Together– Forever( edkw) epi 2

Me: Its lovely lady…….
Thnx guys fr cmmntng…. ya there were a ltl bit lss cmmnts bt its ok … i kn it is a new ff n wll take tym to make its place in your heart guys……….
All slnt readers plz plz cmmnt bcoz cmmnts r stress boosters……
Love u a lot my readers, supporters n frns……
Till now we hv had seen that Suman hv a daughter named Sanju…..
Sanju saw a gft in her wardrobe in nght……
Sanju- mumma see papa hv sent a gft fr me….. i kn it wll be the bst gft like last year…. mere papa wrld k bstest papa h…..
Suman smiles seeing her excitemnt….
Suman – chalo ab bate mt banao aur papa ka gft kholo…….

Sanju unwraps gft n fnd a vry beautyful princess typ dress n a barby set……….
Sanju is extremely happy……….
She slpt tht nght keepng tht gft beside her pillow……..
Sanju smiled seeing all this…..
Sanju k sote hi ghr me ek ajib si shanti cha gyi….. ye shanti Suman ko bilkul psnd ni tha….. kyuki is shanti me wo atit k panne palatne pr majbur ho jati thi…. is baar bhi wahi hua…………. ..

Those were her college life…..
Like everyone she was also excited fr her frst day of college………
She wore a blue coloured kurti with colorful stoll n a white slakes……..
Looking stunning………
On the gare only she banged wd a guy….. a tall …guy….
” Oops sry..” she said n wdout seeng his face she mived on ……
Bt……… she felt stuck n standed lyk a statue……..
She looked behind…
Her stoll was stuck in the guy’s watch……
the phn of a boy passing there rings..n ringtone was…….
Dil aaj kl meri sunta ni…
Dil aaj kl pass rhta ni
She gets shy n moves that guy ……
(The guy is sooo hndsm)
This is our hero Shravan………
“Mai kr deta hu” Shtavan asks smilingly………
Suman – are ni mai krti hu….
She try to free her stoll ….. in that way hr hand touches Shravan’ s hand…..
Shravan too tries to free that stall…
In that way both hands touches ….
Shravan is mesmerized by her beauty……..
Me: Shravan frees her dupatta…..
She thanks him n goes away………
Shravan stands stunned………..

Are shravan tu yaha kya kr raha h…….
Chal na aj freshers aa rhe h chal sabka intro lete h….. i mean ragging ……wooowww bahut maja ayega…. chal na jldi…..
Harsh a frn of shravan cms there………
Shravan is still statue………..
Then another frn of their gang sid shakes shravan…..
“Oo ya ya ya kya kh rhe the tum log…….. aur chalo frsheres ka intro ni lena…???” Shravan says….
“Ni ni hm log to arjit singh ka gana ga rhe the tere samne”
Harsh says angrily…….

Both of them went in the college cmps……..

All the guys were bz in taking intros were shravan was bz on his mobile phn playing games………

“Guys u carry on i m gng inside as i m not feeling good”
Shravan said n moved toward the class……… actually he was in search of that preetty grl………..

Whn he moved a ltl…. he heard guys asking a grl abt hr relatnship status….
She was feeling uncmfrtabl by their ques…..
Shrvan heard hr voice n wnt toward her……….
She saw him……..
” hey guys not ask sch ques.. to make other uncmfrtbl…..
Plz guys n lets go frm here…….
All guys went frm thre as shravan hv an imp place in their heart………………
Suman was happy to fnd smone diff frm all……….

Then only …………

“Mumma aap soi ni.??????
So jao na plz mere sath……..
Mujhe neend ni aa rhi h…

Ya mera bacha cm on beta sleep now
She sings….
Chandaniya chup jana re…
Pl bhr ko luk jana re….
Neendiya dhimi aye
Bitiya meri so jaye……..

……
So jati hu mai bhi ….,kl kitna saara kam h……..
Ni to ye purani yaade……
Dono so jate h ek ni subah k sath ni ummid le kr k………….

I kn again it is not much long…… bt plz guys read n cmmnt…….
Love u a lot

122 comments

  1. shraman

    It was beautiful..!! I loved the way you potray the mother-daughter bonding… I feel that’s so cute..!! Waiting for more flashbacks.. Maybe shravan died.. Something like that.. Overall, it was beautiful.. Simple yet beautiful..

  2. Bhoomi

    |Registered Member

    So sweet and lovelly…. Superb bonding btween khushi and sumo… Shravan pheli nazar me pyaar ho gaya ?.. awesome…..?

      • sumo

        no prob! just tell me wat browser did u use!? m really dying to register but some capcha problem is dere ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™

  3. Lily

    Oh I loved it… It’s very beautiful….. Either shravan died or misunderstanding happened between them…..so they separated….

  4. ankita

    hiiii lovelylady….nice nd lovely story….srryy…maine episode 1st miss kr diya….but aage se sare episode pdhugi…thank you… ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. priya

    Hi..lovleylady..i feel its unique way to start a new ff..ur thought..to intro the charectors with story..is nice..
    I read your first episode too..after reading this one..
    I liked it..keep it on..my support will be with you..??

    All the bestโ˜บ

  6. Maria

    Hi lovely lady I am silent reader ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
    but u write it so nicely that I can’t stop myself commenting on ur ff it is brilliant love it!! Love it !!! And just love it..!!!!!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. Fatarajo

    |Registered Member

    Hey dear ur ff is too good loved the story loved the bond the mother-daughter shared I wonder what happened to Shravan?

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      thnk u fatarajo fr liking my story……
      i m too thinking ki apne shravu ko kya kru
      ….
      kyuki msine khud abhi decide ni kiya h ๐Ÿ˜‰

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      i jst read your cmmnt on my ques on your ff intro ….. intense story of our love
      it was really considerable…. n now i wll set a while story in my mind n then wrt epi 3…
      i hope your vaccatns have started… thn u cn be regular on my page… yipeeeeeeeee

  8. ankita

    hey lovelylady….mujhe aapki story ka episode 1st nhi mil raha….konse no. page pr h episode 1st

  9. afa

    lovy…wooooowww awesome episode….amazing….I am eager to read next epic….what may be happened to that shravan…..I loved it babes….keep reading…love you…take care

  10. Maria

    Guys I want your HELP actually I want to write a fanfiction also but don’t know how can I so plzzz help me …..
    I am inspired by all of u who write amazing fan fictions…! ๐Ÿ™‚ plzz plzz help me

      • Maria

        That’s soooo sweet of u..! ๐Ÿ™‚ I don’t know how to write a fan fiction on telly updates ๐Ÿ™ can u plzzzzz help me with this ๐Ÿ™‚ …??

  11. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Awesome awesome awesome…… It’s amazing…. Lovely lady u r such a wonderful writer…. I loved ur ff….it’s so unique and I love the way u portrait the characters…??
    Sorry I know I m late…really sorry for that

  12. ufaq

    Awwww sorrryyyyy sorrrryyyy I was busy episode was a super duper hit I liked the staller part awesome and sweets to HM kha k rahen ge di hahaha take care love u stay blessedd

  13. LovelyLady

    |Author

    if u use lappy thn frst of all wrt the epi in wrd or if u use mobile thn frst of all wrt the whole epi in message or in notes any whr….
    thn go on menu optn shwn abv in the page n then clck on submit articl….
    fll the the name, email id, title…( title me bracket dal kr jis serial k page pr post krna h uska nam jarur likhna)
    then copy paste the story in respctv place…. thn select fan fivtion in d drop box….
    there wll be a cptcha … wrt 5 there….. clk on submit…n it will be posted wthn 24 hrs…….
    n after ff is posted last n most imp step… tell your frns abt that ……. ๐Ÿ˜‰

      • maria

        thank u sooooo sooooo much di seriously u r a life saver…!! ๐Ÿ™‚ i want to ask that i am using a mobile u said write in a msg or notes something what does that mean …??? ๐Ÿ™‚ in the comments u mean..???

  14. angel

    sorry sorry sorry

    i,m late

    nyccccc superb epi i,m loving mother and daughter bond i read both epi,s today its good yar keep it up

    post next one soon ๐Ÿ˜‰

    miss u all guyzzzz

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      i was waiting fr your cmmnt frm a looonnng tym….
      bt its ok i cn understn ur study…. thnx fr cmmntbg dear..
      missing u a loooooootttt

  15. angel

    ohhhhh sorry for thaat actually mujhe pata nh tha that u hv start it ๐Ÿ™‚

    i,ll try to b regular paka

  16. maria

    thank u sooooo much dii !!!! i want to hug u !!!! i did it u helped me soooo much di really thank u thank u thank u i am just praying that it will published on the page but i didnt write the page name ๐Ÿ˜ฎ i didnt know where to write it..

  17. maria

    and yeah dii i am writing a fanfiction on shraman hate to love and i am writing it in hindi so i can express the emotions ๐Ÿ˜€

  18. afa

    lovy did ufaq posted her next cappy….did you posted please sent me the link….don’t know what happened to my phone

  19. Maria

    No problem Afa I will write some sentence u know to express the emotions ๐Ÿ˜€ in hindi otherwise I fully try to write in English …!

  20. afa

    Maria ya I am Muslim…from kerala….your ff link is not getting if you don’t mind can you give link please…and from where you’re

  21. afa

    Thank you soo much babes…and who your not good write… really yaar you inspire everyone…when you’re going to post next chappy

  22. Maria

    Thank a lot lovely di seriously u helped me sooo much I have no words to express my feelings ๐Ÿ˜€ I am soooo happy but don’t worry this time I gave serial name while posting epi 1 according to ur instructions ! Thanks again diii just praying that this time it will post on the correct page ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  23. ufaq

    Hey abhi angel di and api and ya maria welcome to telly updates swety I m also Muslim and from Pakistan even angel is from pak and ya best of luck for or ff swety

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      hi ufaq…….
      i m really glad to see this mch strong bond betwn us……
      it is vry insprng.. that being frm two diff country wch doesnt hv that mch bonding….. we lv each other this mch……
      our love fr each other n your love fr an indian serial vanishes d boundry line…..

  24. afa

    hey guys….your right lovy….really yaar friendship is a awesome relation yaar…I am glad to get amazing friends here….guys I have imagination you guys

  25. afa

    about you guys….I will start from ufaq chull bulli…very fair,slim, short and very cute…
    lovy…slim, hight, not too fair but fair…and very pretty…

  26. sona

    And lovely..even you also didn’t post ur next ff article..and u r commenting in our friends ffโ˜บ?
    Pls..do post ur ff..too fast..I wana read it..?โ˜บ

  27. afa

    lovy baby can I ask you one think…I don’t know what happened to my phone…I don’t know it can you can try…can you register me…I Don’t know it possible or not

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      aapne phle jo mail id diya tha na.. usse maine register kiya h…… aap wo email id open kro.. n see is there any mail frm telly updates???

  28. afa

    Thank you so much babes for helping me like a sis thank you so much….you wasted your time on me….I don’t know what happened to this phone really yaar I am fedup with it…love babes

      • LovelyLady

        |Author

        hahaha … everyone is not lcky….. i lost my phn in train as i hv told u…. bt got the same phn… a good man got it n retrnd it…… ๐Ÿ™

    • LovelyLady

      |Author

      sry di u r elder bt i hv to say it that u r wrmg this tym… i dont wasted my tym…. it was my love fr u…….
      btw it happnd or not????

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