Together– Forever( edkw) epi 3

Me: Hi frns…. its lovely lady ……. again to eat your heads 😉
I m extremely sry fr posting soo late… i was bz wd my sweet n small family. ……. now i wll be regular…… i m overwhlmed by the live n spprt of u guys…..
Till now Suman spnt sm good momnts wd her daughter..n she saw hr frst meetng wd shravan in fb……
Now,
“Gmng mumma…. aaj aap late ho gyi ….. n mai frst…… wooow…” Sanju says rubbing her eyes frm bed only…..
Suman wakes by hearng that sweet voice….
Suman – ha mera bacha….. aj tum phle uth gyi….. i m vry glad…..
Now cmon get frshed….
Sanju- ya mumma sure.. i m gng….
Suman says in mnd…… meri bachi kitni samjhdar ho gyi h… use kisi ki njr na lge…… mujhe to dr lgta h ki kahi use sachai ka pta na lg jaye……
Subah subah itni buri bate ni sochni chahiye mujhe………….
Farafat tyar ho jau… mujhe offc bhi jana h……
Thn she gets a letter….
She reads……..
” Ryan international school, delhi”
This is frm Sanju’s school…..
Here is the letter fr a school trip to a water park in the city…….
Woow sanju wll like it…..
Sge reads frthr…… ine family membr cn cm wd d student…..
She thinks to go wd her to tk care of her……….
She gets ready n go wd sanju to the school bs stop……
“All d bst beta ….. enjoy your day….. love u” Suman bid good bye to her with a kiss on her forehead……………
Tgen she cms n wt fr a rikshaw or taxi to go her offc… it takes her an hour to reach her offc……
She waited fr long no taxi….. she was continusly watchng her watch………..
Thn she finally got a taxi… she sits….. she was tired stndng on road fr long…. so whn she seats she closes hr eyes n get in a relaxed mood…….
” rikshw, , rikshw,,,,,, ye mumbai k rkshw wale bhi na….. had kr dete h……..
Aj to mai college pakka late ho jaungi……… kahi seniors ….. uff… she was,sweatng……….
Suddenly a,car stops…….
Black audy………..
The,windw glass lowered…… she was Me: Shoked to see the same guy…….
” hey lovely lady good to see u……. gmng …….”
The man who is non othr than shravan asks……..
Suman is watching her….. impressed by her dashing look…. wd,a blk goggles n a jacket…..
“R u listng?????” He again asks……
Suman composes herself n says… ha ha i m listeng….. gmng 🙂
Shravan- arnt u gettng late…… hr bar mai ni bachaunga…… 😉
Suman – oops ya…, i was not gettng taxy………
Shravan- i hope u dont mnd if i offer u seat in my car….
Suman – no no its ok.,… i wll manage……
Shravan- again warng u … i wll not alwYs to help u…….
She doesnt speaks any thng…..
Shravan opns gate fr her…..
Suman hesitetly sits on frnt seat………….
Shravan was watchng Suman who was seeng outside……….
Suddenly shravan gets a call……
” what r u saying……
Ok thn ….. its ok…” shravan talks on phn……….
Suman – what happnd ???? Is everythng okey??
Shr- ya everythng is ok….. actually due to sm academic wrk maths class is cnclld…. other classes wll be as usual……
Suman – ohhh shit…. maths was my frst class….. now i hv to wait fr one n a half hour……..
Shravan smiles seeng her puppy face….. he got mesmerized by her beauty………….
Suddenly he stops the car………
Suman looks questiongly………..
” if u dont mnd…….. can we have coffee togethr… plzzzzz…… shrvan asks………
Suman – are aap ko pareshan hone ki koi jarurt ni h…… u shd not miss your class…..
” no no notng lyk that…….
Mai bhi abhi free hu …. lets go na plzzzzz….. jst a coffee…. kitna tym hi lgega……Shravan insists……….
Suman – ok thn lets go………
They go out of car to a beautyful coffee shop jst on other side of the road………
They crosses…….
Suman shravan se,age chl rhi thi…….
Suddenly….. a car comes near her n was abt to hit Suman …..
Shravan pulles her near him…….they share an intense eyelock……
Shravan was holding her on her waist Me: Suman had hld him tightly as she got frghtnd…….
Vehicles horn continuously on thm ….
Shraman gaariyon ki aawaz sun kr alag ho gye………..
They conposed thm self….. n crossed the gate n entered the cafe….. the got seats…….
Shravan- tum pagal ho……. apna dhyan bhi ni rkh skti……
Suman was listening silently….
Shravan continues…….
Tumhara dhyan kaha rhta h …….. tumhe kuch ho jata to??????
Suman looks him shokingly…….
Shravan – tumhe kuch ho jata to tumhari family ka kya hota????
N one more thng….. mai hmesha ni rahunga tumhe bachane k liye……………
Suman says suddenly…..” kyu..???”
Shravan looks her ……. tgey hv an eye lock………
Song plays in bg…..

Jeena sikha diya… marna sikha diya…. teri duaon ne insan bma diya ………
Shravan looks other side breakng eye lock…… mai coffee le kr ata hu………
He cms wd coffee…….
He looks her taking sips of coffee…… he is lost in her………
“Hm teen baar mil chuke h…. n abhi tk ek dusre…. ka naam tk ni jante h…….”
Shravan says to suman……….
Suman – are sahi me….. ye to maine bhi notice ni kiya………. itni cmmn si baat ni jante h ek dusre k baare me aur sath me coffee bhi pi rhe h…
Shravan – kyu coffee kisi k sath bina uske naam jane pina mna h….
Suman – i didnt meen that yaar……
They both laugh….. 😀
Shravan held his hnd toward Suman …… is bnde ko sab Shravan k naam se jante h…….
Suman shakes hnd n says……. aur mujhe Suman k naam se….
O:-)
They both looks in each others eye……..
Song plays in bg
Kabhi jo barish brse….
Mai dekhu tujhe aanke bhrke..
Tu lge mujhe phli barish ki tarahh
…………..
Suman – kya dekh rhe……. i hope kuch soch bhi the ho…. m i r8?????
They r still holding hands…..
Shravan- ya u r r8
Mujhe lg raha h ki ……. koi bahut hi khubshurat relationship ki shuruat ho rhi h…… 😉
Suman feels shy n tries to take his hand away……
Shravan sees this… n leaves her hand……….
Me: They went bck to college……….
Suman – shravan plz drop here only … i hv sm wrk…
Shravan- ok sumo….. i cn wait….
Suman – ni yar aaj waise hi tumne mere liye bahut kuch kiya h…,…
Ab mai tumhe aur pareshn ni kr skti hu………
I m sry plz …..go ……
Shravan goes angrily… 🙁
She too felts sad…………..
“Madam… we reached….” driver says…..
Suman cms out of fb… n go to her offc

Precap– their freshers party… n shraman’ s more romantic moment………

Guys now sm thing other than ff……… i kn this ff is not mch big platfrm to say my wrds.. bt,through this ff i cn share my feelings wd atleast sm people….

Guys… in school tym i was not that mch lucky to get good frns…. many of u kn it very well as i hv told it on my last ff……
Bt now i m very happy that i hv got sm very good frns….. so i wld lyk to tell sm thng to u frns…….
In your life… never trst any one sooo mch…. not even your frns…. apne ankhe khuli rakho… kaun kb dhokha de de ye koi ni janta……I
Kn very well ki bahuto ko meri bat bkwas lg rhi hogi…… bt mai ye bat apne exproence se kh rhi hu……..
Aap kisi bat pr vishwas kro na kro …kisi ke experience se khi baat ko vishwas jarur krni chahiye………

48 comments

  1. Maria

    Well the first thing I would like to say is……
    Ur ff is just fantastic,MiNdBlOwINg,awesome and aaage mere paaaas lafz khatam ho gai 😀
    Cause I was totally lost in ur ff especially flashback was mind blasting !!! 😉
    Or ab mujhe drrrr lagrahai hai itna awesome ff parh ke koi mera ff pare he ga ?? 🙂 😀
    Or last Mai Jo kaha dii I totally agree wid u ye true hai even I have never ever experience this but phir Bhi ye baaaat sach hai … N thanks to u ye advise sab ko dene ke liay…..!
    LoVe u a lot di…..!! 🙂 🙂 🙂

  2. pari

    hmmmmm true dear u r right but this world is full of colours and their r diff people some tym u will get true one and some tym self fish as well

  3. shraman

    amazing one!! im sorry first of all, i was kind of annoyed at the last episode of abhi na jao chor ke as you never united them.. but im sorry as i never knew that it was true story.. i know it must have hurt you! sorry.. back to the story, you’re going beautifully with the track.. keep writing

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      its ok yar….. i thnk that was only destined fr me…….
      thnx fr liking my story……
      btw i hv a,ques fr u.. i was cnfsd that wheter your age is 10 or u in class 10 th

  4. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Yes lovely di u posted soo late but u kinda made up for it with this awesome episode…. Just as maria said I was also transferred to a different world after reading ur ff especially the fb scenes…. It’s amazing…. I m waiting desperately for the next part di….ab jaldi post karna…..love u di

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      sry fr being late dear…..
      thnx a lot fr cmmntng…. n liking…
      i wll try to make nxt epi more touchng……
      keep reasng n cmmntng….
      ha mai nxt epi kl post kr dungi…
      love u too…… <3

  5. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    And aapne Jo last mein kha voh bilkul sahi hai….mera toh personal experience hai….but I will not repeat my mistake twice and aapki advice ko main bilkul sincerely lungi….u r so sweet di

  6. afa

    really babes hats off to you amazing work….I don’t know how to appreciate you…it’s just…..A tight hug from my said…and you well side about friendship….In this short life we get many of them…but some are always remains in our hearts…Some are playing with our feelings…Some are loves us like hall….Each and every second of our life teaches a lesson…but I lucky I got many good friends like you baby…love you so much….tc…Haa post next part ASAP…..
    lovy read this….
    http://www.tellyupdates.com/being-a-dad/comment-page-1/#comment-1424084

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      aww than u sooo mch… a hug frm me too……
      ya di i too get sm bad exprnc…. di hv u read my last ff…. if not thn read it whn u get tym… its name us abhi na jao chor k……
      n ya di i read that link n cmmnted too… it was jst too goood……

      • afa

        lovy short time memoire loss isn’t…I read 10 times…I know swathi ria and all…I am sure if am stopped commenting on your page sure your going to forget me…

      • afa

        Ohhh maria how can I forget you…you’re My sis….I am reading your conversation and enjoying it…I thought not to disturb you both… now you invited me….maria did you posted your next episode I searched for it but I didn’t get it…Haa lovy at last you agreed your mad…Thank god….take your medicine very fast…you think about us who read your ff….Maria I too write ff….but I completely 36 epic so you will feel difficult to read so don’t read it…were is that chul buli…

  7. sona

    Related to the story..
    A big..bigger..and biggest…yessss…ya..I liked it..☺????
    And..I agree with pari ..and afa..wt they said about..friends and friendship..??
    I just want to say one thing..my friend..☺if u experienced a selfish friend..in ur life..then..u should..believe..there are such a kind of people..
    And even we keep ur words..in our mind as u said.?☺
    Second..if u believe..and identify..that we are good..pupil..and gud friends of you..even u don’t know the actual names of us..??
    Then..believe..us..u will..get a true friend too..in your life..every person..life takes turns..just like the world..☺
    Wait for urs..?☺

  8. sona

    And..maria..khushi..I said the..above thing..to u two..also..
    Don’t think that msg was just for lovely..u r also my friends..☺☺
    Keep smilingsmiling.

  9. Bhoomi

    |Registered Member

    Superb episode…. ? Shraman so cute….. Sach kaha tumne lovy…. Kabhi kisi pe bahut jyada trust nahi karna chahiye…… very true ?….. Episode was coool….. post next one soon… luv u lots ??

  10. LovelyLady

    |Author

    thnx meri advc ko seriously lene k liye…..
    mujhe lyf me ache frns bahut km mile h… bt kuch h ache frns… also on tu.. so mai unko le jr k bahut possesv rhti hu….

  11. Lily

    Hey lovely lady… I also don’t have many friends……. I also have the same thoughts like u………
    I loved ur epi… N i have a request pls make a happy ending of ur FF…..

  12. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    I agree to whatever u said ….n about d epi it was amazing … especially the way u bring sumo back to reality is mast! loved it!

  13. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Hey lovely lady….ur ff is just too awesome…nd u r an amazing writer….all d best for future episodes.. 🙂
    By d way ppl who read my ff….it would be published by around midnight today..so plz c nd give ur views Ind comment section!

  14. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Nd lovely lady…u said that right in d last part…u should never trust anyone too much…coz when d trust breaks it hurts alot…but again..we do mistakes so that we realise what is good for us!! Luv u lots nd lots sweetheart!<3

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