Together– Forever( edkw) epi 6

Hi frnss … extremely sry fr late postng…..
Till now.. Sanju had done frndship wd Mr Malhotra… suman n Malhotra share a romantic momnt wd each other in darkness were suman washes his leg in fountain……….. lights cm after sm tym n they r shocked to see each othe now,
Suman- tum???????? Yaha???
Shravan- tum ?????? yaha???????

They r shoked……. Both r sittng near fountain…… splashes of fountain is falling on Suman’s face…. Her face is filled wd water drops on one side….. her hand is touchng his feet……
Shravan is mesmerizingly looking her… both hv an intense eye lock…..
Suman realises hr hnd on his feet n cms In cnscs… she move away her hand…..
They broke the eye lock…….
Shravan sees water drops on her face…. He extends his hnd n wipes water ….. Suman closes her eyes…… n leans by side on his hand……
“I m getting late… I shd go now……” Suman suddenly aprts n says nervously…..
Shravan is standing like a statue…….. Fir jaa rhi ho…….
Suman wents wdout saying any thng…….
Suman wnt inside…….
N shravan follows her……

“Mumma kaha rh gyi thi….. apne mere frn ko thnkx kaha??” Sanju says suman hugging her…..
Suman- wiping her tears….. ni mile mujhe…( I don’t find him.) ab chalo … late ho rha h…..
Sanju – how u didn’t fnd him…. He is so hndsm that any one cn notice him…………..
N see here is he…….. she points to shravan standing bhnd thm listeng all this shockingly…………..
Shravan had listened their convo………
Suman turns to see frn of Sanju……..
She is dbl shocked to see him….
Both hv an eye lock….

Sanju runs toward him………..
Sanju- dost …. Meet my mumma……n mumma meet my new frn…..
They r stll lost in each others eyes…. Shravan looks her questiongly…….
Sanju- muma cm here n meet him.. he is very sweet…..
Sanju pulls her mumma toward him…..
Sanju- shake hands……. Plzzzzz
Both r stll statue…………
Sanju brings hands of Suman n Shravan n put suman ‘s hand in Shravan’s hand……
They got sense n saw their hands in each others hand…….
Kumar—so guys ,,, lets make the party more interesting……. All the guys hv to stop wrt now… n hv to dance wd th person standing jst in frnt of thm…… yeeeeeeee
Every one is happy….

Sanju—yeee mumma n dost wll dance together…….
Shraman are shoked to hear this….. Suman tries to separate her hand bt… Shravan desnt allow her to do so…..

Music plays………..
AAj phir tumpe pyar aaya h… aaj phir tumpr pyar aaya h….
Behad aur besumar aaya h……. aaj phir tum pr pyar aaya h…..
Shravan dances cming closer to Suman n Suman is uncmfrtable wd him…… She tries to go thn Shravan pulls him very close n put his hand on her waist n hold it tightly…….

After dance Suman hold the hand of Sanju n went out of the party…….
In night …..
Shravan is in his room…… he is very sad…….. n crying,,,,
Shravan in flashback—-
“yaarr suman kitna bhav khati h….. phn kyu ni utha rhi thi….” Shravan is talking wd suman on phn…….
Suman- kyu uthau mai….. exam h na tumhara….. go n study…
Shravan- I kn my exams r thre… bt u donno that whn u don’t pick up he phn I bcm soo wrrd…
Suman- wh u got wrrd….
Shravan- tu to aise bol rhi h ki tujhe kuch ni pta…
Suman-yeehhh I really donno….. why were u talking wd neha in the coriidr… she was trying to get so closyyyy…… nu were enjoying na???????
Shravan- ohhh this is the fact bhnd yur anger….. oo u r getting jealous???????
Suman- why wll I be jealous wd any one… it is your life… ur choice……
Shravan- pgal u don’t kn my choice…. What a joke???????
Suman – it is not a joke… I m gng to sleep…. Don’t distrb me by clling me again………….
Suman cuts the call……………
Shravan was smiling………

Suman was sleeping in her room… her room mate was out for few days…….. she was alone…..
Jst thn Sm one shakes her whl she was sleeping ……
Suman- kaun h??????( insleep)
Open ur eyes….. meri neend urakr khud kaise so skti ho………..
Suman opens her eyes …. Shravan????????? Yaha??????
Shr- ha mai………. Kyu jealous thi aaj neha se…..
Suman- told u na … tht why wll I be jealous… it is your life… ur choice…
Shr- n wht u told that u donno my choice

Suman – ha ni janti mai…… bataoge to janungi na…….. I m not a godeesss ki bia kuch khe hi sb kuch jan lu… mujhe pta h that ur choice wll be Neha or any other grl lyk her who kn how to attract ppl….. who try to cm close whn ever they get tym….. kya kya hua h tumahare beech me…(says angrily wd fake smile) bolo bolo chup kyu ho…. Bolo na…..
Shravan puts his fnger on hr lips….. kitna bolti ho n kya lya bolti ho……. I m not like that….
Jealousy me kuch bhi mt bolo……
Suman- again saying tht I m not jealous…..
Shravan- I want to show u my choice today…… bahut ho gya ab…… shd also kn abt m choice…………
Suman gets eyewateed… she hides her tear n went wd him…..

Tring Tring…….. Tring Tring….. Shravan cms out of flsh bck ….. he sees his phn ringng…. Phngets cut…. He is shocked to 37 missed calls frm a sngl number…….
Again…
Tring Trng….. hravan picks up the call

Voice- hi dost… tum thik to ho na….. I was so wrrd…… why were u not picking my number…..
Shravan- oo Sanju…… how u got my number
Sanju- don’t u remnber that u hd gvn me the card( hope mny of u hv also frgttn that Shravan had givn her his card….. n thinking the same ques 😉 )
Sharavan- ooo ha I remember…… how r u …..
Sanju- much wrrd abt my dost….. why were u not picking my call… I got wrrd…
Shravan remembers how he also go wrrd abt Sumo like ths…………
Shravan – nervously—- hw is your mumma….. hw is she?????
Sanju- I was calling fr her only……

She had high fever….n I m alone wd her samjh hi ni aa rha ki kya kuuu……
Shravan—- what??????? U r alone how is now??? Tell me the address I m cmng…
Sanju tells him the address… n Shravan rushes towards her…

36 comments

  1. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    wow wow wow! you hold d suspense really well..m hell exited to kno wat happened between Shravan n suman .. n yes I forgot about d no. thing n was thinking d same question.. ?????? anyway loved it to d core…

  2. maria

    Wow yr Di !!!! Its awesome!!! i was imagining all dis in my mind!!! 🙂
    Must say Di u r fantastic writer !!
    Itne ache ff likhti ho!!
    I m in luv wid u Di!!! 😀
    may u always smile!!

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      awww thnk u sooo mch dear…… i m too in lo e wd u n ur ff a lotttf….. i hope u wll like nxt parts also……
      love u a loootttf….. u r really a sweet heart

  3. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Amazing di..!! Waiting for the next episode.. Post soon.. Just a wild guess.. Is sanju shraMan’s daughter??

  4. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    lovey jiiii flashback pora kr deti pata to chalta what happen btwn sharman i,m eargely waiting

    aryyy yar tm sb log apne ff itne suspense p khtm kroge to yeh chota sa bacha soega kese 😉

  5. Anamika

    Hey may I please join this edit page m a big fan of the show n obvio our nimik
    M from himachal..

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      ya sure… u welcm in our small cute family of edkw…. we all r huge fan of namik n nikita…….
      i too lv naamik a lot……
      n wow u r frm himachal….. i loved that plce a lottt. it us one of my dream destinatn….

  6. sona

    Sori yaar..lovly..I’m not gng to say anything..
    My bahutttt..late ho gayi hu…yaha aise koi nahi hai.kidney mere life..koi shabdh..choda ho..???☺?
    Fir..bhi..mujhey kisi ki dialogue yaadh aa rahi hai..
    Chakkas..bindaas…fandu CLS….?☺??
    Fantastic..mind blowing..unbeliveble..
    Don’t say ki zyada ho gaya hai..u deserve it☺☺

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      aree yaar jyada to gya h thora…. 😉
      bt i wll accpt all this jst as,your love….
      so sweet that u said al thus thing………
      loce u dear a loottt

      • LovelyLady

        |Author

        aur pta h aisa to mere sath hmesha hota h… khas kr agar kuch gss krna ho to.. kuch milta hi ni……. sare log lg bhg sab kuch gss kr liye hote h…. tb mujhe – i too agree wd ______ likhna prta h 😉

  7. Naina

    Nice epi….but post the next one soon i wanna know what happened b/w them why they separated????????

  8. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Lovy how your doing this fabulous….no yaar my appreciation will be less for you…..your an amazing writer….superb work Masha Allah….love you more and more and more mmmmmmhhhhhhh

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      Aawwww di …. thnk u soooo mch fr your lovely cmmnntss…. bt di itne k bad kahi mujhe diabetes ho gya to????
      Apni bhn ka khayal rakho…….
      Love u tooo ….more yhan u lv me ??

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