Thapki Pyaar Ki-Another Loving Pat is What I Need Episode 9 LAST EPISODE

*LAST EPISODE*
**Season 2 for A Loving Pat**
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Hi all. Fatarajo here. Thank you thank you so so so much for supporting me in my previous episodes. Happy you all liked my fan fiction a lot but I had to end this fan fiction. So enjoy reading Another Loving Pat Is What I Need for the one last time.

By any chance if you didn’t read this fan fiction before.
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Here is episode 9.
Scene 1: Thapki’s residence
Here Bihaan is shocked as he finds Thapki on the floor lying unconscious.
Bihaan: Thapki!
Bihaan rushes to Thapki and holds her in his arms.
Bihaan: Thapki? Thapki?
Bihaan tries to wake Thapki up but she doesn’t.
Bihaan: Thapki, I am sorry I said too much please wake up.
Thapki is still lying unconscious.
Bihaan quickly takes some water and sprinkles on her face. She still doesn’t wake up.
Bihaan: What happened to her?
Bihaan holds Thapki’s hand.
Bihaan: Oh god, it’s very cold.
Bihaan frictions Thapki’s hand.
Bihaan: Thapki what happened to you. Please wake up.
Bihaan is teary-eyed.
Aradhya and Poonam comes in the room and are shocked.
Poonam: Thapki!
Poonam and Aradhya rushes to Thapki.
Aradhya: What happened to her?
Bihaan: She suddenly fainted.
Poonam: Who are you?
Aradhya: Bihaan, we have to bring Thapki to the hospital.
Bihaan carries Thapki in his arms and they take Thapki to the hospital.

Scene 2: Hospital
Poonam is tensed and crying. Aradhya tries to console her. Bihaan feels bad as he insulted Thapki a lot. Just then Dhruv comes to Aradhya and Poonam.
Dhruv: You can meet her.
They go to meet Thapki. Bihaan runs to Dhruv.
Bihaan: Dhruv, what happened to Thapki?
Dhruv: Bihaan, you and here? You know Thapki?
Bihaan: Yes I know her, she is my
Bihaan becomes silent.
Bihaan: Anyways tell me what happened to her.
Dhruv: Nothing this happens. It’s normal.
Bihaan: Normal? She fainted.
Dhruv: Why you don’t know?
Bihaan: No.
Dhruv: Thapki is suffering from atrial septal defect. She is a heart patient. She have a hole in her heart.
Bihaan is shocked.
Bihaan: Does Thapki knows about it?
Dhruv: Why won’t she after all she have been my patient for 5 years? I am her doctor.
Bihaan becomes sad.
Dhruv: I have to check Thapki, will speak to you later.
Bihaan is shocked as he gets to know Thapki is a heart patient.
Scene 3: Bihaan’s residence
Bihaan is at home and he sees his picture of his and Thapki together and he cries. He remembers all his moments with Thapki.
Bihaan: (in his mind) My Thapki was suffering so much and I couldn’t even see it?
Just then Vasundhara and Aryan comes,
Vasu: Bihaan beta?
Bihaan hides his and Thapki’s picture.
Vasu: What happened you are crying?
Bihaan: No.
Vasu: You are hiding something also?
Bihaan: Nothing.
Vasundhara sees his and Thapki’s picture. Bihaan cries.
Bihaan: Mom, I love Thapki a lot.
Vasundhara is teary-eyed.
Bihaan: She is suffering so much and I?
Bihaan hugs Vasundhara and cries.
Vasu: What?
Bihaan: Thapki is a heart patient and I misbehaved with her.
Vasu: So you got to know about it?
Bihaan: You knew?
Vasundhara nods.
Bihaan: Why you never told me?
Vasu: Thapki made me promise.
Vasundhara tells how she got to know about it.
Bihaan: That means Thapki purposely broke up with me, because she knew she was a heart patient?
Bihaan becomes sad and teary-eyed.
Bihaan: I misbehaved and I hated my Thapki so much and she was suffering all this silently. I don’t deserve her love.
Bihaan cries.
Vasu: Stop it, Bihaan.
Aryan: Now that all is sorted out, Bihaan why don’t you go and speak with her.
Bihaan looks on.
Vasu: Yes, I agree. Bihaan please.
Bihaan: But I won’t be able to face Thapki.
Vasu: Bihaan for me?
Bihaan: Okay.
Bihaan leaves.

Scene 4: Hospital
Bihaan comes to the hospital. As Bihaan was about to go in Thapki’s cabin, Poonam comes in.
Bihaan: Aunty, I am sorry actually
Poonam: Aradhya and Sona told me everything about you and Thapki.
Bihaan: I am so sorry Aunty, for misbehaving with your daughter, if possible forgive me.
Bihaan apologizes to Poonam.
Poonam: Okay fine, you can meet my daughter.
Bihaan goes in. Bihaan comes in. Thapki is on the bed.
Thapki: Bihaan?
Bihaan holds Thapki.
Bihaan: It’s okay, take rest.
Thapki does so. Bihaan holds Thapki’s hand.
Bihaan: Thapki, I am so sorry.
Thapki is teary-eyed.
Bihaan: Thapki, what flaw did I had?
Thapki is surprised.
Bihaan: Just once. Once you would have told me this so much won’t have happened.
Thapki is silent and she eyes Bihaan sadly.
Bihaan: I don’t care what you are suffering with or whatever after all you are my Thapki, and how did you think I will love someone else.
Thapki: That’s why I didn’t want to tell. Because I know you won’t leave me and you will suffer.
Bihaan: Everyone have problems in life, doesn’t mean they will stop living. And in my case, you are my life Thapki.
Thapki is teary-eyed.
Bihaan: Why don’t you understand I immensely love you?
Thapki: And how about me? You didn’t think about me? I love you also that are why I couldn’t see you in struggle because of me.
Bihaan: And how about me? The last 5 years was not life for me, it was like I was living just to show people I am a human. The me inside was killed. I knew you can never do such things but whatever you said, now I know why you said all those? Really you are Mahan atma.
Thapki cries.
Thapki: This mahaan atma can rest in peace now. I can die peacefully.
Bihaan closes Thapki’s mouth. Ranjhaana plays. They share an eyelock.
Bihaan: Never talk about death infront of me, never?
Thapki cries.
Thapki: But Bihaan, I have to leave one day.
Bihaan: Oh can you please stop it.
Bihaan holds Thapki tightly.
Bihaan: I know I maybe hurting you, but you have no idea how much that hurts me to see you like this.
Thapki is crying.
Thapki: Why Bihaan? Why do you always melt me? Why do you love me so much? Why don’t you leave me? What is so good about me? I am a simple girl who have a hole in her heart.
Bihaan makes Thapki feel her heart.
Bihaan: The heart you are talking about you have no idea how much innocence and cuteness it have.
Bihaan: There must be a small hole in that heart but for me it’s covered by its innocence and cuteness. Innoce and cuteness are invisible that’s why in the x-ray this hole is not covered.
Thapki stares at Bihaan. Bihaan makes Thapki feel his heart now.
Bihaan: And now this heart have a direct connection with that heart due to which even the brain couldn’t disconnect this connection from the heart.
Thapki cries more.
Bihaan: Thapki, I love you a lot.
Thapki: Bihaan, I love you too.
Bihaan and Thapki hugs and cries.
Few days later,
Thapki is being discharged from the hospital and taken home. Bihaan helps Thapki to walk. Poonam is there. Vasundhara also comes to visit.
Vasu: How are you now beta?
Thapki: Much better.
Poonam: Beta, you can leave now we will manage.
Bihaan: No Aunty I can’t leave.
Poonam: Why do you need anything?
Bihaan: The thing I need is left with you.
Bihaan stares at Thapki and Thapki shys.
Poonam: Meaning?
Bihaan: I want to get engaged to Thapki.
Thapki, Poonam and Vasundhara are shocked.
Bihaan: Thapki, please.
Thapki is silent.
Bihaan: Aunty, please don’t refuse.
Poonam looks at Bihaan surprised and laughs. Vasundhara also laughs. Thapki and Bihaan are confused.
Bihaan: Why are you laughing?
Poonam: We won’t so easily.
Thapki looks at her mother and eyes her.
Bihaan: But why?
Poonam: Behen ji, when can we come to talk about the date?
Vasu: Why?
Bihaan smiles.
Poonam: But one condition. Thapki do you agree?
Thapki nods.
Bihaan: Now she agreed Ma, you say when they will come home?
Vasu: Sure Thapki.?
Thapki nods.
Bihaan: Wow, now Thapki is gonna be Mrs. Thapki Bihaan Pandey.
Thapki uses her hand and covers her face and feels shy.
Bihaan smiles.

Scene 5: Bihaan’s Residence
Thapki and Bihaan’s engagement day is here.
Bihaan is wearing a black suit.
Vasu: I wonder where is Thapki and her family?
Just then Balwinder sees and smiles.
Bauji: There they are.
Thapki’s family arrives and Thapki is dressed in blue. Bihaan lovingly stares at Thapki. Na na na plays.
Thapki and her family comes in and Bihaan comes and stands besides Thapki. Bihaan whispers to Thapki.
Bihaan: You look very beautiful today, just Ghajab!
Thapki feels shy.
Vasu: Bihaan!
Bihaan comes to his mom,
Bihaan: Yes ma.
Vasundhara holds Bihaan’s ear.
Bihaan: Ouch.
Vasu: How dare you disturb my daughter-in-law?
Bihaan: Sorry Ma.
All laughs, Thapki laughs feeling shy.
Vasu: Okay, I will leave you.
Vasundhara leaves Bihaan’s ear.

Later, engagement is going on
Bihaan puts the ring on Thapki’s finger. All claps. Thapki also puts the ring on Bihaan’s finger. All claps. Finally they get engaged. Thapki and Bihaan smile looking at each other.
And then after some time of the engagement,
Vasu: My daughter-in-law Thapki is a great singer.
Aradhya: Aunty, can Bihaan Jiju sing?
Aryan whispers to Aradhya,
Aryan: She is not your aunty, she is going to be your mother-in-law.
Aradhya steps on Aryan’s foot. Aryan tries not to shout.
Vasu: No, he cannot sing.
Later, the light goes off.
Vasu: Oh no the light got off someone bring candles.
And then suddenly, someone sings. Thapki and others look.
It’s Bihaan who is singing Tera Sang Yaara. (from Rustom). Thapki smiles and looks at Bihaan happily. Bihaan comes to Thapki, and later he takes her and they both dance on Tere Sang Yaara. They share a passionate dance, they look at each other. The music stops and the dance ends. All clap.
Aradhya: Jiju you sing so well.
Thapki: How is it possible?
Aryan: Areh Bhaia practiced a lot last few days. This is the result of his hardwork.
Thapki smiles looking at Bihaan, Bihaan shys.

Scene 6: Nearby Terrace
Thapki is walking, and just then someone drags her using hand.
Thapki looks and its Bihaan.
Thapki: Look Bihaan, if anyone sees us then there will be a big problem.
Bihaan: I don’t care.
Bihaan pins Thapki to the wall.
Thapki: Bihaan, no!
Bihaan: Not so easily.
Thapki: Bihaan?
Bihaan is about to kiss Thapki and Thapki also stares at him and as they were coming close to each other, suddenly Aryan and Aradhya comes there.
Thapki: Bihaan, Aryan Aradhya is here.
Bihaan: Don’t lie.
Aradhya: Jiju romance somewhere else.
Bihaan is shocked, and they both separate and feels shy. Thapki fumes at Bihaan.
Aryan: No no continue, Bhaia Bhabi, and this two foot dinosaur can only talk nonsense.
Aradhya: Shut up! But Thapki and Jiju you two look cute. After all it’s their first time
Aryan: Have you ever kissed each other?
Thapki and Bihaan remembers how they kissed each other in Bihaan’s office that day. And they stay silent looking at each other.
Bihaan: Hey you stop talking nonsense.
Aryan: Nothing will happen to you, you can’t romance with Bhabi at all.
Bihaan: Look Aryan, I will P for punch you.
Aryan: Areh punch me later, can’t even romance at all. Forget romance you didn’t even kiss Bhabi.
Aradhya: Areh Aryan why disturbing Jiju if he didn’t he didn’t. That’s it.
Aryan: S for so sad, B for Bihaan Pandey can’t even K for Kiss.
Bihaan: Yes, I have kissed your Bhabi.
Thapki and Bihaan are shocked.
Aryan smiles. Aradhya laughs. Thapki fumes more at Bihaan.
Aradhya: Areh jiju, Thapki before Shaadi so much romance what will happen after marriage? The temperature will rise higher than Middle East.
Thapki: Bihaan, you.
Thapki goes away from there.
Bihaan: Thapki listen to me.
Bihaan follows Thapki.
Aradhya: Aww they are so cute

Scene 7: Terrace
Thapki comes and stands there. Thapki is angry.
Bihaan: Look Thapki, I am sorry.
Thapki is angry.
Bihaan: Please forgive me.
Thapki makes faces.
Bihaan: You won’t agree so easily.
Thapki: What will you do?
Bihaan takes a black cloth and he ties Thapki’s eyes.
Thapki: Bihaan, what is this?
Bihaan: Shh!
Thapki: Bihaan what kind of childishness is this? I won’t forgive you for this.
Bihaan brings Thapki downstairs to the garden, and opens her blindfold.
Thapki: Bihaan, you?
Thapki looks and is surprised to see a candlelight dinner prepared for two.
Thapki: This is so nice.
Bihaan: This is a surprise for you.
Thapki smiles.
Bihaan: Now forgive me.
Thapki: Fine I will forgive you.
Later, Thapki and Bihaan have candlelight dinner and they have dinner together. Later, as Thapki was about to go,
Bihaan: Wait, Thapki.
Thapki: What is it, Bihaan?
Bihaan: There is one more thing for you.
Thapki: Is it?
Bihaan holds Thapki’s hand and brings her nearby. And there is 3 hula hoops. (its like a circle, ring quite big)
Thapki: Hula Hoops?
Bihaan: Yes
Thapki: You want me to dance with hula hoops?
Bihaan: No.
Bihaan makes Thapki sit.
Bihaan: How many rings are here?
Thapki: 3
Bihaan: Ghajab!
Thapki: Why you asked me?
Bihaan holds Thapki’s hand.
Bihaan: Thapki, I want to fulfil all your wish. So just tell me your 3 wishes with the help of this hula hoops.
Thapki: How is it possible?
Bihaan: Simple. Just wander around my I mean our house and then find the thing which is related to your wish and then for each put one for one hula hoops.
Thapki: Bihaan, how will I?
Bihaan: Mom and dad have gone to speak to priest along with your parents, so no one is at home for now. Aryan-Aradhya I sent them somewhere else. Now go.
Thapki: Okay.
Thapki goes. She goes in all room and finds all the things,
Thapki: I need one more, but how to relate it?
Thapki sees something and smiles.

Bihaan: How long will this Thapki take?
Thapki comes and blindfolds Bihaan.
Bihaan: Hey, who is it?
Thapki: T for Thapki.
Bihaan: What are you doing?
Thapki: First I will place my three things and then cover and then I will open it.
Bihaan: Ghajab!
Thapki places the three things and she opens his blindfold.
Bihaan: Not bad B for Bihaan Pandey’s B for Biwi using his own tactics. Ghajab.
Thapki holds Bihaan’s hand and brings him there.
Bihaan: Now show me.
Thapki shows Bihaan her first wish and a pair of boxing gloves is placed there.
Bihaan: Boxing Glove?
Thapki: Bihaan, please for me join boxing again. Please. This is my first wish.
Bihaan: But it’s so hard for me now. And also some people and most are so young. And also that drug scandal.
Thapki holds Bihaan’s hand.
Thapki: And Olympics? You and Bauji’s dream. Well it’s my wish too now.
Bihaan: Okay fine, I will join boxing.
Thapki smiles.
Bihaan: Now what is your second wish?
Thapki shows Bihaan. Some stars are drawn.
Bihaan: Thapki madam, I gave you rights for 3 wishes already you wasted one for me, now what is this some stars drawn.
Thapki: I used chalk
Bihaan: That I see, but what is the meaning? Now what Mahaan Atma tactis are you planning to do?
Thapki: Well, this time I am selfish. This is my wish.
Bihaaan: Really? Now tell me what is your wish so that I can understand.
Thapki: Star.
Bihaan: Twinkle Twinkle little star?
Thapki: Bihaan, I always have this wish to have my own star. Like it’s mine and no one else. Thapki looks at the sky.
Bihaan: Heh? What kind of wish is this?
Thapki: Is like that.
Bihaan: Simple, just choose any star and say this is my star. And all star is yours how can you have one?
Thapki: Can
Bihaan: So you want me to take a rocket go to space and collect stars for you? Hmm very difficult but not impossible.
Thapki hits her forehead with her hand.
Thapki: Someone please explain to this guy.
Bihaan: Okay okay now show me the last one.
Thapki: I will definitely come and visit you after you win the Olympics medal.
Bihaan: Why? You won’t marry me?
Thapki: I will if I can.
Bihaan: Thapki, no emotion talks.
Thapki: Okay

Thapki shows the last one and it is a photo frame of Bihaan’s family.
Bihaan: Photo frame?
Thapki: I want all of us to stay happily together like in this picture.
Bihaan: That will be done.
Thapki: So that even if I go away you all can stay happily.
Bihaan: Thapki, now don’t talk nonsense and make me emotional you know I hate this.
Thapki: Okay baba I am sorry.
Bihaan: But still something is missing.
Thapki: What?
Bihaan: Someone who will take care of me.
Thapki smiles as Bihaan looks at her and Thapki and Bihaan look at each other.
Bihaan: Thapki, this is your B for Bihaan Pandey’s promise. Now promise, you will fulfil this.
Thapki: I promise.
Thapki and Bihaan look at each other and Na na na plays.

Scene 8: Few years later,
Bihaan comes to the terrace, with a medal on his hand
Bihaan: Where are you?
Bihaan smiles.
Bihaan: There she is.
Bihaan: See Thapki, you must be happy. See I fulfilled your first ever wish, Bauji’s wish and your wish. I have won Olympic medal. Now come.
Bihaan: This is not fair, Thapki I finally understood the meaning of what you want and I even booked a star for you. Twinkle Twinkle Thapki Star, and you really
Bihaan becomes sad.
Bihaan: And then your 3rd wish?
Just then a little girl comes and hugs Bihaan.
Girl: Papa!
Bihaan smiles.
Bihaan: Finally, P for Papa’s P for Princess is here.
Yes, she was Bihaan’s daughter.
Girl: Papa, today you made Manyasa proud.
Bihaan: Yes, how can I not make my Manyasa princess proud.
Yes her name is Manyasa.
Manyasa: Wow this medal. I will go and show everyone.
Manyasa runs.
Bihaan looks at the star.
Bihaan: See Thapki, I have finally fulfilled all your wish. And our daughter is also very happy today. But there is just missing and that’s you, Thapki. Please come back.
And just then a girl comes,
Girl: Your Thapki is here!
Bihaan looks at Thapki.
Bihaan: Thapki?
Thapki comes and holds Bihaan’s hand.
Bihaan: Thapki this is not fair you didn’t fulfil the 3rd wish of yours.
Thapki: Who said I didn’t.I did fulfil the promise I made that I will come to meet you when you get a medal.
Bihaan is surprised.
Bihaan: That was the 1st wish. The 3rd wish.
Thapki: We got married, and also there is someone to take care of you.
Bihaan is surprised.
Thapki: Our daughter.
Bihaan: Thapki?
Thapki: This is what you said and also finally there is someone to take care of you. And you know the operation could have failed you know why it didn’t?
Bihaan: Why?
Thapki: Because I had to make sure the 3 last wishes gets fulfilled. That’s why my heart operation succeeded, so that I can bring our daughter to this world, and this is how I fulfilled the last wish. And I know she will be the one who will take care of you.
Bihaan cries. Thapki wipes Bihaan’s tears.
Bihaan: But why you left the day our daughter was born?
Thapki: I am so happy that I could fulfil my last wish and also my dreams to marry you also got fulfilled and I am happy that before dying I spent some moments with you and our daughter. And God helped me, so I couldn’t help. God helped me fulfil my wishes, and then there is finally someone who could take care of you, and I had to leave one day.
Bihaan: Please come back.
Thapki: We will meet in heaven for sure.
Bihaan: Please Thapki don’t go. I love you Thapki.
Thapki comes and kisses on Bihaan’s forehead.
Thapki: I love you too.
Thapki’s soul vanishes. Bihaan becomes sad and tears drop from Bihaan’s eyes. Just then Manyasa comes,
Manyasa: Papa, don’t cry Manyasa hate tears.
Bihaan hugs Manyasa and makes her sit on the lap.
Manyasa: See I came first today in exams.
Bihaan kisses Manyasa on her forehead.
Bihaan: If your mom was here, she would have been happier.
Manyasa: Where is Maa?
Bihaan shows Manyasa.
Bihaan: Look Manyasa here is your mom.
Manyasa and Bihaan sees the stars.
Bihaan: (in his mind) Thapki I will always love you.
Bihaan looks at the star and reminisces all his moments with Thapki.Bihaan tells Manyasa stories, as they look at the stars.
The End

I had to end this fan fiction as I didn’t want to drag it much and I hate dragging and there wasn’t any other story left to add in this. I wanted to end this in 10 episodes, but I know I will be late, that’s why I ended it in 9 episodes. And yeah sorry for the sad ending. I will try to comeback with new stories as soon as I get one, and thank you so much for supporting me and always getting me to 2 digits comments. Your comments means a lot to me, but I had to end this fan fiction. And 22nd August is my birthday, I really wanted to write something that day but unfortunately I have maths exam. And I will miss you all a lot. I hope you all liked my story. I know it could have been better, so sorry if I didn’t meet your expectations.
By the way, many asked what is my actual name. Well most of you know me as Joyee. Joyee is my nickname, and all my loved ones called me that. Well, I will reveal my formal name this time, its Farin. Some call me Farin, some call me Joyee. You can call me whatever you like, be it Farin or Joyee or Jo or Fatarajo or whatever haha.
Anyone on Instagram or Facebook? Well I have accounts for instagram and facebook. Just saying haha.
And all readers and silent readers, this is the last episode. So one comment toh banta hain at least one, at least I can get to know how many of you read and liked my fan fiction. So would love to say please please please comment even if is bad, is last episode na. Pleaseeeeee.
And please do feel free to express your opinions and drop your comments. Criticism is open. Thank you 

38 comments

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey siddhi thanks for commenting u read this one too? well yeah this was one reason am gonna start a new ff also and tpk also one of the shows will be a combo ff and that one and ishqbaaz will be only ones writing in september

  1. anu

    u r very bad very bad u made me cry. U kill thapki u end it soon manyasa aha nice name bt i m angry today again i will cry and i will be happy as well that I got such a awesome frnd at last i really love u my frnd

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey anu no yaar please say do like this oh that name my friend gave me this idea and well next time I will make u equally laugh hopefully and haha thanks love u too

  2. Winnifred

    |Registered Member

    Happy birthday in advance, thank u for the ff fiction, u did a great job u also made me cry alot. Looking forward to reading your other FFs that come out. I also love your unique story line.

  3. Rinka

    Aww it was so emotional ending yaar… I was like :'( …… can’t express…. and that u said about the hole in the heart innocence cannot hide it was awesome…. And a big THANK YOU to u joyee for giving us such a nice ff…. I have just loved it totally…. this whole week I was just checking daily for ur update and finally got it today… aur sorry I don’t have account in insta or fb… I only use whatsapp bas…. and u r also from Kolkata right?? even I m from Kolkata too….

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey rinka thanks for commenting and sorry for ending and thanks haha and no yaar and aww so sweet of u and nvm its okay just asking and i m from singapore

  4. rafay don kon

    Hy yar what is this.i was waiting since yesterday ni8.first of all end koi nahe lakn sad end bilkul acha nahe tha end to happy happy krten na😢😢seasion 1 ka end to happy happy tha.i know ya just ff ha pr mujhy sad end acha nahe lga.😕

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey rafay no worries and next story full of comedy i assure u and i watch a lot of korean drama thats why i like both happy n sad but m more of happy types but i feel for this story sad ending was needed and well nahi joyee nahi farin but u will find a lot of them

  5. Truelove

    |Registered Member

    When I saw title last episode😨 from that moment I was prying please don’t let Thapki die but you do 😭 I will not doing any complaint because episode was awesome😊 . Daughter name manyasa is great idea. 😍😘
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY in advance. 😘🎂

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey truelove yeah sorry actually i watch a lot of korean dramas so inspired from that and happy u liked the epi and that idea is given by my friend and thanks for the wishes

  6. garima

    I most feel bad for bIhaan I understand sad end due to your exams but next time please happy ending.

  7. Juggu

    |Registered Member

    Wow joe nw a days I never write r read as ive joined my new colg n my tyms r hectic bt ur ff was my favorite I read tis n……was thinking fr more than a hour its happy r sad ending. ….

  8. SANTHOSH

    |Registered Member

    starting mixed feelings👌👌👌 in this episode but, lastly i feel very bad becoz sad ending and also i don’t like sad endings…. 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

    tumhe sad ending karne ki kya zarurath thi JO…..❗❓
    tumhari REHNUMA 3 shots story bhi ishi tharah se end hua tha😭😭😭 aur iss mai bhi sad ending kiya….😭😭😭😭❗
    kyoun…❓1 se 8 tak FANTASTIC episode tha aakri episode mai dhill dhuka diya …..😭😭😭

    u r asking na which one is better…❓ season 1👍👍👌👌 is better for me compare to season 2( reason SAD ENDING 😭😭😭)

    this is my feeling and opinion hurt hua tho SORRY…….

    but it’s OK just an FF na 😍😍😍😍

    b-day wish…..❗❗(rite time par karoonga.😍😍😍)

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      hey santosh thanks for commenting areh what to do yaar story is like that but next time if i comeback with ff on tpk will be full on comedy no tragedy only comedy with thoda thoda romance as i m not good with romance 😛 and yes i can say many like season 1 more and ending is noot only reason dont worry no more sad endings for thahaan if i write one more sad ending all will kill me 😛 and i watch a lot of korean drama wahan bohot emotional hain thats why 😛 but comdey is ma fav and most likely next ff i write on tpk likely to be a combo

  9. noor

    Awesome 😍😍😍 bihaan the boxer 💖💖💖 ,just love it 🙈🙈..every
    Sab thapki die but me happy every love story has different end ☺☺
    hope u will back with another awesome ff …. Happy birthday 💖💖🎂🎂🎂🎊🎉🎆🎆🎉🎊🎊🎇🎊🎉🎊🎇

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey noor thanks for commenting and understanding and dont worry if i comeback will be a comedy one and thanks but mera birthday kal hain 😛

  10. arooj

    Feel bad for bihaan especially manyasa..
    Starting was soo cute when he asked for engagement and play game with thapki and specially the romantic scene and when they remember there first kiss wow but ending make me feel sad …
    Plz come with a new story a*s soon as possible
    And HAPPY BIRTHDAY🎂🎂🎂🎂🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻 in advance

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey arooj thanks for commenting poor bihaan and manyasa and happy u liked the starting and sorry for making u sad and yes will comeback with a new story soon as my exams also ending soon and thanks for the wishes 🙂

  11. Manyasa29

    |Registered Member

    What !! Last episode …..!! I didn’t expect dis at all 😥😥😥
    First of all sorry for so late reply !
    But why did u do this joyee ❓❓❓
    Why sad ending !😭😭😭😭😭😭
    U could given it a happy ending as well …
    Plz dont do this from next time …plzzzzzz
    Well….u write so well…ur words are just magic…I literally cried while reading this !
    U r a fantastic writer !!
    Waiting for another thahaan ff…( Hope this time we get a happy ending😛)
    And tpk ke baare me kya batau…I have stopped watching that show n even reading updates !! Full on boring track 😑😑
    I visit this page only for ff’s !!
    All the very best for ur exams !
    And birthday kal hi wish karungi mai 😜😊
    And lastly I would sum up this long reply saying …..
    LOVE U JOYEE !😘💕

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey neha thanks for commenting and its okay at least u commented and well sorry for sad ending as this story was made for sad ending only and no worries no more sad ending if not all will kill me 😛 and nah no magic just writing and well yeah will write one soon will be a happy ending for sure and uff dont even talk about tpk that stupid kasi and sangakara or whatever her name is and yeah me too i used to read written updates and comments now i only read precap -_- and comments no one even comment and fan fiction, suhana didi and other tpk ff writers doing a gr8 job and thanks for the wishes dear and love u too (i thought u will bash me the way u started :P)

      • SANTHOSH

        |Registered Member

        hahahaha…😁😁😁😁

        tumne tho SL cricket player KUMAR SANGAKARA aur DD (pro kabbadi team dabang dehli ) player KASHILING ADIKE banadiya hai…😭😭😭😍😍😍😍😁😁😁😁

        hun dono ki naam KOSI & SHANKARA…😁😁😁😂😂

      • SANTHOSH

        |Registered Member

        hahahaha…😁😁😁😁

        tumne tho SL cricket player KUMAR SANGAKARA aur DD (pro kabbadi team dabang dehli ) player KASHI LING ADIKE banadiya hai…😭😭😭😍😍😍😍😁😁😁😁

        hun dono ki naam KOSI & SHANKARA…😁😁😁😂😂

      • Fatarajo

        |Author

        Kya karoon santosh mein ek crazy Cricket fan Hoon 😛 isliya Yahan Bhi Cricket mujhe un Dono ka naam main Koyi interest nahi hain mera liya sangakara aur Kasi thik hain 😛

    • Manyasa29

      |Registered Member

      Hi joyeeeeeeee …..!!
      A very happy 18th birthday !💕😘
      May God bless u ….have a great day ahead.
      May u fulfil all ur dreams and all the best for ur future endeavours ✌😉
      Party hard !!😎🎂🍭🍫💝
      Keep writing such amazing ff’s and dare u forget me !😛😜

      Btw…even I m a big big cricket fan !!
      I m still unaware if the new characters in tpk. 😂😂😂😂
      Hi San bhaii😊..kaise ho aap ??

      • Fatarajo

        |Author

        Hey Neha thanks for wishes u remember my birthday is today? Aww so sweet of u and haha gonna write one ff soon i already have a zabardast(kinda) story in my mind and i love Cricket Cricket is my Life and Tpk current track keh bareme don’t ask i m watching thahaan scenes in insta old thahaan scenes that makes me happy 🙂

  12. Rinka

    Happy Birthday Joyee… sorry for late wish.. I am busy completely nowadays in my research works and preparing papers…. God bless you… May u have all success in life 🙂

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