Time Changes…SS…Part 10

Months passed Tanu and abhi’s bond grew stronger and stronger whereas it affected the relationship of abhi and pragya! abhi used to come home lately,he used to hide things from pragya which made pragya sad, she was always happy for tanu and abhi but abhi’s this step made pragya feel lonely!It was one week to Surla’s birthday thou surla was no more but whenever Surla’s birthday was around she used to feel sad! and abhi was always there to cheer her up but these days as abhi more cared for tanu and neglected pragya, pragya was much sad even she used to cry as she had no one but just abhi! she always decided that she will talk for this matter with abhi but abhi was never serious! he never took anything seriously this made pragya more upset, she decided to go at park where she could meet kids and it was only the way through which she can feel fresh! as she entered park, she listened to the music and some of these hindi alphabets ….she saw some girls telling these alphabets in lyrical way!
a aa i ee u oo ri ae ai..
o au ann aha
a aa i ee u oo ri ae ai..
o au ann aha

ka kha ga gha Da
ch chha ja jha
Ta Tha Da Dha Na

ta tha da dha na
pa pha ba bha
mai yay ray lay vay

[This is the Hindi alphabet.]

a aa i ee u oo ri ae ai..
o au ann ah.
This reminded pragya of surla, surla always used to teach hindi alphabets in lyrical way, tears came in hrr eyes,she was missing surla so much so that she wanted surla to come back and teach her again everything so she started singing:

ungli pakaD ke phir se sikha de.
godi uTha le na maa..

(pragya remembered how surla used to hug her over little little things)

aanchal se mera munh ponchh de na
maila saa laage jahaan….

hold my finger and teach me (to walk) once again,
pick me up, O mother.
wipe my face clean with your scarf,
the world seems to be grimy..

The girls saw her singing and again the continued singing Hindi alphabet:

a aa i ee u oo ri ae ai..
o au ann aha

Pragya remembered how abhi’s chachu and chachi pushed them outside of house and she thought if surla was there they would have been living a happy and peaceful life so she started singing:

aankhein dikhaye mujhe jab zindagi
yaad mujhe aati hai tere gusse ki
pragya remembered how surla used to scold her so she continued:

DaanTa bhi to tune mujhe, phoolon ki tarah
kyun nahi maa saari duniya teri tarah.

when life shows me eyes (prov., means when life frowns upon me, or tries to scare me)
I am reminded of your anger..
even when you scolded me, it was like flowers..
O mother, why isn’t the entire world like you..
pragya remembered how abhi is nowadays neglecting her and enjoying with tanu,she thought if surla was here nothing such was ever going to happen,now no one was there to take care of pragya, no one was there to ask her if she had eaten something or not! how she is feeling no one was there so she was complaining this to surla:
maatha garam hai, subah se mera
rakh de hatheli na maa
‘tune kuch khaaya?
der se kyun aayi?’ —
koi na poochhe yahaan

my forehead is feverish since morning,
why don’t you put your palm there on it mother..
‘Did you eat something?
Why are you late?’
— no one asks me here..
The girls continued :

a aa i ee u oo ri ae ai..
o au ann aha

Now pragya was remembering how surla brought her up with so much love that she is missing right now! she wants that much love back! so she started singing:
heera kaha, kabhi nagina kaha
mujhe kyun aise paala tha maa

Pragya remembered abhi and complaind to surla:

teri nazar se mujhe dekhe na jahaan
duniya ko to DaanTegi na, DaanTegi na maa

you called me a diamond sometimes, and sometimes a gem,
why did you bring me up like that, mother?
this world doesn’t see me with the same eyes as yours,
won’t you scold the world? you will right?
Pragya started crying but she still bad complains with her so she continued:

mujhko shikaayat karni hai sabki
mujhko sataate hain maa
ab tu chhupa le, paas bula le, 
mann hai akela yahaan

I have to complain against everybody,
all trouble me, mother.
now hide me, call me near you,
I feel lonely here in my heart.

The girls continued:
a aa i ee u oo ri ae ai..
o au ann aha..

Pragya couldn’t hold her tears anymore she sat at bench, closed her mouth by hands and started crying as much as she could, she wanted someone by her side to comfort her but no one was there! girls were confused,  a person was continuously suspecting her! she was crying much bitterly ,so a girl handed her water bottle but she wasn’t ready to stop,she was missing surla much thou 10 years have passed but she still had more love for surla afterall she losed her mother! the greatest gift! she wanted to stop crying but again and again the moments with surla were coming in her mind which made her even more upset! ..The more she was missing surla the more she was getting upset of Abhi!
Abhi already saw this all, he went and sat beside pragya, he held pragya’s hand,but pragya turned her face, abhi said pragya, but pragya gave no response, abhi again called pragya ,pragya stared him for a while and got up! Abhi said pragya why are you so quite? why you aren’t talking to me? and why are you crying? Pragya stares him and starts walking, abhi pats his head and said to himself abhi surely you would have done something that’s why she is so quiet! Idea! Song! her favorite apology song! Abhi went to a lady and bought some flowers, then he went to pragya and tried to give flowers to her but she gave the flowers to a kid! Abhi stepped back ,he held his ears and apologetic way, he started singing:

gumsum ho kyun paas aao na
(why are you so quiet, come close)
ruthe ho yun maan jaao na(
why are you angry, please don’t be)
gumsum ho kyun paas aao na(why are you so quiet, come close)
ruthe ho yun maan jaao na(
why are you angry, please don’t be)

he bought candy floss and gave it to pragya but pragya gave it to a kid…. abhi continued

dil mein hai jo, khul ke kaho(what ever is in your heart, just say it openly)
dil mein chupaao na(
don’t keep it in your heart)

but pragya wasn’t ready to utter a single word…so he continued

gumsum ho kyun paas aao na
(why are you so quiet, come close)
ruthe ho yun maan jaao na
(why are you angry, please don’t be)

Abhi was comfused for what thing pragya is so quite and angry! so he asked pragya :

jaane kis baat pe tum aise khafa ho gaye
(don’t know why you got angry on me)
Abhi again said :
shaayad anjaane mein koyi mujhse khata ho gayi
(maybe unintentionally i made some mistake)
jaane kis baat pe tum aise khafa ho gaye
(don’t know why you got angry on mes)
shaayad anjaane mein koyi mujhse khata ho gayi
(maybe unintentionally i made some mistake)

he was so much confused that he asked pragya by holding her hand!

bas itna toh bata do ke meri kya bhool hai
(just tell me what wrong have i done)
phir chaahe jo saja do mujhko woh kubool hai
(punish me in whatever way, i will accept it)
Pragya took her hand back and wasn’t ready to utter any word! so abhi said :

kuch toh kaho chup na raho aise sataayo na
(say something, don’t be quiet, don’t torment me so)
gumsum ho kyun paas aao na
(why are you quiet, come close)
rruthe ho yun maan jaao na
(why are you angry, please don’t be)

pragya came back to home she sat stove over fire and started cooking something with no smile over her face! so abhi said:

tum jo hasati ho toh yeh mausam muskuraata hai
(when you laugh , this atmosphere also seems to smile)

kaliyaan khilati hai saara aalam gungunaata hai
(the flowers blossom, the whole era seems to sing)
tum jo hasati ho toh yeh mausam muskuraata hai
(when you laugh , this atmosphere also seems to smile)
kaliyaan khilati hai saara aalam gungunaata hai
(the flowers blossom, the whole era seems to sing)
jo hasati ho har sitaara jhilmilaata hai
(when you laugh, all the stars shinemere )

dil ka sheher khusi se jagmagaata hai
(my heart shines with glitter and joy)

Abhi cupped pragya’s face and wiped her tears:
dekho kabhi rona nahin, mujhko rulaao nalook,
( don’t ever cry, don’t make me cry)
pragya again started doing household works ,abhi was behind her:

gumsum ho kyun paas aao na
(why are you quiet, come close to me)
ruthe ho yun maan jaao na
(you are angry, please don’t be)
gumsum ho kyun paas aao na
(why are you quiet, come close to me)

Pragya was still not ready to look at abhi and she didn’t said any single word which made abhi sad ,he sat at bed but wasn’t able to bear the silence of pragya so he got up and hugged pragya tightly,  pragya broke hug and was about to go just then abhi said Sorry pragya now i knew all these months i was ignoring you. i wasn’t giving you the time! we used to spend time with eachother but all long I was with tanu,  seriously sorry, u needed me and i wasn’t there, pragya saw the guilt in abhi’s eyes! abhi continued I already said that if any girl will come in my life I will even then look after you but……okay! enough if my relationship with tanu is affecting our relationship I will end my relationship with tanu today!

pragya: Oh crackpot! Seriously you are crackpot! yeah you are right that I needed you and you weren’t there but this doesn’t means that You have to end your relationship with Tanu! but promise me that you won’t leave me!
Abhi hugs pragya tightly and says i will never leave you!

Pre Recap: Tanu insults Abhi….

Okay guys seriously Thanks for the comments and emmy your chocolates were really very sweet! hehe! okay so yesterday’s episode was of Tabhi and from now onwards It’s of Abhigya! sorry for adding the songs but i seriously love the songs especially that one Aisa kyun maa from Movie neerja so i added it here! Seriously Sorry for everything ,and so you can expect good seeing the pre recap let’s see what happens after tanu insults abhi! I will try to upload next episode today itself and yes krithika Thanks for the idea! Sandhya I seriously am sorry can’t tell what’s love and what’s infatuation! can’t tell but thanks for sharing it like a sister and it really means to me!

Thank you all! ? have a good day!

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  1. Hats of sowmiya ur a genius

    1. seriously Thanks sonika! ?

  2. Ahhhh….atlast abhigya gonna join ah??…..super……d way dat Abhi neglected Prags was soo unexpected …..but still loved…it….pls updte soon na……

    1. Thank you so much varsha!

  3. Wow nice I was so happy that abhi ask sorry but when this tanu chapter will over I am waiting for that moment and waiting for abhigya falling in love plz can u upload one more episode today itself plz I can’t wait for next episode I love ur ff sooooooo.. much

    1. Monesha you are always positively commenting over my ff and that makes me desperate to read your comments over my each episode ,love u loads! ???

  4. It’s awesome. No words to describe. I loved it. Superb. Songs are really nice. You made me emotional. Eagerly waiting for next epi.

    1. I m glad you felt it! Thank you so muchh bhoomi ??

  5. Superb diii lovved today epi a lot??

    1. Thanks saranya ????

  6. superrrrrrrrrr ya waiting for next episode and thanks for taking my idea

    1. Thanks for the wait and comment ?

  7. Too short full of lyricslyrics ???

    1. Sorry zara! Thanks!

  8. Somiya Di , I really love you and your writings very much .I was a silent reader from long back and i couldn’t resist myself from commenting now to appreciate your writings .
    Really Di I am a very big fan of yours!!! The very first writing tihat i read in this website was Abhigya’s Destiny and Surbhi Di ‘s Story of Faith.I hadn’t even missed a single writings of yours! LOVE U LOADS DI!!!! Will u accept me as your choti sis???

    1. Waiting for your reply and your next part ! Have a Great Day!!

    2. oh Riya that was seriously so sweet of you! why not but just tell me will you accept me as your elder sister? Ha Thank you so so much!

      1. OMG!!!OMG!!!!!!OMG!!U really consider me as your choti sis …..Thanq sooooooooooo much Di! Really thats Sooooooo Sweet of u and Thanks for the quick reply.U had managed to read my comment and request in so much busy schedule of yours and even replied to it …..But very SORRY for the late reply.
        And coming to the question that u had asked………..
        Somiya Di,I guess u forgot the meaning of “Di” by thinking and writing Amazing stories!!!!!!Ha….Ha…Ha…..
        Anyways I consider u as My Beloved,Amazing,Smart,Cute,Rocking …………..Sister and even as My Best Friend TOO……………Becoz your writings had made me Happy all the time when I was unhappy like a Bestiee does to her Frnd!So in that case u became MY BEST SISTER cum FRIEND Long ago………..
        I became mad seeing your reply Di thats y …….I started giving Long Long Speech!
        Sorry for this too and Finally U made MY DAY Wonderful Di!!!! Love u sooooooo much !

  9. awesome somu di

    1. Thanks shriti!

  10. wow super… happy for abhi broke relationship with tanu….

    1. hah Thanks ?

  11. Today’s part sooo cute n lovely di!.i just live in it for 1min when pragya felt alone coz my mom n dad both use to go work n my bro always use to hurt me,so i ll b feeling alone n in sometimes i use to cry but no knows my feeling but now i got a lovely di like u.u know what di my head is bursting by thinking whts reason for tanu insulting abhi,pls update the part soon di.

    1. Sandhya u don’t worry dr… Pls don’t feel for that.. Not only somi I will be also a good friend to u.. Will u accept me as ur friend??☺

    2. you arr always sharing everything withh me that’s really nice of you sandhya! So what I m always here we can talk for hours! ? you are seriously the sweetest person!

    3. Hey dont worry yr! U have so many frnds and sis here feel free to share any of ur prob with us! And ya Somiya will be a good sis to u! Tat i can gurantee you!

    4. I m too here yr why u all forget me don’t worry Sandhya I am also here with u I will say everyone is with u here everyone is frnd ☺☺

    5. Hey sandhiya even I feel lonely when my parents leave me alone at home butwhy to be alone when we have a wonderful friends so let’s enjoy

  12. Soooo touching yaar….?????nd really superbbbbb….I can’t control my tears while reading about pragyas condition……and d song. Increases my tears…………end now I m waiting for abhigya scenes…….

    1. okay if you are waiting for abhigya scenes so I will try! Thank you so so so much rose! ?

  13. dil ka jo haal hai wo tumhe kaise bayan Karen keh de tumhe ya dil me rakhen bolo na kya Karen…..
    gum sum chandani ho nazneen ho ya koii noor ho dilnasheen ho dil kasheen ho ya jannat ka noor ho masha allah masah alaah masa allah
    shining in the shade in sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on feel mee (how I am feeling now) shining in the shade in sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on heal me o heal me……….
    Oooh somu I can’t resisting by songs yr that much I liked it and u know I can’t stop singing so I am writing just written
    ye dua hai meri rab se tujhe ashiqon me sabse meri ashiqui pasand aaye …..??????????
    well ye hui episode ki baat now let me talk about song so I just wanna say ki agar tu description na b likhe na meri jaan to b mujhe samjh aa jata hai tu samjhana kya chahti hai kyuki perfect situation perfect song ye Maine tujhse hi sekha hai bhool gayi jab pichhle ff me sorry sorry wala song dala tha ?? well ab mai chup ho jaun kyuki mujhe jana hai abhi

    1. youuuu! I loveeee youuuu so much! And the songs ???? well No thanks!

  14. Wat to say somi u really rockzzzz.. That song really made me to cry a little.. U made me too feel the situation.. Really hats off to u somi..????????????????????????????? I can’t say anything.. Just one word ‘MINDBLOWING’I don’t know whether that will be enough… U really nailed it ?????

    1. ?????????No Thanks chashoo! love you!

  15. Really sema bonding between abhigya yaar really nice episode thn 4 precap I vl gv u lot of love to u bt if it s not lk wat I expected n it’s lk sterday episode na I vl get my love n only rotten eggs n tomatoes so plzzzzzz don’t make any twist plzzzz realize tat abhi loves pragya only….

    1. haha okay as you say! and it’s somiya, loved your comment! ???

  16. Superb yar I loved the episode….

    1. Thanks abhigyav?

  17. Very nice

    1. thanks

  18. please unite them yaar

    1. surely,Thanks

  19. Hey somya today epic was toooooo good… I dont have word to express the feeling of pragya…. When i was the epic tears roll down from my eyes…. i love it….

    1. Thanks! I m glad!

  20. Awesome yaar. I liked the songs u included in today’s episode especially the song from neerja

    1. ??? Thank you so much!

  21. What have u written yr? Its so heart touching…I got so emotional. I thought of reading all ur prev epis in one short and then smthing in me told to read ur today’s epi to relieve my mind…but in the end it made me emotional lol…so heart wrenching. Ya tats the correct word…the songs Omg its so apt! And ya i am still emotional…??? but todays one is a great one! Tat is for sure!

    1. i m glad! Thank you so much suga ?

  22. Reshma Pradeep

    Arey Meri Dost , Kaisa hei tu ? I AM REALLY SORRY YAAR….. I can’t able to comment on Previous parts of ur ff……Sirf thumare nahi….Kisiki bhi ff mein comment nahin kar paya……Actually My Classes were started…..& Have so many Works……& Also In between these days, Drenched in Rain with Frndzzz & Got Fever…..Today I Read all ff’s…..Vaapas aane ke baad Pehle Mein thumare ff mein Comment kar rahi hoon…..& Now Coming to ff, Kehne ke zaroorat tho nahi hei…..Phir bhi kehti hoon…….AWESOME AS USUAL…..

    1. Reshma Pradeep

      Arey Songs ki Baare mein tho kuch bhi nahi bola meine……Actually Vo songs hei na……….I LOVED IT……..ITS REALLY TOUCHING…….ALL MOM’S ARE SUPER WOMEN’S….. THEY R BESTEST IN THE WORLD……..

    2. arey m theek hun tu bata k tu kaisay hai or haan mein samjh gayee thy k tun busy hogy! and yes moms are best! lekin tu na sorry kuch ziyada hee bol rhy hai yeh aadat nikaal le!

  23. Wow…I loved it…really sad for pragya na…and I loved all ur ffs…really iam a big fan of u…y r u thinking I don’t like this ff…I loved it…thanku for giving reply…

    1. That’s really sweet of you sana! actually i was always waiting for your comment over this fff as you always commented over my previous ff,but i m glad that you are liking it seriously thanks!

  24. Awesome and no sorry for the late comment

    1. No Thanks! ?

  25. Watva wonderfull episode….
    Loved ur lyrical way of narrating story??
    Loved all the songs u used and above all loved the episode so much..
    I fell in love again and again with ur story after i read it…
    Wat a beautifull track and wat a wonderfull story…
    Cant wait to read next epi..
    Lots of love…?????

    1. what a wonderful comment from wonderful reader ?? Thanks!

  26. Awesome epi da somu n sandhya don’t feel like tht girl v r all here 4u n i don’t know will u see it or not

  27. Awww… Really sad and sweet epi?

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