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The story starts with a girl turning she is talking to three servents .

Girl:what is this sister is coming back home where is sign.
Servent 1: mam I f…..o…..r….g ….o…..t .
Girl:come it fast is everything and everyone here.

The door opens
ragini :wow thanks
Girl:didi you are back j misled you so much.
Ragini:shona I know how much missed me.
Swara faint s
Ragini-swara what happened to you today please I am sorry someone call the doctor.

At the hospital.
Swara is taken into ICU.
Doc:No need to panick nothing happened she just hasn’t been having food properly she has high fever.
Ragini : can I take her home.
doc : No pls let her gain consciousness the you can take her home.
Ragini : ok Thanks.
Swara gains consciousness and is taken home.
Ragini : sit
Swara sat.
Ragini feeds her .
Ragini : do you know how worried I was didn’t you eat properly.


Credit to: Asmitha

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  1. Good start continue, I am always a silent reader so will not comment properly but keep going

  2. Thank you even if you don’t comment regularly it means allot that you commented.

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