Together– Forever( edkw) epi 7

Hi guys …. Thanxx fr your overwhelming support ….i was glad that u liked it… the silent readers shd also cmmnt….. less cmmnts demotivates us…… wdout taking your tym … let me strt my epi—-
Till now Shraman hv a romantic dance perfrmnc … n Sanju hv clled Shravan as Suman is having high fever… n Shravan rushes to her..

Now,
Shravan is driving car fastly n is restless thnkng abt Suman…
He reaches home…. N ring the call bll…… Ltl Sanju opened the door…..
Sanju- thnx a lot uncle…..dekho na umma ko kya ho gya h??????
Shravan- Bet ab mai aa gya hu na…… Tumhari mumma ko kuch ni hoga….
Sanju weeps…. Shravan take her in lap… n too gets emotional seeing her……
Shravan- beta trst your frn plz…. N took me tour muma….
They go inside the bedroom… Suman is lying on the bed unconsciously….
Shravan is emotional seeing suman in that condition…..
He took out the medicines he had brought as per asking the docs….
Shravan- beta where is kitchen…?????
Sanju shows him d way…. N he bring water fr her….
Shravan make Sun sit n make her hv her medicines… still Suman is unconscious….
Sanju is weeping seeing her mumma……
Shravan — beta plz get sleep… u hv to attend ur school na.. plz go to ur room n sleep….
Sanju-no dost I wll sleep wd my mumma
Shravan—No beta… u wll also get infected thn… plz plz go..
Shravan forcely make her go to her room n sleep……..
Shravan- thanda pani le leta hu… patti dunga to fever jldi utr jayega…
He takes water in the bowl n cm to sit near suman…
He started giving her patti of cold water……

Shravan was feeling restless seeing her like that……. He was also mesmerized by her beauty…..
While giving patti of cold water…. N adoring her beautiful face he goe in flasbck…..
Suman is ltl bit angry n Shravan is saying—
Shravan- u don’t kn my choice the….
Suman – no I donno……
Shravan- r u sure????
Suman- ya I m
Shravan- Aaj mai dkhaunga meri choice…. Koi aisi waisi lrki meri choice ni h….. aaj dekhogi usko to tum sajhogi ki choice kya hoti h n ye shravan kya cheej h……. tb jealous hogi n tb tumahre paas jealous hone ka reason bhi hoga… Be ready at seven pm sharp I wll pick u up,,,,,
Suman- (angrily) what to get ready in all that … we r not gng to meet Miss Universe……
Shravan- huuhhh she is Miss Univrse fr me………. Be ready………
Suman n Shravan both went in opposite direction….

In her bedroom …..
Suman- bri ayi Shravan ki Miss Universe banne wali……..
Shravan in his room…. Aj mai btaunga use…. Beauty kise khte h……..
At seven sharp…….
Shravan calls Suman —- Are u ready????????? I n waiting on the road… cm soon
Suman- I m cmng na…. u hv to wait……..
Suman cms down….
Shravan is waiting fr her leaning on his car……….
Shravan is shocked to see her….. He is looking her open mouthd frm head to toe….
Suman is wearng a whte clrd long gown …. Wddeep red lipistic n big diamond earng….n a high heel…….. hair curled n inned in a side…….
Suman is too looking at Shravan who is looking damn hot in white blzor on black pant……
Suman stepps toward him….
“ooyyeee mister…. Muh bnd kr makhi ghus jayegi” suman says him naughtily…
Shr- oo ha I was looking thr so many cute puppies na……
Suman fumes….. chl late ni ho rha …… teri choice ni dikhana……….
Shravan smile n opens d gate fr her…..

Both reaches a lonely place,…….
It was a big ground.. beautifully decrted….
Suman- kaha h aapki choice misteer.. mujhe to koi dikh ni rhi h……….
Shravan – aa na…… dikhata hu………
They walk further……..
Sumo is shcked…….
There was a gate of circular area…
Shravan – ruk kyu gyi…. Usse yaha rakhta mai…. Khule me???? Najar lg jati ti.. andr h wo chalo………
They open the gate n goes inside……………
Sumo is dbleeee shocked……..
Pur circular diwar pe shishe lge the……… a man cn see 360* wd in it… so mchh beautiful
Sumo was to see sch a beautiful arrangement….. she turned around …….. she was happy like a chld…
Suman gets in sense…
Suman- bt wo kaha h jise dikhane laye ho…….
Shravan- really yar I wll suicide now……. Itne k bad bhi tu puch rhi h……… kyu bche ki jaan lene pr tuli ho?????
Akh ki Andhi tujh mirror me ni dikh rhi wo………( Shravn says naughtily)
I have told u that I wll show u the grl of my choice……. N my choice is every where in the mirror…….
Sumo was in seventh sky or perhaps also abbv that…….
Suman ( cntrlling her happiness)- wht do u want to say ………. Say it clearlyyy…..
Shravan- bn le betaa buddhu aj… ase to bina kuch kahe sab saamjh leti ho aur aaj meri exam lene ko tyar ho………..
Ok thn it wll happen as u want………..
Suman smiles n is extremely hapyy……
Shravan asks her close her eyes………

After few secnds…. He says her to open her eyes………..
Suman is shocked to see Shravan sitting on his knees wd roe in his one hand……….
Shravan- So miss Suman…..
#U hv made this stupid guy …. a mad in ur love….
I love u sooo mch……. Wll u be my grl frnd???????
Suman- tears rolled over her cheeks… she jst nodded in yes……..
Suman took the rose frm his hand………
Shravan stand up…….
Suman hug him tightly n so does Shravan
Suddenly Shravan came in senses n find himself sitting beside Suman who is still sleeping…
He continues giving her patti of cold water…………..
In morning………..
Suman wakes…….. n sees Shravan sleeping on her hand……….
Suman- TUM???? YAHA???????
Suman screems……….
Shravan wakes up hurrily n find her sitting on the bed…..
Shravan touches her forehead n says..
Shravan- thnk god tumhe ab fever ni h…….. pta h mai kitna dr gya tha…….
Suman – what?????
Shravan sees he is holding her hnds ………
Both feels aawkward
Shravan leaves the hand………
Suman—bt tum yaha kaise??? Tumhe kisne bataya ki mujhe…???? N most imp andr kaise aye???????/
“oohhooo mumma … aapki taibiyat ni thik thi rat me … aapko baut fever tha…….. tb maine apne dost ko bula liya….. apni madad k liye…….. apka akele khaya kaise rakhti mai?????
Sanju says frm the door…
Sanju- hw r u feeling now….
Suman – good…..Suman eyes her angrily……
Shravan- bachi h wo…. Use jo thik lga usne kiya….. bechari kitna ro rhi thi kl…..
Tumhe atleast Sanju ka o khayal rakhna chahiye na…………..N ghr me baki sab kaha h…. koi dikh ni raha……

At the mean tym…… Shravan’s phn ring..
Shravan- ooo… I m cmng thn….
Shravan- my princess…. I hv to go now….. I hv sm imp work…..till thn take care of your mumma…… I wll cm n meet u in the afternoon……
Sanju- Wwwoooww aap aaoge fr…. Thn we wll play too…
Shravan—yeeeyyy my princess…. I will surely cm n play wd u…..
Suman- its ok… I m fine now…. U not need to wrry abt me…….i can take care of myself…….
Shravan- plz no argument……

Plz guys cmnt n spprt…. I need it a looottt…..
Slnt readers too cmmnt……..

56 comments

  1. Lily

    Wow,its awesome…yaar I loved it ….I am very curious to know what happened between them……..plz post next part soon……..
    ????

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      thnk u sooo mch lily…… sach bolu to mai khud bhi bahut curious hu sab batane k liye……… 😉
      plz keep readng n cmmntng……..
      🙂

  2. maria

    Di!!! Its awesome!!! Yr AP ke haathon mai jaado hai!! Wo shraman confession scene toh kamal ka Tha!! 😀 😀
    May u alwayss be happy !!
    N keep writing these wonderful ff’s
    love u Di!! 🙂

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      thnk u maria….. bt aaj to tujhe lgege….. jhuthi tarif krti rhti h…. i m not that mch gooddd yaar……
      love u tooooo….
      may u always ne happy…..always more than me 😉

  3. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    beautiful … was amazing lovely.. d way Shravan prposed suman.. n m sure sanju is not Shravan’s daughter.. ??

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      ssshhhh aisi nate jor se ni krte…. koi sun lega…. ha ha ha 😉
      are ni yar aisa ni h….. dekho kya hota h…
      n thnk u sooooooo mcccchhhh fr liking my ff n cmmntng on it……

  4. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Confession was so beautiful.. Plss post soon.. Eager to know what happened between them that the cute couple got seperated.. Pls show that soon. Omg shravan is so caring.. Loving your ff.. Post soon…

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      shukeiya niki…… ya i wll post it vry soon….. i too want to wrt abt it ….. it gonna be ful filmy ….
      keep loving your di like this…..
      n post your ff prts soon ….. i m eagerly waiting……

  5. Shalini Naicker

    Amazing Loved it. I think Sanju is not her daughter. She might have adopted her.

  6. Shiny

    Omg !!!It’s just amazing…no words…d way sharavan conffessed is awsmm….u r an amazing writer…eagerly waiting to read lot from u …plz post next episodes asap….

  7. MissAaira

    Wowww excited for the next parts plsss post soon
    Iam hving a lottt of questions in my mind plss clear it soon by the way I juz loveddd ur ff

  8. sona

    Lovly..yaar..
    Aaj kal Teri ye ff padkey..mujey a is a lag raha hai ki..my…TV met..daily..soap serial dekh rahi noon..?☺☺
    Merey Kenney na Matlab that..its like..live..gng on my mobile screen rey..
    That much I involved in this cute family..☺☺☺
    Gud..keep it up..

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      thnk u sooo mch fr ur valuabl cmmnt…
      it means a lot…… whn u say that u can imagn my ff scns thn it seems that effrts r gng in d rgt way…..
      thnk u sooo mch…:)

  9. gourvi aggarwal

    It was amazing guys.I kept reading all your ff from a long time and today i thought i have to comment so i did.i am a silent reader of your ff………

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      gourvi …sachii u read my ff frm long tym?????
      aree thn why dont u cmmnted… are yaar cmmnts r the stress boostrs…. plz cmmnt yar…. plz plz ……
      n thnx fr loving my ff …
      n plz cmmnt on my upcmng epis …… i wll be waiting…

  10. LovelyLady

    |Author

    GUYS MAY I HV ALL OF YOUR ATTNTN PLZZZZ…..
    i have a QUESTION for u……..
    guys cn u gss what hd made shraman seperate……???????
    waiting fr every bodys cmnt……. slnt readrs also gss n tell here……

  11. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Oohhh my sweet baby doll amazing work…sorry for being late…I am proud to say I’m you’re Di…fabulous work…..love you lots….

  12. sahasra

    Story was really good..im really curious to know about the next parts!! Can u reveal a suspense!!! Kya wo choti bachi sumo aur shravan ka beti!!???

  13. Naina

    Nice epi….specially the propose scene…..love the way shr proposed sumo….its adorable……??????????????

  14. Adaa

    Hi!!? actually i am a silent reader..
    I mean i was a silent reader but ur super duper story insisted my heart to comment.
    Thanks Lovely for a superb story
    That is fantastic?

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      adaa u were also a,slnt reader….
      thnx fr cmmntng…… n liking …n yaar if u wll cmmnt than only i cn wrt better n better…..
      so plz it is a request that plz cmmnt….

  15. amu

    awesome ff. …loved it….keep writing. …waiting for the next episode. .😊😊

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