The Abyss – Ishqbaaz FF by Aashi (chapter-16) A

The Abyss-Ishqbaaz FF by Aashi


You came at last,Ru. I’m sooooo happyy.” Rudra smiled though he didn’t miss the slurr in her voice. “What are you doing, angel?” “Watching the stars” came the prompt response. “Why?” “I’m missing bhaiya. You know Rudra, Papa walked out on us when I was six breaking their fifteen years old marriage; bhaiya was fourteen. Bhaiya managed me, helped me with homework, talked to me, played. Aai had a weary dislike for me so Bhaiya was my world. He joined the Navy when he was twenty two and came back shrouded in tricolour; a dispute in border waters with some senseless smugglers snatched my brother from me… world. Aai cried relentlessly but hugged me for the first time in these ten years. Little by little, we bonded and got connected by the sorrow of our world.” Soumya paused and gulped some more beer. Rudra, in his own intoxication by the alcohol he had at the party and her presence, slid slowly next to her, putting his arms around her. She made a clumsy effort to wipe her tears but the one who felt more pain by them, wiped them. She sniffled audibly, before she continued.

“Sure Aai became the part of my life but the void left by Samar bhaiya is irreplaceable. He was my everything. Aai feared I’d join the Army, so she sent me here to study. Frankly, I wouldn’t consider doing so; I’m just too fat.”

“No, you’re not. You’re beautiful. You’re the prettiest girl I have ever laid my eyes upon. You’re the best.”

“Am I?” She looked at him for assurance. “Yes, you are” his voice sounded same as the former’s – husky, slurry, disbalanced. He gulped looking at the pretty face, so near his own, the deep chocolate- colored eyes; droopy and dreamy, the flared nose; trying to gulp in some more air, the half- parted lips, the tiny throat, gulping.

As if in a trance, he bent down and captured her shivering lips in a deep, warm kiss, which lasted just a few moments. He tried to get up, trying to leave with the little bit of sanity left in him but he felt his resolve crumpling as he stared into her eyes, freezing him with the enchanting light in them. Slowly, she reached towards him and kissed him, slowly and passionately. Their foreheads touched, as they emerged out of it, breathlessly. With infinite slowness, their gaze met ; the time stopped. He towered over her, bending her back against the pillows, the mattress and the covers. Her hand reached up to grab his shirt. “Soumya, arre youu shurree?” his voice slurred, almost losing his control as he felt undefinable pleasure shoot through his veins at the mere touch of her. “Yes” she whispered breathily, her eyes assuring.

Nothing made sense any more; nothing mattered. The bodice peeled; fell across the room. Bashfully yet shamelessly, their bodies met; the souls enterwinded in the utmost pleasure of mind numbing love; their bodies melted into one. Pain and pleasure battled, breaths hitched simultaneously, bodies tensed and relaxed while their heartbeat ran a marathon. Several minutes later, they fell back against the pillows, breathless and tired. Soumya slept at once while Rudra kept watching her for some time. A while later, he pulled on the quilt over themselves and drifted off into sleep, hugging her to her chest.

Hi everyone. I’m back again with a new chapter. I hope you all will like this. I’m very happy for the reaction so far and l’d really appreciate if you keep supporting me as always. This is the first time I’ve written such an intimate scene so please give your response very honestly. Love to all of you and to each one of my silent readers. Take care.

Thank You, Everyone.
By, Aashi.

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    Dear aashi
    RuMya scene? Soumya share her story to rudy? Waiting for RuMya reaction after the get concious. It’s very good chapter??????
    Take care and stay safe?

    1. Aashi9

      Thank you UF. This was the boldest content I have ever written so… Thank you for your positive response. Do keep reading and commenting ☺??

  2. Shekhar.yash01

    Wow Fabulous Di
    I was also writing on Channel V serials.
    But due to studies I was not been able to continue.
    I opened TU after a long time and seen that.
    It’s really amazing Didi

    1. Aashi9

      Thank you Shekhar. I’m glad you appreciated the story. It really means a lot to me. The next part has been posted. Please take a look ?

  3. Fenil

    Amazing !!

    1. Aashi9

      Thank you Bhai. Do keep reading and commenting ☺?

  4. VHM

    Hey Aashi…I have read both the episodes/chapters and i have something to say about both of them…


    Keep writing and entertaining us …love you loads…keep smiling and take care

    1. Aashi9

      Thank you VHM di. I’m really very glad that you liked the chapters and responded. I will try updating soon ? Bye and take care ?

  5. Alekhika20

    Superb update

    1. Aashi9

      Thank you di. Do keep reading and commenting ☺

  6. Nikita_jai29

    it is awsm

    1. Aashi9

      Thanks di. Do keep reading and commenting ?☺?

  7. Niyati

    This is beautiful di….so amazing….do update soon….love u ? ?

    1. Aashi9

      Thank you Niya. I really appreciate that you commented. Take care, love you ????

  8. Veera

    Wow! I mean it, wow!! It is amazing. soumya’s past was sad you wrote them nicely. But you were brilliant in writing intimate scenes, you hadn’t let them sound vulgar even for a bit and for that you need to be really good with words which you did. And yeah, i missed you a lot sis!!

    1. Aashi9

      Thank you Veera di. It’s the first time with me in writing such intimate scene. I was really nervous about the reaction but I’m relieved to get a positive response. Take care Di.??

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