Toota jo kabhi taara….. [a swasan story][prologue] by neptune…….

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Helllllllllllllllllllllloooooooooooooooooo all my dear swasanians… this is your dear, sweet, cute, innocent lovely Neptune back with yet another story……

I know I know that I have started soooooooooooooooooo many stories and I have to handle all of them first but what to do this story has been playing in my mind for sooooooooooooooooooooooooo long and I had to pen it down as I couldn’t control my urge to write this story anymore.
I really don’t know if it’s something new or a story is written on it before too but I wanted to write on it……..

The story starts with Sanskaar acting as a mad. Here raglak engagement is yet to be done and laksh realises his love for swara.

Scene 1 :
Sanskaar : I have to take my revenge at any cost…… I don’t care whatever happens but I have to complete it any cost. And my first target is ms SWARA BOSE.
Scene 2:
Swara is seen getting married to someone. The boy’s face is covered with a sehera. And tears are flowing down her eyes.

Scene 3:
Sanskaar is shouting and crying his heart out at an isolated place : swaraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa please, please I beg you please forgive me, forgive your best friend, your Sanskaar please forgive your LOVE……….

So guys this is the prologue of my new story. I am soooooooo sorry if this is boring.
Please guys do read and tell me if you want me to continue it. I will only continue it if you guys will tell me your reviews otherwise I will not continue this story.
Meet you all in the next part till then bubbyeeeeee…….

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58 Comments
  1. Awesome continue soon

    1. Neptune

      thanks mannu….
      will continue soon…..

  2. Komal

    Waiting for it…
    Seems interesting…
    Post next part soon!!

    1. Neptune

      thanks kashu……
      will post the next part soon….

  3. Janvi_prabhas

    Nice plot dear… continue it… I will surely read it… the boy in the sehera would be our villain … take your time …. I will wait for chap1

    1. Neptune

      thanks sanskrirti…
      and cholly but i can’t reveal anything now……
      keep guessing dear….

  4. Interesting..plz continue it..

    1. Neptune

      thanks kumu….

  5. Rachna

    Awsm Dr

    1. Neptune

      thanks rachna…..

  6. Mars

    Hayeeeeee new story on swasan loveee u nepuuu and prologue is super se upar don’t u dare to say it boring. It is dammm interesting.
    Abb jaldi post karna mere se control nahi hota…. impatient me.
    Continue soon
    Thanks
    Take care

    1. Neptune

      thanks marsuuuuuuuuuuuuu……
      don’t worry dear will try to post it asap…..

  7. interesting..

    1. Neptune

      thanks kat….

  8. it is interesting..i’m busy in personal life..so not coming to tu…from now i hopefully active..have to read ur other works too☺

    1. Neptune

      thanks veena…
      and don’t worry dear you can take your own time to read them…..

  9. Adishu

    continue

    1. Neptune

      will surely continue adishu…..

  10. Awesome dear plz continue

    1. Neptune

      thanks priya…..

  11. Soujanya

    Nice…

    1. Neptune

      thanks soujanya…..

  12. Interesting

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear SWASAN…..

  13. Awesome

    1. Neptune

      thanks suma

  14. Soumya85

    Seems interesting
    Please continue and it’s not at all boring

    1. Neptune

      thanks soumya….

  15. interesting dear

    1. Neptune

      thanks neha….

  16. Phoniex

    nice story dear.

    1. Neptune

      thanks phoenix…….

      1. KAINA

        hi neptune u are also msdian??
        nice dp

    2. Neptune

      hey KIANA glad to meet another MSDIAN like me……
      welll am a bigggggggggggggggg crazy fan of MSD…
      btw your dp is also awesome….

      1. Gayathri.visu

        Aree…Neptuu even me n Marssuu also MSDians dear…..

      2. Mars

        Yup even I love msdhoni

    3. Neptune

      aww cho chweet….
      i am the craziest fan of my dhonu….

    1. Neptune

      thanks swasan….

  17. IQRA222

    neptune di another of your mind blowing stories
    i just cant wait for the episode to start
    you are an amzing writer and i do love the stories you write
    so pls do update soon!!
    waiting for the next part
    take care
    keep writing and smiling
    lots of love

    1. Neptune

      iquuuuu you can call me nepuuu like all my friends do…
      thanks for the comment kiddo…
      am glad you like my stories….
      i will post the next part soon dear….
      love you too dear and keep smiling….

      1. IQRA222

        ok nepuu di !!<3 <3

  18. AnuAnn

    Interesting dear

    1. Neptune

      thanks anuuu…..

  19. AbrahamEzra

    It was interesting continue soon

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear….

  20. Anu

    Awssome !!!! Neptune!! Plz dont include nagin nd cavity between swasan.. cant tolerate them!! Btw i guess groom in sehra is sanskar onlyy!

    1. Neptune

      aww don’t worry dear no one can come between SWASAN no matter what. and about the groom lets see whether your guess is right or not…..
      thanks for commenting dear….

  21. loved itdear

    1. Neptune

      thanks anju

    1. Neptune

      thanks anu….

  22. Shifa96

    It’s nice..continue it.

    1. Neptune

      tahnks shifa….

  23. Gayathri.visu

    Neptuuu….good starting yaar! Its not at all boring….ok! Is that groom is Sanskaar?

    1. Neptune

      thamks gayu….
      umm about the groom its suspense so i can’t reveal sorry

    1. Neptune

      thanks dear

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