Together-Forever ( edkw) epi 8

Hi guys.. . Sry i cant post frm sm days ….. last epi of this ff was very mch spcl fr me…. after a long tym so many cmnts….. the cmmnt box have my frns cmmnt… who cmmnt on my every ff…  n also there were cmmnts of many slnt readers….. i wld like to thank all of thm n hope they wll cmmnt on this ff also…..n dear frns .. thnk u sooo wala mch to cmmnt on my ffs…
Guys … plz include suggestions or moderations that u think good fr my ff in ur cmmnts  …
Bahut bol liya … now cmng to d ff…???
Till now we hv seen i mean read ??that shravan ; hv cared fr suman whole nt…..
Shravan n Sanju r sharing cute bonding………

Now…..
Shravan hv left d suman's house promishing Sanju that he wll cm in noon…
Sanju- mumma aaj mai school ni jaungi…. plz mumma…
Suman- kyu my princes… u kn na that school miss krna is very bad thing….
Sanju-plz mumma bs aaj bhar ki bat h… n i promish that i wll go school on Sunday too…
Suman- awww my princess….. bt i wll prmit fr today only…..
Sanju- okkk mumma……..
          I m gng in my room… i hv to do sm thng…. vry urgent…. bye .
Suman-ok betu… go…

Sanju goes in her room .. n Suman too stand up to grt fresh….
She is feeling vry weak.. bt she hv to break fast fr Sanju ..( that is hw our mothers are… really another face of god …. i hope u all wll agree??)
Sanju is prelarng a Thank You card fr hr dost…..
In noon…. suman is sleepng… n sanju is watchng tv..
Bell rang……..
Suman wakes up…she is still sleepy…
" shravan tum????  Yaha??? " suman asked….shokingly… her all sleepiness hv gone ……
Shravan is stll standng on d gate…. adoring d beauty of suman… the hairs hv bcm messy n r cmng on Suman's face…..
Shravan extends his hand to caress the hairs of suman… bt Suman stp bck….
Shravan too get consious n quickly took his hnd bck …..

Shravan- ek chair plzzz…
Suman- kya??? Bt fr what???
Shravan-bcoz mere lmbe lmbe pairo me drd shuru ho gya h….. mai yahi baith jata hu…..
Suman -still like befr…… cm in …
Shravan cms inside……
Shravan- hi my princess…. how r u…….
Cm here… he sits on his knees extending his hands….
Sanju runs toward him n hug him… they shre sm vry cute emotional moments…..
Mère dil se tere dil ka…..
Rista purana h…..
( song by yhm)
Sanju- i hv sm thng fr u…. keep ur eyes closed….. until i say u to open…
Shravan- as u order my princess…..
Sanju runs toward her room n brings sm thng in hr litl hands…. trying to hide it..
Suman was standing bhnd thm n enjoying some very cute momnts…. she was gettng emotional seeng all this…..
Sanju- now open ur eyes…..
Shravan-( gets silnt) tears roll dwn his eyes…… thnku uu sooo mch…. he hugs her….
Suman gets tensed seeing this…..
Shraman n Sanju shres sm cute momnts… shravan plays wd her….
Suman – beta  …. hre is ur milk… finish it….
Till ghn i m taking your frn fr sm imp wrk…..
Shravan doesnt wants to go … bt goes wd her in last…..
Suman – kya chal raha h ..???
Shravan- bss ye pucne k liye layi ho… tumhe ni pta… FOGG chal rha h… ????
Suman frowns……
( actually it is an advertisemnt line if FOGG perfume…..)
Suman- plzzz gets serious…….

Shravan – i m serious….
Suman-why u r spndng soo mch tym wd my Sanju…….
Shravan- i m his frn yarr…. i dont kn why… bt i feel sm very strng bond wd her….
Suman- plzz try to understan… i dont want her to live in a false belief……

Shravan get hurt….. he leave frm there wd teary eyes……

In night……..
Suman tries to get sleep… bt she fails…..
Suman-why he again cm in my life… i wll never meet him again……
Itni mukil se maine move on kiya tha…. n ….
In fb…..

Suman- Shravan dont u think that we shd tell our parents abt us….. they will feel bad if they got to kn abt ghis frm aby othr way…

Shravan -ya … sure …… frst let me talk wd my parents n thn i wll cm to talk wd ur parents…..

Suman – ok plz… do all this fast…..
Shravan- kyu kyu. .. mere bina rha ni jata ab ????

Suman-ohhooo   nothing like that… pgl…. khi k…. she gets shy n leaves……..?????

Suman is in the lonely road …..some goons cm there ….
G-mam aap yaha akele….cmpany de kya hm
…????
Suman-tries to walk faster….
G- are itna fast kyu chlne lgi…..
Koi jaruri kam h kya….. ya…
Suman gets frightened …….
She is surrounded by goons frm all sides…
She is weapng hardly…….
Suďdenly a gon cm n sntches her dupatta..
She screems…….
Plz plz nooo
At d mean tym Shravan cms there…….
He beats d goons very badly…..

Suman is still crying……….

Shravan cm n drape dupatta arn her…. n hugs her tightly… Shravan is also crying…..
I wll nvr leave u alone….. i wll be always wd u….
Suman on bed fnds tears rolling downn
Suman- huuhhh fake promishr………

Next morng…
Suman reaches offc…   
Kumar- Suman…i hv made u the project head of d project wd Malhotras………
Suman- thnk u sir….. very glad to gt ds opertunity .. i wll try to gv my bst….

Every one congratulates her………
( she still donno who is malhotra…)

She goes to Malhotras offc……
Suman to d receptionst….
Suman- hi….. i m Suman… frm Kuman assosiation… i hc appointmnt wd  Mr malhotra….
R- ya mam….. wait a min…
She cnfrms her appointmnt……..
Ya mam u may go…..
Suman- whch way??
R-take wrt frm the third table………
Suman thnx her n goes…….

She knocks d door
A voice cms….. cmn in…..
I was waiting fr u only…….

Suman enters… sm one os sitting on the chair wd his bck on the side of sumo
……
The guy turns d table n is still looking in a file……. May i kn ur name plz……..

Suman – tummmm????? Yaha???????
??????
I m too shocked… tum yaha…..???? The man cries……
The guy is our handdm Shravan…..
Suman – wt r u dng in d chambr of Mr Malhotra……
Shravan- i m Mr Malhotra…..
He points het toward a picture frame on d wall wd his pic n name……
Suman -shittt kaha fass gyi mai…..
??????
Shravan- kuch kaha tumne …..
Suman-kuch suna tumne…..
Shravan leave it…. wt r u dng here???
Suman- dont try to be a kid… u kn why i m here……
Shr-seriously i donno….
Sum- u were saying that u were waiting fr me only..
Shr-aree i was telling that fr the represtative of our client company…… that is the project head of that company………
Suman-dont try to be a kid yaarr……
I m that projct head……..
Shr-wht…… seriously……?????
The screen freezes on their faces…….

Precap- shraman's cute nokjhok………  full of taunts ….n perhaps sanju n shravan's momnt……..

Spoiler- a tagra larai is gng to cm in upcmng epi.. mny secrets will get reveal wch may shock u all…….

Guys plz cmmnt.. ..
Slnt readers waiting fr ur cmmnts toooo…
Love u allllll……

34 comments

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      thnx lily….. i wll try to post soon..
      i m too eager to shr the secrets wd u all….. i hope u all wll like it…..
      waiting fr ur presence in upcmng epis….

  1. ufaq

    Hiiii sweetoooo kese ho appp????? The episode was amazing very excited for spoiler and I love shravan and sanju bonding and strongly agreed about mother character dii I want to know or real name otherwise nick name plzzzzz and ya take care love u

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      i m good dear….. n hw is my sissyy……???
      thnx a lot fr liking my epi….. mujhe bhi lgta h ki sanju n shraman mast h….mai likhte waqt sari mhnt unki bonding pr krti hu….. meri dad k sath bajut achi bonding h …. use hi story me reflct krne ki koshish krti hu……..

      • ufaq

        Di I have my dad email I’d which I use here do u need that?????? And ya I m fine and u don’t told me or name OK nick name plzzzzzz

  2. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    secrets secrets secrets … itne saare folds h iss kahani me,, samajh hi nai aa ra … kyu kyu itne sara suspense??? ??? dis part was amazing as always.. loved it.. unfold d secrets fast..????

  3. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    i,m loving sanju and sharvan bond soooo much they are soooo cuteeeee

    loved ittttt

    epiiiii was sooo nyc i enjoyed every bit of it reveal ur secrets fast……….

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      thnk u sooo mch angel….. ya i m too dying to reveal d secrets fst. i hv decided sm thng shocking…hope u wll like n get shock knowing that ……. 😉
      haha plz keep cmmntng like this always
      ………

  4. sona

    Exactly..I agree with..sumo…
    And its solo…interesting..pls…don’t get late in posting the next ff dear☺??????

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      haha …. i wll reveal secrets soon… i m jst waiting fr the rt places…. perhaps after one to two epi ….. secrer wll be strted revealing
      . ……
      thnx fr your cmmnt

  5. Maria

    Wow di fantastic loved it to d core !! Sanju-shravan bond !! Awww so cute n I m really desperate to knw d secrets 😀 n u r ri8 our mothers r really another face of god 🙂 🙂 🙂 u r awesome di !!
    Plzzzzzzz post next prt ASAP I m erglyyyy waiting fr it…..!
    Love u!

  6. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Wow amazing…eagerly waiting to know wat might hve happened btwn shraman…..u write so well….I love it…post soon…!
    🙂

  7. Shiny

    I loved it!!!!u just rocked…loving d bonding between dem….itne saare screts …waiting for it….plz post asap

  8. Naina

    Wow nice epi……i must tell u all writers that ur ffs are really good u look like a professional writers keep doing like this

  9. Anamika

    Goons part was superb lovely do n shravsn sanju bond make me feel awww….. apwaiting for the nxt part… post it asap ???

  10. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Sorry sorry for being late….I’m ready to take any punishmen….I was bzy in preparation sweets for eid….I’m sorry my chweeeett sisi…epi was wonderful like you….awesome yaar…I didn’t like it I just loved it…Thank you sooo much for being my sister…and how are you….how your day…what about college….what is climate there…I love you soooo baby….take care…keep rocking like this ummmmmmmhhhhhhh

  11. ufaq

    Diiiiiiiii where r u now a days
    Thk to ho na????
    Admission to ho hi gaya yoga haina????
    Api dishurt my hoa karo kisi b chez she OK wese mithaii?????
    Api chand mubarak
    Eid Mubarak
    Take care sweetu
    Love u sisi

  12. ufaq

    Diiiiiiii u r ill oh God what happened to ,y sisi
    Take care yar plzzzzzzz get well soon
    A tight hug from ur sisi
    Love u yar
    Don’t take tension or stress of anything take care of urself don’t care about anything
    Yar I m very worried for u
    Love u very very very very very much

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