Toota jo kabhi taara….. [a swasan story][prologue] by neptune…….

Helllllllllllllllllllllloooooooooooooooooo all my dear swasanians… this is your dear, sweet, cute, innocent lovely Neptune back with yet another story……

I know I know that I have started soooooooooooooooooo many stories and I have to handle all of them first but what to do this story has been playing in my mind for sooooooooooooooooooooooooo long and I had to pen it down as I couldn’t control my urge to write this story anymore.
I really don’t know if it’s something new or a story is written on it before too but I wanted to write on it……..

The story starts with Sanskaar acting as a mad. Here raglak engagement is yet to be done and laksh realises his love for swara.

Scene 1 :
Sanskaar : I have to take my revenge at any cost…… I don’t care whatever happens but I have to complete it any cost. And my first target is ms SWARA BOSE.
Scene 2:
Swara is seen getting married to someone. The boy’s face is covered with a sehera. And tears are flowing down her eyes.

Scene 3:
Sanskaar is shouting and crying his heart out at an isolated place : swaraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa please, please I beg you please forgive me, forgive your best friend, your Sanskaar please forgive your LOVE……….

So guys this is the prologue of my new story. I am soooooooo sorry if this is boring.
Please guys do read and tell me if you want me to continue it. I will only continue it if you guys will tell me your reviews otherwise I will not continue this story.
Meet you all in the next part till then bubbyeeeeee…….

58 comments

  1. Janvi_prabhas

    Janvi_prabhas

    |Registered Member

    Nice plot dear… continue it… I will surely read it… the boy in the sehera would be our villain … take your time …. I will wait for chap1

  2. Mars

    Mars

    |Registered Member

    Hayeeeeee new story on swasan loveee u nepuuu and prologue is super se upar don’t u dare to say it boring. It is dammm interesting.
    Abb jaldi post karna mere se control nahi hota…. impatient me.
    Continue soon
    Thanks
    Take care

  3. veena

    it is interesting..i’m busy in personal life..so not coming to tu…from now i hopefully active..have to read ur other works too☺

  4. IQRA222

    IQRA222

    |Registered Member

    neptune di another of your mind blowing stories
    i just cant wait for the episode to start
    you are an amzing writer and i do love the stories you write
    so pls do update soon!!
    waiting for the next part
    take care
    keep writing and smiling
    lots of love

    • Neptune

      Neptune

      |Author

      iquuuuu you can call me nepuuu like all my friends do…
      thanks for the comment kiddo…
      am glad you like my stories….
      i will post the next part soon dear….
      love you too dear and keep smiling….

  5. Anu

    Anu

    |Registered Member

    Awssome !!!! Neptune!! Plz dont include nagin nd cavity between swasan.. cant tolerate them!! Btw i guess groom in sehra is sanskar onlyy!

    • Neptune

      Neptune

      |Author

      aww don’t worry dear no one can come between SWASAN no matter what. and about the groom lets see whether your guess is right or not…..
      thanks for commenting dear….

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