thapki Bihaan OS__________———– Stranger

Hi guys.. hope you all are fine but I am not because of stupid track of tpk… I am feeling very low bcz of yesterday episode . thts why am writing this os…bcz I want to end sankar kabir track without much drag..
I know this os is very simple but sometimes simplicity makes life beautiful and whenever we tries to make it ideal it turns more complex…
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After the match whole family enter in pandey nivas and observed the whole house is filled with floral and light decoration.
Kabir : finally the losers are back… Welcome to my house “KATYAL MANSION”… this whole decoration is for you all.. first time you are entering in my house so its my responsibility to entertain you guys…
(move towards Bihaan) o arrogant, thick headed, angry young man bihaan pandey.. why are you looking down??? why are you silent????.. wants to hit me.. or pull my collar… do something yarr..dont want… OK I ll give the gift to you…
Kabir signaled servants and they throw the packed suit cases towards pandey family..
Kabir: have all this and get lost from my home…
Bihaan: Kabir Tum????
Kabir: ah ah Bihaan Pandey… You don’t have right to show anger…. because you have lost the match.. so as per my words you all have to leave…
Thapki: kabir please don’t do this…
Kabir: thapki you are such a soft hearted person…But sweetheart you are my wife now so you have to obey me..
Thapki: (with tears)Ok kabir… but Please allow them to stay here for a night… its already so late… they ll leave n morning…
Kabir: okee… as for my wife sake I agree… but only for tonight… tomorrow morning I don’t want to see your faces…
Thapki(mindvoice): I can’t leave my family in this suitation and tomorrow morning I ll plan something better kabir katyal…
Bihaan: that’s so sweet of you Mr nd Mrs Katyal…but we don’t need this mercy… we all are leaving now…
Thapki signaled maa to stop bihaan..
Vasu: please bihaan… its so late…. we don’t have any other shelter.. and me and your bauji is also not well so beta don’t argue…
Bihaan : but maa..
Vasu: please..
Bihaan: I am doing this for you all.. if you are happy by staying here so I don’t have any problem..
All family members marched towards their respective rooms along with their bags…
Kabir (in his room): Bihaan Pandey you have done such a big mistake by staying here tonight.. just wait and watch what I am going to do with you tomorrow..
Next Morning whole pandey family gather in hall..
Thapki:I am really sorry maa.. I can’t do anything.. because of me you all are leaving now.. I am really ashamed…
Vasu: its not your fault beta.. you tried but (sadly)…. But you ll always be my daughter…
Bauji: lets go before kabir do something more embarrassing…
Vasu: han.. everyone is here na.. so leave..
Preeti: but where is bihaan devarji??
Vasu: sankar? You know where is bihaan??
Sankar: how do I know… In morning he was not in room.. So I thought he might be with you…
Vasu: where are you bihaan? Bihaan? Bihaan???
Everyone starts finding bihaan. They searched the whole house but could not find bihaan..
Vasu and bauji starts crying.. where is my son gone
Thapki went to kabir and wakes him up..
Thapki: I can’t think that you can stoop so low.. where is bihaan.. what you have done to him…
Kabir: O madam…. I have better things to do in life rather than kidnapping your bihaan and harming him… such a coward.. shown his back to his family at their tough time..
Thapki pulls kabir collar..
Thapki: don’t you even dare to say bad words about him.. I ll kill you kabir.
Kabir: why you are showing anger to me… what I have done.. just go and find him.. don’t eat my brain…
Thapki leaves the room
Kabir: where is bihaan pandey… (Laughingly)Please bihaan come back soon.. I have many other torture plans to execute…

5 years later…..
In market
Thapki: bhaiya when I am giving you the fair money then you have to give good fruits and vegetables to me…. she smiles…a voice catches her attention
Man: whatever she wants give it to her… and of good quality… you people forgot to respect the old citizens… maa ji don’t worry from now onwards no one will misbehave with you…
Thapki: this voice is…
She turned back and saw a man is talking with the fruit seller holding a hand of an old lady… She closes the gap between them… the man turned back and collides with thapki.. thapki looses balance and falls down but that man catches her from her waist… thapki’s dupptta falls on her face..
Man: so sorry Miss… I turned back and accidently collides with you… (he makes her to stand straight)… so sorry because your fruits…. Let me collect it..
He sits down and starts collecting the dispersed fruit.. thapki removes the duptta from her face and try to see the face of that man who was busy in collecting fruits with his head down…he stands up
Man: miss your fruits…
Thapki freezes on the point that his unknown man is none other than his bihaan… his bihaan… he is his bihaan… but with a totally different look… he was wearing a nice black color dress pant with white shirt and black waistcoat…… he was also wearing decent specs that changes him completely from naught, uneducated and clumsy to a highly sober, educated and decent man… this new bihaan is totally different from older one… high pitch tone is changed into soft one…irresponsibility into responsibility…humiliation into gentle behavior and anger into care…. She was confused whether he is her bihaan or its identical twin… but he is looking too handsome in his new changed decent look…
Bihaan moves thapki… excuse me madam..
Thapki: bihaan… you are … is it a dream or reality… I am so happy… (she hugs him)..you are so change..… am so so happy… where were you during all these years… you know how much I have missed you… without you I am nothing bihaan…
Bihaan pushes her back…
Bihaan(softly): are u crazy.. why are you hugging me in front of public… everyone is watching us…bihaan corrects his dress… I am not your husband…
Thapki: bihaan tm
Bihaan: (smiles) han me…. And u thapki??? How are you??? Its been five years we haven’t seen each other… but I am happy that finally we met… how is kabir?? Where is he now? At office??? U guys are settled in India or abroad??? Whether you have kids??
Thapki looks at him confusingly
Bihaan: baby boy or girl? Or both??.. why are you not replying me.. (he claps his hands infront of her) thapki?? Where you have lost?? (with teasing smile)Missing kabir… haannnn.
Thapki: bihaan why are you behaving like this …what are you talking…me and kabir and all non scenes… I know I have done wrong with you but that doesn’t mean… (bihaan interrupts)
Bihaan: have I said something wrong?? sorry again.. you know na I am a modi buddhi…genuinely asking about kabir??? You both are not together,..(laughingly)he left you…
Thapki: shut up bihaan… me and kabir were not married..our marriage was fake… it was my plan to take revenge from you and when I know you were innocent then I realized my mistake and asked forgiveness from you…but at same time kabir moved back from his words and he showed that fake marriage and divorce paper because he was taking his revenge form you… whatever happened to you was my mistake because of me u have to leave your family and house….but I am genuinely sorry for this… and I still love you and can’t live without you.. all these years u know how badly I missed you..
Bihaan: I know all these things…
Thapki: bihaan you know the whole truth…How?
Bihaan:That doesn’t matter thapki..beacuse if truth is not reveled at correct time… it loses its worth
Thapki: you know everything but you never come back…why you never tried to be with your family again..
Bihaan: (laughingly)family… ahhaaa… family… which family you are talking about… family who always treated me as a stranger… who always think about their motives… feeling that I am responsible for everything bad happened to them… that family… I don’t have family… I am always an orphan…
Thapki(with tears): I know bihaan you are angry… that’s why you are saying this..
Bihaan: no..no..no I am not angry… actually I am thankful to you and whole pandey nivas because I am here only because of you all… you all compelled me to find my identity, my own path, my own set up.. Seriously if all these things were not happened in past I am not able to be such successful in present…
He tries to leave… but thapki blocks his path…
Thapki: bihaan but I am still the same and I still love you and can’t live without you.. all these years u know how badly I missed you…please forgive me… can’t we again be together..
Bihaan: no thapki we can’t… we don’t deserve each other.. we are not compatible to each other… some time you misunderstands me and vice versa… neither you show trust on me nor I… whenever we are together we only hurt eachother… so its better to live in our lives separately… happily settled and contented..
Thapki: but bihaan you told me na ke our pair is made by God.. so how can you disobey God wish
Bihaan: ya I said but it was our past and sometimes mistakes are also done by God that’s why he rectified his mistake by separating us…
Thapki: but bihaan…
A cute little girl (age 4 years) pulls bihaan finger.. papa papa.. bihaan lifts her in his arms..
Bihaan: ahh riya… my cute little doll…(he kisses her cheek and she kisses her back)..why you come out of car…
Riya: papa… u said ke you ll be back in five minutes… and look its an hour now… and I hate waiting for you…
Bihaan(holds his one ear) sorry sweetheart… next time this ll not happen…
Thapki was looking at bihaan and riya confusingly… she cannot understand bihaan has a daughter.. her world moves upside down… he moves on in his life with a girl… I am not his wife now… he has given mine place to someone else both in his life and heart too.
Riya: papa who is she
Bihaan looks at thapki… don’t know beta..
RIYA: papa but you told me not to talk with strangers and now you are doing the same..
Bihaan: u are right my doll. She is a stranger that’s why I am not talking to her..
Bihaan’s words pricks deep in thapki’s heart… tears rolled down her cheeks…
Bihaan leaves dumbfounded thapki.. he starts caressing riya’s cheeks…
Thapki: I love you bihaan..
Bihaan (wipes his tears): I love you too thapki.. and I cannot live without you and my family… but I am doing all this for you all… for your well being, betterment and safety…
FLASHBACK
When kabir was talking to himself bihaan passed through his room and he heard
Kabir: wait and watch bihaan pandey what I have planned for you…you and your family have to pay back what you have done with my sister… I know whenever I ll do something bad with thapki or your family you hurt the most… to torture you I have to torture your family… your family have to suffer for your deeds… that’s why I have planned this fake marriage drama to snatch your love from you and now I have also snatched your house… now your family will be on road… now wait for my next attack…
Bihaan listened all this and he fell on his knee… my thapki and my family is suffering because of me…I m the reason of all this… I can’t tolerate this more… I have to leave them… so that kabir can’t torture then more. Then bihaan left pandey nivas..

Present
Bihaan was crossing the road by holding riya in his hands and engrossed in his thoughts… thapki wipes her tears.. and has a last glance at bihaan.. ..then she looks at other side of roads and finds that a car with full speed is coming towards bihaan.. and bihaan is unknowingly crossing the road… thapki runs towards bihaan and pushes him and riya on side and in this process car hits thapki…
Bihaan manages to sat straight and caress riya cheek and hugs her in fear and happiness that nothing bad happened to her… people starts gathering on road… bihaan looks back and to his ultimate shock he finds thapki in pool of blood… he runs towards thapki and places his head in his lap..
Bihaan: thapki… thapki…. Why u have done this? Why u have saved me??
Thapki: because I love u bihaan… I love you a lot…. And I can’t live without u… without you your thapki is nothing…
Bihaan: please don’t say this… nothing ll happen to yu.. I ll not let anything happen to u..
Thapki: bihaan please say once that u love me…
Bihaan: I love you thapki… I love u bihaan… I love you a lot…. And I can’t live without u… without you your bihaan is nothing…
And thapki faints…

In Hospital
Bihaan and riya was outside OT.. praying for thapki’s health…
Riya: papa why are you crying for that Miss Stranger….
Bihaan: beta she is not stranger.. she is mine….mine thapki…
Riya: don’t cry papa… nothing bad ll happen to Miss stranger.. I am praying from God.. u too do the same..
Bihaan (closes his eyes): God please… Please give my thapki back to me… I am alive during these years by thinking that she is fine…. but if something happen to her.. no..no.. nothing ll happen to her…please God..
Doctor comes out of OT.. bihaan runs towards him..
Bihaan: doc hows thapki now??? She is fine na..
Doc: Mr pandey she is fine now… don’t worry.. we are shifting her in ward… you can meet her after some time…
In room
Bihaan(holds thapki’s hand): I am sorry thapki… I have done so bad to you… I am really bad… please forgive me… I promise I ll never leave your hand again…
Thapki open her eyes and sees bihaan
Thapki: Bihaan… u are here..
Bihaan: please thapki don’t speak..
Thapki: bihaan I am sorry… please forgive me..
Bihaan: why are you asking for forgivness… all this is my fault… please forgive me..
Thapki: u know bihaan hmra yehe problem hai.. hum ek dosry ko maaf karny me bht time lagta dyty hai… ye maafi he hum me sab se baari chezi hai..
Bihaan: ok from now onwards… no sorry no thank u….
Thapki smiles…
Bihaan: lets have a fresh start.. Hi(forwards his hand).. I am b for bihaan pandey…
Thapki(shakes hand): hi.. thapki…nice to meet you..
Bihaan: friends?
Thapki: friends….
Bihaan(smiles): Gajjaaabbbbbb..
Thapki: bihaan I am so happy for you.. u moved on in your life… your daughter is so cute.. where is your wife…
Bihaan: thapki how can you think ke I can marry someone else.. you are one and only girl in my life//
Thapki: but riya..
Bihaan: actually when I left pandey nivas I found riya on road… so adopted her as my daughter..
Riya enters.. she runs to thapki and bihaan
Riya: so Miss stranger how are you…my papa is really worried for yu..

Thapki laughs at riya because of the cute name given by her,,
Thapki: I am fine.. Miss Cutepieeee…
Riya: you are so good and now onwards you are not stranger for us..beacuse you have saved my papa life so for this I just want to give a gift… (she kisses thapki’s cheek).. now equal…
Both bihaan and thapki laughs…
Bihaan: thapki ll u marry me??
Thapki nodes her head as No and smiles..
Bihaan: please… riya please you ask to you Miss stranger to marry your papa…
Riya: (innocently) please marry my papa… he is so cute… look at his dimples.. he ll take care of you as you are not well… he is a very good cook… and also make drawings…he ll alos change ur dress (thapki embarras) please …
Thapki: ok… but have one condition..
Riya: what
Thapki: you have to say me mama…
Riya: ok done… mama please marry my papa…
Both bihaan and thapki laughs and hugs riya…

27 comments

  1. pooja prabha

    Friend Abi…I just completely fascinated with this os…to be very frank its absolutely a phenomenal one.I want to give a huge thanks to you for giving such a impressive os for us.

  2. Lee_na

    Oh….It’s so sweet… i wish it’s really happened in tpk.
    Your oss always make me smile. 🙂
    Thank you and take care ♡♡

  3. Manish ki deewani

    oh dear u this os is superb amazing minblowing ending is fantastic….Riya is soooo cute like his papa…and i imagine new look of Bihaangajaaaab… really loved it to the core ….really u give me relief after the torture of real tpk ….ur imagination r superb
    plz if possible write a ff also

  4. Manish ki deewani

    oh dear this os is superb amazing minblowing ending is fantastic….Riya is soooo cute like his papa…and i imagine new look of Bihaangajaaaab… really loved it to the core ….really u give me relief after the torture of real tpk ….ur imagination r superb
    plz if possible write a ff also

  5. Sri Wahyuni Hatta

    if you are the writer of TPK series, the series certainly famous … acting good player plus a storyline that makes sense, is not always a crime which won ….

  6. NaiTan

    Congrats for ur 6th os …. Loved it … ❤ … Bihaan’s new look ..😍 … Amazing …. Faboulous…. Your imagination is out of this world … Can’t describe it in mere words … 😘😘 … Plz come back with another os soon ..😀 Take care

  7. Sandy123

    |Registered Member

    It made me cry 😭 for real amazing…it very truth to be in the show …..you are an amazing writer can you take the place of the cvs I really in love 😍 with this story I can read it thousands time without feeling boring 🙃🙂……GOOD JOB ❤️️❤️️❤️️

  8. Kudrat

    Seriosly di,
    ur superb.
    Actu..y I ‘ve not a single word to …praise …
    Mindblowing os and u too
    Wating 4 next

    Plz come..
    Ab jeldi s ek or…f…os…t..

    Lots of love..
    Keep writing like this..
    Good night..
    but..t..
    Ur su.. Fan..tic

    Di waiting for next….

    • Alm.Abi

      |Author

      ahhh kudrat dear.. u know i was waiting for your comment.. u are such a love buddy.. hope to continue entertaining you… have you read my old os “beauty with boldness”… please write it.. u ll surly love it… and do tell me whether you like it or not..
      nd my new os is bit different from others.. i am trying to write it in funny way.. i dont way whether you like it or not… but i am writing it for my satisfaction..
      take care honey…

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