Together– Forever( edkw) epi 4

Me: Hi it is lovely lady……,
Thnx fr cmmntng guys… keep me lovng like this…….

Now,
Suman enters her offc n fnd every one tensed…
She get to kn that her boss Mr Kumar is very amgry on her n waiting fr her in her cabin…
She also gets frightened. She enters d cabin of Kumar
Suman – gmng sr
Kumar – wt gmng u kn?? u r 15 min 27 sec late…
Suman – ( got a smile n says controlling her smile) sry sr i wll nver be late again.
Kumar – we hv got appointmnt of Mr Malhotra … n tmmrw we hv to go wd presntatn
Suman -congrats sr
Kumar – i wnt u to preprthat presntatn …
Suman -me???
Kumar -ya…. go n lock urself in your cbn… plz call me if u want any thing…..i m jst a call away
..
Suman goes in her cabin…..she burst out laughter remembering her boss …..
She finally cmpletes the prsntstn whch was liked by every one…….
Suman -sr i want leave fr tmmrw
Kumar -whhtttt? Hw can u say this… i wll get an attak
Suman – why sr???
Kumar :-u jv to gv d presntstn ….
Suman – i m realy vry sry… there is a prgrm in my daughters school … i hv to go plz sr……
Kumar have to gv her prmssn bcoz Suman was the back bone of cmpny n he cnt affrd his anger……
(I dont want to drag my ff …..)
The trip of suman n sanju along wd d school frnds of sanju was mnd blowing…. n here in d offc.. they finally got that deal……
Kumar – Suman cngrts we got that deal… all bcoz of ur presntatn…. thnk u…….
Suman – no need to thnk me… i hv done all tht fr this cmpny only…
Kumar – ok thn …. one thng more to tell u… i kn u dont like partues,at all bt plz dont say no fr tosays party….
Suman – sir u kn na i dont like parties at all……
Kumar – plz suman this party is thrwn by Malhotras … n they want to meet u..
Plz fulfill my wsh ….
Suman – plz sr i m never cmfrtbl in parties…..
Kumar – no i wll not listn any wrd u hv to cm n ya plz bring my litl frn too…… she will also enjoy…. n u wll also not miss her in whole party….
Suman – ok sr… bt it will Me: Be my last prty….
Kumar – ok ok… i wll not frce u after this party…..
Suman – ok thn text me the venue n tym………..
In evening….. suman is wearing red clrd plain saree wd bun of hair… light makeup… looking stunning in it ……n Sanju is wearng a pink clrd frok…. looking like a fairy……
Both Lovely ladiesy entered the hall…. Suman is carrying a big bouque….in her hand…..
Sanju- mumma soo neautyful decoratns …. it is looking like fairy land.. mumma as u told in the sstory by angel- love in paradise…
Suman – ya dear…. bt plz be always wd me … no sharart at all..
SAnju- okey mumma…… bt abhi to khlne do na…
Suman – no beta… we wll go bck home vry soon
Sanju- wht…?? Nooooo mumma i wll go nowhr
Suman – no badmashi cm wd me…
……
Aftr sm tyms…..
Kumar -hello lady…
Suman -gd evng sr.. once again congrats…. btw whr is mr malhotra
Kumar -he wll be sm whr…..
They involved in chit chat abt the new project
Now Sanju’s pov
Mumma mujhe le jayegi.,… tb tk mai khi thora ghum k ati hu( she goes silently)
Where shd i go… woow there mst be a faury land behind that mountain ……..
She goes there….
Splasses of water…. so beautyful fountain……
Bt there is so darkness…… its ok.. munna sats that i m her brave grl….
I wll ask the fairy to bring my papa soon……
Fairy …..whr r u???
See mamma’s brave grl hv cm….
Fairy whr r u????
On the other hand a guy is sitting on the bnch… in his own thoughts…. he listens d voice of d baby Sanju n cms there…. he is Mr Malhotra….
He cms there n mesmerized by her cuteness……( i wll wrt M fr Mr Malhotra)
M -soo cute grl….. hi beautyful…
Wt r u dng here……
Sanju- who r u??
M- i m d owner n host ….. tell me wt u wnt???
Sanju- mumma hv told me not to talk wd strangers…….
M- ooooo your mumma looks to be very careful abt u…. kk thn cn we be frns… he sits on his knees to cm upto sanju’s height….
Sanju- why we wll be frns… i dont kn u… mmma gu Me: ssa krengi…….
M- kk thn i make u d spcl guest of my party ….. now can we bcm frns….
Sanju- really tgn ok i wll be your frn…. u wll have to gv me my fav icecream
M- finally u bcm my frn… ok tell me your fav flavour.. i wll bring it to u frm any prt of d wrld….
Sanju- i lk choco chips…..
M- in shock…….
Sanju- why u r in shick nai dena thn its ok…
M- ni kuch the same ice cream was fav if sm one else too
Sanju- oo your daughter also lyks it… whr is she???
M- ( laughngly) no.no not my daughter…( in mnd he says sm one vry spcl)
Sanju- u kn my mumma also lyks this ice cream vry mch…….
M- ooo…. ab ye batao… wt r u dmg here??? U r not feeling afraud
Sanju- no my mumma says that i m vrt brave so i was not feeling afraid….
M- oo your mumma says…n wt r u doung here…
Sanju- i thought there is a fairy land behind this fountain…. i cm to meet fairy…..
M- get lost in her wrds…. he says in mnd so cute……
Ok wt wll u do meeting her
Sanju- i want her to fulfill my wsh …
M- wch wsh??
Sanju- i want that my dad cm to meet me….. i hv nt seen him ever…. he jst send gfts on bdays….
Saying this she starts weeping…..
M too get emotnl n tears roll down his cheeks…….
M- u kn…. u r d pricess…. fairy everythng….. now ur each n every wsh wll be fulfilled by your frn…….they both hv a hg……..
On the other side Suman is wrrd fr sanju….
She also cms to that garden searchn her…
Sanju- u kn i hv to go… my muma wll be tensed …. n she hv told me that we hv to go home soon….
M- wht? ? U wll go so soon???
Sanju- hmmm
M- wht wll your frn do after u leave him…. tell your mumma to stay fr sm more tymm….
Sanju- no i cnt say… plz u cnvnc mumma…..
M- ok beta….. till thn take my crd… call me whn ever u want……
Suman is wrrd…..
She saw sanju talking to sm one….. she cnt see the face of that guy….

Precap.– suman meets that guy n lots of twists to be cm out……
Plz guys cmmnt…

43 comments

  1. Bhoomi

    |Registered Member

    Superb…. Fantastic… New twist ia coming soon…. i m super excited….. Sanju is so cute… i m impressed….. Lovelly like u ???

  2. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    hahahahahaha lovy love in paradise by angel i was suprise by this πŸ˜›

    awwwww sanjuuu is soo cute i,m in love with her

    i think mr, malothra is sharavan butttt imp thng sumo,s boss was true joker hahahahaha loved the epi

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      thnk u. angel i hope u dont mind that i used d name of your ff in my ff……
      thnk u angel di fr loving me– by Sanju…
      aawww u telk me joker bt its ok.. tum lovy ki frn ho is liye chor raha hu warna…… ye hath mujhe de de thakur i mean angel aisa bolta mai— by Kumar Sir( nam to suna hi hoga na)

  3. maria

    Oooh lovely Di love Di !!!! Ap itni amazing ho πŸ˜€ kya likhtiiiii ho !!!! Ap…..
    I want to delicate a line to u
    ” my ideal personality & writer”
    love u soooo much!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      frst of all thnk u sooo mch…. bt i m not that mch good yar…. u r soooo swweett… mujhe diabetes ho gua na to mai tum pr case kr dungi… πŸ˜‰
      dekho na abhi tk meri anjck k season 2 post ni kiye Gabbr Singh ne

      • maria

        Awwww Di dont u worry ho jai gaaaaa !! Khushi ka prt 2 bhi toh ho gaya na πŸ™‚ but seriously i am waithing fr ur ff πŸ˜€ hope it will post soon πŸ™‚

  4. shraman

    Amazing di..!! I think that guy must be shravan.. Anyways, sanju is so cute!!love her.. Sumo is so nice.. Nice going..! Post soon.. You’re an amazing writer

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      thnx shraman a lot yar…..
      n thnx r saying me cute … u r also very cute nikku di- urs Sanju…..
      n nikki keep readng n cmmntng….

  5. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    Lyk evrybody said … Snju is sooooo cute… N imagining sumo in a red saree she would look fab… M sure… Well i really dont need to tell u dat u r vry amazing…kwep it up….??????

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      sumo di cmmnts cmng frm u means alot……
      di u r a professnal wrtr( dont disagree bcz your wrtng hv reveald your secret of being profssnl) plz advc me sm thng to make my wrtng better…. u hv to gv atleast one advc..

      • Sumo

        |Registered Member

        are mujhe chane k jhad pr mt cdha yaar. itni v Charles Dickens type nai hu mai.. normal so ldki hu … πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
        pr advice de skti hun.. mere khyal likhne k lie prerna chahye hoti h.. n for dat u should try reading diff books u ll get d idean charm from dere… bs mai to yhi krti hu.. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
        waise meri itni tareef krne k lye shukriya.. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

      • LovelyLady

        |Author

        thnk u sumo di fr ur precious cmmnts….. i wll surely follw ur advc…. thnk u once again … n love u frm d bottom of my heart……

  6. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Awww….the episode was just fabulous… Itna acha kaise likhte ho aap di…..m spellbound now…..I really wanna come to u and hug u tight….
    Sanju is so cute…..she reminds me of my childhood di….superb
    And yes sumo’s boss is so hilarious… Post next part soon di…

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      khushi a tght hug frm me too
      i m sure u wll same like ny sanju… bt not inly in childhood bf till now u r like her… mastikhor….

  7. Lado_mishi

    |Registered Member

    Awesome blossom dear….. It’s just superb…. Mazza aa gya….sanju is a cutie pie yr….keep it up dear…
    And yes so now we r friends right??
    Well do tell something about urself dear

      • LovelyLady

        |Author

        ya we r frns…. still hv cnfsn…..
        i m a grl jst passd 12 th …. gng to tk admssn in btech( shayad)…. a litl bit serious type.. possesv abt frns….. wrtn one more ff abhi na jao chor k on my real life……. crrntly wrtng two ff…..all on edkw,page……
        uffff thk gyi apne bRmare me btate batete…. ab tum kuch batao apne bare me

      • Lado_mishi

        |Registered Member

        No confusion dear…..well I have also just passed 12th dear…..and a medical aspirant….preparing for exams….and yes I have read ur another ff also…it’s amazing I commented there too….
        And m also a bit silent and really possessive for the people I love….and u r one of them dear

  8. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Lovy do you remember me…I hope yes…I am afa your di and you’re big fan…epic was fantastic…as usual…keep it up…love you babes keep smiling

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      ooo di i remembr u…. n there is good news fr u….. mains apne shrt trm memory loss k liye pills lene shuru kr diye h….. πŸ˜‰
      thnx fr cmmnt…. n liking my epi….
      love u tooooo diii

  9. Ashi

    I m silent reader of the love stories…yh bhut he superb story hai…very nice..but plzzzz update the next part soon…plzzzzzz di ….plzzzzz πŸ™‚

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      Ashi plz cmmnt also….. cmnt r highly needed fr the wrtrs to wrt good………
      btw thank s fr lliking my story….. love u dear. cn we be frns???????

  10. Ashi

    Yes we r frnds….no need to ask for friendship…nd ur skills of writing is very good..plzz continue writing nd continue giving the stories a new twists…we all are liking it…..luv u…..mei stories ki addicted hoon.. exams,mei be books ki beech mei story books rkh kr pdte the…I love stories…..so plzzz continue ur ff…its amazing..:-* πŸ™‚

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