THAHAAN SACRIFICE AND REALISATION FF (EPISODE 1)

THE FULL EPISODE IS IN ENGLISH. THE DIALOGUES ARE UPDATED BOTH IN HINDI AND ENGLISH. YOU WILL FIND THE ENGLISH DIALOGUES IN THIRD BRACKETS NEXT TO THE HINDI ONE. I USED HINDI DIALOGUES JUST TO GIVE THE ORIGINAL THAHAAN FEELING AND IN ENGLISH FOR THEM THOSE WHO FIND IT DIFFICULT WITH HINDI. HOPE YOU LIKE IT.

EPISODE 1

“SWASTIK ORPHANAGE”

Vaani is surrounded with fifteen odd kids, parrots also chirping “mmuuujjhhheee bbbhhiiiiii chichcichi…..” most probably imitating what the kids were saying. Vaani is wearing a light pink punjabi suit with her usual high heels and a simple makeup with a braided hair. Vaani says “ru-ko sabko milega ch-cho-co…..”[“Wait every-body will get a cho-co-“] and she gets teary eyed. Somebody comes and pats her from behind and Vaani says “chocolate”(Thapki tune plays in the BG). The one who pats her is the head of the orphanage Sister Maria. Sister Maria has known Vaani since 2 years and Vaani became very close to her eventually.

“Vaani, my dear, why are you crying? You know I hate tears in your eyes. You are an inborn fighter,if you cry, it makes the kids and me sad as well. You have been doing a parents’ work for the kids since you have been with us.”, Sister Maria said.

“Sister ma-in ruk ruk ke bo-lna nahi chahti kabhi bhi pa-r main kya karu, meri ye-h kami mujhe rok-ti hai.”,[Sister, I don’t want to sta-mmer and speak, but my stamm-ering stops me”] Vaani said.

Sister-“I have seen you as a proficient journalist and you write and speak so well,you have always overcomed your weakness while giving speech then why are you teary eyed today?”

Vaani- “I don’t know Sister,par a-aj aisa ho raha hai.”[“it is happen-ing today”] (in mind- “aa-j mera birthday hai,par ma-in kisi ko yeh na-hi bata sa-kti. Agar ghar pe hoti toh shay-ad koi ek insa-n mujhe wish ki-ya hota. I love you and I miss yo-u.”)[(in mind “Today is my birth-day but I cann-ot tell anyone, I wish I were at home, th-at one person woul-d have atleast wish-ed me. I love you and I miss you.”]

Sister- “Kya hua bolo?”[“What happened say?”]

Vaani- “Kuch nahi sister,bas gha-r ki yaad aa ra-hi thi isliye aankh mein aan-soo aa gaye th-ei thik hai main kaam pe ni-kalti hu bye see you..”[“Nothing Sis-ter, I was remem-bering my home & my eyes got wet. Okay I am goi-ng for work. Bye see you.”]

“PANDEY NIVAS”

Bihaan rushes out of the house without having breakfast.
Vasundhara says” Bihaan ke bauji, yeh ladka ko sab kuch waqt pe chahiye warna yeh……(teary eyed) bina khali pet chala jata hai. Aaj main thoda late ho gayi aarti karne mein, aur yeh aarti bina sune gusse mein nikal gaya,khana bhi nahi khaya..”[“Bihaan’s dad, this boy needs everything in time otherwise(teary eyed)……without eating he will go away in empty stomach. Today I got late due to the morning prayer, and he, without listening to the prayer ran away in anger.”]

Balwinder-” Vasundhara ji, aap toh jante hi hai yeh ladka gusse mein rehta hai hamesha par apne kaam ka pakka hai. CBI mein hai, waqt pe sab kuch chahiye hi hoga. Aap fikar mat kijiye, hum usse bureau mein samjha ke khana khila denge.”[“Vasundhara ji, you know this boy is always in anger but is perfect in his work. He is in the CBI, he should be punctual that’s why. Okay don’t worry, I will feed him at office.”]

Dhruv-” Ha maa, aap befikar rahiye. Main hoon na, Bihaan ko khila dunga aur samjha bhi dunga. Aap hamara breakfast lagwa dijiye, hum logo ko jaldi nikalna hai.”[“Yes mom, don’t worry. I am also there, I will feed him and explain him. You get ready with our breakfast, we have to leave.”]

“POLICE BUREAU”

Bihaan is wearing a light blue jeans jacket type shirt and dark blue denims with a black shade goggles and a gold Salman Khan type bracelet in his right hand and a platinum watch on his left hand. He enters the bureau gate with a very high speed and parks his bike inside. The securities salute him and after nodding,he tucks his goggles in between his top shirt button and goes inside angrily.

Inside the bureau, few junior officers Arjun, Tarun, Pari, Shiva and Ankita(they can be any actors you may imagine) are seated in their chairs and are gossiping with tea cups and snacks on their desks. Bihaan enters in a rush and they all stop at once with their chit chat and stands up”Good morning Sir”.

Bihaan(loudly) “Tum logo ka bhasanbazi khatam ho gaya ho toh yeh chai ke cups yaha ab tak kyu hai? Jaldi hatao yeh sab aur wo Shankar jis pe hume shak hai nakli passports banane ka usse puch tach kiya ke nahi?”[“If you have completed with your gossips then why are these tea cups still here? Remove all these quickly and yes did you question that suspect Shankar whom we caught in false passports’ racket?”]
Arjun”Ji Sir, par wo kuch bol nahi raha hai,hum log………”[“Yes Sir, but he is not ready to tell anything but we……”]
Bihaan”Tum log se ek kaam nahi hota, lagta hai usse third degree dena parega.”[“You people can’t do a single work. I need to give him a third degree torture.”] He goes into the torture room.

“THE 360 NEWS OFFICE”

Vaani is seated at her desk and she is working. She receives a mail from Bureau office saying she has to edit a few documents on the moves taken by the Government to issue passports to travellers who produce original documents only etc. She starts working on it. An another email pops in.

From Balwinder Pandey,CP
“Vaani bitiya,tumse aur ek zaruri kaam hai. Hamare office se tumhe documents edit karne ka email mila hoga par hume ek aur secret kaam hai tumse. Hume maloom hai yeh tum hi kar paogi kyu ki kabhi kabhi hume apna junior officers pe bharosa nahi hota hai. Hume kuch false passports ke network ke bare mein pata chala hai, aaj wo log tumhare hi Ramgarh ke phoolbagan ilake mein passports ka deal karne wale hai. Hum chahte hai ki tum waha jakar bas information aur proofs collect kar ke lao, hamare officers bhi jayenge waha par agar unhe kuch hua toh tumhare proofs second hand ka kaam aayega,tum secret agent ho hamara jo koi nahi janta.Isse pehle bhi tumne bahut kiya hai aisa. Agar kuch help ya support accessories chahiye toh mujhe phone karna, hum tumhe kuch suspects ke photos fax kiye hai,dekh lena.”

[“Vaani,my child, I have an another important work with you. I know you received a mail from our office, but I have another secret work with you. I know you can only help me because sometimes I can’t trust many of my junior officers. I have got to know about a false passports’ racket, today they are going to have a deal at your place Phoolbagan, Ramgarh. I want you to go there secretly and get proofs against them. Some of my officers will also go but if they get caught, you proofs will still be there. Nobody knows you are my secret agent and you have done many similar works for me before also. If you need any accessories for help, you tell me. I have sent you few suspect pictures by fax, see them.”]

From Vaani,Journalist,
“Nahi sir,mere pass sab hai mere iss bag mein,kuch nahi chahiye. Aap kuch mat sochiye aur mujh pe bharosa rakhe.”[“No Sir, I have everything, I don’t need anything more. And please don’t worry and have faith on me.”]
(she didn’t stammer beacuse she typed the email)..

Vaani goes to washroom. She pulls out a small hole type camera from her bag,fixes it in between her hairline properly and puts her hairlocks above it to hide it, then she pairs it with her mobile bluetooth and also her watch. If she gets caught anyhow and loses her mobile,she will have the watch. And if someone opens the belt of her watch, the video clips will be automatically mailed to Balwinder Pandey. After she is done with it, she comes out and leaves for her mission. Her chief manager knows that she is always upto collecting information so he never questions her and is allowed to go.

“TORTURE ROOM”

Bihaan- “Hum B for Bihaan Pandey hai, naam toh suna hoga(Bihaan tune plays in the background). Kaanpatti ke niche jab ek parega toh akkal thikane pe aayega. Muh kholta hai ya phir hum apne tarike se khole?”[“I am B for Bihaan Pandey, you might have heard my name, ain’t you? If you get a slap behind your earlobe, your mind will start to work. Will you open your mouth on your own otherwise I have to….”]
He takes out his gun and puts on Shankar’s head. Shankar is adamant to tell anything. Bihaan slaps him hard with the rear of his left hand and Shankar is slammed to the wall. Bihaan rolls his fist and gives him hard three to four times, he picks up the iron chair to hit again and the man folds his hands,”Bata-ta hu sir batata hu. Main akela nahi hu iss gang mein,mere sath aur bhi log hai aur bas itna pata hai mujhe ki aaj ek deal hoga phoolbagan,Ramgarh mein jaha dealers aayenge dophar ke 2 baje. Isse aage mujhe kuch nahi pata, main sach bol raha hu.”[“Wait Sir I am telling you. I am not alone in this gang,I have more people with me. I only know this much that today at Phoolbagan, Ramgarh, there is going to be a deal at 2 p.m. I do not know anthing more. I told the truth.”]

thap
Bihaan starts thinking with tensed eyes and is about to go, “Agar tune sach bola hai toh beta teri jaan bach gayi par ha tere karm ke liye phansi zarur milegi. Arjun, isse hawalat mein band kar do.”[“If you are telling the truth, your life got saved from me, but for your deeds, you will get death sentence soon. Arjun, put him in lockup again.”]
Shankar- “Sir-r sir ek aur baat, hamare gang mein aapke ek oficer bhi hai.”[“Sir, one more thing, one of your officers is also with us.”]
Bihaan”Hmmm, ab C for camel aaya M for mountain ke niche. Le jao isse.”[“Hmm, now the C for camel came below the M mountain”]
Arjun comes,opens the door of the torture room and takes Shankar away.

Bihaan(in mind)-“Hume waha akele hi jana parega. Iss Shankar se toh pata chala ke koi officer bhi mila hua hai aur ab toh 12 baj rahe hai. 2 ghante mein dhundna hoga toh Bihaan Pandey jaldi karo. Acha kuch suspects ka photos 360 news office ka fax se mila tha,wo sab ko le lete hai.” [(in mind)”I have to go there alone. This Shankar told me that one of my officers is helping them. It is already 12 noon. 2 more hours so I need to hurry up. Okay let me take those suspects’ pictures that we received from 360 news office.”]
He goes and find those pictures from a document file.
Balwinder- “Bihaan kaha ja rahe ho? Tumne aaj khana bhi nahi khaya hai.”[“Where are you going Bihaan? You didn’t have your food today.”]
Bihaan-“Sir hume abhi jaldi nikalna hai,raste mein kuch kha lenge.”[“Sir, I need to go, I am in a hurry. I will have something on my way.”]

Dhruv-“Par Bihaan Sir,suno toh.”[“But Bihaan Sir, listen to me.”]
(When they are at office, they call each other Sir according to posts they hold,no homely matters here).
Bihaan-“Nahi Dhruv, tum log apna kaam karo aur hume jane do.”[“No Dhruv, you all do your work and let me go.”] and he rushes out,picks his bike and leaves in a speed with the securities in a standing pose behind.

PRECAP- It is dark outside, the sun has just set.They are in an abondoned street where hardly any human being passes by or any bird chirps. The Gundas are beating Bihaan badly, Bihaan’s left hand is bleeding profusely,his leg is hurt,nose bleeds and he is rolled on the floor, one man aims gun at Bihaan and shoots. Thapki looks on shocked from a bit far mutilated house window and the house is too old and dark with a ghostly appearance.

PLEASE DO COMMENT FRIENDS. I WILL FEEL HAPPY AND ENCOURAGED. THANK YOU FOR READING…

24 comments

    • RINKA_RITZ

      |Author

      yes i know dear, only the first two chapters you will get in both the languages, don’t worry from the 3rd chapter all will be in english. Because the dialogues in the first two chapters are much more important i have to do this… plz bear with me.

  1. pooja prabha

    Wow…awesome wala part.Bihaans way of look,action,behaviour and everything is perfect to a CBI officer,you done a brilliant job.

  2. Jacqueline Nicole

    Sooo cute starting dear..really enjoyd.. precap seems lil scary !! Im eagerly waiting fr thahaans meeting… keep writing and try to upload it daily yaar.

  3. Crazy Girl

    Ritz… its totally different yaar… bihaan was so hot n damn cool in character… yup CBI bihaan its suits him alot… am enjoying this new thahaan… u r such a talented person… waiting fr nxt part dear… update soooon… tc…

    • RINKA_RITZ

      |Author

      YES CRAZY GIRL, I DO NOT KNOW YOUR NAME, YES I KNOW… I HAD ALWAYS WISHED TO GIVE BIHAAN A DASHING CHARACTER INSTEAD OF JUST CRYING ALL OVER… HE LOOKS SO FOOLISH NOWADAYS…. THAT IS WHY I MADE THIS…………..

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