thapki pyar ki (fan fiction) – without trust there is no love (Part 8)

thanks joylin for waiting for my ff. And guys my paper is done so u write my episode. Thapki and bihaan came out from her room and shocked to see fire on a house . BIHAAN is about to jump but on this time sahil jump into the fire. Sahil – bauji you are fine he goes to him but pillars were burn and start falling.
Sahil gets scare and run back
sahi- sorry it is different to save bauji I think to wait for fire bricked . BIHAAN – no I will go . Everyone try to stop him but he run. He get shocked to see bauji bad condition . bihaan hold bauji and feel conscious and lose his balance but someone hold him bihaan turn back and see thapki bihaan smile and thapki put hand on bauji shoulder and they two came out of fire. They two come out of house sahil- i phone, ambulance is about to come.
Thapki – (in his mind where is cutki babhi gone in flash back cutki- thapki you know where is my bracelet gone thapki- babhi you forgot to make dinner you put it on table cutki- oh thank thapki ) thapki- oo”ho. BIHAAN – what happened thapki. Thapki runs to kitchen. In kitchen. Cutki- ( in bad condition) anyone help me. Thapki – babhi?
Cutki- Thapki please help me . Thapki runs and hold cutki
Thapki – don’t worry babhi nothing happen to you. She came out.
Cutki – thanks you thapki thapki- welco he is about to say but faint.
Every one get shocked. Precap- bihaan is about to struck by car guys I want to stop it on some episode and I think to make a new ff on thapki pyar ki please tell me what you think to stop it . Please please please please comment and give your views.
Thanks for reading.

12 comments

  1. Anubhuti

    |Registered Member

    Hey garima its so good bt. I want to say. Its short.. And i have a problem in understanding… Hope u understand what i m saying

  2. joylin

    its k dude for the spelling mistakes but I like ur ffs they’re really good and I think u can complete this ff with a cut romantic end and write ur other ff dear I think u can stop writing this ff on epi 10 with a maha epi waiting for both the ffs and I wish u for ur works so that it goes well

  3. Juveria

    I think u should stop this ff nd start a new one but with some brief discribtion
    Sorry to say but I dint understand this ff but hope u understand
    I wish and hope that u would come with a new nd interesting ff dear

  4. Garima

    |Author

    Thanks you so much Anubuti joylin anchal juviria so much and really I follow your all advice and thanks for telling me I end this ff on some episode and made a new ff thanks again for support me.

  5. joylin

    hey garima I can help u in writing the ffs if u wish just say ur there in whatsapp or insta send me ur no or instance name k

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