Thapki Pyaar Ki- Another Loving Pat is What I need Episode 5

**Season 2 for A Loving Pat**

Hey all, I am back. I managed to get some time so I published the episode. Well, I think by now due to this problem most of you may have forgotten my fan fiction but what to do I am really very busy. But I also want to write. I managed to get some time today, that’s why I am writing this episode. Please do bear with me is only for this month. By any chance, if you didn’t read the intro and episode 1-4 and promo for episode 5 and 6:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Another+Loving+Pat+is+What+I+need
You can read the summary of episode 1-2 in episode 3.

Here is episode 5.
Scene 1: Camp
Here all looks at Thapki and Bihaan as Bihaan asks Thapki.
Bihaan: Please be my partner forever.
Thapki: Bihaan, what are you saying?
Bihaan: I am so sorry. I know I have been rude to you and causing problems for you, but you are a very nice girl. Can I be your friend?
Thapki looks on.
Bihaan: I am very happy that you have been my partner throughout this camp, I want to carry out this partnership even after the camp, so can we.
Thapki thinks how Bihaan behaved rudely with her and flirt with her.
Thapki: (in her mind) I cannot take risk. He may be those types of boys who take things for granted.
Thapki: I am sorry I can’t be friends with people like you who always like to fight and hit people. I can’t tolerate these kind of people who are indulged in physical activities to hit people.
Thapki doesn’t say anything and she leaves from there. Bihaan looks on. Riddima follows Thapki and Karan comes to Bihaan and checks his forehead.

Karan: Are you okay, Bihaan?
Bihaan: No, I am running a high fever.
Karan: I knew it. Come with me, I will tell the sponsor to arrange us to go to the clinic.
Karan is about to take Bihaan, Bihaan scolds him.
Bihaan: Are you mad? Here Thapki doesn’t want to be my friend and you are making me crazy?
Bihaan leaves angrily.
Karan: Bihaan listen to me.

Scene 2: Dance
It’s night
Bihaan and Karan are there dressed in suit, Thapki and Riddima also comes there dressed in gowns. Bihaan looks at Thapki lovingly but Thapki ignores Bihaan.
Host: Now, I know you all have enjoyed with your partners, but this time, we have made it a little different. It will be masquerade theme so, all will be wearing masks and none will know who is who. Let’s see who ends up with whom. We are going to start in after a while.
Later, all wear masks.
Riddhima: Thapki, I am coming.
Riddhima comes to Karan.
Riddhima: Hi
Karana: Yes?
Riddima opens her masks and smiles.
Karan: Riddu?
Riddhima: Karan look at me carefully, I am wearing green and I will dance only with you.
Karan looks at Bihaan,
Karan: By the way what color dress is Thapki wearing?
Riddima: Why you want to dance with Thapki? Me?
Riddima becomes sad.
Karan: Areh not me, I was asking Bihaan,
Bihaan: What Karan
As Riddhima was about to say Thapki is coming there who is wearing pink and Bihaan quickly goes away as he knows Thapki is ignoring him.
Riddhima: Pink!
Thapki: What pink?
Riddima is surprised and she makes some excuses.
Riddhima: I was saying that pink, pink oh yes my favourite colour is pink.
Karan: Then why are you wearing green?
Riddhima: Because I don’t have pink clothes na. What is this?
Thapki: Let’s go Riddima.
Thapki brings Riddima.
Thapki: You should stay far from these guys. (looking at Bihaan)
Riddhima: But why?
Thapki: We cannot trust these guys.

Later, its dance time
Host: Now its dance time, so let it begin.
Later all are in mask, and they randomly get a partner, Thapki smiles seeing Riddhima with a partner which is Karan she doesn’t know due to the mask, and she looks for someone. Bihaan is also wearing mask and he is trying to find someone, but all got partner.
Bihaan: (in his mind) Looks like Thapki also got a partner. Good for her.
Bihaan sees a girl standing alone and he asks her.
Bihaan: (in his mind) Looks like she don’t have any partner.
Bihaan: May I dance with you?
That girl is Thapki, and none knows, neither Bihaan nor Thapki due to the mask.
Thapki: No, is okay.
Bihaan: Fine.
Bihaan stands alone. Thapki feels bad and follows him.

Thapki: Okay. I will.
Host: Now it’s time for the dance.
All the couples dance, and Janam Janam from Dilwale plays.
Thapki and Bihaan dance with each other very nicely and passionately unware of who they are. Bihaan and Thapki dances on each other’s arm and they look at each other, as they if they know each other. The music stops.
Host: This was a wonderful dance by all. Keep it up. Now all can open your masks.
All opens their mask. Thapki and Bihaan open their mask and are surprised to see each other.
Thapki: You?
Bihaan: Thapki!
Karan and Riddhima are also surprised to see and they know what will happen next.
Riddhima: Phel Gaya Raita!
Karan: This is Shandaar’s song right?
Riddhima: Shh!

Bihaan and Thapki speaks.
Bihaan: It’s good in a way that you are my partner. At least I got to spend some time with you before the camp ends. I don’t know when will I get to meet you,
As Thapki was about to say something,
Then some random girl come and says,
Girl: It’s good, wow the same partners ended up in ball dance what an understanding!
Thapki remembers how Riddima was speaking to Karan, pink and she assumes Bihaan was the one who asked for her dress color and misunderstands.
Bihaan: I didn’t know we will end up to be partners also. Wow what a coincidence!
Thapki: Is it a coincidence or you made it one.
Bihaan: Meaning? I didn’t understand.
Thapki: Don’t act innocent, Bihaan. I know very well that you asked my friend what color dress I wore right?
Bihaan: No, Thapki there have been some misunderstanding.
Thapki: I am not foolish, okay Mr.Bihaan Pandey?
Thapki leaves angrily.

Scene 3: Forest
At night, all are sleeping. Thapki is having a walk outside as she is feeling restless. Bihaan comes out of his tent and he sees Thapki. Bihaan comes to Thapki, Thapki sees Bihaan and to ignore him she walks away. She doesn’t sees a rock and she trips and falls down.
Bihaan: Thapki!
Bihaan rushes to Thapki and checks her foot, and Thapki is in pain.
Thapki: No, please don’t hold my foot it’s paining.
Bihaan: Looks like your foot twisted.
Thapki: No please!
Thapki sees Bihaan and she gets angry,
Thapki: I no need your help.
Thapki tries to stand, but she falls and Bihaan holds her, and they look at each other. Na na na music plays. They look at each other. Thapki tries again but she fails to stand properly.
Bihaan: Let me help you.
Thapki: No, thank you, Bihaan.
Bihaan: Let me.
Thapki: I said I no need your help.
Thapki refuses, and Bihaan gets angry and he lifts Thapki in his arm.
Thapki: Bihaan? What are you doing? Have you lost it?
Bihaan: Yes, I have lost it.
Thapki scolds him.
Bihaan: Enough! Not one more word.
Thapki is stunned with Bihaan’s tone. Bihaan carries Thapki and Thapki looks at Bihaan lovingly, Bihaan brings her to her tent and makes her lie down. Bihaan leaves. Riddhima is surprised to see Bihaan.
Bihaan: Take care of your friend.
Bihaan leaves. And Thapki looks on and she goes to sleep.

Scene 4: Bus
Next Day Morning,
It’s morning time and all are in the bus. All those who attended the camp are bored.
Karan: All seems bored. Let’s do Antakshari.
Karan sings Tera Hero Idhar Hain, Riddhima sings O meri Jaan and later on.
Karan: Now who will sing with Tu
Thapki starts singing very sweetly. Thapki sings Tu Na Jane Aas Paas Hain Khuda from Anjaana Anjaani.
All enjoy. Bihaan smiles. Thapki sees Bihaan and again ignores him.
Karan: Who will sing with La?
Bihaan sings Ladki Bari Anjaani Hain from Kuch Kuch Hota Hain. He looks at Thapki and tries to give his message to her with the help of the song.
Bihaan comes near Thapki to ask for friendship again while singing, and stops with Th
Thapki sings Tharki Chokro to give her message to Bihaan.
All laugh at Bihaan.

Bihaan: Ghajab. Thapki singing Tharki.
Thapki looks at Bihaan angrily and ignores him. Later, all fall asleep.
Riddima is looking at Karan everytime, and Karan also. Karan wants to come and speak to Riddima but Thapki is there sleeping. Bihaan sees this and decides to help them.
Bihaan goes to Riddhima.
Bihaan: You go to Karan, I will sit here.
Riddima: Really? Are you sure?
Bihaan: Yes.
Riddhima happily goes to Karan, Karan gestures thanks to Bihaan and Bihaan smiles. Bihaan is about to sit near Thapki, but he knows Thapki doesn’t like him. So he asks others to exchange sit but they don’t agree.
Bihaan: (in his mind) No one wants to exchange sit with me. What to do? Let me stand up.
Just then a random guy scolds Bihaan,
Guy: Can you just sit down?
Bihaan: (in his mind) Stand up also cannot. Looks like I have to sit with this Chuk Chuk Gadi, doesn’t matter she is sleeping anyways.
Bihaan sits down quietly and sees Thapki sleeping. He stays still and is nervous and making sure Thapki doesn’t wakes up before Riddima comes back. Bihaan looks and sees Thapki sleeping. He looks infront, and later, due to the bus movement Thapki in her sleep lie her head on Bihaan’s shoulder. Bihaan gets stunned and he looks at Thapki. Na Na Na plays.Bihaan tries to move but he cannot as Thapki will wake up.
Bihaan: (in his mind) What kind of trouble? I am in yaar.
Later, after a long wait Bihaan also falls asleep.
The bus takes a short break.
Driver: Whoever want to have anything, the bus will alight after 10 mins.
Most go except for some like those who are sleeping, and Thapki and Bihaan. Thapki wakes up and is shocked to see Bihaan besides her and she screams.
Bihaan gets stunned as he wakes up.
Bihaan closes Thapki’s mouth.

Bihaan: There is people sleeping.
Thapki: What are you doing here?
Bihaan: I am forced.
Thapki: Where is Riddhima?
Thapki sees Riddhima sleeping with Karan she tries to wake her up, but she pity and she comes back.
Bihaan: Why what happened?
Thapki: Nothing, you can seat here.
Bihaan smiles.
Thapki: But don’t you dare flirt with me.
Bihaan: Ghajab.
Thapki and Bihaan are in the bus, and later the bus moves, Thapki is about to sleep.
Bihaan: Don’t you sleep on my shoulder again.
Thapki looks at Bihaan angrily and ignores him. Later, they all reach Noida.
All alight.
Karan handshakes with Thapki and Riddima,
Karan: It was a nice time.
Bihaan comes to Thapki.
Bihaan: I know you may not like me, but you have been a very good partner in crime to me. I would have been happier if you would have been my friend but rest is your choice.
Bihaan leaves. Thapki looks on. Thapki doesn’t says anything and she leaves.
Karan: Let’s go.
Bihaan: No, I need to practice boxing for tomorrow’s match.
Karan: Yaar, even if you dont practice you win. And today is such a long journey takes some rest.
Bihaan: B for Bihaan Pandey doesn’t rest peacefully until or unless he wins a match.
Bihaan leaves,
Karan: Must be a memorable journey for Bihaan, me too.

Scene 5: College
Bihaan comes to college for his boxing match and he is in his boxing avatar. Thapki also comes there and they both see each other and walk opposite direction without speaking.

In the box ring,
Commentor: Today is a boxing match and the special thing is today one of our player is Bihaan Pandey the king of boxing of this college.
Bihaan comes.
Vasundhara is also there. Bihaan takes her blessing.
Vasu: Your Bauji is busy as he is out of town and your brother is having exams, if they were here they would have wished you luck so am wishing on their behalf.
Karan wishes him all the best too.
The match starts. Bihaan starts to hit the opponent very well and getting bashed. Later, while boxing Bihaan thinks about Thapki.
The opponent is about to hit him but he defends himself.
Later, while doing so he remembers what Thapki said,
Thapki: I don’t like people who gets indulged in physical activities.
Bihaan stops and the opponent takes the opportunity and hits Bihaan badly. Bihaan gets injuired.
Vasu: Bihaan!
Bihaan cannot get up at all and the opponent hits him.
Commentor: What’s happening here? Bihaan Pandey is not responding. Looks like it’s not his day today. I think we all will see Bihaan Pandey lose today.
Karan: Bihaan, what’s wrong with you? You were never like that? You were not among the ones who always get hit.
The opponent hits him badly and Karan cannot tolerate it and he leaves. Vasundhara also cries.

Karan is leaving, Riddhima and Thapki are sitting and talking. Riddhima sees Karan crying.
Riddhima: What happened Karan, why are you crying?
Karan: Nothing.
Riddhima: Tell me.
Thapki: You seem to be worried.
Karan hugs Riddhima. Riddhima looks at Thapki and calms him down.
Riddhima: What happened?
Karan: Bihaan’s life is in danger.

Riddhima and Thapki are shocked.
Karan: I never saw him broke down in any game so badly. I can’t see him like this.
Thapki remembers how she badmouthed Bihaan and how Bihaan saved her many times, Thapki runs to the boxing match.
Riddhima: Thapki, where are you going yaar?
Karan and Riddhima follows her.
Referee: Now it’s countdown time.
The referee starts to do countdown 10,9
Commentor: Countdown began but Bihaan Pandey is still not waking up, looks like the game is gone from his hands to day.
Thapki rushes and referee counts 3,
Thapki: Bihaan!
Bihaan opens his eyes and sees Thapki,
Thapki: You can do it!
Bihaan tries to get up
As Refree was about to say 1, the opponent gets happy and Bihaan gets up and starts hitting the opponent.
Thapki: Cmon Bihaan!
He hits the opponent none stop.
Commentor: As always, Bihaan Pandey is rocking and this time he is rocking with style.
Finally Bihaan drops the opponent to the ground, countdown starts and ends. And Bihaan wins the match.
Commentor: Today Bihaan Pandey proved that only he can be the king of boxing and is selected for the national games.
All is happy. Vasundhara gets glad. Thapki is super happy and she goes and runs and hugs him tigthtly. Bihaan is surprised. Vasundhara is confused.
Bihaan: Thapki?
Thapki: You wanted to know my answer right?
Bihaan nods.
Thapki: B for Bihaan Pandey will you B for Be my friend?
Bihaan smiles and nods.
Thapki and Bihaan handshake and share a hug and they smile. Vasundhara smiles. Karan and Riddhima also smiles.
Bihaan: You are very lucky for me partner, I even got selected to the national team.
Thapki: You deserved it and I am sorry for saying bad things. I was just angry. Don’t take it in your heart. And boxing is your passion. My mom and sister says that one should follow their passion.
Bihaan: I owe credit to you for today’s match, if today you weren’t here I would have lost the match.
Thapki: No, it’s not like that. I had a wrong impression on boxers, but you changed my that expression.

Vasundhara comes and Bihaan hugs her.
Bihaan: Thapki, this is my mom and mom this Thapki my friend and partner in crime in the camp and now also.

Vasu: Hi, Thapki, nice to meet you.
Thapki: Hi aunty.
Vasu: Such a sweet girl. What do you study?
Thapki tries to speak but she stammers and Bihaan gives her a loving pat. Thapki smiles. Vasundhara smiles seeing Bihaan helping Thapki.
Vasu: Do come to our home at times.
Thapki: Sure Aunty.

Scene 6: Outside
After some days,
Thapki: Bihaan come with me
Bihaan: What is it?
Thapki: Bihaan, I have a gift for you.
Bihaan: G for gift? G for Ghajab.
Thapki brings Bihaan to a salon which is owned by Riddhima.
Bihaan: Salon?
Thapki: Yes.
Thapki makes Bihaan sit down.
Bihaan: Oh so you want me to have a shave? Fine.
Thapki: Just wait and watch. You will get to know soon.
Bihaan: Are you a hairdresser?
Thapki: No, is Riddhima’s salon. I want to give you a surprise.
Bihaan: Really?
Thapki: Yes
Thapki was about to do something,

Bihaan: You wont do anything wrong?
Thapki: Do you trust me?
Bihaan: Yes, I do.
Thapki diverts Bihaan’s attention and does something. And she is done.
Thapki: Now look at the mirror.
Bihaan is stunned as he realized Thapki has chopped his longer hairs(the first hairstyle of Bihaan in TPK) to a shorter one(the current hairstyle of Bihaan in TPK)
Bihaan: My hair? What was that?
Thapki: Thapki special.
Bihaan: But my hair?
Thapki: Hello B for Bihaan Pandey with that hairstyle you looked like goon now you look so handsome and if you went to the team with that hairstyle they would have thrown you out.
Bihaan: But my hair?
Thapki: It’s not so bad. I liked it.
Thapki leaves and Bihaan follows her.
Bihaan: Please Thapki.

Scene 7: Boxing and College
It have been months for Thapki and Bihaan’s friendship
In all these days Thapki and Bihaan became very good friends and Thapki accompanied with Bihaan in all his match. People thought they were in relationship, but they were very good friends and best friends. Thapki will always make healthy food for Bihaan and feed him.
Sona: Bihaan you must have these.
Thapki: Dii, I am sure Bihaan will follow this, will you?
Bihaan: Sure.
Vasu sees this and gets happy.
Vasu: (in her mind) This Thapki is such a nice girl, she is perfect for being the daughter-in-law of this house and Bihaan’s wife.
Bihaan will win all matches and Thapki will always cheer for him and Bihaan in his free time helped with Thapki so that she gets over her stammering problem.
It’s final match and if Bihaan wins he will get selected in international games. Bihaan is practicing hard and Vasundara comes to him.
Vasu: So, how is the preparation going on?
Bihaan: Ghajab.
Vasu: Is Thapki coming tomorrow?

Bihaan: No.
Vasu: Oh I see.
Bihaan: What are you saying Maa, she will definitely come after all she is B for Bihaan Pandey’s B for Best friend.
Vasu: Okay , Best friend or more than that?
While boxing, Bihaan thinks about Thapki and shys.
Bihaan: What Maa?
Vasu: You are thinking about her only right?
Bihaan: No.
Vasu: Don’t lie to your Maa. And I don’t mind, Thapki is perfect for this house and also for you.
Bihaan: Maa what are you saying?
Vasu: I want to make Thapki my daughter in law and your wife.
Bihaan is surprised.
Vasu: Think about it. I won’t force you.
Vasundhara leaves, Bihaan is boxing and he keeps on thinking about Thapki. He closes his eyes also Thapki, he starts imagining her.
Bihaan: (in his mind) Is maa right? Have I fall in love for Thapki?
Thapki on the other hand is looking in the stars and she smiles thinking about Bihaan,
Thapki: Bihaan is such a sweet friend, I feel I have a special connection with him which is more of a best friend but what is it?
Bihaan gets thinking and the episode ends and the screen freezes on his face.

Precap: Bihaan decides to propose Thapki after his final match ends. After the match, Bihaan proposes Thapki and Thapki is surprised. She looks on.

For those who haven’t read the promo.
Promo: Bihaan is clearing up his shelf and he gets a picture of him and Thapki in college time and he gets into flashback with all his wonderful moments with Thapki. Bihaan says those were the best days of my life, but now Bihaan throws the picture away and Thapki picks the picture up. And she looks at Bihaan teary-eyed and as she was about to go Bihaan sees her and pins her to the wall. Bihaan says why did you do so with me? Thapki doesn’t replies and becomes angry and Bihaan says that I will never forget what you did. Thapki leaves and cries looking at Bihaan from outside and saying I am sorry, Bihaan I had to do all this only for you Bihaan, it was regarding your life.

This promo is for episode 6 second half and episode 7.

This fan fiction I am planning to make 10-15 episodes, not more or less than that. More will think about it, but less chances.

Hey all, as you all know that I am busy with my classes. The thing is I won’t be able to publish the episodes before 29th July, Friday. And I don’t know if you all will be able to wait for that long. Episode 6 will be a Maha Episode. So I have a solution for that, but I need your help as I myself am confused. That is
Should I split episode 6 into two parts, then publish part 1 next week by 24th July and part 2 in first week of August
OR
Should I just publish a Maha episode on 29th July?
Please do help me out as I am very confused.

I will publish the summary in the next update.

Thanks for taking your crucial time to read my fan fiction. Please do feel free to express your opinions and do comment as your comment means a lot to me. Thank you  Criticism is allowed but no offensive words 😛

39 comments

  1. rafay don kon

    Hy wao friendship ho gae lakn next episode ma maza any wala ha.i think you should upload maha episode split mt karna but thorda wait krna hoga mujhy to abhe say chulbuli ho rahe ha k thapki mana ku kary ge😃😃 but i will have to wait.its ok😊

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey rafay thanks for commenting yes thahaan ke beech mein friendship ban gayi and yes I will upload maha episode only and I will try publish earlier than 29th but I cant promise and thanks for understanding yaar

  2. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Ghajab👌👌Such a nice episode! Loves it Farin! U are a wonderful writer! Keep it up! And the match part was G for Ghajab👌
    Take care! And stay blessed!
    Love you!

    -Zuha

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey zu thanks once again u comment on all my ff its really very sweet of u dear and yeah thanks for helping me out for the ff thingy like what should I do maha or split and yeah I also enjoyed writing the match part a lot and u also take care and how is kachoo? and love u too zu

  3. Gurwinder

    sweet n simple…
    Please publish the mahaepisode in two parts… we may get chance to read it early

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey gurwinder thanks for commenting and the maha epi right I will publish as maha epi together as majority wants this and anyways thanks for helping me out and I will try to post earlier if I can

  4. garima

    Vasa chalo meri bihaan ka propose vali bat tho sahi Ho gai thapki ka mana karna vali rahti ha . keep writing.

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey garima thanks for commenting and haan teri bihaan propose karne wali hain 😛 and thapki ne kyun mana kiya u will get to know soon and will try to publish the next part b4 29th

  5. Manyasa29

    |Registered Member

    Superb joyee !!!
    It was mindblowing…….waiting for the next part.
    Well i would suggest u to publish it in two parts…..its up to u…..do as u wish.
    ……Just KEEP WRITING !!!

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey neha thanks for commenting and the next part will publish b4 29th actually I will publish maha epi as most wants so and thanks for helping me out anyways dear 🙂

  6. Rinka

    Aare u plz split it bcoz I won’t be able to wait for so long… Today I felt like reading more but again suspense… I am just loving ur fan fiction bcoz I am getting a connection with SULTAN from here bcoz nowadays SULTAN has become my one of the best movies and I like bihaan also very much…… keep writing more all the best….

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey rinka thanks for commenting and yaar I will publish maha epi as most wants so anyways thanks for helping me out and happy u liked my ff and believe it or not I had this idea on my mind even b4 sultan got released sultan walao ne mera idea churi kiyan chor 😛 kidding kidding and I saw that movie on eid day nice movie not bad and yeah Bihaan’s character quite similar to Sallu’s character to Sultan but the actual story is diff from Sultan and Thapki’s character is totally diff from Anushka as Arfa in Sultan and story also quite diff from Sultan. Only Bihaan’s character is same to Sallu’s character is the connection from Sultan and thanks dear will try to post b4 29th

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey noor thanks for commenting happy u liked it and yeah will publish maha episode thanks for helping me out will try to post b4 29th

  7. SANTHOSH

    |Registered Member

    excited to read the next (i mean 6yh half and 7th episode… ….)

    coming to the episode….
    nice…..
    (bihaan babu👷 ka baal kaat ✂✂liya thapki👩 lekin pyaar khoun kaata ✂✂dosth💔💔💔❗❗❗❓❓❓… )

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey santosh thanks for commenting yaar and I also saw ur comment in epi 4 thanks yaar haha remember that dialouge ur wish 😛 and yeah for this one happy u liked this too and yeah thapki cut bihaan’s lambi baal I hate bihaan in his lambi baal look and now with haircut he looks shariff 😛 and i want to make Bihaan’s initial character goonda type like in his college days thats why I use the lambi baal wali idea and only thapki mahan atma could cut his hair thats why 😛

      • SANTHOSH

        |Registered Member

        i like gunda🔫🔫 more than lover boy🏃❤❤…..
        thapki ne diya bihaan ko
        s for short hair s for surprise look…….. 👌👌👌👌👌

      • Fatarajo

        |Author

        same here lover boy complete joru ka ghulam 😛
        and looks se lover boy ghajab gunda no ghajab 😛
        but style se goonda ghajab not lover boy 😛

  8. Truelove

    |Registered Member

    so sorry for delay….. i was busy the whole day. as always your ff freshen up my mood. thanks for such nice episode. please revel past soon. i’m eagerly waiting to know why bihaan quit boxing.

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey sweta thanks for commenting at least u commented thats a lot for me and thanks yaar your comment means a lot to me and yeah will reveal past in maha epi itself and why bihaan quit boxing that will be revealed in maha epi for sure

  9. anu (santosh ki deewani)

    sorry for late reply
    i miss our old bihaan

    Ur edit is good

    manyasa thahaan forever

    I m excited for upcoming epi

    PLS START DEVAKHSI TRACK SOON

    AND AARA ALSO

    MY FAVR8 jodies
    i think u add ridhima name bcoz its Rajni real name
    riddhima pandit

    lovely girl
    beautiful actress

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey anu from when u became santosh ki deewani :p ansan 😛 and happy u liked the edit actually the other one my friend made this one and cover pic i made as cover pic of my profile have the fav pic of my fav couples and i miss old bihaan’s ghajab character not look now bihaan’s look is ghajab but character not so ghajab two reason as he is maa ka ladla and joru ka ghulam 😛 and yeah ridima is inspire from rajni’s name as I m big fan of jigyasa singh and riddhima pandit but the character I assume is not rajni or riddhima is anika from ishqbaaz and karan’s chacater is also shivaaye from ishqbaaz but without beard as he looks younger na like his aditya character in pyaar ka dard and yeah karan as i m big fan of karan tacker

  10. Rinka

    I know that u r writing from before…. I just got a little bit similarity and nothing else….. & me too saw sultan on eid… I am a huge Salman fan.. But anyways publish ur mahaepisode soon.. I am eagerly waiting for it….

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      I will try to publish earlier than 29th if I can hi 5 u know I even broke my chapal while i was on my way to watch sultan 😛 and i m not really a sallu fan but i like his movies some of them i loved bajrangi bhaijaan more

  11. Rinka

    Hahaha ur chappal….. u can include this in ur ff too like bihaan ka chappal broke down ;-)..waise bhi nowadays tpk is not interesting at all…. maybe through ur ff we get some mazedaar scenes….

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Yeah it was an horrible day for me not only my chapal broke but also my mehendi got spoiled a lot of abshaguns happened with me that day 😛 and yeah tpk is so boring now i m not watching it last 2 weeks also I m quite busy with classes and projects and well I dont know about my ff but there is definately awesome other ff on tpk there and yeah my one i was planning to end in 10 episodes, and if i extend highest will be 15 not more than that

  12. Nusz Khan

    |Registered Member

    Allah I loved it so much, why are you so good for? I swear to god you’re killing me with your stories.

    I am honestly happy I met a great writer like you and helper haha.

    Love you xx.

    Anyways keep smiling like always xx.

    ~Nusz xx

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey nusz thanks for commenting dear yes I m good 😛 but you are the best like u r too good sorry for murdering you 😛 you murdered me with your stories first so thats why my spirit haunted and killed u 😛 and thanks to TU i met a great friend like u and someone with whm my choice quite similar and love u 🙂

  13. Arruu

    |Registered Member

    Awesome fatarajo.. I’m speechless.. my ff readers are appreciating my work but still I’m impressed with your.. 🙂

    • Fatarajo

      |Author

      Hey aru thanks for commenting happy u liked it and i also read ur ff i like it a lot as I love horror my fav genres r horror and comedy and u know its not easy to create horror and u can create horror which is wonderful i dont get to comment on ur ff regulary as I m busy but I do read ur ff

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