” bhai drive carefully.”
bihaan:” don’t worry paan i m driving it nothing will happen to u.”
suddenly the bike is about to hit a girl bihaan saw & apply the brakes but its hit the girl & she falls on the road
she looks angrily at bihaan.
bihaan is also angry & didn’t help her in getting up.
paan help the girl to get up.
she looks at bihaan angrily

who will she?
it will reveal on next epi
Any guesses.
hope u like it
do comments

precap: that girl try to slap bihaan but bihaan holds her hand.

Credit to: huge fan


  1. Superb story …. I like 1st episode.
    I think that girl was Thapki…. I don’t know am I correct or not,
    I am waiting for next episode…..

  2. Anu

    The girl is none other than our cute thapki…
    Very nice starting…
    Plz continue soon & also I wish you all the best 4 ur studies
    Study well….

  3. Prtibha

    Superb….u r awesome writer like ur cousin n our friend anu..keep it up n try to update soon..

  4. well start…….very interesting but i dont like to force you,because studies are more important than this passing entertainment.concentrate your studies…then tried to continue,OKKKKK.

  5. Prtibha

    Hey no dear nothing like that..i can’t forget u all coz it’s like our small happy family dear actually i was busy in something so hardly get time to read any ff..u can c that i didn’t comment any of ff by nusz,u,fatarajo,payal n os by mineey…n without reading ff how can i comment so that’s the reason i read that u r going to end ur ff so please never stop writing coz i feel like addicted n a Big Sorry to u n all fabulous writer those r writing amazing ff on thahaan…i will b regular in commenting after few days so pardon me dear..

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