Hi this is VHM signing in with a new FF ….The concept is given by our friend FFFAN1234 aka Dipti….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….I hope you will continue to shower your support as you have always shown for my earlier write ups …….

Please note I May not be regular in posting the episodes due to personal commitments…however I promise I will not keep you waiting for a long time too……..

WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY PUI…MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY…Best wishes to you Pui on behalf of all the readers of this FF and this episode !!!

TAM : Thinking At that Moment / Thought At that Moment

Shivaay turned towards Anika, who was by then smiling with her hands folded near her chest and was looking at him with her khidkitodh smile

Shivaay ‘’what? Why are you smiling?’’

Anika ‘’why …should I not smile? Is it a rule that I should not laugh in OM as you do?’’

Shivaay ‘’why are you ranting …I am just asking why are you smiling?’’

Anika ‘’one minute…I am not smiling…I am laughing…like this’’ she showed him her teeth..‘’second ..my wish I will laugh…I will smile …I will do whatever I want …do you have any problem?’’

Shivaay ‘’yes…I have problem…I am not liking it at this point’’

Anika ‘’ohh …you are not liking then I will laugh more…’’

Shivaay ‘’fhat the wuck’’

Anika ‘’you want divorce or not…if yes …then laugh now…come on laugh’’

Shivaay ‘’I will not’’

Anika ‘’One Minute Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi…from now onwards I don’t want to listen NO from you…you will do what I say and what I ask you to do…got it……’’

Shivaay looked on shocked and Anika left from there without looking at him……

Shivaay remembered his own words of saying almost similar lines to her while she was working for him…he felt that pinch with her words ….

Om Ru came to him and said ‘’All the Best Shivaay’’ and left from there…

Gauri ‘’bhayya…you felt bad that Anika Bahujaii spoke like that’’

Shivaay ‘’no Gauri…she was right…she is now in a position where I have to follow her orders and you know what…I used to speak exactly like this to her when she was an employee…now I feel how my rudeness would have hurt her…I deserve this….this is just starting Gauri …I have much more to face and when I have chosen this path …I can’t step back..i will create such circumstances to her now where she will have no option than to hurt me’’

Gauri ‘’but why bhayya…you are not used to it…and what do you think if she hurts you will she be happy?’’

Shivaay smiled and said ‘’I know how she feels now…but this has to go on until she herself realises why I am doing so… as I have realised what I did with her was wrong’’

Gauri had tears of happiness and Shivaay wiped her tears and left from there….

——shivaay’s room

Om ‘’Shivaay I am feeling very hungry…it’s long time we made something together…shall we have some obro’s kitchen moments?’’

Shivaay ‘’off course …come we will go there’’

Om ‘’fine then you proceed…I will call Rudra’’

Shivaay nodded and left from there towards the kitchen……

ShivOmRu were enjoying kitchen moments for sometime silling the floor…tasting the half cooked food…mixing the dough…making figurines from dough and where smiling….after sometime
AniRi came there

Anika ‘’aree wah what’s cooking Om?’’

Om ‘’Shivaay is making bruchetta…’’

Anika ‘’dupatta? ‘’

Om ‘’no…it’s bruchetta…bru che tta’’

Anika ‘’ajeeb naam hain…’’

Rudra ‘’you too have it…he makes it really tasty’’

Anika ‘’no thanks….i don’t want to have anything made by him…’’

Shivaay was surprised and so were others….Anika stood there trying not to look at Shivaay…

Shivaay ‘’here you go with freshly baked hot steamy BRUCHETTA…can you feel the aroma… can you all smell the aroma’’

Anika ‘’I said I don’t want to have anything made by you…’’

Shivaay ‘’ok Anika…I heard…but I was saying this to Gauri and OmRu not you…I remember your words ..that I must agree to whatever you say…I very well remember’’

It was Anika’s turn to get surprised……

Shivaay ‘’gauri do you feel good seeing this?’’

Gauri ‘’haan bhayya…I am getting water in my mouth…please let me eat it first’’

Shivaay ‘’off course come…OmRu you too join at the table’’

He coughed and looked at Anika…

Shivaay ‘’you can also have it mademoiselle’’ he took a pause ‘’only if you change your decision of having food made by me’’

Anika ‘’no thanks’’

The aroma was filling the OM and everyone joined at Dining table…

Dadi ‘’billu…what’s the special dish that you made …it’s smelling heaven and it looks beautiful too’’

Shivaay ‘’Dadi it will taste delicious too…everyone come join me at the table before it gets cool let’s have it’’

Tej ‘’Anika …why are you standing there…come take your seat…’’

Anika ‘’uncle ji woh…woh..’’

Jhanvi ‘’Anika …what woh …woh…come and sit’’

Anika ‘’I am not feeling hungry…so you carry on’’

Shivaay looked at Gauri once again

Gauri ‘’bahujaii…it’s okay if you are not feeling hungry but atleast you can sit here with all of us and speak something till we have food’’

Anika TAM ‘’ ek tho itni acchi khusbhu aa rahi hain…upar se mujhe kutton ki tarah bhook lagi hain…aur ab ye Gauri ki bacchi mujhe yaha bhethne ke bol rahi hain…kya karoon mein bheth ke …ye khathe rahe tho mein mere pet mein bhagthe khutton ko maarthi rahoon’’

(First of all the aroma is so awesome…and above that I am feeling so hungry like dogs are running in my stomach…and now this stupid Gauri is asking me to sit along with them…what will I do sitting here? Kill the dogs in my stomach?’’

Dadi ‘’haan Anika…come sit here’’

Shivaay served everyone and everyone were enjoying the food……Shivaay was looking at Anika every now and then and was smiling to himself…

Rudra ‘’Bhayya..i am saying if you open a Italian restaurant and sell this na you will become rich much more…it’s just awesome’’ he stood up and moved towards Shivaay and kissed his cheeks…

Om ‘’seriously Shivaay…this time I agree with Rudra…we can become famous and rich by selling this sort of bruchettas’’

Anika ‘’OmRu …are you done praising your bhayya…can’t you eat silently? ‘’ she stood up and went murmering to herself….

——-Anika’s Room

The moment Anika stepped in she found Aloo poori in a plate in her room near side table with a note

The note read as
‘’ I know you are feeling hungry and I also know your ego will not allow you to eat what I prepared..that too in front of me along with us…I also know you don’t like all these foreign food stuff so I prepared very well in advance your favourite Aloo poori…so that you don’t stay hungry for whatever reason…so have it…don’t worry I will not say anything to anyone…——Shivaay’’

Anika smiled to herself and ate the Aloo poori in one go……Shivaay saw Anika eating Aloo poori , smiled to himself and left from there….

Anika TAM ‘’Wish you wouldn’t have spoken all those words …I would have ate whatever you prepared without any complaints…I miss you Shivaay and I am not at all liking the way I am behaving with you’’

Shivaay came back to join everyone at the dining table when he saw Pinky sitting …..

Shivaay ‘’Staff…’where are the staff?’’

Staff came running ‘’Yes sir’’

Shivaay ‘’where the hell were you? You should be a call away from me’’

Staff ‘’sorry sir…yes sir’’

Shivaay ‘’get the food in my room…’’

Dadi ‘’par Billu?’’

Shivaay ‘’dadi please…I can’t withstand this lady he spoke pointing his finger towards Pinky…and then continued ‘’so please don’t force me …my mood , my hunger died after seeing her and I can’t even wait for another moment‘’ he looked at Pinky in disgust and left from there…

Pinky broke into tears…elders felt bad but they didn’t try to persuade her because they knew if Shivaay gets to know then what will happen…one by one everyone left from there and pinky was left alone…….

When everything came back to normal Shivaay sat near the pool in thoughts…..OmRu came to him

Om ‘’shivaay’’

Shivaay ‘’yes Om…come sit here…it’s been a long time we three have sat and spoke ‘’

Rudra ‘’yes bhayya…I am missing the obro’s moments badly’’

Om ‘’shivaay we have something to talk with you’’

Shivaay ‘’I know what you want to talk’’

Om ‘’what?’’

Shivaay ‘’about Anika…you want to ask, why I want to give her divorce…you want to say, I am taking wrong decision…you want to say , I should not do this as Anika is the only one who is best for me…am I right?’’

Om ‘’right and when you know all this then why are you still doing all this?’’

Shivaay ‘’what did I do…I am listening to everything she says…doing what she wants…everything is going according to her will and wish…what more do you expect me to do?’’

Om ‘’Shivaay you know very well why you are doing this? because you want divorce…otherwise you will never agree to her’’

Rudra ‘’Sorry bhayya…but in this matter we will support Bhabhi…you are doing wrong that’s it’’

Shivaay ‘’Fine then …it is clear you chose her over me…go ahead…’’ he left from there appreciating his brothers in his heart…….

As soon as he entered his room he saw a note sticked on the mirror…it read as

‘’Thank you for the food…but let me make onething clear…don’t think with this one gesture I will melt and forget everything…you have hurt me much Shivaay —-Anika’’
Shivaay smiled and kept the note safe in his locker…….

————–Next Morning

Anika was on a call with someone and was smiling continuously…Shivaay saw her and his eyebrows frowned…

Anika ‘’okay sure…I will arrange the party…you just come’’ she disconnected the call

Rudra ‘’bhabhi…party ? for whom?’’

Anika ‘’Rudra …Siddharth and Mallika are coming here …and mallika was saying that she wanted to have a party …so I said we will for sure have a party’’

Rudra ‘’that’s awesome Bhabhi…by the way when are they coming? ‘’

Anika ‘’today evening’’

Rudra ‘’whaat? How will we arrange everything then?’’

Anika ‘’don’t worry Rudra…did you forget I used to make khidkitodh arrangements in one day…so I will handle don’t worry…but will you help me?’’

Rudra ‘’do you need to ask this Bhabhi? I am always at your service’’

Om ‘’and me too…just order us and we will get everything done for you’’

Anika ‘’come we will go…There is lot of work to do’’

Anika looked at Shivaay who was staring at her and left….

Shivaay ensured Anika has left and called Mallika

Shivaay ‘’mallika …I need a help’’

Mallika ‘’yes Shivaay?’’

Shivaay ‘’Just call Anika and say that I should do all the arrangements of the party’’

Mallika ‘’have you gone mad Shivaay?’’

Shivaay ‘’mallika please…just tell her Shivaay should do all the arrangements for the party by himself as she did it for us earlier’’

Mallika ‘’are you sure?’’

Shivaay ‘’yes Mallika’’

Mallika ‘’your job will be done…don’t worry’’

Shivaay ‘’please don’t ever reveal to Anika that I made you say all this…it should be between you and me’’

Mallika ‘’I wouldn’t do so…happy ?’’

Shivaay ‘’thanks….don’t forget to invite Tia for the party’’

Mallika smiled and said ‘’will do that…now bye I am running late I have to be there on time…bye baby…’’

Shivaay ‘’thanks …bye’’

Shivaay disconnected the call and called Chubby

Shivaay ‘’Chubby…I have a work for you’’

Chubby ‘’yes bhayya’’

Shivaay ‘’today evening you are coming to OM…there is a party here…and now your work is , you have to make sure you prepare the same fruit punch you did when Mallika was here months before…that toxicated fruit punch….but remember you will not serve me the fruit punch …I want to be in senses this time’’

Chubby ‘’ok bhayya’’

Shivaay ‘’and listen one more thing don’t tell this to anyone not even to Rudra…it must be between us’’

Chubby ‘’pakka bhayya’’

Shivaay ‘’see you’’

He sat to work his office work and was unable to concentrate …when he felt Anika to be near…he counted 1..2..3…

Anika ‘’Shivaay’’

Shivaay lifted his chin up and looked at her

Shivaay ‘’yes Anika’’

Anika ‘’woh…woh’’

Shivaay ‘’woh..what?’’ he stared at her

Anika was becoming nervous and was playing with her hair to get away with her nervousness

Shivaay ‘’Anika if you have something to say…tell it fast…else I have my office work to be done’’

Anika ‘’Shivaay …I want you to arrange today evening’s party…that too all alone’’

Shivaay ‘’but’’

Anika ‘’wait I have not yet completed…you can ask me for suggestions …I will help you in that…but you should arrange ‘’

Pinky ‘’OMM …now you will make my son to do all these works….what do you think who he is ? he is shivaay singh oberoi…the heir of Oberoi empire and you are making him do this sort of
work…because of that stupid rule to give divorce…I can’t believe you have such small thoughts’’

Anika ‘’no aunty ji..woh actually Mallika called and said she wants Shivaay’’

Pinky ‘’Mallika…who that runaway bride…she is coming and for her you are making her do this…’’

Shivaay ‘’enough…I have asked someone not to talk in my personal matters and to anyone in this family…if they try to talk again then I will for sure leave this house’’

Pinky ‘’Shivaay …I am your mom…and you are boycotting me?’’

Shivaay turned towards Anika and said

Shivaay ‘’Anika I will do the arrangements…I have to agree to your words …so I will make the arrangements. But…’’

Anika ‘’but..but what?’’

Shivaay ‘’I want salary for this work’’

Anika ‘’what?’’

Shivaay ‘’yes..i am a businessman…I don’t do anything for free…if I am working then I must see my profit…so I need salary to do this job’’

Anika ‘’how will I give salary and what will I give you ?’’

Shivaay ‘’that’s your problem’’

Anika ‘’and what If I don’t agree?’’

Shivaay ‘’then I will not go for mutual consent divorce…we will let the divorce case run for howmuch ever time it takes…decision is yours…think and let me know…you have half an hour’’
Anika ‘’ok fine…I decided …I will give you salary…but remember I am your boss and you are working for me…so you need to obey my orders’’

Shivaay ‘’deal accepted’’

Anika TAM ‘’I will trouble you so much that you will yourself say I don’t want salary…what do you think Mallika and Siddharth are coming without any reason…I called them here when I got to know they are in Mumbai…now see what I am going to do… ‘’

Shivaay TAM ‘’I will ask such a salary that you will remember for your life time..you don’t know the truth that I made Mallika ask you to get the arrangements done by me’’

PRECAP : What new will happen in this rendezvous party ? Will history repeat or will it be something different this time ?who will win in troubling other ..Anika or Shivaay?



ALL CREDITS TO FFFAN1234 aka DIPTI for the concept !!!

So this was the Twelfth part…please let me know how you felt after reading this by posting your opinion in the comment section…I will reply as soon as possible…….

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  1. Vishnusri

    Awesome epi akka chala suspense lo unna pls..post the next one soon…by the way I am sry I can’t read your ff on Tuesday bcz of my birthday and celebrations…akka but sure I will read and comment…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much talli…thanks a lot….WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR…next episode tomorrow you will see…loads of love and best wishes to you…have a blissful year ahead

  2. Ashwinee

    Bruchetta dupatta ….lol ????? shivaay aur uski planning ekdum khidkitod…… thank you akka and thank you dipti di for giving us such a lite update…loved it to the coreeeee

    1. Fffan1234

      Thank you Ashwinee. I am glad you all like the concept

    2. VHM

      Thank you so much Ashwinee…thanks a lot…so sweet of you dear…all credits to Dipti for the concept….love you loads…keep smiling and take care….next episode tomorrow morning

  3. Awesome di update soon

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Vijaya…thanks a lot…next episode tomorrow morning…keep smiling and take care

  4. Loved it… Plzz update next part soon…

    1. VHM

      Hey Sahasra…thank you so much…thanks a lot…next episode tomorrow morning…keep smiling and take care

  5. Zaveesha

    Firstly a very Happy Birthday to u PUI….May God bless u with all the happiness nd prosperity…keep writing nd keep smiling…

    The episode was Super amazing…. I’m too very excited for the party…there Takkar ki Ishqbaazi recreation is just awesome…

    Love u di…

    1. VHM

      Hey Tanz…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…story line and track changed Tanz …hope you would like it…next episode tomorrow morning…love you loads…keep smiling and take care

    2. Pui

      Thank u so much Dear…

  6. Lauren

    Haha amazinggggg dii… juzz fantastic… uhh juzz nailed it… I always admire ur thought… n dis beyond my imagination… Fantastic dii.. dii m telling uhh.. uhh juzz start writing novels or some stories m sure ull beat all other writers… n yeah loved dis chappy a lot… n let’s see who wins anika or shivaay in troubling each other… waiting for Tuesday…
    Love uhh loads…
    N dii how’s akki??
    N lastly wish uhh a very happy bday purvi!!

    1. VHM

      Hey Shreya…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot..awee so sweet of you dear…you wrote those lines and made me feel so happy….love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care…

      Akki is fine …and she had sent hugs when i said her about you….next episode tomorrow morning…….

  7. Sairan

    Fabbbbbbbb ???

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Sairan…thanks a lot….keep smiling and take care

  8. Kavinda1234

    Super. Loved it…. The shiv and gauri relationship is so so adorable…(the more u writing the more i m falling in love with u and ur story…) And both shivaay and anika have diff plans on their heads. I am just waiting for the nxt part…..

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Kavinda…thanks a lot…one day i will come up exclusively with shivaay and Gauri bro-sis OS or ff…..awee…so sweet of you for that line dear….love you loads …keep smiling and take care…next episode tomorrow morning

  9. Fffan1234

    Hey Pui Many Many Happy Returns of the day!!!

    1. Pui

      Thank u so much ?

  10. Banita

    It’s just Mind blowing……. Luv it….. Now What’s next in Shivika’s mind or say my Beautiful’s mind???
    And Why don’t u kill that Pinky?????
    Wow!!! Sid-Mallika…. and again d party sence….. U know what I miss this epi of ib and u come with it…. I m super excited…..
    A belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY PUI….. God bless u dr…..
    Luv u Akki??????

    1. VHM

      Hey Gorgeous…thank you so much dear..thanks a lot…now everything changed in Shivika’s and my mind and you know the reason why…pinky ko mein bhi ignore maar rahi hoon jaise shivaay ignore kar raha hain…lol….love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care….next episode tomorrow morning

  11. Fffan1234

    Hey Harika, hope you and Akki are alright now. Take care.

    Regarding the update… It was super fantabulous. This OMM has not yet learnt her lesson. Looking forward to her learning her lesson. Also to see what happens in the party…

    Keep smiling and be happy

    1. VHM

      Hey Dipti…thank you so much for the trust, patience, and confidence…i tried to give my best and will continue to do so…hope you are not disappointed …thanks a lot….

      Yeah, Akki is doing far better….next episode tomorrow….keep smiling and take care

  12. toooo much exicited and I don’t think I need to say again and again that ur works r awesome Lazzy me I haven’t logged in But its Me Kajol

    1. VHM

      Hey Kajol…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…lol….awee so sweet of you…love you loads…keep smiling and take care

  13. Niriha

    Awesome di…fabulous part loved it to the core???????I’m so excited to read next part.shivay asked chubby to get fruit punch wow…the party going to be very interesting …eagerly waiting for next part update soon di
    Love you??Take care and stay safe

    1. Niriha

      A belated happy birthday PUI may God bless you dear…

    2. VHM

      Hey Niriha…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode will have changed track…so keep your expectations low…i will try not to disappoint you…love you loads dear…keep smiling and take care….next episode tomorrow morning

  14. Sagithya

    Awesome di…. Fantastic fabulous part…. Loved it to the core…. Pinky deserves it…. Excited for the next part…. Post it as soon as possible…

    1. VHM

      Hey Sissy…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode tomorrow morning…love you loads…keep smiling and take care

  15. Navz

    Happy birthday pui…..may all ur wishes come true.
    Dii…this episode is awesome..superb.mallika and siddarth are coming once again.it will be fully funfilled i guess……very very eagerly waiting for next part.
    Bye dii.

    1. VHM

      Hey Chotii…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yeah they both will come but main focus will be on Shivika….next episode tomorrow morning…love you loads…keep smiling and take care

    2. Pui

      Thank u ❤

  16. Amazing Update….Loved it ❤
    Shivaay knows Anika thoroughly & vice-versa.
    Sid Mallika & Tia are gonna come for the party. I’m excited ??
    Thanks for bringing them.I miss them in the show!
    Pinky will never change ?
    Waiting for the nxt 🙂

    Happy Birthday Pui ?? May this birthday bring more colours to ur life ?

    1. VHM

      Hey Shivika…thank you so much …thanks a lot…yeah sid-mallika entry will act as catalyst for Shivika’s relation…next episode tomorrow morning…love you loads…keep smiling and take care

    2. Pui

      Thank u so much….

  17. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dii… Happy birthday to pui…… Excited for the next update

    1. VHM

      Hey Nikki…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…next episode tomorrow morning…love you loads…keep smiling and take care……

  18. Maryam_ishq

    Amazing episode !! It was simply wow. Don’t worry di… whtever u do we’ll always love it… all ur new ideas and concepts will be khidkitod just like ur ff’s ?.
    Anika ordering shivay….. so good to see role reversal of them… anika behavin like sso and shivay feelin wht all anika has gone through. Shivay got a dose of his own medicine…. he realised how harsh he was and how much anika has gone through caz of him… and now it’s his turn to feel all tht, undergo all the pain tht she went through. Gauri feelin sad tht hr has to go through all this but happy as well tht he values anika a lot and is ready to do anythin for her.
    ShivOmRu’s kitchen bromance…. i am missin this in ishqbaaz . They are makin dupatta ??. Gauri tryin to entice anika into havin the food and shivay tryin to serve his mademoiselle ?. Anika sittin on the table due to everyone’s insistence but not eatin anythin due to her tadi… bechare chuhe wrestling match khel rahe the pet main ?. Shivay had already made aloo puri for her ? as he knew she doesn’t like all these english breakfasts. Don’t wry anika soon u’ll be able to eat his handmade english food as well. Shivay comin back to eat but his mood got spoilt seein pinky and left frm there. Pinky deserves this treatment so tht she understands wht she did was very wrng and unacceptable.
    Omru talkin to shivay and tryin to make him understand… and since he’s still stuck on his decision they told tht they would support their bhabhi no matter wht. Shivay was happy tht he has such good brothers and tht they would support anika no matter wht. Anika’s note for shivay…. thanks in full tadi… he kept the note safe ?.
    Ooh mallika and siddhart comin to oberoi mansion… it’s party time. Shivay askin mallika to make him do the arrangements ?… he is becomin full joru ka ghulam ?. The same fruit punch for everyone except him…. looks like the party is gonna be much more fun thn last time…. mallika, tia and anika together again. Anika with lots of hesitation asked shivay to do the work of the party all alone… but she can’t even be strict with him… she indirectly offered to help him as well. I had a feelin tht pinky would come at tht moment and strt her usual shoutin at anika… and this anika always tries to give her justification even when she knws tht pinky wouldn’t understand. Hope anika stands up for herself infrnt of pinky the next time and show her te mirror of her deeds. Shivay agreeing to do it but wants salary. Both of them have planned stuff… let’s see who gets succesful in their plan.
    I am lovin their takkarbaazi. And thank u so much for showin the scenes which we aren’t able to see in ishqbaaz. Take care di and love u loads ❤❤❤❤❤.
    Happy birthday pui. May ur life be filled with happiness and may u achieve all the success u wish for ?.

    1. VHM

      Hey Maryam…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…for all the points you wrote, your analysis, and the encouragement…it’s always a pleasure to read your opinion and learn what is working and what is not…your opinion is as awesome as you are…love you loads…keep smiling and take care…next episode tomorrow morning

    2. Pui

      Thank u ?

  19. Amazing Update. Totally loved it!
    With Mallika, Sid & Tia in OM along with Chubby’s ‘Fruit Punch’ seems like something khidkitod is coming up 😉
    Update soonish 🙂
    Wishin Pui a very Happy Birthday ?

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Aparna….thanks a lot…mallika and Sid entry will act as catalyst for Shivika’s bond…fruitpunch will play it’s role…let’s see how the next episode turns up…next episode tomorrow morning…keep smiling and take care

    2. Pui

      Thank u so much….

  20. Pritika


    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Pritika…thanks a lot….love you loads…keep smiling and take care

  21. Aashi9

    Don’t mind my saying but it seems so idiotic to make himself feel the same kind of pain for the other will also feel the same. OmRu’s bond with Anika is as special as Shiv-Ri’s bond. Shivaay asking salary was funny. Anika and her fight against hunger was funny. Keep some OmRi scenes as well. Looking forward to next chapter. Update soon.

    1. VHM

      Hey Aashi…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…i took it in a constructive way and worked on what you said…so i did change the track too…hope you will like it…next episode tomorrow morning…love you loads…keep smiling and take care

  22. Alekhika20

    Awesome update

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Alekhika…thanks a lot…yaar sometimes you seem to be a mystery to me…only tow word opinion and that too regularly on my every write-up…a mystery i would love to resolve and know you better…keep smiling and take care

  23. Pushpa

    Another amazing episode hari dear…liking anika so much & of course my shivaye too…..so wht anika get toxicated & spill the beans out?…..or tadibaaz shivaye will taunt anika till she gives up…….better feeling i get by reading this thn 2days frustrated epi…….keep on going hari, pkjs love always wt u…

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Pushpa…thanks a lot…your shivaay will show his best shade in next episode…lol..ya monday’s episode was a disaster …awee so sweet of you Pushpa…love you loads…keep smiling and take care…

  24. Yvonne Codner

    Excellent episode.!

    Thanks and stay blessed

    1. VHM

      Thank you so much Yvonne…thanks a lot….keep smiling and take care

  25. Logesh.M

    Bruchetta dupatta???????I laughed whole heartedly?????Really loved this part to the core didi?????????Loved the kitchen scene and anika scolding gauri in her mind????Can u plsss tell me the recipe of bruchetta if its vegetarian???Shivaay made aloo poori for anika????????I am damn excited for this party????What role this fruitpunch gonna play???i am curious….????????Plssssssss reveal it soon…Hate that pinky donkey????Why she is interuupting during beautiful moments????????Loved obros convo near pool????????????plsssssssss update soon didi….Really i am in love with this “Teri Meri love story”??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

    1. VHM

      Hey Logesh…thank you so much dear…thanks a lot…yeah will ping you the recipe as it’s vegetarian….i have changed the track so party may not be funny as you expect but party will lead to something else that i can guarantee you….thanks a lot once again dear…keep smiling and take care

      1. Logesh.M

        Didi i have one request..???If you dont mind can u pls reduce the length of episode little bit?!!its too long..Reduce one or two paragraphs.This is my suggestion didi..Reduce it if you wish as you are the writer????Sorry if i hurted u…!!!Also pls read 2nd part of my new ff..And comment..i had sent u the link in Private message ??????Please say whether the length is enough or how much length you needed????Take care..Good morning..Have a nice day?????

      2. VHM

        Yeah Sure Logesh…anyways we have two more episodes to go and this FF will end….however i will reduce the length as you have suggested…

  26. Pui

    Thank u thank u thank u so so so much three times again Di ! Will always remember this gesture of urs…
    Coming to the episode…
    Speechless…Loved all the small detailing u did in the episode..

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