Time Changes…SS…Part 11

Yaar your silence kills me don’t you ever dare to do this again! said abhi

wah bhai wah galti bhi khud karo or daant bhi mujhe do! wow, Mistake is yours and you are scolding me! said pragya

Ok baba okay! It was My mistake! List….. abhi was about to say something just then a call disturbed him so he attended it!

Oh tanu! hey how are you tanu asked abhi

phir say Macacamulatta ka call!  again it’s Macacamulatta’s call said pragya…

abhi sighed her to be quiet…

Tanu: Abhi can we meet somewhere!

Abhi: Tanu! ahm okay i will be at park within 30 mins.

Tanu said Okay!

Abhi ends the call!

Sun pragya, i have to go! said abhi

Ja ja!  lekin aggar is baar mujhe ignore karnay ki koshish ki na teri tangain tor kar haath m day deni h m ne. Go go but if this time you will ignore me na!  i will surely break your legs! said pragya…

okay meri maan! I won’t ignore you but I will be back soon! said abhi

Better said pragya!

Abhi left!

After sometime ,abhi was with tanu!

Abhi: com’on you are always in anger! be happy! learn how to live happily! humesha gusay m hoti ho, khush raho, seekho k khush kesay raha jata hai!

Tanu: Abhi seriously my mood is off ! and what’s this again these cheap ripped clothes you have worn?

Abhi says tanu calm down!

Leave it abhi let’s go at restaurant! said tanu

Sorry Tanu but I Have no money! said abhi

No Money? what do you mean by bo money? you are always saying like this! if you can’t fulfill my needs then leave me na! said tanu

Tanu you know na I love you! said abhi

Tanu: Nhi matlb kya? apni aukaat k hisaab se girlfriend rakho na, agar meri needs poori nhi kar sktay leave me!
if you can’t fulfill my needs leave me!  be with the girl who is of your standrad!

Abhi: See forgive me this time, Next week we will go to your favorite restaurant !

Tanu: No abhi enough, I m going sorry! i can’t handle you anymore! saying this tanu left!
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Time passed it was 10 00 pm and still abhi wasn’t back! so this made pragya tensed so she decided to go at the same park where Tabhi were about meet! as abhi wasn’t picking up the call so she left for the park!

She went in park and saw abhi, She went behind abhi and closed his eyes with her hands, but soon she realized that abhi’s eyes were wet! She said Abhi? are you crying?

Abhi: Why pragya why? why it always happens to me! What have I done? Ask from your God! why He always punishes me like this?

Pragya sat beside abhi and asked so again Tanu?

Abhi: She broke up with me!

Okay okay abhi let’s go home, I will call tanu and all problems would be solved! said pragya

Abhi: No!

Abhi! come now! said pragya

Time passed Tanu and abhi werw in Abhigya’s home!

Pragya: Okay sort out your problems, I will be back after 5 mins! Saying this pragya left!

For about more than 5 minutes there was a complete silence neither abhi waa ready to talk nor Tanu! pragya thought that they already had sort out problem so she decided to go back home, she was about to step in the house but stoped after hearing this:

Tanu: Wow na! Abhi stop being a loser! you know what you do not deserve me! seriously! just stay away from me! I m just wondering why the hell I said I was in love with you a loser! who has never gained anything but losed everything! You are a loser! a loser! You Got that? Mister loser!

Pragya who listened to all this wasn’t able to tolerate abhi’s more insult so she went ,she held Tanu’s arm tightly and slapped her hard!

P: How you dare call him a loser?and yes you do not deserve him Miss Tanu! Actually Macacamulatta ! Miss Macacamulatta don’t you ever dare to insult him! once i can tolerate my insult but not his! Loser ya right you know what! THE GOOD THING ABOUT LOSING EVERYTHING IS THAT YOU HAVE NOTHING TO LOSE AND EVERYTHING IN WORLD TO GAIN!
We losed everything but we can never lose our self respect!

Tanu: Ya right! Self respect! who the hell are you to slap me? orphan girl? who neither has mother nor father! Cool! who lives just because of Abhi, you have nothing with your self,  you charac….abhi just couldn’t hear further so he shouted…
Shut up Tanu! Shut up ,how dare you talk to pragya like that once i can live without you but can’t live without my fuggy! you know what mistake was mine! i should have left you long ago! so what dair aaye durst aaye! I m breaking up with you! Got that? Thanks for helping us but you really deserved the slap that i gave you at very first day now get out from our lives and our home, and yeah change your thoughts and then you can only change your world! LOVE ME BECAUSE YOU WANT TO NOT BECAUSE I ASK YOU!

Tanu: Love my foot! one day I will come again and will show you my success, my fame and at that time you will feel sorry for leaving me! bye Mister Abhi, Bye Miss pragya!

As tanu left abhi started crying bitterly!

Pragya with anger said : What happend? why are you crying? for the one who left you? Abhi you can’t! be yourself because that’s all we have with ourselves! If it was true love you can’t ever stop loving her but she never deserved your love!

Abhi wiped his tears and hugged pragya tightly

Sorry! But Now time will change! we will kill this poverty! said abhi

Pre recap: Time Changes……

Okay guys so i m just gonna end this ff, as it was only a short Story I already said!  i hope you guys checked replies over last episode ? Sandhya you should also check the replies! I have replied to all comments!

And rajesh just check the reply at part 9!

Riya! Thans for such a long reply ,well well well i think we are saying thanks and sorry to eachother so much! so from now onwards No sorry and No Thanks! Your reply brought this much wide smile over my face ?? And yes if you talk about busy schedule i already said My Vacations are going on so I m free Free free ? so we can talk for hours!

Guys I m always thankful to your comments they always boost me up to write more! So I  replied each comment! ! Thank you all! Have a good day! ?

Credit to: Somiya

51 comments

  1. jeffisha

    Dii..
    Plzz don’t end..plzz get into another track..but Pl zzzz don’t end?? Plz …A as usual awesome epi..luv u..first time..i m comnting urs epi…? Plzz don’t end

    • somiya

      oh that’s seriously sweet of you but i can’t because of a reason! Sorry but i will be back ?Thanks!

  2. Riya

    Somiya Di , U r such a SWEET HEART !!! No Sorry and No thanks here after and thta’s a promise !
    As usual today’s update was Amazing ! No Thanks for the reply and I would make sure that I read all your writings and would whole heartedly appreciate it here after ! And that’s the least I can do to My Wonderful Sister cum Fav Writer !!!
    Gud n8 Di !

    • Riya

      And I am gonna miss My Fav Story from My Fav Writer ! But that’s fine I am sure U would give more updates in future as usual in your Rocking Way !! Hope that comes soon !!

    • Riya

      No Sorry as i forgot something ….I am gonna miss My Fav Story written by My Fav Writer ! Truly Di I loved each and every update of this SS ( and other updates too ) But that’s fine I am sure U would give more updates in future as usual in your Rocking Way !! Hope that comes soon !!

      • Riya

        And Di I am glad that my comment made u happy But the fact is I would hav been in Cloud 9 meeting u once in my life !!

    • somiya

      That’s really sweet of you riya actually fact is not you but i will be at cloud 9 after meeting you once in my life but so what we can talk with eachother through any of website like instagram or facebook!

  3. durga

    Nice episode yaar really today’s episode s awesome awesome awesome iioves it to the core….I’m.sooooooooo happy u know in cloud9…

    • somiya

      ?haha! Seriously seriously seriously Thanks durga! I loved your comment to the core ?

  4. Shiya

    It was a awesome episode and so true and practical in real sense…
    U r just amazing..
    I m having exams but comes here to read ur ff only…
    I m in love with it n waiting 4 next update soon…?????

  5. surbhi

    haye mera dil chura k le gyi churane wali meri katil…..
    hooo hum deewane yun hue hai pyar ki in raahon me chahte hai toot jayen is ff k bahon me waisey tu na Wakai kya kahoon chal tujhe ek gana dedicate karti hoon jo abhi abhi meri fav list me add hua hai wo hai
    na ye chehra ruhani nahi nahi ye badli rumani kahin jo tu barishon si khilti hai na wo badra sunhani kahi ho jag ghumya thare jaisa na koiii sab padhya thare jaisa na koii…..
    and another one the best one and the last one but not the life least one
    Tu baat kare ya na mujhseChahe aankhon ka pegaam na lePar ye mat kehna are o pagleMujhe dekh na tu, mera naam na leTujhse mera deen dharam haiMujhse teri khudai Tu bole toh main ban jaaunMain Bulleh Shah saudaiMain bhi naachun..Main bhi naachun manau sohne yaar koChalun main teri raah bulleyaMain bhi naachun rijhaun sohne yaar koKarun na parwah bulleya ???????????????????

    • somiya

      yeh jaan kar khushi hui k hum hee hain aap k dil k qaatil, koi or hota toh uska ho jata qatal ?? wo bhi humaray haathon! Loved your comment ???????

  6. trisha

    Awesome… Finally Tanu showed her true colours lol… With her out of the pic im guessing its time for Abhigya’s success… And the start of their love story ???… Nice job Somiya… Keep writing!

  7. Saranya

    Awesome diii but feeling bad tat u r gng to end it but pls come back with one more???

  8. Nirmal

    Superb… Awesome… Amazing…. We will miss our favourite ff. If you really want to end this u can but in one condition.. U should give us a new ff…..Please….

    • somiya

      that’s so sweet of you nirmal! Surely I will come back but after this month ?????????

      • Nirmal

        No problem. I’ll wait. And I’m having exams this month. After this month I’ll be free…. So I am really happy ???

  9. Today epi was asusual amazing! di, waiting for time change di.di i am that u r gonna end this ff but pls cme back soon with new ff.actually di in my city yesterday there was a thuder with rain,so my parents didn’t give me phone to use n also coz of low net balance sorry for late comment di.
    MAYA DI!,SURBHI DI!,SHARAYA DI!,NIVETHITHA DI! N SOMIYA DI! i didn’t even think in my dream that i ll get such a lovely di’s like u guys.i am really very happy from now i am not alone,i have lovely di’s n thanks for accepting me as ur sis,i am very very happy n lucky to have u all!.
    HAVE A BLESSED DAY MY LOVELY DI’S!!.

  10. Today epi was asusual amazing! di, waiting for time change di.di i am sad that u r gonna end this ff but pls cme back soon with new ff.actually di in my city yesterday there was a thuder with rain,so my parents didn’t give me phone to use n also coz of low net balance sorry for late comment di.
    MAYA DI!,SURBHI DI!,SHARAYA DI!,NIVETHITHA DI! N SOMIYA DI! i didn’t even think in my dream that i ll get such a lovely di’s like u guys.i am really very happy from now i am not alone,i have lovely di’s n thanks for accepting me as ur sis,i am very very happy n lucky to have u all!.
    HAVE A BLESSED DAY MY LOVELY DI’S!!.

    • somiya

      anytime sandhya ????? i always love your comments thank you so much! glad to have a friend like you!

  11. Reshma Pradeep

    Arey……Wah!!!! Kya Dialogues dha……….Ek dum Mast……..Loved it…………Especially The Slap Given by Pragya to Tanu……..Such An AWESOME One………….Loved it to the Core…………..

  12. hiiiii dr I dont knw whether u r elder r younder to me to call u diii so fr nw I vil continue with Dr nd I am vrrry glad tht u liked my comments in my IB’s magic(I mean her ff) ooooops u dont knw IB naa actually u knw her but nt with diz name she is our beloved MAYA yaa she informed me abt dizzzzz nd now I am cloudnine tht smeone really liked my cmmnts a bigggggggg×10000000000000000000 thnq uuu fr tht nd yaa honestly wanna admitt one thing tht ven I was new to diz page the vry frst ff I read was of TISHA dii LOL-KKB thn I found urs STORY OF FAITH but my badluck till thn the story was moving at chotu’s birth nd frm thn I njoyed ur evry update but being a silent reader nd I am smewat flng sad tht missed sme of ur episodes ani but recently u released promo nd two teasers of ur second season nd by tht time I determined myseld nt to miss ur second season nd in mid u started Time changes nd till dizz 10 episodes again I hv been a silent reader njoying ur craziness but I think there is no sense in maintaining diz silence anymore soooooooo literally I admitt tht ur diz episode tht abhigya standing by eachother made me sooo happy fr their frndsp nd yaa tanu deserves it nd a vrry big thanq uu fr my IB fr giving me diz happiness of njoying one of my fav writers like on my blabbering nd yaaa I am very excited fr ur second season nd uu knw wat seriously till nw I didnt knw the meaning of abhishap nd got it NLY frm uuu thnx fr tht dr j
    keep rocking lv uuuuuu nd intrstng precap

    • somiya

      maahi i m glad that you are so much happy but to be honest right now you said about story of faith Right? actually you are mistaken i didn’t wrote it, Surbhi (my favorite writer) she wrote it and the two teasers! she is the one who wrote them! I m seriously glad that you found my this ff amazing! and yes I m not the writer of STORY OF FAITH, i m the writer of ABHIGYA’S DESTINY! ? Thank you so much for your lovely comment!

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